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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Hi Dear

Thanx for the pm..

Update was gud..Raj is really a caring father..He loves Adi as his own son..

Why is Naina having a secret talk to some1???She is abt to create another problem between her n Raj..

Pls give her some brains..

Do update soon

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#52

Update was nice

Naina are raj are both worried about adi's health. But with them around to care for him...how could anything happen.

Naina is hidding something from raj...i hope this does not creat problems between them again.

continue soon

Edited by dazzling_glory - 16 years ago

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#53

n raj ke office jaane ke bad adi ko laxmi ke pass chor kar bahar jaate ha

n the office

karan-good morning raj

raj-good morning

karan-ab adi ke tabiyat kaise ha

raj-filhaal thik ha

karan-sahi ha raj bacche ko agar kuch ho jaaye na toh ma baap ke toh maano jaan he nikal jaate ha

raj-ha karan bacche hote he aase

karan-hmm

rosa knock on the door

raj-yes

rosa-sir aapne jo file maage the

raj-ha rakh do

rosa aapne cabin main jaate ha

karan-yeh kaise file ha

raj-karan this file ahuja group of industres ke ha

karan-ahja industry

raj-ha karan mr maheta ne mujhse kaha ke ahuja group of industry ke malik mr aman ahuja humare saath deal karna chahate ha

karan- thik ha mr ahuja ke saath jaake milte ha

raj-hmm

raj aur karan mr ahuja ke office jaate ha

idher

shekhawat house main laxmi aur dadi dono adi ko chup karane koshish kar rahe ha

laxmi-dadi adi baba ka bukhar toh bar raha ha

dadi-hey bhaagwan kya karu main

laxmi-dadi raj sir ko phone karu

dadi-nahin laxmi

laxmi-toh kya karu dadi

dadi-mm tu ek kam kar tu jaake thanda pani lee aa

laxmi-thanda pani kun

dadi-adi ka sar pe pani se dho denge sayed thora bukhar kam ho jaaye

laxmi-thik ha dadi main abhie leeke aate hu

laxmi pani leeke aate ha

dadi-na na adi beta rote nahin

dadi-laxmi thora thora kar ke pani dal sar pe

laxmi-jee dadi

adi toh bas roye he jaa raha ha

idher

raj meeting khatam kar ke kareeb 7 baaje ghar wapis aata ha

som-sukar ha raj sir aap aa gaae

raj-kya hua som sab thik toh ha na

som-raj sir adi baba ko bohot bukhar ha

raj-kya

raj aapne room main jaata ha

raj-dadi kya hua adi ko

dadi-adi ko bukhar ha mainne thanda pani se patti ke isse abhie bukhar kam ho gaaya ha

raj-dadi n kaha ha

dadi-n toh tere jaane ke bad he bahar chali gaae

raj-kya par kaha

dadi-kuch baatake toh nahin gaaye beta

raj-hmm

dadi-aacha raj tu freash ho jaa main tere liye chai bejte hu

dadi-chal laxmi

laxmi aur dadi neeche jaate ha

raj call n

raj-off yeh n bhi na hamesha aapna ghone swtch off kar ke rakhte ha

raj call n n's house

raj-hello ma main raj bol raha hu

ma-ha bolo beta kaise ho tum

raj-ma main thik hu n ha waha

ma- beta pad phere ke bad toh n yahaan nahin aaye ha

raj-aacha thik ha ma main rakhte hu

raj-yeh n kaha gaaye hoge

raj jaake adi ke pass baithta ha

laxmi-raj sahab aapke chai

raj-hmm

laxmi chai table par rakh ke neeche jaate ha

laxmi-dadi sahab bohot dukhi laag rahe ha

dadi-kun na ho baap jo ha

laxmi-dadi memsahab

dadi-n kaha gaaye the tu

n-dadi woh main

dadi-tujhe pata ha adi ko kitna bukhar ha

n-kya

n room main jaate ha

n-adi beta kya hua beta dekho mama aa gaae ha

n adi ko aapne godh main leene jaate ha par raj n ka haaath rokh leete ha

n-raj kya hua

raj-n kaha gaaye the tum

n-raj woh main ma ke ghar gaaye the bohot dino se gaae nahin the na isliye socha ke

