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Posted: 16 years ago
#71
very nice update.....RN r just owsome.
but wats this????? itni lambi chuttiπŸ˜”...bich mein ek update toh kar de.
waiting for next update...

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Posted: 16 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Awesum part yaar!!! I luv ur libertyπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ Aise hi liberty liya karo dear....Raj n naina together for fresher's ball....amazing. Huda ko achha sabak mila....aur to aur free me Raj ko Naina k saath jane ka mauka bhi mil gaya....wow....I just luved it. Thanks Sumi. I was really scared. What if RN going to the ball together became too far fetched.

Raj's mischievious attitude towards Naina was surprising but pleasant....luved it. But more than that i luved the way naina handled the case n more to that Raj took it further. His cold bashing to Huda in his office...was brilliant, superb, mind-blowing. I was really bored by the way Raj everytime forgave Huda. When Huda did something against Raj and Raj forgave him was ok but I thought atleast Raj shouldn't forgive Huda if he misbehaves with Naina. Hence the cold bashing. I have just made a few changes in Raj's character i.e. his being mischevious with Naina and all that because he needed to put her at ease. And we sometimes got a glimpse of this side of his nature in LRL. So I portrayed him in that way. But he will soon be back to his former self. Its only with Naina that he feels free.


I'm w8ing for the fresher's ball. But u r going on leave.....I really hope net is avalable there...coz from 6th my college is opening. I will definitely try to update dear. Even its so difficult for me to take such a long break. I practically live in these fics - reading them and writing my fics. But...

Anyways, w8ing eagerly for the next part dear.



Thanks for your comments Sumi.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: vvdn

very nice update.....RN r just owsome. They always are.πŸ˜‰heheheπŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†. I'm glad you liked it.😊
but wats this????? itni lambi chuttiπŸ˜”...bich mein ek update toh kar de. Mai try karungi par keh nahi sakti. Kya karun, mujhe bhi bura lag raha hai. Maine toh socha tha puja ke time par weekly updates dungi par ... saare plans par paani fir gaya.
waiting for next update...



Thanks for commenting. 😊 😊 😊
By the way if you don't mind can you tell me your name? Its sounds very odd if I call you vvdn.


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Posted: 16 years ago
#74
Great part....!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘
This Huda has a very peculiar ability to get on to everybody's nerves everytime he says something....!!😑😑
Loved the Naina treated him....!!!!πŸ˜‰
Also loved the way Rajveer treated him....!!!! πŸ˜›
But loved the way Rajveer treated Naina the most...!!!!😳😳
And we can convieniently bend the rules for RN...!!!πŸ˜›πŸ˜› SO we are happy that they are going together...!!!!! πŸ˜³πŸ˜›
And U are going on Vacation....!!! 😲 Enjoy your holidays...!!!!⭐️
Edited by Dhara_s - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Great part....!!!πŸ‘πŸ‘Thanks
This Huda has a very peculiar ability to get on to everybody's nerves everytime he says something....!!😑😑Very true.
Loved the Naina treated him....!!!!πŸ˜‰ Hehehe
Also loved the way Rajveer treated him....!!!! πŸ˜› hehehe
But loved the way Rajveer treated Naina the most...!!!!😳😳That was my fav too.
And we can convieniently bend the rules for RN...!!!πŸ˜›πŸ˜› SO we are happy that they are going together...!!!!! πŸ˜³πŸ˜›
And U are going on Vacation....!!! 😲 Enjoy your holidays...!!!!⭐️Thanks. And you enjoy yours.😊



Thanks for commenting.😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#76

WOOoooooooooooooooonderful update!!!

