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KrishnaSourav

@KrishnaRukmini

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

#201

mindblowing update. loved it.

kaun iye sab kar raha hain.

raj ne accha kya sab ko na bata ke,bekar mein sab pareshan ho jate, good move raj ka.

iye huda kuchgarpa kar rahahain mujhe lag rahahain but kya?

chalo,asli bartender mil gaya dono ko.

lo blast hogaya,

raj and naina injured.

Iye niar, phir se gaaya, raj ne accha kya naina ka praise karke uss nair ke saamne.Brig. ne bhi raj ka sath dia.

shalini did right thing to give sedative to raj, nehi toh raj toh ussi halat mein jane ko soch raha tha.

lo,raj toh naina ko iss halat mein dekh ke gussa ho gaye,

continue soon.

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago

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Esha

@esha143

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 15 years ago

#202

yaar guglu mujhe na tere iss fic ko padhke bohuth mazaa aatha hai.kabhi lagtha hai ki ye bilkul LRL ki tarah hai aur phir bhi nahi hai.ab yahi dekhlo Huda Rajveer ke raaste mein aagaya ab ye ussne jaan boojhke kiya hai ya nahi kise pata?(sivaay tumhaare)ab sab ko toh yahi lagegaa na ki Huda LRL ki tarah Raj ki dushman hai.ab dekhnaa ye hai ki ye kitna sach hai.

aur ab aathe hai hamaare pyaare couple par.ye dono kisi bhi fic mein argue karna toh chodenge nahi.par phir bhi sahi hi hai agar chod denge toh vo RN kaise lagenge,hai na?aur Naina se toh argue karke bhi koi faidaa hi nahi hai kyun ki usse toh koi nahi jeet saktha,Raj toh bilkul bhi nahi.pataa nahi usse ye baat kyun nahi samajh mein aatha.ab khud usspe chilla rahaa hai aur phir guilty feel kar rahaa hai.

oh god ....bomb!!!!thanx guglu ki tu ne RN ko bachaliya.Raj aur Naina dono ko chot lagi hai phir bhi vo dono ek doosre ke chot ke baare mein soch rahe hai.now thats what we call LOVE.aur chot lagne ke baawajoodh Raj aur Naina dono apni duty ke liye tayyaar ho gaye aur aag bhujaane ki koshish mein lag gaye.REAL SOLDIERS.ahcha hua Suriji bhi aagaye unki help ke liye.

aur yaar ye BS lagtha hai BC se kaafi alag hai aur achcha bhi.BC ne kabhi MC ke khilaaf kuch nahi kahaa par BS ne Naina aur Raj dono ki tarafdaari ki hai jab MC un dono ko blame kar rahaa tha.that was indeed very nice.I love your BS for this.just keep him that way only.and he made Raj go to the infirmary with Naina.good.warna Raj ko toh bas sabuth dhoondne ki padi hai,khud ki toh usse kuch parwaah hai hi nahi.

Shalini was too smart for Raj.ussne Raj ko tranquiliser de di.very good doc.warna ye aadmi toh bas kaam,kaam aur kaam.ufff.......ab thoda toh aaram karega.n she kept Naina in the infirmary too.and Naina ,usse toh pata nahi ki Raj aur Shalini usske baare mein sab kuch jaanthe hai.

the early morning infirmary scene was very nice.Naina taking care of Raj,Raj cursing Shalini for giving him the injection,Naina scolding him for pressurising his injured arm everything was so funny n a bit intimate too.RN are seemingly coming closer to each other.and yaar what is this past of her that she is remembering in bits?she is damn confusing us as well with these thoughts.jaldi clear karo ki RN kaise jaanthe the ek doosre ko pehle se.

the convo of Raj-Shalini was hilarious.Shalini's asking"Doctor mai hun ya aap?" and Raj's counter-questioning "mariz mai hun ya aap?"-that was damn good yaar🤣🤣🤣🤣

so Naina became incharge of his medication.good.ab vo bachke nahi jaa saktha Naina jo itni ziddi hai.aur ye Naina bhi nahi bach paayi Shalini se.aur oopar se ab Raj bhi usse gussa ho gaya uski haalath dekh kar.well ye toh hona hi tha.ab pata nahi Naina ka kya hoga jab vo Raj se akele mein milegi?chalo dekhthe hai aage aage kya hotha hai..............waise tu hume dikha kab rahi hai ki aage kya hogaa...................update soon yaar..............................

Edited by esha143 - 15 years ago

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#203

Great part Guglu...!!!

I totally loved the action...!!!

Naina is on her way to become a perfect soldier, just like her mentor....!!!!

