FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

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Posted: 16 years ago

#731

OMFG that was amazinggggggggg neev is sooooooo cute! and haha i loved nupurs idea...feelin sorry for poor ms walia!
can wait for the rest!!!!!!!

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#732

Thank u Kainath for writing this!! IT was a gr8 update..absolutely loved it!!
I loved the way Neev misbehaved and Nupur n Neev slept in Mayank's bed! How they completely embarrassed Rashmi Walia!! I like it more and more when they cant seem to control each other any longer..with their emotions nearly giving them away..!!
Now the spring soiree it is!!! Wow!! 😃 😃 😃

Divya

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Annie

@annie07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#733

oh my god, i was so happy to see ur pm..................u made my day..........ooppsss night.....................loved the part............i m sure Rashmi Walia wud have liked the earth to open and swallow her.... :)

These two wen team up, are gr8.

And i love Neev, my lil cupid......so sweet............come in mummy, its warm and toasty......hehe.......

thanx a ton, plz update the soiree soon, i cant imagine wats gonna happen...............

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XAiShBaBy08X

@XAiShBaBy08X

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#734

Awesome update! I've been checking to see if you updated it or not and I think I saw RIGHT when you posted it bcuz the title hadn't changed yet.

I thought it was SO cute when Neev came to apologize to his Mummy! It was cool seeing that he came to her first instead of Mayank. You can tell he really thinks of her as his mom. You could also tell that Nupur thinks of him as her own son! I loved how they all slept together and how Mayank was SO confused to see them both there together.

and Rashmi......well I don't blame for blushing soo much. If I was in her position, I'd feel the same!

Can't wait for the Spring Soiree! Update soon!!!!!!!!!!

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falak

@falak01

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#735

omg omg..u updated tonight only...hailaaaaaaa

i was going to sleep but when i saw ur pm,i rushed to read it out...😆😆

ahhhh..what an update...seriously..i just loved it...sooooo long.....even it ended but i was searching for few more lines...😆😆

my love neev was sooooo adorable today...ahhh..he is as usual adorable....😳😳😳

and the way nupur handled his situation was excellent...and yeah mayank n nupur r arguing less and thinnking more....😆

soo neev made it atlast...made her mummy to and daddy to share their bed...wowwiiieeeee

and then the soiree invitation....yipeee...

and awwwww neev is hurt...but good for him only...so this time nupur used her wild mind against the DMp...😆😆uffff..mayank shirtless infront of DMP andd whats thattt....nupur in their bedroom....ahahaaahha...😳😳😳

and i just loved their POVs here...😆😆😆

so finally they made it...

ahaaaa...so they r losing their control off from their emotions..good sign...😳😳

awesome...superb...fantabulous update..👏

u made my night yaar..now ican sleep with full imaginations of next update....😳

thankuuuuuuuuuuuuuu soooooooooo muchhhhhhhhhhh for updating tonight only....

u r such a sweetheart...🤗

thanx a lottttttttttt....i don't think i need to tell u coz u know but still..i m waitingggggggggggggggg desperately for the next part....😃😃😃

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Debolina Roy

@Healer.

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#736

good one yaar....hilarious!!! i can just imagine mayu's "wtf" expression when nupur told him to get the door....shirtless!!! and poor soul madam rashmi blushing her soul out seeing mayank.....aww too gud lolz!! haha neev is the hero!! always uniting his mummy and daddy...aww the little cupid.....!! looking foward to the next one kainath!!

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Unknown

@-SMay31-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#737

gr8 part..loved the trio sharing bed scene.. :))

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Srishti but I prefer being called Mishu

@~*mishu*~

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#738

rroocckkiinnggg part!!
loved how neev said sorry to nupur, made nupur n mayank share the same bed
i love that kid hes too cute n too good, but he got hurt too
it was nice see the dmp all embarrassed
n mayur r fyting less now that is just awesome
i can't wait to read more
continue soon

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amazingneira

@amazingneira

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#739

oh i liked the part especially when neev asks nupur to share... he is so adorable!!!

I hope he doesnt speak about separate beds for his parents when he is interviewed...

update soon.. \I just wait for uur update