This Huda always gets on my nerves😑
Naina was awesome! much better than LRL Naina in vch she alwayz screams and shouts on Huda....Her cold and stern nd Scary treatment was mmmmmuuuuuch better!πŸ˜ƒ
Raj was superb!
Loved the way he treated Naina!!!
Haai...😳 Aisi liberty baar baar use kiya karo! Raj and Naina together in Fresher's ball!
Ab jaldi update karo! mere hi liye ruki thi naa? to ab jaldi karoπŸ˜†
Edited by manatated - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#77
Update was very nice...
Huda in his arrogance can be quite irritating...and this time he pushed the limit of naina's patience a bit too far...Naina gave himenough chances to stop and back away but he refused to give up.
Naina had no option but to hit him to knock some sense in him...serves him well...
Raj is the perfect hero...he knew that he must step in now...liked the way in which he pulled up Hua's character sketch in for Huda later in his office...He is not followed by Huda's sorry and is sure that Huda will react soon.
The best part was when raj proposes to take naina for the ball..For once Raj was bold enough to hear to his heart...You can take all the liberty you want with RN...
please continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
Good one nahi kahoongi kyounki this is the best one. πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Loved the update so much. πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
Raj jaanta tha ki Naina ne us se vaada kiya hai to jyada kuch nahi karegi vo but Huda ko ye right kis ne diya ki vo doosron k sabr ka imtihaan leta rahe? 😑 😑 😑 He is really a b*****d i hated him the most in the serial. 😑 😑 😑
Naina k alawa us ko koi aur dikhta nahi hai kya 😑 😑 😑? Naina bhi avoid karne ki koshish kar rahi thi us ko but agar koi is tarah se peeche hi pad jaaye to aap kar bhi kya sakte hain? 😑 😑 😑
Naina ne fir bhi Huda ko kuch had tak samjhane ki koshish ki par jab koi maana hi nahi chahta to kya kar sakte hain ? But really Naina gave him a good lesson that next time he will never do anything. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Raj was really lovely n excellent.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ Us ne jis andaaj me Naina ko ball dance sikhane ko kaha aur ball me saath chalne ko kaha, hieeeeeeeee mai to fida ho gayi poori tarah se. 😳 😳 😳
Bus Alekh aur Shalu ne koi reaction nahi diya is baat par jab ki baaki saare log shock hue n Huda as usual jealous.πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› Naina bhi samajh nahi paayi ki Raj ne ye kyoun kaha but i am really very happy that both r going with each other.πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

Raj ne Huda ko apne office me jo samjhaya vo bhi bahut accha raha. πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Liked every bit of ur this ud 😊 😊 😊. ab jaldi se vapas aa k reply karo.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
pahle yeh batao ki tum kis liberty ki baat kar rahi ho...??? arre yaar mera bas chalta na toh mian toh tumhe 'statue of liberty' gift kar deti...tumhare is ud k liye...πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ!!! par afsosh ki baat yeh hai ki use mere dada jee ne nahin banaya...isiliye main tumhe voh nahin de sakti...!!! πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
lekin itna kah sakti hun ki yeh ud ek dam se zhakaas tha...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘!!! kaash yaar...apna Raj bhi LRL me Reetu k sath na ja kar Naina k sath gaya hota...!!! chalo koi baat nahin yeh khwahish bhi tum ne puri kar di...!!!πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
Huda bichare ki band baja di naina ne...!!! vaise yeh huda apne aap ko itna smart kyoun samjhta hai yeh aaj tak samajh me nahin aaya mujhe...!!! aur use koi aur nahin milti kya...jo hamesh naina k piche pada rahta hai...!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑
naina ne raj ko promise kiya tha isiliye bahat calmly handel kar rahi thi huda ko...par huda ko jab tak thik se nahin padti tab tak manta kahan hai voh...!!! raj bhi dur khada naina ko dekh raha tha aise jaise voh janta ho ki naina kya karna chahti hai...!!! too gud...kafi achhi understanding hai dono k bich me...!!!πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
raj ne aage badh kar naina ko FB par jaane ko kaha...ek teer se teen nishaan mare us ne...!!! pahla...naina us k sath FB me jayegi... dushra...huda bichare ki lutiya dubi... aur tishra hum sab readers k muh se seetiyan baji...!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
ab raj naina ko raat k 7 baje dance sikhyega...bol kar gaya hai...!!! lekin raj bichara na payega sikhane aur na hi naina sikh payegi... kyoun ki is fic ki writer ja rahi hai vacation par...!!! aur jab lautegi tab ja kar karegi ud aur tab tak hum sirf kar sakte hain intezaaaaaaaaar...aur toh aur tab tak ghadi bhi na toh aage badhegi aur na hi 7 bajega...!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
vaise achhe se band bajayi hai raj ne huda ki...!!! raj ka naina ko dance k liye poochna...sab ko shocked kiya...par alekh aur shalini ko nahin...!!! shalini raj k dil ko samajhti hai aur alekh naina k dil ko...!!!πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
ab toh main cont soon bhi nahin likh sakti...!!! phir bhi jab wapas aayo toh kar dena ud...par koshish karna ki jaldi aa jayo...!!!πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by Lion_Priya - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!Mindblowing!!!!!

