FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148

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koolaries4

@koolaries4

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#741

i must say, i just read ur whole ff.. its amazing n coool... cant wait for u to continue.. and plz PM me when u have updated...

n do continue soooonnnnnnnn...................

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#742

wowwwwwww............another rockin update..........neev is gettin more n more more jaaaaaaaaanuable day by day.....once again he had bcome d Cupid in d new lov story of Mayur....😳......

by god........kaaaaaaaash mein Ms Walia ke jagah hoti......😆😆.........toh atleast i cud also hv gt d GOLDEN CHANCE OF THE CENTURY to c Shirtless Mayu(other than nupsi).....😳..............

truly when they r 2gether,they alwz make a rockin team.........tabhi toh Ms walia ko in logon ne itnaaaaaa embarass kiya ki shayad Ms walia apni khud ki suhag raat mein bhi itna nahi sharmayegi jitna she did here.....😆

alll in al.....once again awesome fab superb update........👏.........

plzzz plzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooon...........😃

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Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#743

Hey!

This part had sooo many drool worthy bits.. literally.

At the start i was like Neevs wats up your bum? Nupz handled him perfectly.. he kinda of reminded me of my sister.. ahah.. i expected Mayank to be angry at Nupz for talking to Neev like that but glad he was strict too.. i was in shock with the spanking bits.. i was like WAT! nooo! but thank god only few slaps across the bum..

Dinner scene was cute, the fact that they had a normal husband-wife scene was reallllyyyyyyy sweet.

: )

When Neev came into the room at night time i thought that was sooo sweet of him, poor kid has a conscience.. and the fac he couldn't go to sleep.. was even cuter.. it was funny how he forced Nupz to sleep in Mayu's bed.. i'ts warm and toasty... hahah

I agree so much with Mayank that strange things always happen while he's sleeping and strange things are always there when he wakes up..

But! My fave bit was the whole DMP thing.. hilarious that nupz yanked his shirt off and made him go out shirtless.. i kinda had a feeling that she would be like hunny come back to bed. :P

Can we please have a mayu fantasy of nupz? i mean u always have the little monologues of him saying... imagine wat i could have done with her in the towel etc.. a dream would be funny and just very romantic..

Thanks soo much for the PM

xSonia

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bronze

@bronze

Beginner

Posted: 16 years ago

#744

wow.. amazing part, sorry i cudnt write abt the last one.. been really busy..

Anyways, Neev sure was in a bad mood !! but he is so thoughtful for such a young kid. He definitely has his fathers temper.
Loved the bed part, feel sorry for mayank, he soo in need of the normal life. poor guy.

They ve started to be so civil with each other. the three of them form such a cute family.

Poor rashmi, shirtless mayank and the the bedroom bit.... 😳

Cant wait to see what happens in the party. and still waiting to know and the past...

you didnt PM 😔, plz do next time..

Edited by bronze - 16 years ago

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#745

thanks for updating it..............it was super cool....................

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zoya

@tingtingteeding

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#746

hey awesome update

i was waiting for the update for so long and it defo was worth the wait

i really liked how nupur is becoming more and more of a mother to neev

and both mayank and nupur are behaving like strict parents towards the nasty behavoiur of their child

and rashmi part was awesome....the way they flustered her

great part

plzzzz update soon....cant wait for the soiree thingy

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nishi

@Nishithini

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#747

awesome part. neev was really being naughty and it was really sweet when he came to appologize to nupur.

I cant wait for the party. plz continue soon.

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brahmjot

@-nautankidollz-

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#748

entirely speechless

hoe i wished nups won't be wearing anything

n seriouisly speaking i don't like the sound of that dmp

i feel sth is amiss

anyway lov u darling 4 updating so quickly

u made my weekend really

now tomarrow's classes will be all the more bearable

love

dolly

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Hgrhrnwl

@hgrhr

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#749

oh my god...! you updated and that too that very day..!!

you really are the sweetest..!! You didn't have to but still you did....thank you so much..!!

this made my day..!! seeing the update PM..!! hehe....

god...Neev was very cranky....i was actually very surprised that what happened to him all of a sudden...he's calling his mom and dad stupid..! LOL but nupur handled it so well...!! She was completly behaving like a perfect mother...!! hehe

But mayank was furious..! i really liked that scene....they both were behaving so totally like parents...! and the conversation after when she was trying to talk to him....like a usual husband and wife...seeing all these scene made me grin like anything..!! LOL

they were such a perfect family but they just didn't realise it..!!

and awwwww....Neev is such a sweetheart...poor kid got a spanking and no dinner and was feeling so guilty..! I was feeling bad for him...and when he came in the middle of the night to say sorry to Nupur...i just wanted to give him a bear hug!!

sooooooo he made his mom and dad sleep in the sam bed huh..!! LOL

that was such a sweet child logic he used....what could Nupur say to that,,..? hehe...

Mayank's started seeing them as his complete family....he's getting used to this...I'm so happy..! wow....i could just imagine them all sleeping in the same bed...awwww.....

and then that DMP...god she's always getting on their nerves..!! But what a plan of Nupur's even mayank was in shock..!! who wouldn't..? hehe....

one more this kinda stunt and they won't be able to control themselves..!! LOL

can't wait till the soiree..!! something big is gonna happen...i have a feeling and Neev won't be here...? hmmm....did you send him out deliberatly kya...? LOL

do continue soon....!!

Love you for this spectacular update..!!

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debby

@debby

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#750

Neev in a cranky mood is even more fun.. If I was Nupur, I wouldnt mind his new found love for sharing at all. Not that Nupur did either. But I agree, Mayank was too harsh on the kid. He needs to tone down that temper of his...

Rashmi's defences have been by her side till now. What the poor woman must have felt seeing Mayank like that and Nupur in bed.. jealous? LOL Mayank's 'hormones' shudnt be blamed all the time though. He conveniently incriminates them each time... Its not just his hormones but his soul and his flesh and everything that desires her. But the egotist wont admit.. well he will one day though.

So the soiree is being built up to.. aha! Sounds really interesting.. esp with Neev being out of the way and no sharing to be acomplished.

Lovely update as always Kainath. I am green with envy. :)