MAYUR FF - KIDNAP.. ~~updated part 6 page 34.35~~ - Page 24

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Posted: 16 years ago
waiting for the next update
please pm me when you update
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Posted: 16 years ago
hiya priya di!!!

jus found out ur actually older den me!!! so from now on its gona be priya di... i jus turned 18 in aug.....so nyways di....

i kno wot u mean yaar..... mayur trck is propa winding me up!!!!! plz creatives give dem a decent storyline and screenspace!!! god!!!! apparently its tooo muvh 2 ask for!!! god!

nyways di.... its ff like urz dat give us hope... wen we get left disappointed by the creatives we come 2 u guys... who are awesome ff writers for hope dat u will give us something better yaar... which is always the case!!!

now i gtg but looking fwd 2 the update... di my reply may be late as im sightly less active due 2 me starting uni... but u will always get a replyy!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: I-love-dmg

hiya priya di!!!

jus found out ur actually older den me!!! so from now on its gona be priya di... i jus turned 18 in aug.....so nyways di....

i kno wot u mean yaar..... mayur trck is propa winding me up!!!!! plz creatives give dem a decent storyline and screenspace!!! god!!!! apparently its tooo muvh 2 ask for!!! god!

nyways di.... its ff like urz dat give us hope... wen we get left disappointed by the creatives we come 2 u guys... who are awesome ff writers for hope dat u will give us something better yaar... which is always the case!!!

now i gtg but looking fwd 2 the update... di my reply may be late as im sightly less active due 2 me starting uni... but u will always get a replyy!!!!!
love loadssss
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hey zoe.. its so nice u like and plzzzzzzzzz mujhe di kehne ki zaroorat nahi...
update coming up..
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: nikki028

@priya......wil w8 for ur update........u knw wht i guess........mjht forum.mein ab koi mayurian bacha hi nahi hai......agar hai toh either sajanian,ex-mn fans n ARTIans........its terrribly a sad thing to say jo mayur paradise kabhi hum sab ka adda hua karta tha....aaj usiko sab bhool gaye......i really dnt knw hw 95% ppl hv turned up against mayur????????????????😭.......n onli bcoz of these things....saare supreb mayur ffs like urs r gettin delayed......nywz i really wanna say this to ny1...so when i read ur note i cudn stop myself frm sayin this.......

oh sweetie... u hav full rites to vent out ur opinionss... i hav no problem with paradise dear.. but if there is nothing happening in mayur at show,then wat we supposed to b doing in paradise and how will we get inspiration to write.. 😆😆
neways coming up my update...
Edited by little_dragon - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
ok gals.. here goes my next part.. i apologise over getting the updates late. Plz forgive me. And also i have come up with a longer update so tat u ppl dnt wack me up. 😆😆😆
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Part 5:

All the 4 enter the college in full racing speed, where the 3 guys turn towards to the parking but Nupur turns towards the portico of the college. It had been a habit from first year itself that she park her car in the portico and she used to have different guys fighting around to whom wud park the car for the day . This year was also not a different one as usual guys were waiting for her to reach the college so tat they get a chance to park her car. Guys in the college used to make ledger of who should park on which days and tat was the demand for Nupur in the college'.

Here she comes out flipping off her keys to the guy standing there as it was his turn to park. Even before Nupur could get into the corridor of the college she got escorted by her 3 buddies Mayank, Samrat & Ranvijay. These guys are too caring towards Nupur. These 4 had been friends from their nursery days and always felt Nupur too spl for them. And being a gal in their gang she was being considered as the brain of the gang.

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Ok.... cut.. here I highlight each and every1 individually. As a director's cut I freeze the entire scene.
Everywhere darkness and my focus light is on Nupur the sweetest & smartest Diva of the college. Guys in the entire college are fida over her friendly n caring behavior and gals are crazy abt the dress design n designing skills of hers. And of course she is a student of Fashion Technology who intends to continue with her Dad's business.. A true minded business woman, she is, that she designs for her dress as well as for Gunjan for occasions.

Next the focus lights on Mayank'. He is the most intelligent guy in the gang. He is witful, talkative, live-headed, focused but also possessive about his friends. He cant see them talking within themselves too. He is a student of Mass Media. He aspires to be a Journalist of crime.

