Internet Connection [Mini AR FF] *Note page 37* - Page 8

Originally posted by: ** L.U.S.H **

hey nice start pls pm me ...and let me tell u something seriouslyyy funny when i clicked on ur link a message came up in a new window saying this link is broken or your interent connection is weak and so i copied an pasted the address ...bu it made me laugh so much what a coincidence that ur ff is called interent connection hahahah...update soon x

thanx
hehe i can understan
sorry abt that

Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

nice start...cont.soon

thank u

Originally posted by: Robin_M

soumya yaar that was such a good intro! very hot...and the story is interesting! do continue soon!

thanx a lot!!

Originally posted by: Jinalee114

hi!

ur story seems really interesting...looking forward 2 ur next update

plz add me 2 ur pm list

thnx u! tc😊

thanx dear
i shall surely add u 2 d pm list

Originally posted by: aishar

woah awesum intro yar!

thanx a lot aish

Originally posted by: ridzi830

hey soumya
fantastic concept dear...ppls add me to ur pm list nd continue soon...

thanx a lot! 😊

Originally posted by: janu1610

Soumya yaar what a new concept,with full of love nd passion.
I m also thankful to their friends for making their profile.😆
and u find them for us .love u.
plz continue soon .Do u think we r in condition to wait after this great part??????????????????????
i know u guys r trying to tease me all the three stories i read till now were just--------AR making love .
Sensual seduction,Tanha dil and now this one yaar i can't take it more will come later.
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~ The Love She Gave ~

She laid her gifts, upon his bed

A pillow soft, beneath her head

Each finger firmly, locked in his

Two eyes fixated, on a kiss

A candle light, a darkened stage

Her body writes, a lovers page

While music dances, ear to ear

Romance erases, every fear

Into the night, sweet dreams unfold

With angels breath, two bodies mold

Artistic brushes, strokes of love

A masterpiece, blessed from above

Bouquets of twinkle, standing guard

Fresh honeysuckle, treats the yard

Inside the walls, are tumbling down

A king of hearts, will wear her crown

As daylight sends, its morning charms

She's fast asleep, inside his arms

The love she gave, so tenderly

Was meant for all eternity...

Ronnie Shreved

love
ritu

thanx a lot ritu di
i know its difficult to wait after this part but u'll have to! sorry about that
i shall post d next part asap

Originally posted by: Rhea256

heyy! errmmm....sorry i took soo long to read the 1st part! but it wass amazinngg! really interestingg and deep :D ann amazingg way to start of a fanficc...interesting name as well :D

soo do continuee soon mann!

will be waiting and thankss soo mcuh for the PM!! (:

take care and looking forward to the next update for this fanfic as well as fate's cruel game (:

its ok rhea
thanx a lot rhea!
well i did update Fate's cruel game sometime back n the next update will b after sumtime
but thanx a lot 4 ur comment

Originally posted by: Riddss

heyyy dear,
nice concept
continue soon


love
Riddss

thanx a lot ridz

Originally posted by: disisSanaya

oh man....awesome concept....love it😃..its different......😆😆

thanks a lot for the pm ya......😊😊... ur welcome 😃

cheers

sanaya😳

thanx sanaya

Originally posted by: princess52

hey my somiii girllll
first of all i m really sorry for bing the last person on the earth to comment u but i had gon to india for few dayz n i was not able to sit on comp over there was really bsy sooo i m reallly sorry for tht......]
but anywaz here i m soo
prologe was amaizing sweetsss....seriouslly...there kiss was amaing ....really waiiting for the first part update soon n pm me as well
love u girly
lov habs

its ok habs di (oh n btw ur not the last one! hehe)
i knew abt ur trip 2 india remember v had a chat!
thanx a lot
n u sure will get d pm no worries lolz
love ya 2!!!