MAYUR FF - KIDNAP.. ~~updated part 6 page 34.35~~

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Priya

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey gals & guys.. This is for first time am writing a FF and that too on MAYUR. If u find me interesting only then I would continue with my story. So looking forward from you all..

KIDNAP

PART 1:

A completely dark room with just a small air-space gap at the top.Through this air-space a narrow ray of light flashes on the sweaty face of a gal whose mouth is shut using a tape and both hands and legs tied to the arm and leg of a strong wooden chair respectively. When the ray of light falls on the sweat, it looks like shiny stars. This gal has a well-shaped clear skin and was fair enuf for any guy to drool over. Her eyes, at present, are closed tight as she'z in the state of post-chloroform effect.

To the room next, were 3 well-built guys who were wearing face mask . One of them (G1) was in a HBV with blue jeans and kept a constant eye on the gal in next room every 2 minutes. He was a guy with broad chest, around 5'9" and a cute voice. Ophs and his eyes were dark shiny and cud attract any gal.

The other 2 guys were buzy making coffee and sandwishes for them. one guy among them (G2) was 6' tall with grey eyes and the other (G3) was 5'7" with green eyes.

P.S. The character revelation & names comes as and when the story moves ahead. Please feel free to use the LIKE button if u really enjoyed it. Criticism, comments and suggestions are always happily welcomed... Only if i get some positive response I shall proceed further.

Edited by little_dragon - 15 years ago

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Priya

@little_dragon

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Posted: 16 years ago

INDEX PAGE

Part 1 - Pg 1 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1226437/mayur-ff-kidnap-updated-part-6-page-34-35

Promo - Pg 5 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1226437&TPN=5

Part 2 - Pg 7 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1226437&TPN=7

Part 3 - Pg 16 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1226437&TPN=16

Part 4 - Pg 21 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1226437&TPN=21

Part 4b - Pg 25 https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1226437&TPN=25

Part 5 - Pg 31 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/24515422
Part 6 - Pg 34 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1226437/mayur-ff-kidnap-updated-part-6-page-34-35

Part 7 - Pg 35 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1226437/mayur-ff-kidnap-updated-part-6-page-34-35

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Edited by little_dragon - 15 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey priya, awesome start!

plz do continue soon!

pm me when u update!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweety4jaan
hey priya, awesome start!
plz do continue soon!

pm me when u update!

heyya zoah.. thanks a lot... this is my first ever FF.. and am happy even b4 i cud make my thread official u had visited and given ur comments.. am happy for it..