MAYUR FF - KIDNAP.. ~~updated part 6 page 34.35~~ - Page 26

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Posted: 16 years ago
nice part yaar... waiting for next update...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Superb
Par is mein bhi Present scene nahi tha
Plz som present scene
Plzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Priya! Great update dear! Itz too gud! Luvd it! Nupz is a rockstar! Nd Mayu possesive abt Nupz! Great yar! Thanx for the pm!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey priya..really cool update//!!!!! 😃
me happy.. 😃
i like their friendship soooo much 😃
ab tho timely update kiya kar😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow.... I loved it .. i loved it....
It was good... Pls don stretch Sammy n Gunjan lov like our cretives.. Make it short n sweet pls...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~

wonderful part di
mayank is jealous!!
n im confused lol😆
so this is all a flashback ryt?
n if mayur were good friends then why did he kidnap nupur?
di plz continue soon! i think its gonna make better sense to me once the story moves on ahead

ya its flashback... wen it comes to present i will b posting the present in red color !!!!

Originally posted by: fariaa70

Hi priya.
Nice update.
the frship bonding was really awesome.
Nupur is a lucky girl.
Good job yaar.
keep it up

nupzi is a super cool lucky gal. thanks for ur comments...

Originally posted by: Bollywood_chic

Heyyyy!

Interesting part! showed colg life really
:D
gr8 work
x

thank u so much dear... ur comments means a lot for me as am a beginner in this field !!!

Originally posted by: I-love-dmg

priya di!!!!
dat was awesome!!! thanxu sooo much for listening 2 me and updating despite not wanting2!!!! i loved the update!!!! looking fwd2 next one...
love loadsss
xxxxxxxxxxx

how cud it b i dnt listen to u... thank u so much for liking... coming up.. more..

Originally posted by: adi_gupta

wow priya thx you update well after watching the track of mayur in mjht ,i'm sad but yaar your update is awesome ,just love it. first the car park ................. and she is the brain wow ,atleast kahin to koi admit ker raha hai ke nups me brain hai ,becoz show mein to use dekaan ban diya hai............back to update ......... all chracter description is awesome ..................i love diya very much and rv huuuuu............ and boya talk apne college mein koi ladki nupur jassi nahin hai ,or maynk ka dialoge love it.
and nups talk with gunjan .........
poor maynk ko kuch kuch hone laga hai ......
im imaging his face expression .....just love it ...........
priya yaar your ff is aweosme i just love it .......
love the way your camera move to every person ......
next time soon update otherwise i have to bug you by sending pm ..............
thx for pm and this update

adi.. love u dear... ur comments make me feel comfortable.. areey nupz is super brainy gal.. i too dnt like spoiling her like in te show !!! thanks ... i wish i was te camera person... !!! thank u so much for ur valuable comments..

Originally posted by: zoya_me

you updated finally

great update
plzzz this time continue soon

yeah.. finally updated with great time gaps.. !!!!! sorry for tat...
thank u dear...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nikki028

finallly u updated dear............thnxxxxxxxx a looooooot.........kya kamal ki update thi.........hehe...possessive mayu?????uff...........lovd tht shade of mayu alwz..........nywz as usual rockin updae thi........i really lovd d way u focusd each n evry1 of d gang enterin college.....plzzzzzzzzz continue sooooooooooon dear

thank u so so much huni... ur words are jus like baraf ka gola !!!! muaah...

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

A cute and a nice update yaar.
Noopur is just like Kareena in K3G but better than her. Boys r too protective towards Noops n i really liked it so much. Noopur noticed the right thing that Sammy likes Gunjan n now she would try her best to make Gunjan n Sammy close with the help of RV n Mayu i think. RV has no problem with their relationship.
Mayu is feeling something towards Noopur but he himself doesn't know what's that n why is he feeling like this? He made Noopur confuse too who was unable to understand Mayu's weired behavior.
update soon.

wow.. this is a mini update of my update.. wonderful.. thank u mahak..

Originally posted by: cute_gurl

Hey!
thanks for the pm...
wonder what will happen next..haha...mayu is too cute! :)

thank u so much dear... mayu is totally a lovable type of a guy

Originally posted by: NabeehaFS

awesome update Priya
update next part soon

thank u so much dear...

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey really nice n long update thanks for pm plz update soon

thank u so much dear...

Originally posted by: preethis

nice part yaar... waiting for next update...

thank u so much...
thank u !!!

