~Tere pyar ke nashe me~ Rajeev ff p-15 23/6 pg-54 - Page 18

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

okkk now tym for d comment... now im worried...gud or bad?

yaar is ud ko padhne k baad ek sath kai emotions aaye...!!! jaise ki tum agar mere samne hoti toh main yeh karti...voh karti...aisa karti vaisa karti...!!! phir socha ki yeh voh aisa vaisa jo bhi karti...us ka reasult toh ek hi nikalta na...aur voh yeh ki tum HOSPITAL me hoti...!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†kitna achcha hai na tum mujhe personally nahi janti Priya...as Sumi says, tum actually me mujhe hospital nahi pahucha sakti!im so relieved...i know yaar it was really bad...mujhe bhi likhte likhte depression ho gaya!
yaar bichare mere raj k sath itna aanya kaise kar sakti ho...??? khair kiya so kiya...sirf do wajah the jis ki wajah se tum mujh se peetne se bach gayi...!!! aur voh do reasons main baad me batayungi...πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰MAI BACH GAI! YAHOOOO!...phew..thank GodπŸ˜†
pahle full ud par aate hain...!!! hadh hai yaar raj aur sur dono k ankhon ko kaala kar diya...tumhe sharam toh bilkul bhi nahi aayi hogi...!!! main yeh xpect karti hun ki ab jab voh dono ek dushre k samne hain toh voh kaala peela sab kuch chala jaye...varna main tumhare ankhon k niche kaale spots le aayungi...πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†arre wo kya hai na ajkal mai zara Vampires se kafi prabhavit hu, sooo, color change try kar rahi thi...dont worry dobara nahi karungi!
okk okk seriously llene ki koi jarurat nahi hai...maine aaj kal boxing ki practice chod di hai...main bass tumhari khinchai kar rahi thi...πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒwow! bhala ho uska jisne tumhare boxing gloves chipaye! arre mai kya kuch seriously lene lagi!
Awesome once again...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘thanku!!!!
kisi chiz ko bhulna ho toh kisi aise chiz ko apna lo...jo jarurat se jyada tumhe busy rakhta ho...!!! raj ne bhi bilkul vohi kiya...apne depression se bahar aane k liye us ne kaam ka sahara liya...!!! aur raat raat bhar itna kaam karta raha...ki use khud ka bhi hosh nahi raha...!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭well, its a common strategy...kafi baar kaam kar jati hai, par aise sangeen mamlo me mushkil haiπŸ˜†
Nandu is such a sweet bhabi...kitna khyal rakhti hai voh raj ka...!!! nandu aur raj k convo baht sweet the...aur raj ka shaadi na karne k reason bhi...!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Raj to hai hi sweet...uski baate...adaye...everything...haaii!
raj london se lutne k baad bimar padd gaya tha...??? aur london se aane k baad voh bilkul badal gaya hai...!!! nandini sahi thi ki raj apne mental stress ki wajah se bimar pada tha aur sur k bare me bhi dono k bich jo bhi baat hui...us se kam se kam raj ko pata toh chala ki sur us ki care karti hai...πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒSur uski care nahi karegi to meri jaan zara khatre me pad jayegi u see...πŸ˜†..nd Nandu understands Raj really well.
yaar plzzzz...sur k dad ko kuch mat hone dena...!!! bade achhe insaan hain...!!! tum puchogi ki mujhe kaise pata chala...toh mujhe aise pata chala ki ...dekho na...kaise sahi tym par phishle hain....ab toh sur ko aana hi padega na...!!! isiliye unhe plzzzzz kuch mat hone dena...okkkk???πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒtumhe Sur aur Raj ki fikar hai ya uske Dad ki?ab kisi ko to kurbani deni padegi na!
maine kaha tha na ki do wajah hain jiss ki wajah se main tumhe chod rahi hun...!!! pata hai voh wajah kya hai...???batao batao???
1......... sur ka voh so called husband sach me baht aqal mand insaan hai...!!! kitna achha kaam kiya hai us ne sur k lyf se hatt kar...dekh na mere raj k liye vacancy chod gaya...πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Sur ka vo husband kitna acha insan hai ye tumhe agey pata chalega...
2.......... sur kam se kam wapas toh aayi...!!! sayad is baar aisa kuch ho jis ki wajah se dono kareeb aaye...aur jo hum sab chahte hain voh ho jaye...!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ummeed pe duniya kayam hai!
dekh lo in do reasons k wajah se tum bach gayi...!!! varna tum aur HORLICKS jyada dur nahi hote...πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†tumko kuch aisa vaisa karne ki zarurat nahi hai, mai vese hi horlicks roz piti hu
baht ho gaya tumhari khinchai...!!! ab main apne fav scens k bare me bata ti hun...pahla...nandu aur raj k scenes aur dushra...airport par raj aur sur k scene...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘meri khichai k liye shukriya, mai already 2 inch lambi ho gai hu...aur ye scenes mujhe bhi ache lage, thanku so much!
sorry yaar...yeh part baht saddy tha na...toh maine ise is tarah se comments kar diya...!!! agar bura lage toh pagal samajh kar maaf kar dena...ok....???πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒdekho tum ye sorry ka jaap band kar do varna mai sach me bura maan jaungi...aur mujhe manana asaan nhi hai, ok? ur comments are always awaited dear!
chal ab jaldi se cont karo jab bhi tum ye kehti ho, part extra late ata hai...anyways i will try
thanku sooo much for d wonderful comment!
Love
Sur

