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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Finally Naina told Raj about her brother!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊It was indeed sentimental!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

How can she forget her only brother??πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Raj ne apni galati maani and took care of Naina!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊How sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Adi ka bukhar utar gaya hai but he still refused to drink milk!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina woke up early aur Adi ko dhoondh pila diya!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ke dil mein aise feeling jaagna natural hai after all she is his wife!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Naina ko apne bacche ki parwah isilye uska mana karna bhi galat nahi hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj ko Naina ke saath romance karne ke liye intezaar karna padega!!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
I dont understand y wud Raj behave like this? He is not mad n a normal n sensible person like him wud not behave like this. Well, I'm not at all happy the way u made it look.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
This was a good ud.
Naina ne Raj ko apni jo story batai that was indeed sentimental. Raj ne fir apni galtti maani aur Naina ka khayal rakha, good for them.
Raj ki feelings obvious hain aur Naina ka mana karna bhi mai galat nahi kahoongi.
update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

I dont understand y wud Raj behave like this? He is not mad n a normal n sensible person like him wud not behave like this. Well, I'm not at all happy the way u made it look.

well said sumaiya.......completly agree wid u yaar...πŸ˜ƒ
mujhe lagta hai is fic ki main hero-heroine sab kuch sirf aur sirf naina hai...aur main villan raj...!!! πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
bina kisi point k jhgda karna...gussa hona...phir agar gussa ho jata hai...aur chahe voh galati naina ki hoti hai tab bhi...mafi raj ko hi mangni padti hai....!!!😑
raj baht hi immature hai... jo ki raj k charachter ko bilkul bhi suit nahin karta.😑
sorry to say u...par mujhe sach me yeh ud bilkul bhi achha nahin laga......😑
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
Hi Ria
Thanx for the pm...So finally Naina told Raj abt her brother..How can she forget her only brother..????
Even Raj was surprised..
Yaar ek baat batao ..Yeh Raj itna immature behave kyun karta hai???I mean this is simply not him..
I cant expect Raj doing such stupidity..He shud b knowing wats wrong for his child..n if this fiction is dedicated to real Raj then I think its n insult to his character..How can he b so unkind..
Har baar Naina galti karti hai n Raj sorry bol raha hota hai..Is baar to usne galti ki hai..Ab Naina kya karti hai..????
Husband wife aise thode hi hote hai jo ek dusre ki problems hi na samjhe..Agar aap kissi se saccha pyaar karte hain to physical relations ko itna importance dena meri samjh se bahar hai...
Pls iss fiction ko thoda mature outlook do..It seems really childish
Bye n
Do update soon
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
nice update
Raj ko naina ke saath romance karne ke liye intezaar karna padega.
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
that was good
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68