Originally posted by: AFSHA18

Superb

Par is mein bhi Present scene nahi tha
Plz som present scene
Plzzzzzzzzzzz

i understand i am stil in past.. but plzzz bear with me.. .2 to 3 update more in past.. then will b in present only ....

Originally posted by: sweetgalFats

Hey Priya! Great update dear! Itz too gud! Luvd it! Nupz is a rockstar! Nd Mayu possesive abt Nupz! Great yar! Thanx for the pm!

thank u so so so so so much huni....

Originally posted by: myownarea

hey priya..really cool update//!!!!! 😃
me happy.. 😃
i like their friendship soooo much 😃
ab tho timely update kiya kar😊

ab toh phir se updates late honge.. am going on vacations to india.. !!!!! but will try my best to somehw update it..

Originally posted by: Anthara

Wow.... I loved it .. i loved it....

It was good... Pls don stretch Sammy n Gunjan lov like our cretives.. Make it short n sweet pls...

i too hate the strtch in sajan story.. so for sure i am not stretching !!!! thank ya deaer..

Originally posted by: preksha07

awesome part cont. soon.....

thank u and sure....
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Posted: 15 years ago
i apologise to every1 for being late again.. but then i tout to giv u all a surprise... so please bear with me for this inconvenience...
Also regarding the update, we are still in the past and to come to present it will take 2 to 3 updates more.. so plzzz hang on with it too...
so here goes my update...........
sorry guys.. this time i hav not come with color codes due to lack of time.... please bear with me again.....
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Part 6:

Nupur, mayank, RV and samy disperse off to their classes as the bell rings.

Nupur continued to think abt the way mayank behaved with her today in the canteen. Ya I knw mayank was a bit possessive about his friends, he never wanted us to talk to any other gal or boy. He was more possessive abt me but.. he never allowed me to talk to any third person other than mayank himself, samy and RV. He also dint have problem me talking with gunjan. But any other person who wud come to talk with me had to face mayank or rv as a barrier. I was never allowed to talk to any1. But wat happened today was quite different. I was talking just talking with RV and Samy and still mayank had a problem !!! (confused n worried abt the latest change in mayank). Thinking this she never knew when the class got over and it was time for a long lunch break and everybody were to meet in Canteen.

And here Mayank was also totally confused of the way he behaved with nupur. Its been days tat I am feeling uneasy abt my feelings and dont understand what they are and why are happening without any logic or reason. (He was totally out of brains thinking the way he spoke to nupur today giving her orders not to talk to them without him around.) What wud she b thinking abt me now. Gosh did I really hurt her feelings … I will apologise to her in the break itself. I think she must be worried abt me behaving this way. Why did I ever feel to over-react this way. She was just as usual talking with RV & Samy then why did I feel so left out and empty? (these were the thoughts in his mind. He was so engrossed in his thoughts that he dint even realize that the class was over long back and there were no one in his class. Everybody had left for lunch.)

Mayank was just abt to leave the class wen entered a sweet short gal with high heels show and al matching accesories and with just a book in hand.

Gal : Are u Mayank, Mayank Sharma ?

Mayu : Ya I am.!! And U?

Gal : I am Dia Sharma. Your cousin from Pune. Actually I just shifted to your house this morning, and got to knw tat u are in college. So thought to join u in here directly at college.

Mayu : waw, tatz great. But how did u indentify me. !!! ( all surprised n confused as well).

Dia : Dint I tell u I had been to ur house to dump in my luggage !!!?? Aunty showed me ur room and I saw ur full size pic and so tat way got to knw u too. (in a mischeivious tone)

Mayu : tatz sweet of u. so y don't u join us for lunch. I shall introduce u to all my friends out here.

Dia n Mayank walk to the canteen and see RV, Nupur, Samy and Gunjan already seated and waiting for Mayank to join in their lunch. Al get shocked to see Mayank walk in with a gal and everbody's mouth stay open seeing the gal.

Mayank : hey guyz. This is Dia. And Dia this is Nupur, RV aka RanVijay, Samy aka Samrat & Gunjan. Gunjan and RV are twins.

Dia : nice meeting u guyz. (she shakehands with all of them and feels fascinated by RV and his gestures. U cud say love at first sight sorts !!!)

Samy : hey beauty. Nice meeting u. Never knew mayz had such a cute friend !!! (talking flirtatious)

Seeing samy's flirtatious movement, gunjan and RV give a slight punch with their shoulders on either side. Then Samy introduces gunjan to Dia as he one and only love of life. And all over there are too happy and gunjan blushing there like hell.