Next on Focus lights is None other than the flirtatious, cool-headed, very friendly and very helpful towards friends Samrat. He is the basket ball champ of the college and spends most of his time in sports than in classes.. Yet stands to top in education.. (genes are strong u see). He does his management studies, his parents want him to take over their family business but he aspires to be into Basket Team of the country. Yet never denied his parent's interests too.. Being flirtatious doesn't mean he will not fall in love.. !!!

Here comes the last close friend of Nupur. He is a very tough guy, smart, witty but cud turn devilish wen his friends were in trouble. He had a gym built body. He was hawt good looking yet gals dared to get to him. His harsh replies cud hurt any1 but he was as delicate as a flower wen Nupur was around. Any orders of herz made him too prideful. And yeah he did Indian History, as he too wanted to be as respected as his Father.

*******************Back to scene**********************

All the 4 walk in a straight line with mayank and ranvijay at the end and nupz to the side of RV. The first thing all did was to escort Nupur to her class and then all would take their way to their respective classes. They would meet up in the canteen at every break they get.

Canteen Scene:

It's a break time and all the 4 of them are in the canteen.. they usually had one table reserved for them. They cant just see any1 else sitting in their seats. And hence Cheenu (canteen wala or cheenu bhaiya as nupur addresses him)sees to that they table had a board stating RESERVED. It's a corner table from where the entire college corridor was in sight. These 4 had a very good habit of making fun of those who tried acting smart playing smart in the corridors.

Even in canteen, Mayank & RV always saw to that they take a seat adjacent to Nupur but yet only one used to be lucky daily. Nupur saw to that Gunjan (RV's twin sister who does her studies on Psycology and whom they meet only during breaks) could share a seat with her so that they could have some girlie talks while the guys were busy with bird watching.

Nupur : hey Gunjan, kya baat hei .. tum subah se dikhi nahi. Kya hua??

Gunjan : koi baat nahi Nupur. Mei toh subah jaldi aayithi. Library mei kuch kaam tha.

Nupur : aisa kya kaam, jo subah subah tum aayi !!!

Gunjan : Kuch nahi yaar.. yeh Deodhar sir na, sham ko kehte hei ki 2 din mei project submit karni hei. Toh kya karoon. Subah subah aagayi. Abhi tak complete nahi kiya. Ek lecture bhi bunk kiya fir bhi bahut kuch hei likhne mei.

Nupur : tum kyoon online notes download karke edit karke submit karlena.. apni khud ki hand writing ki kya zaroorat hei.?

Gunjan : who pata hei. Par sit ko hand written hi chahiye. Nahi toh mei kab ka who karlethi.

Nupur : aisa hei toh kyoon na tum books ghar le jaathi???

Gunjan: arrey yeh toh bhi nahi ho saktha. Sirf 2 books hi hei. Toh mei issue nahi karwa sakthi. Sabko chahiye na !!

Nupur : gosh tumhare sir toh sach mei paagal hei.

Both the gals laugh over it and drink the cold coffee they had ordered. Meanwhile at the same time the guys too were having interesting talks.

RV : apne college mei koi achchi larki nupur jaisi dikhthi hi nahi na>>???

Mayank : haan yaar. Nupur jaisa namoona ek single piece hi ho sakta hei.

Samrat : aur jobhi nupur se shaadi karega uska life toh bangaya samjho !!! (all three of them stare at each other and then look at nupur and gunjan laughing over something)

Samrat always had a soft corner for gunjan and used to admire her. And also he cudnt keep up any secret tells out everythin to nupur. He feels she is the best to share off feelings. After coffee gunjan announces tat she has to leave for library to complete the remaining. She gives a wave to all and make a move.. Samrat keeps staring at her till she gets disappeared. Gunjan, too before taking the final curve point turns back to look at samrat. This used to be a daily affair thing and nupur daily notices this. But today being a different day, she tout to talk abt to RV. She calls RV separately to a corner of the canteen.

RV : kya hua nupur.. tum itni pareshaan kyoon ho

Nupur : pareshaan nahi. Par tujhse ek baat poochni thi..?

RV : (a bit confused n as if guilt pricked him) kya hei !!

