ff 'sweet revenge' last part - pg 74 - Page 8

Awesome part! Loved it! Continue soon plz!

awesome part yaar

Originally posted by: taniyamiths

hey adi the part was tooooooooo goooooooood n thanx for the long part...u expressed mayank's feelings very well.the figt between his heart n mind...u kept it very special i think... mayank's respect for nupur's n his mom...he trying to keep them happy on 1 side and on the other he is hurting nupur..u described mayank very well...but yaar don't keep him like this..he is sooo sweet for everyone except nupur...make him sweet for her toooooo....make then together..i can't see them like this...and mayu's mom she is alwasy very sweetn gu tooo....loved theupdate adiii...

update soon...

plzz tll me when r u writing 1 shot u told abt?...m waiting 4 it..

Originally posted by: LUCYRIBEI

IT WAS SO EMORTIONAL ;

IM FELLING BAD FOR NUPUR

PLZ CONTINUE SOON IT AUSOME.

PLZ ADITI PLZ CONT

ONCE AGAIN THANX ALOT.

hi!

oh Adi

ab main keya kahu, etna amazing update hain ki kehne ke liye kuch bhi nehi raha.
Such a nice update yaar.

u know wht -every day i chek the forum whether u update or not.
waiting 4 this a long time.

feel very bad 4 Nupur. but i can also understood mayanks pain.
i m waiting 4 mayanks feelings about nupur.

eagerly waiting 4 ur next 1.
plz plz update soon.
thanx 4 ur PM
faria

Originally posted by: fariaa70

oh Adi

ab main keya kahu, etna amazing update hain ki kehne ke liye kuch bhi nehi raha.
Such a nice update yaar.

u know wht -every day i chek the forum whether u update or not.
waiting 4 this a long time.

feel very bad 4 Nupur. but i can also understood mayanks pain.
i m waiting 4 mayanks feelings about nupur.

eagerly waiting 4 ur next 1.
plz plz update soon.
thanx 4 ur PM
faria