kuch dar bad n kitchen main jaate ha chai aur nasta banane

udhay neeche aate ha -good morning dadi dadi-are tum dono aaj itne sbhe sbhe kya baat ha udhay-woh dadi aaj rose day ha na isliye dadi-kya day udhay-dadi rose day matlab gulab din dadi-off aaj kal ke log bhi kya kya din celebrate karte rahete ha
n nasta aur chai laate ha sab ke lie
n-dadi aapke chai
udha-oh god bhabhi egg nahin plz aap yeh egg hata dijiye
n-kun tujhe toh egg pasand ha
udha-bhabhi aaj agar mainne egg khaya toh pata nahin is saal bhi mujhe koi rose dega ya nahin
n-kya
karthik-bhabhi aap dijiye udhay ko egg kunki is ke khanne ya na khanne se kuch nahin hoga kunki isse ke liye koi larki bane nahin hoge
udhay-dekha bhabhi aapne kis tara se bhaiya mujhse bat kar rahe ha
n-karthik yeh kon sa tarika ha aapne bhai se baat karne ke sorry bolo
karthik-sorry
n-aur ha udhay har larke ke liye koi na koi kahin na kahin zarur hota ha isliye tujhe fikar karne ke zarurat nahin ha tu bas mann laagake aapna parai kar dekhna tujhe bhi tere jeevan saathi zarur milege
udhay-sach bhabhi
n-ha bilkul chal ab jaldi se nasta kar le warna college jaane main dar ho jaayege
dadi-n beta yeh raj kaha ha
n-dadi woh raj saed study main honge main dekh ke aate hu
dadi-ha beta
n study main jaate ha
raj baith kar aapne files check kar raha ha
n-raj tumhara nasta
raj-hmm
n-raj kha lo na thanda ho jaayega
raj-tumhe ek baat samajh main aata n mainne kaha ha rakh do main kha lunge jab mann hoga
n-raj plz mujhe maaff kar do
raj-ha yeh tmhara sab se bara hatiyar ha pahele galati karo phir rote rote sorry bolo plz n give a break jab se main tmse pyaar kiya ha tumne toh mujhe take for grunted le liya ha har bar kisi na kisi tara pahele mujhe dukh dete ho phir mujhse maffe maagte hu mainne maana ke main thore dar ke liye baher gaaya tha kis ke liye i am sorry
par tum tum toh har waqt mujhe dukh dete he rahete kabhie mujhse jhooth bol ke toh kabhie mere pyaar ko chor ke tusshar se shaadi karte ho kun n kun wh can u answer me why r torturing me everytime ?
n-raj mainne toh sirf aapne bacche ke liye
raj n khichta aapne pass
raj-n tumne mujhe itna immature samjha ha ke main aapne he bacche ka bura chahunge main thore dar ke liya zarur bahek gaaya tha par is ka matlab tumne yeh kaise man liya ke main tumhe sirf phsically chahata hu n i love u from my bottom of my heart humare pyaar main physicall relation se zada pyaar maine rakhta ha
raj n ko chor ke room se bahar chale jaata ha
n bhi rote rote kitchen main chale jaate ha
kuch dar raj office ke liye nikal jaata ha
in the office
raj aapne cabin main baith kar aapne laptop par kam kar raha ha par us ka mann kam main bilkul nahin laag raha ha
raj bas aaj usne jo n se kaha usse ke bare main soch raha ha
raj-off main bhi kabhie aapne gsse par kabur nahin rakh sakta pata nahin kya kya kahe gaaya main aaj n se usse kitna bura laag raha hoga mujhe n se baat karne chaheye
raj n ke mobile par call karne he jaa raha hota ha ke rosa raj ke cabin main aate ha
rosa-sir
raj-ha bolo rosa kya baat ha
rosa-sir mr ahja ke deal final karne ke liye aap ko aur karan sir ko aaj shayam ko delhi bulaya ha
raj-aaj shayam ko
rosa-yes
raj-thik ha tm jaao
raj goes to karan's cabin
raj-karan sn mr ahuja ne hume deal final karne ke liye aaj shayam ko delhi bulaa ha
karan-par raj main delhi nahin jaa sakta
raj-kun kya hya
karan-raj tu toh jaanta ha nandini 6 months pregnant ha aur is haalat main nandini ko akele chor ke kaise jaa sakte hu
raj-ha thik ha tera nandini ke pass hona zada important ha tu fikar mat kar main sab kuch samal lunge
karan-sorry raj
raj-are karan its ok yaar
raj -rosa aaj shayam ke liye mera delhi jaane ka ek ticket book karo
rosa-ok sir
raj ghar wapis aata ha
dadi-are raj tu is waqt kya baat ha
raj-dadi woh mujhe ek meeting ke liye delhi jaana hoga
dadi-oh
raj aapne room main jaata ha
n adi ko khanna khila rahe the raj ko dekh ke n thore surprise hote ha par kuch pucchte nahin ha
raj jaake aapne cupboard se suitcase nikal ke us main aapne kapre rakhne laagta ha
n-raj tum kahin jaa rahe ho
raj-ha delhi
n-delhi par tumne toh mujhe kuch baataya nahin
raj-nahin aaj he tai hya
n-tumhare flight kab ha
raj-shayam ke 7 baje
n-tm jaake freash ho jaao main tumhare packing kar dete hu
raj -thik ha
raj freash up hone jaata ha aur n idher raj ke packing kar dete ha
raj airport ke liye nikal jaata ha
idher udha aur karthik rose day ke party main jaane ke liye ready ho rahe ha
udha-hey bhaagwan yeh shirt kitna dull laag raha ha
karthik-off udha chal bhi ab pure 2 hours ho gaaye par abhie tak taiyar nahin huya
udhay-bhaiya kitne muskil se aaj mujhe ek date mile ha aur aap
karthik-udhay dekh main ab tere liye ek min bhi nahin rukunga tu chalna ha toh chal warna i am leaving
udha-plz plz bhaiya ek min main abhie n bhabhi se raj bhaiya ke woh black jacket le aate hu us main i will look very cool
udhay n ke room main jaate ha
n chup chap baith kar ro rahe the
udha-bhabhi
n jaldi se aapne assu pooch leete ha
n-ha kya huya udhay
udhay-bhabhi aap mujhe bhaiya ke black jacket denge woh mujhe aaj rose day ke party main jaana ha islie
n-ha tu ruk main dete hu
n cupboard se raj ka black jacket nikalne jaate ha suddenly n dekhte ha ek packet
n-yeh packet
udhay-bhahi
n-ha yeh le
udha-thank u bhabhi
n-ha
karthik-udhayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
udhay-ha aata hu bhaiya
udhay neeche jaata ha
n woh packet aapne hath main leete ha
n-is me toh mera naam likha ha par mujhe kon gift bejega
n opens the packet
n gets surprised the gift
packet main ek red rose hota ha aur ek bohot khobsurat saree aur usse saath ek letter
n reads the letter
n the letter
raj-n main jaante hu ke jo mainne aaj subhe kaha us ke liye tum dukhi ho plz n i am sorry pata nahin ka ho gaya tha mujhe mujhe maaff kar dena socha tha aaj shayam ko tumhare saath aapne shaadi ke bad ka pahela rose day celebrate karunga par aasa nahin ho paaya isliye yeh chotta sa gift mere taraff se tmhare liye
love u
n is letter ko parke aakhon main aasu aa jaate ha
n-raj tum mujhse itna pyaar karte ho aur main pata nahin yeh soch rahe ke t mujhse gussa ho main bhi na i love u too raj
n kiss the rose
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!!!

