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it waz great,,,w8in 4 da mayur part az im a die hard mayurian n artian.........😉

Hey dear! Ur really 1 of the best ff writer ova here! Very well written! Plz break ths suspence soon! Thanx for the pm!!!

hey dear. This was fantastic. So r nupz n sam comin back to reality? So sam was helping them out wit his diary to come out of death? Wil nupz also come like how sam came? So sweet dear. Plz bring nupz also back. Cant see mayu half. Well written thanks for pm.

HAYYE!!!! excellent-superb-fabulous aakhir tum log yeh sab karte kaise ho yaar, truly amazaing, i hope the creatives read this soon and have as similar scene in mjht this monday!!! really wow!! and the kissing part was the best!!! how cute........

Originally posted by: dolly18

i have not decided whether they both will com to reality or not, afterall they r dead

n me being n engineer think about this crappy word logic a lot..

still i think 40% they'll come back

thanks sooooooooooooo much 4 liking it sweets ,, n i think happiness is on the way (atleast 4 sajjan)

do read the present update n reply

lov

dolly

Hey dear i don mind they comin back in life. Its a ff n anythin could happen as everythin is fictitious. May b some other person lookin similar could come in their life. Like OSO! Neways lookin ahead to mayur scenes. And by te way best luck for ur exams.

Priya

its awesome . loved reading it😊

hey dear toooooo gooooooooooood yaar.
bt i m waiting 4 mayur scene plz post that soon.
this part was as usual minblowing
do cont soon
n thanx 4 the pm

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SCENE 1 (CONTINUED):

"benji has read the diary , n he doesn't believe in even a word that was written on it .. he said he saw u working late last night , writing something , he wasn't sure but he suspected that u were writing in samrat's diary"

I was stunned at this, not only at benji accusing me of filling up samrat's diary , but also because I couldn't remember working late last night , all I remembered about the previous day was that I had cried the night out as had been my routine for the past one year.. I looked at samrat 4 some help ,but he was gone ,I turned around n searched the whole room to get a glimpse of him, but in vain,

Doubt begin to creep through me to. Was I going mad suddenly..

everything around me whirled , I seemed to sway on my spot..

The last two things that happened b4 I lost consciousness were

I saying to mayank the following line>

"believe me ,please , just this once"

N then I saw myself falling in samrat's arms , but from a distance , like a third person ..

I was going crazy there was no doubt in it..

The room looked beautiful , so did he..

The candles looked heavenly, so did he..

The chandelier looked magnificent, so did he ..

The food looked scrumptious, so did he..

For the past one hour he was persuading me to eat the rajma chawal that he had prepared for me…

N I , I had lost my appetite completely

Obviously I would, if his face would be so close to mine…

"gunjan , after marriage pls!!!! "

Was my gaze so intense that he understood the reason for my distraction .. stupid me, I looked down at the plate of rajma chawal,,

Blushing tremendously I wished for someone to make me drown in those rajma chawal itself..

He laughed.. distracted again by this sudden melodious sound I looked towards him, n he looked heavenly n I got lost in him once again..

"pls gunjan mujhe sharam aa rahi hai.. don't look at me as if I am an icecream n u r a four year old kid"

"I wish"

"what???"

"just a kiss I promise pls"

I stopped .. the last sentence had just blurted out from my mouth without even giving me any chance to stop it .. I so so wanted to be gulped down by a dinosaur at that moment ,

but he cupped my face in his hands, n advanced towards me..

Was he actually listening to my wish???

I closed mine eyes, n waited for that heavenly touch to reach my lips..

But it didn't instead an earsplitting explosion n shrieks of about a dozen people reached my ears…

I opened my eyes with a snap, samrat wasn't there in front of me, neither was the plate of rajma chawal ,,

I was surrounded just by the empty room, currently burning in large flames which were produced by the candles that had earlier decorated it …

Shrieks of people I knew n didn't knew kept spasms with time..

I screamed too, but my voice got lost in the existing noises and then

Then I woke up..

This same dream had terrified me so much for the past one year now,

I looked around myself to search 4 water..i felt parched

There it was , the glass of water ,just in front of me , raised to my mouth level ..

Samrat was holding it..

I drank the whole of it . he made me drink it,,

I felt drench of all the energy ,, I felt cold.. I slipped again in my bed , my head on his shoulder ,who was siting besides me on our bed..

"do u want to sleep???"

"no"

"but u r not well , u need rest"

"I just need u explaining me things"

He sighed n I looked towards him..

"what to u want me to explain"

"a lot , but I'll start from the beginning"

I thought about my last conversation with mayank, n I thought about what was written in the last entries of samrat's diary n I thought about what benji had said n asked my first question..

"in the diary ,the entry of 16 october ,the day the blasts took place ,you wrote about a guy , a bearded guy ,to whom u took sudden repulsion ,who was he??"

"he was a devil in form of a human .he wanted us dead n so we died. There is more to it but now is not the time , next question??"

"but that was the simplest!!!"

"next"

"ok how how does it feel to die??"

"its like I am in a restless sleep , twitching n turning with stupid dreams.."

"is that all?"

"no ,there is a pain , which depends upon the mode of death"

I had no intentions to ask him what he meant by that,, I had precisely no intentions to understand anything that could have caused him death.so I chose to move on..