RV : hey mayz u never said u had a friend in this college other than us ??? (asking questioningly with raised eyebrows)

Dia : (interrupts mayu from talking as replies) Hey dude, even he dint knw tat I was here around him !!! Ok guyz I think I need to introduce who I am. I am Dia Sharma, Mayank sharma's cousin from Pune. Shifted here for ma studies and will b joining u all in te same college and will b doing my Indian History.

RV : (immediately adds in) same as wat I do !!!!

The entire gang has a laugh at it. But for the entire time Nupur sat quiet and was just listening to wat all were talking at and laughing at their jokes. Mayank noticed it and felt so bad and thought tat al this is happening becoz he had been so irritated with her in the previous break. So to patch up mayank calls off Nupur separately thru gestures.

Nupur : kya hua mayank ??? tum itne pareshaan kyoon ho?

MAyank : woh… mei… actually… (struggling with words and then getting his entire courage said in a single go) woh actually mujhe sorry kehna tha … I really hurt u in the short break. Actually mijhe kya hua pata nahi tha par bahut ajeeb sa feel ho raha tha. !!!

Nupur : (all the more confused)par kya hua.. mujhe kuch samajh mei nahi aaya.. Tum kyoon pareshaan te? Kya ajeeba sa feeling ho raha hei??? Saaf saaf batao na …

MAyank : Pata nahi nupz. Kuch mahino se mujhe kuch ajeeb ajeeb se khayaal aate hei. Pata nahi kya hei woh. Pata lagthe hi bata doonga.

Nupur : Toh chalein. Sab ke saat beitkar khaana khalete hei. Nahi toh unlogon ko bhi bura lagega na.

And both of them join the others at the dinning table, with a confused heart in them. And with all such confusions in them. They complete the day and leave home for te evening. Wherein Dia joins them too in Mayank's car. Back way home, the red Lamborghini halts in front of a push cart and she gets off it. Seeing this all the other cars too come to a halt wondering why did she stop off here.. !!!

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There is a push cart wherein a man is selling pani puris to 2 gals. They are good friends and study in excel college.

Gal 1 : Bhaiya aaj pani puri bahut tasty hei.. ek aur plate dena

Gal 2 : aree mishu. Yeh kya. 2nd plate !!!! hmmm kyaa baat hei.

Mishu : areey fatu, aaj toh mei teek se lunch bhi nahi kiya. Toh soocha kyoona pani puri chaao.tum bhi lona ek aur plate.

Fatu : aree mera toh favorite hei pani puri. Toh ek plate se mera mann nahi behega. Mei toh ek aur uske baad bhi ek aur khaaongi. Par yeh kya aaj who kyoon nahi aayi.

Mishu : kaun??? Priti???

Fatu : haan haan.. Priti hi. Who bhi apni pani puri sister hei na !!!!

Mishu : aree Priti ko exams hei. Isliye woh dhiki nai.. nahi toh pura ka pura dhukaan khaali kardeity na…

(both mishu & fatu starts laughing and there enter nupur)

Nupur : bhaiya. Ek plate teeeki pani puri dena.

Bhaiya : (giving her te plate) yeh lo. Aur yahaan aana.

Seeing her at the pani puri stall, mishu and fatu moves a little. Then wen they see mayank coming behind unke muh khula ka khula reh gaya. Nupur while having her pani puri listens to mishu's and fatuz talk over the looks n structure of Mayu.

Nupur : (trying hard to control her laughter) aree tum dono uski taraf itni derr se ghor kyoon rahi ho??

Mishu & Fatuz : (ek sur mei) kyaa !!!!!!

Nupur : Woh Mayank hei aur Excel mei MM kartha hei.

Fatuz : haaiii .. par aap ko kaise pata ???

Nupur : woh mera best friend hei.. is liye..

Fatz : hamei bhi introduce karwaona ??!!!

Nupur : (getting a little un-easy with their question of getting them introduced) par woh toh khadoos, akdu aur sadu hei.. Ghussa toh naak par nachtha hei.

Mishu : aila.. !!! dikhta hei shaant susheel aur harkathe exact opposite !!!!

Nupur : haan … is liye college ke koi larki uske saat baat nahi karti.

Fatz : Ooooh.. yeh rahi baat. Teek hei toh.. Usse doooor door se hi ghurenge ham… kyon mishu.