Karthik and Udhay fight like kids!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Naina ko unhe sambhalna padhta hai!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj angrily asked Naina why is she doing this to him??

Har baar Naina usse dukh deti hai aur taken for granted leti hai!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Raj ke liye unka pyaar sabse zyada maine rakhta hai!!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Raj is now regretting saying all those things to Naina!!!!!

Raj aur Karan ko deal final karne ke liye Delhi jaana hai!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

But Karan could not go as Nandini is 6 months pregnant aur Karan usse ish haalat mein chhod kar nahi jaa sakta!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Toh Udhay ko date mil hi gayi but party mein jaane se pehle bhi Karthik and Udhay are fighting!!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’

Naina yahan chup chap baith kar roh rahi thi!!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj Naina ke liye gift rakhke gaya hai jismein ek saree aur ek red rose hota hai!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is really sweet and so romantic!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Raj ne Naina se ek letter mein apologise kiya tha!!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

But why is Raj only apologising??πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜• πŸ˜•Naina ki bhi galati thi!!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Har baar Raj ko hi kuch na kuch karna padhta hai aur usse sorry bolna padhta hai even when its not his fault!!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Letter padh ke Naina ke ke ankhon mein aasu aa jaate hai and she realizes how much Raj loves her!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Naina kissed the rose!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊How sweet!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
I am agree with Priya aur mujhe ye ud theek laga bus. Har baar Raj hi kuch na kuch karega Naina k liye. Naina ko to aadat hai na ulta seedha kar k bus Raj ko pareshaan karne ki. Khud kuch nahi karegi na dimaag se kaam legi. Mai Raj ki ek tarfa koshishon se bhi pareshaan hoon.

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