n ke sentence khatam hone ke pahele raj n ke gaal pe ek zor ka thappar marte ha

n is totally shocked

raj-aur kitna jhooth bologe tum n mainne tumhare ghar phone kliya tha tumhare ma ne kaha ke tum pad phere ke bad aapne ghar gaaye he nahin

n koi jabab nahin dete

raj-bolo n kaha gaaye the

raj zor se n ka haath pakkarta ha

n-raj aahhhhh haath choro mera

raj-pahele bolo kaha gaae the tum

n-tum jaanna chahate ho na main kaha the toh sunno main aaj mandir gaaye the kunki aaj mere bhaiya ka janam din ha

raj n ka haath chorta ha

raj-bhaiya

n -ha mere bhaiya jo aaj se kuch saal pahele hum chorke pata nahin kaha chale gaaye

raj-par tumne aaj tak mujhe kabhie aapne bhaiya ke baare kuch bhi nahin baataya

n-ha nahin baataya kunki main nahin chahate the ke tum bhi mujhe sab ke tara ek trarror ke bahen samjho

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Sumi_162710

@Sumi_162710

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#54

Hmm.....I donno Raj ko agar Naina bata deti to kya jata uska? Abhi to bataya na....agar pehle hi keh deti to khamakha thappad nahi padta.

Anyways, Pls continue soon.

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#55

Hi Ria

Update was gud..Yeh Naina bhi na usse jhoot bolne ki kya zaroorat thi???

Raj ne bhi ek dum se uko thappad mara..Yeh dono ek dusre se pyaar karte bhi hain ya nahin????

Husband wife ke beech aise to nahin hota hai...

They shud understand each other n yes love is not everything..They shud atleast trust each other...

Bye

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#56

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!!

Karan and Raj discuss about kids!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Yahan Dadi and Laxmi are trying hard taaki Adi ko chup kara sake aur uska bukhar kam ho jaye!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina Adi ko godh mein lene jaati hai toh Raj uska haath rok leta hai!!!!!!

Yeh Naina ko jhooth bolne ki kya zaroorat thi??😕 😕 😕 😕

Raj uski itni baar help kar chuka hai aur phir bhi woh jhooth pe jhooth bolti jaati hai!!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Raj ne bhi ek dum se Naina ko thappad mar diya!!!!!

Yeh kaisa pyaar hai in dono ka jo hamesha ek dusre par shaque karte rehte hai??😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj ko agar Naina bata deti toh uska kya jaata??😕 😕 😕 😕Abhi sab bataya naa Raj ko!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Agar pehle hi bata deti toh khamokha thappad nahi padhta!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Raj and Naina should understand and trust each other!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#57

I really hate Naina this time. Jab bhi vo kuch ulti seedhe harkat karti hai na to anaap shanaap logic de kar apne aap ko justify kar degi n Raj ko galat sabit kar degi. Baad me Raj se naraj ho jaayegi aur vo us ko manata rahega.

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#58

mujhe samajh me nahin aata hai ki yeh Naina baar Raj se itna jhuth kyoun bolti hai...!!! jab ki Raj ne itni baar us ki help kar chuka hai...phir bhi voh jhuth pe jhuth bolti hi jati hai...!!! yeh kaisa pyar hai in dono ka hamesha ek dushre par shaq...!!!

deep love dikhane ki koshish toh kar rahe hain...par pyar hai ya nahin...ab main confused hun.😕

