FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148

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karishma

@ay_forever

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#1101

amazin fabulous update...luv it completely...neev is jus too cute.. i luv it whn he said my mummy is my mummy n the thoughts in his mind were jus too cute..u r seriously a fabulous writer...sonali is also vry nice...love mayur conversation n thanku kiss is jus so sweet...i totally luv ths fic...whts wth ranvijay??????w8in fr ur nxt update..cntinue vry soonn...wll b w8in..

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raveenamc

@raveenamc

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#1102

Iit was excellent, brilliant, amazing, fabulous, fantabulous, mind-blowing, mind-blasting and i have nothing else to say!!!

this was an amazing update! :)

I loved it how sonali mae nupur think about the fact that mayank really loves her

Neev was so cute!!! this kid is the best

i start hyperventilating when mayank kissed nupur on her nose an held her by the wrist

mayank and nupur are both in love, now when will nupur tell mayank this?

ugh!!!! RV! no yaar. he will mess up the whole story. or bring them closer *prays for second one*

im dying for the next update. plz update sooooon! :)

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#1103

Hi Kainath,
Lovely and awesome update as usual.
love it sooooooo much
I liked Neev a lot.
He is just a sweet boy.
And loves his mummy a lot.
i like his word-i like mu muumy, she hugs me,kiss me,play with me and so on.
Nupur just rock and lucky also to be a mummy of such a cute pie.
But i m little bit worried about RV.
Pls kuch bura mat hone dena
any way i m waiting for mayur confession.
GOD knows when it will be happen.
thanx 4 ur nice and quick update dear.
THnax a lottttttttttttt again

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Mahak

@FragranceOfLove

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#1104

wow...........what an update!
u always keep me suprised
well it was too short
but i loved it
u r awesome
it was too good
kitni achi baat hai ki woh dono phir se pyaar karne lage hain......
plzzzzzzzzz make the next update long and romantic.....
they r too good
and in dino hum mayur fans ko kuch acha chahiye.....
to refresh our moods,..
grt update.........
continue soon....

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Anjali-K

@Anjali-K

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#1105

Interesting Chapter, Kainath!

She finally admitted she still loves him!!!

What's RV doing at his doorstep??? Does he know about their marriage is a sham?

Cant wait to read the next chapter!

Anjali

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Annie

@annie07

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#1106

hey sorry, for late reply, was out of town.....................and i m so glad to have u bak in element................loved both the parts immensely............and Neev 2....................

Part 26 - Tampoons part was hilarious, and i really love the fact that Nupur realises her love for him..........and the comfort level they share.

Part 27 - I really like Sonali, and her bubbly self, and the way she makes Nupur realise Mayank's love for her. loved that these 2 are now accepting others feelings 2.................but wat a cliffhanger at end................plz update soon..........

thanx for pm

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@ImmaculateDream

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#1107

ur FF has become apart of my life.... wonderfully written characters here are FAAAR from any cheesiness that i have to tolerate in the show. id like to request to make this FF as much as long as u can ... i would love to see Mayur growing old with each other 😊 thanks a lot..

n yah i m in love with neev!!!!

Edited by SAra_Spiritual - 15 years ago

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#1108

ok i know kainath maybe i am the last to comment sniff sniff,

wow you updated soooooooooo quickly man, you need not ever feel guilty. i loveeeeeeeeeee your ff and with the same intensity as before, i guess even more as its soooooo great to see the depth in your story, the characters and also how you soo beautifully and realistically allow your characters to grow, growth of the characters is soooooo crucial yet its not everyone's or every writer's cup of tea to deal with it and man you master in that.

Coming to the update as i always do and as usual i lovedddddddddd it man. it was amazingggggggggg loved it from the part where nupur wakes up mayank sooooo adorably and mayank doesn't wanna get up, bugger work hehe.

I lovedddddddd how mayank helped nups in getting neev ready for tthe big day, neev has always been such a darlinggggggggggggg loveeeeeeeee him soooooo much.

Neev and DMP interaction was really really well portrayedddddddd, awwwwww our neev is so cute, bang on neev, nupur is your mum.

Sonali and vikram, hayeeee so adorable, i loveeeee sonali for making her realise that mayank at least loves her or has feelings for her, though mayank confessed when he was drunk anyways, but this part with sonali was sooooooo realistic and the way mayank looks at her with those burning eyes is making me blush whilst thinking about it.

About the next bit, MN hayeeeeeeeee at last, i loveddddddd it to the core, how mayank held her hand and stopped her and kissed on her nose, though he has a dangerous imagination anyways.

oh nooooooooooooo ranvijay, i amall ready to killllllll him now, what he is he doing here????????????

j am all scared, hope you would update soon.

Excellent update, kudos to you.

God bless.

Edited by Senny - 15 years ago

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Premeer_01

@Premeer_01

Beginner

Posted: 15 years ago

#1109

it was awesome dear. 😊
plzzzz cont soon.
when r u gonna upd8 nxt part??????
cant wait to read.
so eagerly waitin for it. 😭

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Sonia

@Bollywood_chic

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#1110

You know what Kainath, you make it so hard to comment each time.. i feel like im a broken tape-recorder saying the same thing over and over and over AGAIN!

You're an AMAZING writer and the way the story takes different directions each time.. it's completely on a different way than what i would have thought.

Loved this part..

totally agree with M's line about Neev being as cheeky as could get.. haha..

and Nupur being in LOVE!

can i say it finally

HALLELUJAH!

yet. i think RV coming back.. u have something up ursleeve and i hope this doesn't stop N from telling M she loves him.

please cont soon

xSonia