Edited by Dhara_s - 15 years ago

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sweet_shona

@sweet_shona

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#204

lovely update....
So naina found the real bartender but he ws unconscious....
Raj tried to go after that fake bartender..but stopped by huda.. 😡 ..n he escaped...!!!
Raj asked angrily naina to leave from there...naina felt bad for his behaviour..raj realised his mistake.. so there that unknown peron hd fixed a bomb behind the bar... raj n naina both escaped but got hurt...!!!
gud that brig. gave nair a hard time by answering on behalf of Raj...
Raj n naina both were asked to go to infirmary..shalini gave seditive to raj becoz he wanted to go there again...
so naina also slept in the infirmary..Raj is shocked to see naina there...
so finally Raj got discharged after many times pleading to shalini..heheheh... but as shalini asked naina to stay in the infirmary, Raj realised that naina also hurted so much... he got angry but didnt say a word n left from there... !!!!!
lovely update.... naina is trying to recall her memory...!!! ??
waiting for the next update....

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#205

Hiiii guglu.....

Awesome 👏 👏 👏 👏 fabulous part 👏 👏 👏 👏 dear

what this stupid huda is doing there..aur usne raj se kyun takraya.....us stupid ki wajah se raj missed that bartender...kahi ye sab huda jaan bhooch ke to nahin kiya ..kya huda bhi unlogon se mila hua hain

raj naina ko jaane ke liye kaha ,but she dont want to leave ....naina bhi sahi hain ..raj ko aise akele chodhkar kaisa jaa sakthi hain wo...first raj shouted at her for not listening to him but later he felt guilty for shouting at her...n said sorry to her...ab raj ka bhi galthi nahin ..raj is worried about nainas safety na thats why thoda sternly baat ki naina se usne

Thank God ya thanks to u kahun.. thanks to u hi kehthi hun...ab is fic main jo bhi hota hain tumhari marzi se hi hota hai na ...raj aur naina bachgaye.. lekin donon ko kitna chote lag gayi

BS is so nice yaar...us ne kitne taarif ki raj n naina ka..i loved that scene.. aur nair ki bolthi bandh karadi usne

Shalini ne tikh ki sedative dekar ..nahin to captain saab to rest lene ka naam hi nahin le raha hain

yaar jaldi se naina ka true identity reveal karo ...aur uske past ke bare main bhi ...jaldi ...plzzz

T he early morning scene is so nice ..shalini n rajs convo is hillarious

raj was annoyed seeing nainas condition.....ab dekhna ye hain ki raj naina ka class kaisa lega

plzz continue soon aur wo bhi long part

Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#206

Chalo....maine bhi 'like' button press kar diya....ab silent ban jau kya?? Lolz....ye possible nahi....mujhe Raj k bare me kitniiiiiiiiii baatein karni hoti hai pata hai na.....hehe.

Raj was trying to follow that fake bartender....but this Huda....gadha kahin ka....aa gaya bich me....I doubt if that was purposeful!!! Raj was superbly in his Captain mode...ordering every1 and all....too gud!! And I liked the way Brigadier Sareen backed him in front of Nair....and also Raj praised Naina for everything....he is soooooooo sweet yaar!!

Ab ye Naina ki identity kya hai?? Is she a trained army personnel or wat?? U c....her way of interrogating also surprised Shalini!!! And of course....last part k wo mysterious flashbaks!!! Uff....Gugly....tum bhi itne mysteries bich me chhor kar Hyadrabad jaa rahi ho.....gosh!!

Thnx to Mana....jiski wajah se tumne at least isse pehle ek UD to kar di....aur haan....dont think u r ever gonna be this lucky that we al turn silent n u dont hav to reply to our comments....we will always trouble u in that regard....hehe.

Now me w8ing for the next part......mostly bcoz u said....u'll be putting up two together.....ahh....sounds so tempting yaar!!

Btw....I liked the slight emotions described in this part....though there were not many....but I luved the few scenes!!!

Now bye....take care....and hav a safe journey....and cum bak soon.

Luv,
Sumi.

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385641

Hibernated

Posted: 15 years ago

#207

hi,

update bahut hi pyara tha.

rajveer ka sach mein koi jawab nahin.he prevented any sort of casualty risking his own life.as fr naina is concerned she is noless she goes hand in hand with him.and she is relly a superwomen in making.

ye baat galat thi ke naina ne bhale raj ko daanta a,par apna khayal bilkul nahin kiya.

looks lke ke agle update naina ka bura haal hone wala hai.......

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#208

simply amazing updt.....luved d wau d thrilling part was drafted and
den d after effect of naina and raj in infirmary.....tooo good....👏👏👏

also d dialogues wer awesome der.....👏👏👏

last part wer raj surverys naina was very nice.....😊

kindly keep updting....