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Posted: 16 years ago
intresting promo yaar
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update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Posted: 16 years ago
awesome promo!!
completely loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Huni! Tooooooo gud promo! Hope ths is nt a dream! Hope Sam is alive! Hope ths happens! Plz update soon! Plz! Pzl! Plz!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: AFSHA18

Cool yaar

Hop its not Dream

no its not a dream at least i don't mean it to be
kher sorry guys i had to update 2day but was busyyyyyyyyyyyyy
so couldn't tomarrow is a holiday which again will b a problem but i'll update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetgalFats

Hey Huni! Tooooooo gud promo! Hope ths is nt a dream! Hope Sam is alive! Hope ths happens! Plz update soon! Plz! Pzl! Plz!

hi sweets
no its not a dream n no samrat is not alive atleast not till nnow.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
soo sweet yaar..loved the way u described everythin..i cud just imagine it all happening...*sigh*..update soon yea, lookin forward to it =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Dolly

Very heart touching promo. Very beautifully written. I just loved it. & the best line was


'i heard to my heart pounding hard against my chest , as if the heart was trying to break free of me n run to the person standing there, its true owner.'😊

U know dolly, even though im just reading this part & never had ANY experience in love in my real life, but it really does feel very beautiful to even think that 'koi kisi ke liye kabhi itna zada important jo jaata hai ki uska dil ka asli maalik koi doosra shaks hota hai.' 😳😳😳

Hain na??? 😉😉

Vinu
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mjht_admirer

Hey Dolly

Very heart touching promo. Very beautifully written. I just loved it. & the best line was


'i heard to my heart pounding hard against my chest , as if the heart was trying to break free of me n run to the person standing there, its true owner.'😊

U know dolly, even though im just reading this part & never had ANY experience in love in my real life, but it really does feel very beautiful to even think that 'koi kisi ke liye kabhi itna zada important jo jaata hai ki uska dil ka asli maalik koi doosra shaks hota hai.' 😳😳😳

Hain na??? 😉😉

Vinu

thanx vinu 4 liking the promo!!! i'll update soon

even i have no experience of love ,,, but still i can tell love n respect walk along the same lines ,,

strange n beautiful r the ways of providence as they say n we both to will one day get that true owner of our hearts...

lov ya

dolly

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome promo ..... and if you can then plz bring back nupur and samrat ....... plz ..... and update soon ...........
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Posted: 16 years ago

Update 8>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

(Scene1)

(by mayank)>>>>>>>>>>>>>

(Flashback ;continued)>>>>>

She picked up the diary that was lying on the bedside table , flipped some pages of it n gave it to me to read>>>

Hi diary(16th October)

That person was a brute , eyeing nupur ,I wanted to gorge out his eyes right there and then , but I didn't . a tight slap across his cheek was what I satisfied myself with for the time being.. I have no idea duds as to why was I engulfed in sudden repulsion towards that bearded fellow, but I was ,,, may be somewhere unconsciously my heart n body knew about what was he going to do…even after I slapped him ,he smiled just smiled .that plain gesture seemed so evil n terrifying over the distorted features of his face.. he was eyeing me now.. a twinkle in his eyes(was he a gay??). I know diary that was a stupid question but that was my first question about him, the next question was, why the hell wasn't he blinking??.. in that instant that repulsion towards him attacked me again n I was about to kick him hard when nupur caught hold of me. She reminded me that we were getting late. I diverted my attention from that devil like person standing in front of us ,and concentrated on what nupur (my –to-be sister in law) was saying…

Just at that instant her cell phone beeped . it was mayank's call,, we both smiled n I gestured her to talk to her hubby while I purchase the cake 4 the birthday boy, saying so I left 4 the bakery..

This time a chose a chocolate cake , gunajn n nupur's favourite but not so favourite of me n mayank .. yet I thought ,that we both would be happy seeing our respective girls happy..

I had no idea then that this cake was never going to reach my beloved my soulmate,, neither would i…

Coming out of the shop ,my eyes scanned the street to locate nupur who was still busy in exchanging a tte--tte with her mayu.. I smiled ,n banged into someone ,, iwasn't looking on the floor..

The person I had banged into was a small child of about 3-4 years , we was smilling timidly n muttered something like sorry .. he looked so januable, I bent down besides him n kissed him on his cheek, he blushed.. gosh that was such a innocent sight.. I asked him his name.

Pritish he answered .. good name. I'll give the same name to my son too. N my heart hottened up at the thought , a sudden warmth spread through me n I was feeling elated but still my heart seemed to ache why ? I had no idea!!. That's when I saw him , that bearded person ,out of the corner of my eye , he wasn't the one I had slapped ,but he looked sinisterly similar to him,, he opened his jacket , n a split second b4 I knew what was going the happen ,, I was never going to see my chashmish again n their will never come a pritish in he life, I covered the small boy with my torso ,even on knowing that this was going to be a futile effort,,,then it happened. the sudden explosion shook me n my ears violently , hence forth I wasn't able to hear anything ,,I felt myself floating n felt the boy slipping from my grip,,, their was no noise just peace , apeace fuul of turmoil.

I had banged somewhere n a second after my body banged somewhere ,, my eyes were still working ,I could still see though the scenes were covered by a red curtain , may be it was my blood…

Every part of my body started hurting n I started twitching in order to shake of the pain .. I could feel the blackness engulfing me ,I surrendered to it willingly,, the pain was too much too fight….