Mishu : haan .. apna sehat ka khayaal bhi rakhna hei na.. (giggling together)

Fatz : toh hum chalet hei.. deer hogayi hei. BTW aapka naam toh nahi bataya ??

Nupur : Nupur. Nupur Bhushan. Nice meeting u both …

Mishu : (pays for the pani puri fatz n mishu had and leaves bidding adeu) bye nupur. Nice meeting u.

Nupur also has her pani puri quickly and turns back for te shock of her life to see mayu was in his dream land at the middle of the road and he was abt to get hurt by a car rashing thru the street.

Nupur : (her heart rates increases in tension of abt wat to do next and then she calls out ) Mayank (at top of her voice)

Mayank : (hearing this comes out of his trance dreaming abt nupur and sees tat he was abt to get hit by a car and jumps to a side quickly. Luckily he just gets some little bruises and thanks Nupur for saving him) Thank u so much Nupur. Mei toh…
Nupur : (cuts him off angrily) Tum kis duniya mei the mayank Sharma. Agar kuch ho jata toh. Mujhe pata hi tah tumpe bursi nazar ka asar padraha hei. Mei abhi aunty ko bata deti hoon ki tumhara nazar uthaarein.

Mayank : aree nupur. Iski koi zaroorat nahi hei. Aaj toh waise hi nazar hamari utaaregy maa.. college ka first day na. toh agar tumhara khake hua toh hum niklein?!!

Nupur completes her eating and pays for it. They quickly run into the car and they get to their house. And this way their daily routine. But then 2 months later, the college had to organize a fashion show and culturals….

