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zoya

@tingtingteeding

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Posted: 16 years ago

#181

hey awesome update

the suspense is killing me yaar.

wats wid the diary?

plzzzz plzzzzzz continue soon

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malika

@_symphony

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+ 7

Posted: 16 years ago

#182

OMG dolly what an ace writer you are dear...and actually if i tell you this ss has become so close 2 my heart bcoz of your awesome writing skills only.each word of yours is so peircing and impactful that i can see all that revolving around me eyes.actually i really wanted to quote the lines that made my heartbeat stop for a sec but yaar i then got it that i will end up copy pasting the entire update so dropped the idea.

but one line.....it actually made me feel a lump in my throat....

"I just kept looking at him , trying my level best to suck in all his features for future use?" wow yaar what apt words you used to describe her feelings, while imagining so even i felt the same but you translated that feel into words so magically that it actually made my eyes wet.and i am sooooo happy that its not gunjans dream.Pls pls pls update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon.

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Sana Quraishi

@Soulmate_Sana

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#183

omg it was sooooooooooooo good update

i loved it

i cant belive u have written ver well yaar awesome i really liked it plz continue soon

and thanx for the pm

sana 😊

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Hina

@samratrocks

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#184

wwoowwoowowowowowowwoowwo!!! how do u mange to take out time and write all this yaar??? i mean u have

excellent writing skillls.... superb-fantabulous-excellent-

bravo-congo-welldone-keep posting-keep it up- very very touching and worth-reading......continue plz!!!

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#185

Diary part was lil senti

But present part matlab only Gun can see Sam

Plz mak somthg that only Mayu can C Nups

Cant c him also in this much pain

Nice part

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mjht_admirer

@mjht_admirer

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#186

OMG dolly what an excellent update dear...you have such an awesome writing skills. each word of yours is so impactful that i can see all that revolving around my eyes.

Theres this one line which made a lump in my throat "I just kept looking at him , trying my level best to suck in all his features for future use?" 😭😭😭😭

AWWWWw!!! Wow yaar ekdam sahi words ke saath tumne gunjan ke feelings ko express kiya. It was soooooo touching & at the same time very emotional. Jab koi dil ka apna itne door chale jaaye ki wapas aane ka kabhi sawaal hi na paida ho to kitnaaaaaaaaaaaaaa dil rota hai haiin - yeh imagine karte hue hi itna dard hota hai to bechari gunjan.

I know its just a fanfic but sometimes some FFs make such an impact in our minds & more than tht in our hearts that u feel like to cry on that situation. and i am sooooo happy that its not gunjans dream.Pls pls pls update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon.

vinu

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brahmjot

@-nautankidollz-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: mjht_admirer
OMG dolly what an excellent update dear...you have such an awesome writing skills. each word of yours is so impactful that i can see all that revolving around my eyes.

Theres this one line which made a lump in my throat "I just kept looking at him , trying my level best to suck in all his features for future use?" 😭😭😭😭

AWWWWw!!! Wow yaar ekdam sahi words ke saath tumne gunjan ke feelings ko express kiya. It was soooooo touching & at the same time very emotional. Jab koi dil ka apna itne door chale jaaye ki wapas aane ka kabhi sawaal hi na paida ho to kitnaaaaaaaaaaaaaa dil rota hai haiin - yeh imagine karte hue hi itna dard hota hai to bechari gunjan.

I know its just a fanfic but sometimes some FFs make such an impact in our minds & more than tht in our hearts that u feel like to cry on that situation. and i am sooooo happy that its not gunjans dream.Pls pls pls update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon.

vinu

oh god thanks so much vinu 4 liking what i wrote . i really don't have any words answere u people's love

*goes red n cries*.

when i right all this, for hours after that i just feel miserable , dunno why ,many of my friends who used to b silent readers, have stopped reading it ,they say it depressess them , it depresses me to but i lov this ff too much to abundon it .. whatever happens now ,not everything will make u cry i promise, n this sajjan scene(whatever of it is left) i'll make sure u people r going to love it..

thanks n lov ya

dolly

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brahmjot

@-nautankidollz-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~
wow
nice part
continue soon

thanks mishu 4 liking it ,, i'll write the next part asamy msts n prep allows me too

lov ya

dolly

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brahmjot

@-nautankidollz-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: zoya_me
hey awesome update
the suspense is killing me yaar.

wats wid the diary?

plzzzz plzzzzzz continue soon

hi zoya.

diary ka suspense abhi to shuru hua hai..

its a real suspense ,bcoz i have no idea what i am going to do with it...

(haven't thought till now what to do)

thankx 4 replying n liking ti zoya

lov ya

dolly

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brahmjot

@-nautankidollz-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#190

Originally posted by: princessyashika
OMG dolly what an ace writer you are dear...and actually if i tell you this ss has become so close 2 my heart bcoz of your awesome writing skills only.each word of yours is so peircing and impactful that i can see all that revolving around me eyes.actually i really wanted to quote the lines that made my heartbeat stop for a sec but yaar i then got it that i will end up copy pasting the entire update so dropped the idea.
but one line.....it actually made me feel a lump in my throat....
"I just kept looking at him , trying my level best to suck in all his features for future use?" wow yaar what apt words you used to describe her feelings, while imagining so even i felt the same but you translated that feel into words so magically that it actually made my eyes wet.and i am sooooo happy that its not gunjans dream.Pls pls pls update sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon.

thanx my dear princess for liking it...

was that line so good??

even i feel depressed after writing some parts , i felt depressed after writing sammy's diary part,, so thought they both desere a great union.. that's how i thought about writing this meeting

thanku so so much sweets 4 liking it

i am on cloud nine n after reading ur peoples replies i am absolutely feeling better

lov ya

dolly