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Posted: 15 years ago
So i am trying to caught up ur fic and now once again i joined it n on part 25.
Gud one
Noopur ko bus bolte hi jaana hai jab ki us ko place k baare me koi idea nahi hai ki kahan perform karna hai.
Mayank bhi kehnta hai bol lene do us ko. Aur ek baat to hai ki Noopur has sharp mind us ne kya badhiya idea diya hai na performance k liye.
Again that Sheena here, now what she wants?
I hope she would not make any harm to their band.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Reply for part 27:-
Oh god how possessive is Mayank? He can't see Noopur with anyone. He drank out of frustration n now he is singing song pointing towards Noopur. Noopur ne koshish bhi ki us ko samjhaane ki baat he is not ready like that.
Adhiraj n Suhaani k baare me us ko nahi pata hai that's y he is suspecting Noopur. All the temple scene were really lovely and the way Mayank ne saara kumkum Noopur k sar par gira diya was really funny. Noopur ne Mayank ko jhagda karne me bada maza aata hai lagta hai
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Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
view for part 26:-
sorry yaar i think i forgot to mention that.
nice part.
Noopur k suggestion se all sang my fav LRL song n i am sure that they will be able to make a place in top 3 bands.
Noopur met Adhiraj there and Mayank got jealous for that . He skipped in between.
And at home he is making excuses, denying to tell the reasons that y he skipped for there. Sammy knows and he wants to make Mayank feel n accept his feelings but it's not that easy
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh god Mayu n in nasha so funny n cute.
Specially loved that scene in part jab Mayank ne kaha aaj se mai aap ka gulaam. He must be looking so cute in that na. Noopur bhi nahi samhaal paa rahi thi us ko.
But ek baat ab sab ko pata chal gayi na ki Mayank uper se jaisa dikhta hai andar se bilkul bhi vaisa nahi hai. Bahut pyaar karta hai na vo sab se, jitne care kar raha tha sab ki us se hi clear ho gaya.
Noopur ko sulaane k peeche hi pad gaya tha aur jo baatein us ne nashe me kahin ki vo us ko har tarah se acchi lagti hai that wasreally sweet n nice.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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So finally whole band got the news that they have been selected in top 3 bands and r very happy.
Mayank's decision was right par whenever Noopur will get to know the truth that Mayank hide each n everything with her so wat's will be her response.
Mayank was missing his mom because his head was aching, Noopur bhi aa gayi vahan pe bacause of Mayank's condition she was missing her sleep.
he was behaving like a school kid. They slept with each other whole night, firstly Noopur was irritated but later se slept too. I think she can pass her scholarship exams and can get help.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Mayank ne nahi bataya Noour ko competition k baare me ab jab us ko pata chalega to obviously gussa aayega hi na us ko vaise bhi gussa us ki naak pe baitha hota hai humesha.
Tamanna ne bata diya us ko ki aaj band ka final hai aur ab saara gussa Mayank pe nikalna hai. jo kahani sunayi hai Mayank ne Noopur ko Benji n Diya ki us ka bhanda fod hho gaya.
Ab Mayank ko Noopur k gusse se kaun bachayega?
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sorry i forgot to reply for part 30
Noopur n Mayank r always fighting. Sammy indirectly saying a lot to his chasmish but she is really ignoring that. Up to an extent mujhe lagta hai she is understanding his feelings than y is she ignoring that?

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Posted: 14 years ago
reply for part 32
Oh god they got stuck in traffic bad luck but this time Noopur n her sharp ideas. Adhiraj is A.C.P. and she took his help in fulfilling the ambition of her friends.
And he assured her that he will bring her there and they r leaving by plane and his officers are keep on informing his about the show. And now it's their turn for performance.

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Posted: 14 years ago
for part 33:-

G8 entry by Ms. Noopur Bhusan.
No one even her band members never expected that she can have a blast like this. Song selection was superb. Mayank was even so much surprised but he could not react there.
people were going crazy over there. I am sure now that only they will win the Competition now. They selected Jay ho really good and ab Noopur is completely ignoring them and she doesn't want to talk with them.
Now girls r with her and it's getting really tough for Mayank.
Noopur has finally told each n everyone that Sammy n Gunjan loves each other. And he confessed his feelings too for her but they both were in so much anger that they didn't realize what r they going to do now.
Noopur left with Adhiraj n she doesn't want to go back and all r stunned to know about all four of them.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago
Vartika07 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 34:-

What should i say now? All r hurt and in pain except our one pair of Gunjan and Sammy. Song was really nice. Adhiraj now knows very well everything. So he went to meet Mayank.
perfectly suits the situation. Mayank is thinking about Noopur and same thing with Noopur she is weeping because of her love and so as Mayank.
But in morning he is getting ready to meet her and he will bring her to the stadium. Sammy n gunjan got a chance for romance n all thanks to Mayank for realization.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 14 years ago

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