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ok guyz here am ending my part 6....
so as usual plzzz do put in ur positive as well as negative criticism and feel free to use the LIKE button if u felt it good. All ur comments add in to the strength to write in me...
Priya ...
****hey hold on... dnt go away... plzzz do read my next post tooo.... *****************
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Posted: 15 years ago
Now u ppl must b thinking wat am gonna do in ma next post... plzzzz chill on...
here is the next update for u all... jus as i had delayed i tout of giving a double dhamaka update and again i will not b able to update for another 3 weeks as i will b out of country from 28th sept... ...
once i am back again i shall giv u all a double dhamaka ......
so here we go part 7
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Part 7
Two months have passed in this daily college going, attending lectures their short and long breaks and evening pani puri halts...
Just as any other day, today was also the same, though the "Dragon Gang". Little did they know wat was in store for them this day. As they reached college and started attending classes, Nupur was called in by the Principal, Mr. Saxena, to his cabin for an important discussion.
Nupur was in wonders to as y did the Princi call her on !!!!
In front of the Principals cabin, Nupur knocks on the door and
Nupur : Sir, May i come in ???
Princi : Yessssss.. Come in.
Nupur : Sir, Aapne mujhe bhulaya tha.. kya kaam tha sir ???
Princi : Nupur, 2 hafte baad excel college mei fashion show ka program humne socha hei. Uss ke liye tumhe kuch kapre designs karni hei aur desige & kapre ke color ko match karthe hue models bhi choose karna. Aur haan. yeh mat bhoolna ki tumhaare paas sirf do hafte hei.
Nupur : par sir woh... (even before she could tell anythin more )
Princi : (interrupts her and continues) tumhe jo materials chahiye unke list hume dena. Aur yeh program inter-collegiate meet hei aur tumhe apne college ka naam upar hi rakhna hei. toh abhi se kaam per lag jao.. Pehle models choose karna saat mei hi mujhe cheezon ki list bhi dena. do din mei tujhe sab kuch mil jaayega,..
Nupur : Sir par 2 hafte mei kitne models chahiye. gals ya boys????
Princi : kamse kam tumhe 2 ladke aur 2 ladki arrange karni hei.. aur Tum bhi apna hi ek outfit pehengo gi. aur haan kal subah tak mujhe list chahiye... ab tum jaa sakthi ho Miss. Nupur.
Nupur : sir par ........
Princi : (even b4 she cud continue ) par war keliye ab time nahi hei.. jaldi se kaam par lagjaao...
Nupur : teek hei sir. ( leaves te cabin a little disappointed and worried of to how was she gonna get the things done within 2 weeks. she had to work over the designs first, then select models to fit them, then choose the color based on te models selected.!! )
Nupur : (while on way back to class and talking to herself) mei yeh sab kaise ek din me kar sakthi hoon. pehle designs aur models ke baad hi material aayenge. phase one hi ready nahi hei toh kal phase 3 ka list kaise dongi..??? yeh Saxena abhi ek namoona hei. yaar usse meri problem ki khadar hi nahi. !! areee mayank aur RV se baat karna hi padega ... woh hi dono mujhe help karpaayenge. par ab kaisse bhulaaon unhe !!! class jo tehri unki.. chal mei bhi abhi class chali jaaongi aur break aate hi un dono pakdoongi.. par yeh ladkiyaan kahan se milegy abhi.. !!! Gunjan toh nahi participate kargy. woh sirf aur sirf singing mei co-operate karegy.. toh ab kaun hei jisse mei pooch saakungy !!?? (she got so pulled in thoughts tat she dint realize wen she entered the class and sat in her place.. by the time she came out of her thoughts she was in a class vacant.) aree yeh sab kahan gaye aur mei class mei akheli kya kar rahi hoon.. (quickly turns her wrist around to see wat te time was) ophs yeh toh break time hogayi.. chalo nupur jaldi.. canteen chalte hei...
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At Canteen:
The dragon gang other than nupur were present there...
Mayank : (sitting totally restless) areey yeh nupur abhi tak kyoon nahi aayi.. kya hua usse.. !!!
RV : areey tum chinta mat kar yaar.. woh abhi aayegy.
Dia : kya mei usse doondke aao ???? ya uske cell per try karna... !!
Mayank : haan cell ki zamaaana ahei... (feeling little free of tension, picks up te cell and tries nupur immediately)
Cell ringing ringing !!!! get disconnected...
Nupur : (nearing their table) areey baba mei aagayi.. itne mei phone lagaane ki kyaa zaroorat thi???
Mayank : (answering really pissed off) agar tumhe aane mei derri hogy toh batana toh chahiye tha... kaamaka hum idhar beite tensions lerahe the...
Nupur : (trying to calm him) aree mayank mei call nahi kar saki.. actually ek problem hei aur mei tum dono se (forgetting tat dia too was present there) kuch baat karna chahthi hoon..
Dia : (getting annoyed) helo!!! mei bhi hoon yahaan.. bhul gaye kya ???
Nupur : (realizing wat she did) am so sorry Dia.. mera dhyaan nahi raha..
Mayank : (sensing nupur was really worried spoke out) aree nupur ek minute mere saat aana..
Nupur : kya hei aur kidhar.. ??? (not understanding why shez been called apart )
Mayank : tu aarahi hei ki nahi !!!! ( in a very angry tone)
Nupur : (trying to cool him up) haan aarahi hoon Mr. Angry Young Man.. !!!
Mayank and Nupur move to a lone table apart and mayank asks her watz bothering her so much.. Nupur shares everythin wat happened in te princi's cabin to hw she landed up in her class all alone and everythin. Meanwhile Ranvijay and Dia were having really friendly talks, they chatted abt themselves and also little abt their topics.. Actually Rv & Dia were project partners too. tat was just assigned in the morning lectures. Dia was really feeling good to have RV as her partner. But as and when they spoke, RV cornered his eye to see wat was going around nupur. He was getting worried abt nupur yet kept a dude behaviour wit Dia...
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Am ending my part 7 here.. i knw its short but then lack of time guyzzz.. as busy with packing and shopping.. i must say i did a great shopping this time... so i hope u all understand te amount of time i must hav spent for shopping !!!
and plzz feel free to comment (positive & negative / North ya south / east ya west) all comments are looked forward with great concern...
Also plzz feel free to use the LIKE button if i had done my part well to impress u all .. !!!! i knw am not tat good yet !!!
ahaaaa.. here i go for another surprise for u all... plzzzzzzz watch on my next post tooo.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
ok gals...
so here comes my next surprise for u all..
Its my bday today and hence i tout to treat u all well... this is a small treat as there is a party organized by divya (myownarea), mishu & preethi for all of us on my behalf !!!!
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TREAT TIME !!!!
First goes to te cake then we shall have some theeki chat items and then some softies to chill in...
this pani puri is specially for my panu puri sister Fatu ( cool8d2), Preethi (my SBG) and Mishu (darling of MJHT) others too are welcomed for it. !!!
Here u go... enjoy my party.. !!!!
Love ya all..
Priya aka Dragon !!!!
Edited by little_dragon - 15 years ago

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