"what happens after that??"

"nothing ,, about 40 percent of those who die r condemned to that sleepless sleep forever. I wasn't neither was nupur"

"what happened with u then?"

"basically or strangely rather,, it turned out to be that I had been a good person all my life ,that's why I had the best option that's available to us after death"

"what was that?"

"it was to move on,, all I understood about it was walking through that path makes u free from the pull of the earth,,"

"what does that mean what's moving on??"

"about that I have no idea , I didn't choose that path"

"why??"

"u know that"

"because of me??"

"yes"

I blushed and had no idea ,, but the basic idea of someone refusing to go to the path of salvation just because of me was vaguely satisfying..

"is taking rebirth also an option or"

"yes it is, infact after not going to the already two paths I had mentioned there were just two options left , taking rebirth was one of them"

"so did u choose it??"

My heart skipped a few beats right there n then …

"no I didn't I chose another path. And the reason is u"

"u lost me"

"I know I did ,long time ago"

"no I meant u lost me in the conversation"

"taking rebirth means basically discarding ur previous life completely , it meant to 4get n never remember anyone I was ever related to in my previous life … it meant to be free completely"

He paused and looked at me

"I was never free gunjan, u made sure of that, ur hold on me was too strong just as strong as my hold on u ,,ur hold is what defines me now.. except ur hold there is nothing in me that's left"

He smiled

"u kept me earthbound , though the boundness is not due to gravity ,it is because of u, my love.. moreover this was the reason which didn't allow me to move on"

"is that bad ??"

"no I am greatful to u for that"

I blushed again for god knows what….

"what about di?"

"mayank's hold is not as strong as u so she might have gone ,u know moved on !!!"

"but mayank loved her just as much as I loved u"

"its got nothing to do with that .. the reason is simply that mayank is a boy , a male"

"so??"

"so he is not as aligned to go by his heart as you,, he still doubts ur sanity as well as his own,,"

"then why can't di go to him n explain him just as u did to me??"

"u provided me the path , he isn't providing nupur with the path .. his frequent doubts r blocking nupur.. that's why I told u to persuade him to believe .."

"if his hold wasn't this strong then why didn't I move on or whatever that crap was"

"nupur is bounded to earth by not one but two persons"

"who is the second one??"

"anshu"

"oh"

"that magnified the pull that she felt from earth , so she too stayed "

"can I meet her"

"not now I guess"

"whatever benji said about me lately was that , did i??"

"yes u did"

I was shocked n stunned ,, that meant I was going insane ,,that could even mean that samrat good be just me hallucination,, great now my own hallucination was saying to me that I had gone mad.. can life get any better??

Samrat shimmered .. it was as if he was about to disappear .. I caught hold of his arm n was terrified..

"what happened??"

"samrat it looked as if u were about to go"

"I didn't have any intentions to do so,,,,,hey wait was I like was I disappearing.. going light n all that"

"yes"

"u doubted"

I felt ashamed ..i looked down .a tear escaped from my eyes unnoticed n fell on his hand ..

He touched the wet finger of his to his lips..

"lovely"

I blushed yet again…

"gunjaan it was u who wrote that diary entries ,last one .. but that does not mean u r mad .. I am not allowed to touch anything .besides u or besides what u touch .. I don't possess those powers still..

so u were the only medium ..so u had to write"

"what happens now??"

"I have no idea"

Saying so he kissed me….

SCENE 2>>>>

(by mayank)==

(the lines written in black bold letters are not by mayank but by me the narrator)

I caught hold of gunjan b4 she hit the floor. He was burning hot, it seemed that she was running a high temperature. I had no doubt that my last line ,the talk with benji had caught gunjan offgaurd ,due to which she fainted ,,was she suffering from som psychological disorder??? Thinking practically she was ..

But who the hell wanted to think practically???

I picked her up n cradled her in my arms n then laid her on the bed.. I had made up my mind to think it over ,to believe in gunjan .

If she was mad then I was going mad too.. but benji was going to be a problem a big problem, till now he would have told everyone within an area of about 2 mile radius ,that he had seen gunjan writing something in samrat's diary.. how I wished at that instant ,that instead of gunjan he should have fainted'

But alas things seldom happen as we want them to..

I came out of the room

(had he seen behind him once he would hav seen samrat kissing gunjan silently on her fore head ,but he just moved on)

n entered mine ,locking the door behind me I made my way to the window standing their feeling the hard wind on my face I reflected on whtever has happened in the last few days '

The harsh wind helped me to think'.

Someone knocked the door..must be benji ,uday or dia , I didn't care ..

I was feeling tired my mind felt as if it was about to burst ..

But the decision was made , I would believe gunjan ..give her a chance ..give myself a chance ..

I didn't care it it meant I was soon to be coomited to an asylum…

The moment I thought this I felt completely relaxed n wanted to celebrate …

Someone tapped me on my shoulder.. may be I had left my door unbolted …may be it was benji .. I so wanted to snuff the life out of him ,,, I turned to do exactly that and

And I cried

I simply cried on seeing her….

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Ok guys this is the end of eigth update, I for one seriously have no idea about what I have written .. if people don't lioke it pls tell me frankly I'll change it …

The next part has mayor..

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Lov ya all

dolly