FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 16

Great Chapter!

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

@Kainath- well it's good u decided to start. otherwise we all would have missed out on an amazing FF

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aww...thanks a ton dear :) btw i've commented on ur ff...loved it! please update soon!

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

amazing part yaar

hottie part was nice

update next part soooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

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thx a ton! i'll try updating soon....:)

Originally posted by: *angel94*

Great Chapter!

Loved the conversation Mayank and Neev had on who is a hottie?😆

And the flashbacks Nupur had..., cant wait to find out how they broke up.

Please update soon.

Anjali

thanks a lot! :) i'll update soon dun worry ;)

Originally posted by: debby

Hey Kainath! Thanks for updating quickly.. you know I was really eager to read ahead :)

That was a hilarious conversation Mayank and Neev had. =)) =)) All Sharmas are hotties? LOL. Ah, I get sadistic pleasure from the fact that he will now have to listen to Nupur's name pretty often each day.
A nice Gunjan-Nupur scene too. Gunjan seems to have matured even further and I liked the way she advised her big sis. Especially the part abt her not being alone as they were all there. That really hit home. Its strange how one can be alone even if you have a crowd around you.
I loved the way you included the song. I absolutely ADORE that song and the lyrics are indeed tailor made to take anyone back to the memories of first love. It hurts to see Nupur so upset...

Amazing, amazing chapter again.. makes me doubly more excited to know the whole story... excellent work! 😃

Thank you so much! I have fallen head over heels for that song and I HAD to include it in the ff...lol...and the mayank and neev conversation took me the longest to write...hopefully it turned out well :) and i must admit, even i felt pretty sad for nupur after i proof read it.....haha...but i wont be that cruel now :)

my next chapter should be cmg up soon, so pls read and review!

hey once again im here to tell you how a wonderful writer you are!its amazing!

so mayank cant get nupur image out of his mind!
is she a hottie according to him?! i think yes!
and nupur seems really hurt!
i hope neev will play cupid between the two!

keep it up!

Originally posted by: parisbynight

hey once again im here to tell you how a wonderful writer you are!its amazing!

so mayank cant get nupur image out of his mind!
is she a hottie according to him?! i think yes!
and nupur seems really hurt!
i hope neev will play cupid between the two!

keep it up!

thanks a lot! well nups is definitely a hottie to mayank...it's just that he wouldnt admit it over his dead body...lol... :)

She was a pain-in-the-neck, end of story and there was no need to think about her outside of being his son's teacher. She was plain and boring and awfully sharp-tongued. Nothing about her was attractive' but then again, why was he still so drawn to her? Why was still he so aware of those incredibly big brown eyes and full, pink lips he had caressed eons ago? Why did he feel as though there was someone else inside him who wanted to tear apart the image of the reserved, acrid man and just grab her and kiss her senseless' no, none of that.

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I just wanted to say that this part was so awesome, especially when Mayank wanted to kiss Nups senseless. It made my heart tingle!

Originally posted by: cheenukoul

She was a pain-in-the-neck, end of story and there was no need to think about her outside of being his son's teacher. She was plain and boring and awfully sharp-tongued. Nothing about her was attractive' but then again, why was he still so drawn to her? Why was still he so aware of those incredibly big brown eyes and full, pink lips he had caressed eons ago? Why did he feel as though there was someone else inside him who wanted to tear apart the image of the reserved, acrid man and just grab her and kiss her senseless' no, none of that.

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I just wanted to say that this part was so awesome, especially when Mayank wanted to kiss Nups senseless. It made my heart tingle!

Aww, thanks a lot! I liked that part too! lol.... :)