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Posted: 16 years ago
hey when are you going to update?
come-on plzzz update soon
i really want to knw what is going to happen now.
and besides your ff so far has given me goosebumps...
plzzz yaar update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: zoya_me

hey when are you going to update?

come-on plzzz update soon
i really want to knw what is going to happen now.
and besides your ff so far has given me goosebumps...
plzzz yaar update soon

zoya soory 4 being late again
but i have tuesday n wednesdays most busy of whole week still i'll try to update by tomarrow
sorry again
n thanx 4 liking it yaar
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Posted: 16 years ago

Superb writing yaar

Now it looks lik Mystery

How Sam can write about his death day

But rally superbly written

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hi people !!

Here is the 6 update >>

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Mayank==huh?

Benji== ya dude , samrat how could he write a diary entry about how he felt about dieing??? N mayank I knew samrat from childhood , he never used to write a diary…du u actually think we believe ur rubbish??

Benji was actually fuming n that to at me,, did he seriously thinks this was a goof , did he actually think that I can joke abt samrat n nupur's deaths????????????????????????????

I scowled back

Gunjan== nahin benji mayank ne kuch nahi n kiya , it was me who got this diary first……

But b.. b.. but u r write , how can samrat write about his death , but their r entries in it and and its samrat's writing , about that I am positive … he never used to write diary but this one is his , I .. I gifted it to him 2 months prior to his d.. death ,on our engagement..

Everyone was queit but I didn't have any idea to which part of gunjan's sentence brought this silence??

Was it about the writing in that diary being of samrat or was it the mystery of his last entries?? Or was it the reminder that gunajn n samrat got engaged just two months b4 his deaths , they got engaged two days after I got my son…

N now my wife is no more ……

Uday= open that diary ,,read .if gunjan gifted this diary to sammy , I have no doubt that he must be writing in it , but abt those last entries , there is no way that they can be genuine… wait gunjan where did u get that diary from???????????????

FLASHBACK 2>>

(previous evening , at the hostel nursery)

Gunajn= bol maasi .. maaa ..si

Anshu= maa shiiiiiiiiiiiiii

And gunjan laughed , perhaps anshu was the only human being alive on the earth that could make gunjan 4get her pain ,even if it had to be 4 a few moments… it turned out to be that anshu was world's best painkiller ,, he was like a sedative with no side effects … she so so loved him,,

They were sitting in the nursery, with anshu crawling besides gunjan , amidst so many of his stuff toys ,,cars , a casio n so much more,,,

He had every toy possible in the world

The strange thing was , all these toys were brought 5 months b4 his birth ,,when no one lnew whether the new comer would be a girl or a boy .. so due to this lack of information , anshu had access to dolls n kitchen set n skirts (though they were too short for him now) n much more..

Anshu stood up taking support of his toy car n was trying to step on its seat , while gunjan was busy in picking up his toys ,,

The car slipped n anshu fell down , and had his knee scraped by the siderim of the car ….

The piercing cry of her one year old nephew sent gunjan's heart racing ,, she quickly picked him up n tried to sooth him , but she was tensed like hell ..there was no one in the hostel to help her, n no car in the garage which she could use to take anshu to hospital ,,,,

She tried to calm herself down ,

Gunjan be reasonable its just a scrap , wash the wound n apply antiseptic , he'll be alright .. but where is the first aid box. Oh its in the common room ,,

She climbed the stairs to reach the lobby , with anshu now sobbing silently,

She found the antiseptic n the dressing n nursed anshu's wound , who had by now 4gotten everything about it n was giggling away , mesmerized by his new toy completely , which was gunjan's duppatta ,,,

Leaving anshu to enjoy with his new discovery gunjan replaced the medical kit back to the shelf above the freezer ,, her hand brushed about other things kept in the cupboard making few of them fell down …

One of the documents which were now spred over the frrezer , was a black leather diary ,, the diary was simple it read 2008 in large silver letters over it..

She picked up the diary trying to remember where had she seen it b4 ?

Oh no no no no this can't be ,, its samrat's diary , did he write something in it???she opened the first page n read the message written their .

4 all those people who open this diary

Tis is the personal property of samrat(if I am still alive)

N of my better half gunjan(if I have left 4 my heavenly aboard)

If I am still alive n u turned as much as a page of it

U'll be sorry

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PRESENT===

Mayank== gunjan got it yesterday while searching 4 the first aid kit ,in the shelf above the freezer in lobby..

Uday== samrat placed his diary above a freezer ???? I dunno who is doing this gunjan , but u don't get urself too involved in this , this diary is not genuine.

Gunjan==(in full anger) it is .. I gifted him this n its his handwriting , I would know..

Benji == yes u would , may be it is sam's diary

Uday n dia both glared at him

Benji== listen too me first ,, may be it is his diary , just the last entries of it fake as they can't be real ,,,,someone can copy another person's writing, right!!!!

Mayank== gunjan don't read it then atleast not the last entries ,it 'll only cause u pain,, n well this is not ur diary ,u shouldn't read someone else's diary…

Gunjan glared at me, the expression looked strange over her innocent face ..she looked so much like nupur when she was angry ,, gunjan opened the first page of the diary n showed me the message.

Which she had shown me yesterday too,, samrat's message which said the diary was now gunjan's..

The only difference was that their was no messge their

Just a single word written in big bold letters

READ

I was shocked ,stunned, the others who haven't read the original message were plainly confused , but me n dia showcased plain masks of terror…

Gunjan looked confused too at mine n dia's expression ,, she inverted the diary n had a look at its first page ,

I saw her expressions change from confusion to that of horror,

She dropped the diary ,it hit the table with a thud

Gunjan looked at me,, her hair blowing all over her face due to the wind,,

None of us had noticed but their was too much wind outside,, a storm was surely on its way, both inside n outside of our accommodation ,, I could sense that ,, I had no idea why that simple word send so much shivers down my spine,, it could easily have been a prank!!!!!!

No one touched the diary , not even benji n uday who had no clue of why were we three so stunned

,

Anshu who was playing with his toy car sitting on the floor all the while started giggling , all our eyes ahifted to him , It was strange ,so much wind still it failed to ruffle his wispy hair even once ;

He stood up taking support of the table on which lay that mystery that diary ..

Papa papa ,,

He came towards me on his small feet stumbling at every second step bt moving constantly he finally reached till my legs n started pulling my trousers down,,

I picked him up ,he hugged me

Mayank== I'll make him sleep first

I turned to reach my room

That's when it happened that's when I heard a shriek

Dia's shriek!!!!!!!!!!

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Ummm I know there is not much in this update sory 4 it , but I promise I'll update the rest of the sixth part tomarrow ..

Sorry 4 the inconvenience,, I hope u people don't get bored

Love ya all

dolly

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Posted: 16 years ago

Are yaar u culd hav written why Dia shouted

In promo also u ended till here only

Plz update soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
okay stop the suspense plzzzzzz
you are killing me
you succeeded in giving me goosebumps again
whats with the wind and the changed words.....dont scare me
plzzzzz update soon
i'll give you whatever you want.....plz update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
intresting yaar
wat there in it ??????????????
thanxxxxxx 4 d pm
update next part soooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
interesting part. Now y did dia shriek? Gosh update soon huni. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Dolly! Plz solve the mystery soon! Plz continue soon! Thanx for the pm!
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Posted: 16 years ago
oh my god!!!!!!!!wat waz dat dolly,,,,,,,,i swear i waz lyk shakin slightly while readin dis,,,,,,,,,,,,,itz truely a mystery,,,,,,,,,,,,yaar kal likhna zaroori hai aaj hi likh do na....................hehehe

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