Edited by Lion_Priya - 16 years ago

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#59

that was good

plz continue soon

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#60

raj-tratior tumhara bhaiya

n-ha raj mere alekh bhaiya jinhe main sab se zada pyaar karte the mere bhaiya papa ka sapna pura karne ke liye kma join kiye the taki woh ek soldier ban sake par aasa nahin huya na mera bhaiya ek soldier banne ar na he unhe koi medel ya samman mile unhe mil toh sirf tratoor hone ka khitab bhaiya ke trattor hone ka khabar humare liye jaise ek saaja ban gaaye logo ne humara khain aana jaana muskil kar diye the humne humare ghar chor diye the mera rishta tut gaaya papa se yeh sab seh nahin huya aur unhone bhaiya ke har yaad mita de aur humse bhi yeh vada liya ke hum kahie bhaiya ke baare main koi baat na kare par raj main aapne dil se bhaiya ko bhula nahin paaye isliye aaj bhaiya ke janam din par mandir gaaye the plz raj mujhe maaff kar do main jaante hu ke mujhe tumse eh baat bolne chaheye the aakhir tum mere pati ho

n starts crying

raj-hey n plz ro mat

raj wipes n tears

adi need se utth jaata ha

n-raj adi utth gaaya ha

raj-hmm

naur raj dono adi ke pass jaate ha

raj checks adi's fever

n-kitna ha

raj-dont worry adi is normal

n-thank god bukhar utthar gaaya

n -raj tum ko samalo main adi ke liye doodh garam kar ke laate hu bhooka hoga mera baccha

n neeche doodh laane jaate ha

dadi-n adi ka bukhar kaisa ha

n-dadi bukhar utthar gaaya ha isliye socha ke abhie adi ko thora doodth pila du

dadi-ha ha pila de

n doodh garam karke room main jaate ha

n-adi aao mama tumhare dekho doodh laaye ha chalo pi lo

adi refuse to drink milk

n-adi muh khol na beta dhoodh nahin piyega toh kaise chalega

adi rone laagta ha

raj-n chor do na agar adi ko nahin pina ha toh rahene do bad main pila dena

n-raj abhie raat ke 11 baaje ha agar abhie nahin piega toh kab piega ar waise bhi adi ne kuch bhi nahin khaya

raj-n baccha ha jab bhook laage ge tab piyega tum so jaao waise bhi tum khaffe thake huye laag rahe hu

n-thik ha

n freash up hoke so jaate ha

raj bhi so jaata ha

agle din

n adi ko dhoodh pila rahe ha

raj-mmm n tum itne jaldi utth gaaye

n-ha woh adi ne kal raat kuch nahin khaya isliye

raj-hmm

raj utth ke freash hoke aata ha

n-raj tum zara adi pass baitho main zara aate hu

raj-thik ha

n freash hone jaate ha raj adi ko side main thik se sula deta ha

n aate ha

n-adi so gaaya

raj-ha ab tum bhi thore dar so jaao bohot tired laag rahe ho

n-ha raj mujhe bhi bohot need aa rahe ha

n bhi jaake so jaate ha

raj ke dil main aaj n ko sote huye dekh ke usse chune ke ajeeb iccha mann main hote ha bcoz after their marriage they never had any physical relation

raj dheere se n ke balo ko uske chehere se hatata ha aur n ke lips par kiss karne laagta ha n need main hone ke baaja se koi response nahin karte ha raj ka haath dheere dheere n ke nighty ke ander jaane laagta ha ab n ke need tut jaate ha aur n raj ko aase dekh ke hairan ho jaate ha

n-raj yeh kya kar rahe ho tum

raj-n humare shaadi ke bad we never had any relation

n-raj main samajh sakte hu par tum jaante ho ke i am pregnant aur pregnanc main aasa karna thik nahin ha

raj gusse se bed se utth jaata ha

raj-ha ha main toh mere bacche ka dushman hu na sab fikar toh tmhe ha na mere chune se toh tum aa pavittra ho jaaoge

n -raj mainne aasa kab kaha bas kuch he dino ke toh bad ha ek bar baccha ho jaaye tab we can have relation

raj koi jabab na deke neeche chala jaata ha

n-raj tum kun nahin samajhna chahate ho main toh sirf humare anne baale bacche ke liye he assa kar rahe hu