And then I fell in an uneasy sleep with loads of hazy dreams or nightmares.. that was perhaps the end , my end….

SCENE 2

(PRESENT)>>>>>

(by gunjan)>>>>>>>

I knew whatever was happening was unbelievable, was not natural n was insane yet i was not able to discard the crazy notion from my mind that samrat was coming back ,my di was coming back,,,,

But how was it possible, was it plausible at all???

No it was not,, yet still everything written in that diary had come true,, no everything hadn't come true ,,dia still had scratches n bruises all over her, i had lied to maynk ,,,

i had done wrong , i knew that but still…

Mayank was the only person who believed that samrat's diary was a truth , if i would have told him abt dia's injuries ,he too would have discarded samrat's diary as a fake object……

i sank on the chair my dupatta ,covering my face ,i removed it hastily,, this wind ,, I should close the window first,, i turned n faced the window,, but the next moment my knees had gone week,, i felt my body trembling all over… there was someone standing there ,besides the glasspanes of the broken window(it had come off its hinge, but when did the window of my room broke???)

The person standing was still in shade, just his blue jeans n some part of his white shirt was visible,,,,

i heard to my heart pounding hard against my chest , as if the heart was trying to break free of me n run to the person standing there, its true owner..

The person took a few steps forward, n raising his eyes,

samrat looked at me ..

As i looked at the face of my long dead fiance,, i stopped trembling, my heart no longer thudded ,, it appeared to have stopped with the time too,,

Samrat was smilling heavenly as always…

That's when i noticed that samrat looked too handsome ,much too handsome,, his hair came in his eyes as always n as always he never brushed them aside,, he was still moving towards me,,,

N behind him the window was viberating threateningly. The wind was too severe ,,, may be a storm was coming , no , the storm had already arrived…

The next second the window finally broke of the hinge ,its panes shattering against the wall, samrat winced ,

Oh no he was hurt, i could see a small piece of glass sticking out of his arm …

iShe ran too him n caught hold of his arm tenderly..

"samrat yeh .."

"shhh gunjan kuch nahin hua, mein theek hun."

And with this i saw the wound and blood disappear right in front of my eyes , the piece of glass that had pierced his arm a few moments ago ,fell on the floor with a clutter,,

..

how could i 4get ??? samrat wasn't a mortal now, he could not get hurt… a strange jab of pain raced across my heart….

I raised my wet eyes and fixed them on his face, his eyes were wet too..

I wanted to ask him how was he???

Did he still loved me??

Did he miss me??

Will he leave me again ??

But my voice had got lost somewhere inside me…

I just kept looking at him , trying my level best to suck in all his features for future use…

He spoke first breaking the silence…

"gunjan mein ..i love u"

Saying so he hugged me… tightly .there was something urgent about his whisper n his hug, like he was afraid that he didn't have much time with him. .his arms were tight around my waist but not tight enough 4 me…

His body felt strange n light..i felt as if he was floating , me along with him,,, it seemed that gravity no longer had any effect on him ,as if he was no longer earth bound….

Of course he wasn't

He was no longer 4 real

Was just a flicker of imagination

Just a fiction my fiction….

I reciprocatedhis embrace , holding him much more tightly against me then I should….

I wanted this moment to stop 4ever ,,,

But the embrace broke, he broke it ,, I still did not leave him ..

Trying to hold on to him 4 just little longer I missed what he said in his whispers……

Finally he pulled me apart, his hands strong ,gentle and extremely light on me…..

"Later there will be enough time , I need to talk to u first , lets sit,, u look cold n this fierce wind will make u colder… and believe me it won't help if u started chattering ur teeth midway b/w our talk"..

He smiled at his humour.. n smiled back

Crazy we were . joking in these moments , taking baby steps we reached my bed , which will always remain mine just mine ,no one (read mortal) will evercome to share it with me…

Yet today he was there sitting on MY bed which in just a matter of few seconds changed into OUR……

"gunjan , why r u doing this to u????"

"huh??"(I was concemtrating more on his lips then on what he was saying)

He followed my gaze.

"gunjan I told u there will be enough time 4 it later , ur dream is not going to end up so soon"

The mention of that single one word made my heart skip a beat then another then another…

So this was a dream ……..,

without any conscious effort my whole body had stiffened, my hands clenched in a fist…

he sighed" I didn't mean that.. gunjan this is a dream 4 everyone outside the realms of this room , only u can see me, so no one will believe u when u tell them about r small rendezvous.. they think it is a dream"

my body became statue like as the full impact of his words hit me..

that meant this was not a dream

I was a one perfect sculpture……

He laughed at my stupid response n I laughed at myself with him,,

I felt like floating , my whole body was shivering ,but I felt hot, as if a certain candle was ignited in me which was never going to flicker away …

I could take it no longer…I snuggled myself up to him n kissed him on his cheek..(just cheek though I wanted to reach him a little farther on his face but something stopped me)

He looked at m n smiled n kissed me back ,this time at the place I so wanted him too……….

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Hi guys I hope u liked the update,, I felt that the diary part was alittlle horryifying I am sorry if it disturbed u ..

Sorry for the late update

Lov ya all

dolly

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