Nupur : tum samrat kei bare kya sochthe ho.?

RV : (feeling bit relieved from worries) samrat toh apni bahut acha dost hei. Kya baat hei.. gol gol kyoon baat kar rahi ho!!!

Nupur : teek hei coming to point. Agar mei kahoon ki samrat ko gunjan pasand hei aur gunjan ko bhi samrat pasand hei, tera reactions kya hoga??

RV : (first feels angered, then thinks over it and in a relaxed tone) koi problem nahi hei mujhe. Until both of them like each other I have no problem with them being a pair.

Nupur becomes too haapy : sach mei !!! toh yeh baat samy ko bhi batana parega. (all excited)

RV : samy ko idhar bhulake batathe hei. Agar Mayank kei kaanoonn mei yeh baat padthi toh who hangama machaayega..

Nupur : (getting the hint, calls for samrat) **meanwhile mayank is really pissed off seeing nupur talking to RV separately keeping her hands over his shoulder. And now tat they hav called samrat also aside irritates him more**

Mayank : (comes over to them, feeling insecured n angered) hei nupur, mujhe yeh baat bilkul achchi nahi lagi.!! ** its been few days tat mayu has some funny feelings going thru him wenever nupur is around him. feels butterflies in his tummy wen she talks to him and really get annoyed wen shez spends more time with others than with him and he has not even knwn y is all this happening !! **

Nupur : (with RV & Samy are confused) kya hua mayank!

Mayank : (feeling something new in him, some possessiveness, somethin which he had been feeling for quite a long but never could realize wat it was) woh'. Mei' yeh.. woh ki tum yeh ek doubt hei mujhe. Solve karwaogy???

Nupur : kya doubt mayank. Chal table per jaathe hei. (leaving RV & Samy to talk abt gunjan mayank n nupur left to the table)

Nupur : mayank kya doubt hei. Bolo na. jitna mujhe mere brains mei aata hei utna mei explain kar sakthi hoon. Pata hei na mei tumhari course ki nahi hoon.

Mayank : (realizing wat he had said and thinking over now wat to tell her) woh '. Wat are u ppl talking over there alone.!! I dnt like to see u talking to RV alone. Dnt u knw tat . Upar se tum apne haat uske shoulder par bhi rakthe ho.!!

Nupur : (over the more confused) woh actually kya hei ki gunjan aur sam doono pyaar karthe hei aur abhi tak keh nayi sake.. toh socha ki mei hi baat shuru karoon RV toh uski bhai hei na. uske concerned ke bina kuch nahi chalega. Samjhe !!!

Mayank : (feeling really miserable at the moment for being over-acting) am sorry Nupur. Par job hi baat hei tum log mere saamne bhi keh sakthe ho na.??

Nupur : woh kya hei na, tum toh over reaction dete ho. Aur yeh baat toh pehle RV se consult karni thi fir samy se baat karna tha. Isliye akhele meii baat ki. (wondering y mayu was behaving too different)

Mayank : fir bhi. Chalega. Maaf kiya iss baar.. par khabhi bhi aisa mat karna'

Even before Nupur could reply back the bell rings and every1 disperse off to their classrooms leaving nupur wondering abt this funny behavior of mayank and being bit worried abt it too. And same was in the case of mayu'.

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Ok gals.. here i end my 5th part... i dnt knw whether I made sense and whether I have kept up to ur expectations. If u really enjoyed reading it please feel free to use the LIKE button. And all ur comments positive and negative are my inspirations. Silent readers please feel free to comment and use like button...
Priya...
Edited by little_dragon - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwesome yaar
gr8
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

awwwwwwwwwwwesome yaar

gr8
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thank u so much...
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Posted: 16 years ago
great update !
mayu is so cute with his weird feelings when nupur is around...awwwwwww
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Originally posted by: parisbynight

great update !
mayu is so cute with his weird feelings when nupur is around...awwwwwww

thanks dear,... and yeah mayu is te cutest....
Posted: 16 years ago
wonderful part di
mayank is jealous!!
n im confused lol😆
so this is all a flashback ryt?
n if mayur were good friends then why did he kidnap nupur?
di plz continue soon! i think its gonna make better sense to me once the story moves on ahead

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