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Destiny-

loveable FF sur my name is lekha do PM whenever you updt nxt

thnku so much for commenting Lekha...i wil pm u wen I will post the next part!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sania_58

superb update

loved it
too good
plz continue soon

Hey Sania
Thanku so much for liking my ff...
I'll try 2 ud asap
thnx a bunch for commenting
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Update was very nice....very well written. πŸ‘Thanku So much!

Raj is completely shattered😭...nandini is right..his illness is linked to his mental condition. She wants to help him but doesnot know how to.πŸ˜•yeah, she doesnt know what excatly is bothering him, so how could she help him?
Its good to see Nandini take such good care of him..waiting up late in the night to ensure that Raj comes home and has food.she is a nice bhabhi
Raj too loves his bhabhi and cares for her health. He does not want he to strain herself as she is pregnant.he is a gr8 guy!
Nandini is shocked😲 to know that Sur had told Raj about her wedding because she normally does not discuss it with others. Raj is shocked😲 to know that naina's husband has left her and does not care for her. He regrets not asking Nandini about this earlier but now that he knows😭...he wants to help her. well, Raj always wanted to help her out...
Vishal and Raj try to take as much care of Nandini and her parents after her fathers accident. Raj understands that it is important for Sur to here at such a time and so calls her back. he knows its better for her if she is with everyone
He does not know how he should feel or react when he sees her at the airport. And even she is at a lost of words. he is actually lost for words
Waitng to know what happens next.....so please continue as soon as you can hehe i will try my best dear

Thanku so much for commenting Nisha!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky901

grt prt dear

pls cont soon

thanku so much for the comment Pinky
I will cont asap
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Sur Hi Suhana

How r u??? m gud, wat abt u?
Update was really gud..😊thanku so much!!!
Raj is so shattered..He is immersing himself in work..He really can't get over Sur..
Nandini n every1 is worried over him.. its not that easy to get over ur love, isnt it?
Naindini is pregnant n Raj is so concerned for her..Its gud to see him so responsible.πŸ˜›he is a sweetheart!😊
Nandini was abt to reveal the dark past that is still haunting Sur but unfortunately it didn't happened..πŸ˜•dont worry will happen soon
Nadini 's father fell from the stairs n he is very serious..
Raj really took gr8 care of his family in this crisis. aisi situations usey sambhalni ati hai
Sur is back to see her father..
I hope everything is fine n Raj n Sur shud come close to each other.. of course they will..just wait nd watch...
Continue soon i will try my best
Bye tata!

thanku so much for the wonderful comment suhana!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Great part Sur...!!! Raj is soooo sad...I feel really bad for him...!!! But I have some hopes now after what Nandini said....!!!! Now that she s back in India, Raj should talk to her...!!!! Looks like both are sad because of being away from each other...!!!!

