FF: Last thing I expected - Mayur. Chapter28 Pg148 - Page 109

oooooh.. amazinnng.. ranvijay eh?!! i completely forgot about him; nice cliff hanger... continue soon!!

i give up complimenting your ff.....Ive run out of words....and even if i list all the complimentary words i can find....i would still be doing injustice to this OUTSTANDING ff....it just gets better and better and better.....im always sitting on the edge of my seat...one min laughing sooo hard and the next bitting my nails....and the next in tears...and again in fits of laughter!!!!!.....

I was jumping with joy when i saw ur pm..i thought i was seeing things cz it was too good 2 be true! but i love u so much for updating! and such a brill part too!

ok to the story....firstly i can not believe you stoped it right there.....well i actually i can...u have this amazing abitly to torture us like that...LOL...kidding...but yeh u have an amazing ability to keep us begging for the next bit....lol....i seriously wonder what problem he is going to create! i hope not to bad...iw as so hoping anne would show up...id love to see nupur getting insecure of her and scared of losing mayank. and neev...and actually see her fight to keep them....but lets see what you got instore for us...lol....sonali...i love her....shes so funny...she adds so much comedy!! and like nupur ses shes sooo lovely and sweet....u cant not love her!!!...neev was too funny to day...with his very very very very's....lol....and his explantion of anne and nupur....meanie weanie...lloll...and my mummy is my mummy....how hard is that to understand....LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLLL....i love neev....a bit too much!!!!....lol....nupur.....why why why did she say no...that why i kinda want to see her fight for him..!!!....shes got the perfect life...tho the kids not hers...its still givn her the perfect life...i wana see her fight to keep it!!!!....

I LOVE this ff....its simply too amazing!!...written so beautifully...

update soon again....pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!1

heena
x

its so gr8
i am haapy
tht mayur r becoming frnds

There was a HUGE smile on my face when I saw that you had updated! YaY!

U know what dear..u r simply the best..a standing ovation 2 u...

yay!!!! u updated ....and that to soooo fast.......i'm on the moon at the moment.....hehe....loved the update....it was fab, marvelous....and wat not....i'm short of words......it was brilliant.....i think i told you that i'm falling more in love with mayank....and neev was fab...i loved how he was so sure about his mummy......awesome update.....plzzzzzzzz continue soon

omgggggggg awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee thank god u updated so quickly!

wow..............kaitz nw u r back wid ur quicker updates,huh?awesome..............ab hume regularly milte rahenge na iske updates.........yipee......................

Neev is d star of d update........i just lovedddddddd his convo wid tht stupid DMP......n d bestest part ws his answers for annie.........luv u neev......🤗...........i hope stupid lady samaj jaaye ki nupsi is truly d mother of Neev,nt tht **** annie.........

I just loved mayur moments....especially tht thank you moments......n its sooo happy to c ki nupsi is hvin second thoughts abt their relationship....finally.......pata nahi kab vo moment aayega when both wil confess to each other n reunite forevr,,,,,,,,😍,😍,😍,😍,😍,😍,😍,😍,😍..............

Totally another fab rockin awesome update dear......👏.........

kaitz...........whts wid dis RV?????????😲😲😲..........firse kyu aaya hai?u ended firse at an interestin pt...

plzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue ASAP.......😳😳😳

When I opened IF and saw that there is a new PM, I thought can it be, is it, yes..it is an update from you...yippie...😃.

Two parts in two days..amazing....this part was short compared to the last superlong part, but still sufficiently long. Thanks a lot for the update.

Darling Neev - Mummy is my mummy - Nupur ke aankhein kyon na bhar aaye? Wonderful..

And, RV is back, tell..please tell...he hasn't come to know about the contract 😔.

Thanks for the PM and wonderful update.