Naina was studying aur yeh Huda aagaya usse tang karne!!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Huda has a peculiar ability to get on everybody's nerves everytime he says something!!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Huda ne pucha Naina se Fresher's Ball ke liye and she refused!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina knew Huda needed a solid dressing down aur asani se usse baat toh samajh mein aati nahi hai!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina Huda ko avoid karne ki koshish kar rahi hai magar koi ish tarah se peeche padh jaaye toh koi kya kar sakta hai??😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Naina ne sahi kaha Huda se ke usse behtar ladke hai ish duniya mein!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina ke alawa Huda ko koi aur dikhta nahi hai kya jo hamesha uske peeche pada rehta hai??😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Naina ne Raj ko promise kiya tha isilye she was calm aur Huda ko samjhane ki koshish kar rahi thi!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Magar yeh Huda toh kisi ke bhi sabar ka imtihaan lele!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑He is really a bas***d and I hate him the most!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Raj stopped Shalini from stopping this as he wanted to know how far this would go and what Naina would do next!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Huda actually grabbed her and said either she is coming to the ball with him or she is not coming at all!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Naina ne sahi kaha ke Huda ka so called charm will work on other girls but not on her!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

He actually repeated his mistake by forcibly grabbing her even after Naina warned him!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Huda in his arrogance can be quite irritating and this time he pushed the limit of Naina's patience a bit too far!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Naina had no option but to knock some sense in him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Serves him right!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Hopefully ab woh dubara aisi galati nahi karega!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Raj is the perfect hero and he knew he must step in now!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

He stopped Huda from going and Raj offered to teach Naina ball dance in front of him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Shalini and Aalekh knew this was just the beginning and Raj was going to drop the bomshell now!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

I just loved the way Raj proposed to take Naina to the Ball!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Huda was so angry!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†The rest were shocked except Aalekh and Shalini!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh and Shalini seem to know everything and had expected it and probably even wanted it!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ne sahi kaha ke kis rule book mein likha hai ek student apne mentor ke saath ball pe nahi jaa sakti??😊 😊 😊 😊

I loved the mischievious attitude of Raj towards Naina!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊Naina was surprised by it as well!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina said yes and Raj asked her to report for her dance class with him!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊Haaiii!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

He literally pulled up Huda's character sketch in for Huda in his office!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Raj ne sahi kaha ke Naina pe Huda ke charm ka koi asar nahi huya!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Na aaj huya, na aaj se pehle huya tha aur nahi aage kabhi bhi hoga!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊She is a challenge for him!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

His cold bashing to Huda was brilliant, superb and mindblowing!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Raj is right ke Huda shakal se toh bilkul bhi sorry nahi lag raha hai!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’I am sure he would react soon!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Shalini is saying ke Captain Rajveer ko gussa aata hai toh kisi mein unka saamna karne ki himmat nahi hoti!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj thought siwaye Naina ke and Naina knows how to handleh is temper and cools him down!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

She can handle him so well just like a perfect wife!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Shalini is definately upto something to bring Brigadier Sareen to the ball!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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