Update soon and pls PM me...!!!

Hey Dhara
Thanku so much for liking the part...yeah i know Raj is sad but i promise i will make up for it...And yes, both are sad cuz of being away from each other...
thanks a bunch for the gr8 comment
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

hi Sur !! hi Mana...interesting username!

Nice update!!πŸ‘thanku!
but Raj is in so much pain...😭i agree😭
Atleast Nandini si there to care for him... yeah, she is a nice bhabhi
Now with her father's accident, Sur is back in India.... cudnt keep them away for 2 long u see
Waiting to see what happens next...
Continue soon.😊i will try my best...thanku so much forcommenting!😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Wa wa wa.....mujhe rona aa raha hai....ruko mai hanky lati hu...how can Raj do this to himself?? poor guy...Or rather how can u do this to Raj??sorry yaar...tumhe pata hai na, aise apne Raj ko taklif dena kitnaaa bura lagta hai... Wo itna workaholic ho gaya hai....London se ate hi bimaar bhi ho gaya...😭....my eyes r actually moistened....bahuuuuut bura lag raha hai mujhe uske liye....aur inn sabke beech bhi wo muskurane ki koshish kar raha hai....hassi mazak kar raha hai Nandini se....😭....my poor baby!!!!!hey tum itna pareshan mat ho....sab thik hoga, mai hu na!

Ab iss Sur ka husband hai to ek number ka gadha aur nikamma....idiot i tell u Sur ko chhod jo diya.... he didnt deserve her ab isse gadhe k liye mera Raj pareshan hai!!! dont worry isko thikane laga dungi...par acha hua na vo chala gaya, apne Raj ki line to clear hai... Uff...sumtyms donkeys also create big problems na!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†yup they do

Sur's father fell down from the stairs...and so Sur is called from London...hmm...Raj must be confused abt how to react when he sees Sur...I mean he's happy thinking abt seeing her again....he's sad coz it pains her heart...and also her father is in hospital....so he actually cant be excited!!! How pathetic situation for him!!! yeah, hes in a fix...ab vo khushi k maare dance bhi nahi kar sakta...and he is tired too...πŸ˜†

I hope Raj jaldi se sab kuch jan jaye....aur apna jadu chalana shuru kar de. Continue soon dear.πŸ˜ƒim sure it will be...aur Raj ko mai zyada der tak pareshan nahi rakh sakti thanku so much for the beautiful comment Sumi!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hiiiiii sur'' hey Yogitha!

How r u? im great, wat abt u?

Nice part ''awesome work sur πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘thanku so much dear!

Raj is in so much pain'.kitna badal gaya hain wo'.he became workaholic now' every one in his family noticed the change in raj '.its good see that his bhabhi is there taking care of him'but she is also confused ki raj achank aisa kyun badal gaya'he became seriously ill after he came back from London'she is right when she thought that his illness had some thing to do with his mental state'.accha hain nandu ne usse scold kiya aur ghar jaldi aane ko kaha n warned him not to bring his files to home'.loved to see her concern about him'.n raj also cares for her a lot' yeah, Raj actually bahut badal gaya hai...aur kisi ko ye bhi nahi pata k kyu...nandu is really cocerned for him...

Nandini was surprised when she came to know that sur herself told raj about her marriage...really want to know sur ki life main aisa kya hadsa hua????? N why her husband left her '. why is she so scared of him yeah, have patience, sab kuch bata dungi, even i cant wait 2 reach that part

Its so sad that surs father is injured '... raj n vishal took care of every thing really well....
raj aur sur bahut dinon badh ek dusre ke saamne aaye'the song is so nice ...sur is also not in a good state...she is looking so week.. eager to know what happens next ab jab Raj thik nahi hai to Sur thik kaise ho sakti hai?

Sur 'this time u r not too late in updating the fic'. thank u so much for that'. n plz is baar bhi jaldi update karna dekho, jab bhi mai sochti hu jaldi ud karne ka, kuch na kuch gadbad ho jati hai, so keep ur fingers crossed!

thanks a bunch for the comment!

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