MayurFF-Aya Mausam Dosti ka-Pt-44 updt completed - Page 62

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So Mayank went to Adhiraj's house to bring his Noopur back. But andar kyoun nahi gaya vo?
Noopur ne dekha ki vo aaya hai but fir bhi andar nahi aaya.
Yahan Sam ko accha chance mila hai n they were really cute.
Sahi kaha Gunjan ne ki kuch bhi ho sakta hai us k saath.
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Part - 39

(Dia aur benji hospital me uday ko dhund rhe hai.. tabhi wahaan pr wo log nupur ko dekhte hai.. to surprised ho jate hai...nupur bhi dia aur benji ko wahaan dekh kar suprised ho jati hai)

B : 😲 Nupur tum yahaan kya kar rhi ho?????
N : wo main aur mayank railway station gye the... jahaan pr terrorist attack me mayank ko goli lag gyi hai ( almost crying) 😭 😭
D & Benji : 😲 😲 what???????
D : Mayank ko goli kaise lag gyi..???? Ye sab hua kaise???
N : ye to mujhe bhi samjh nhi aa rha hai k ye sab hua kaise... aur kyun hua... pr tum log yahaan kya kar rhe ho....
(Dia start crying )
B : wo nupur tumhare hostal k pass wale resturant me bomb blast hua hai.. aur uss whqt uday wahi tha.... to hume pta chala k wahaan pr jitne bhi gayal log hai unhe yahaan laya gya hai tabhi hum uday ko dhundne yahaan aaye hai.....
B to D : dia pls don't cry.. Uday ko kuch nhi hua hoga... wo bahut strong hai...
(at that moment sajan enters in the hospital aur wo log nupur, dia benji ko dekh lete hai...Dia ko rote dekh gunjan use gale se lga leti hai.. )
G : Dia kya hua.. tum ro kyun rhi ho...????
(Dia gunjan se alag hote huye unhe sari baat batati hai..)
S : what?????? (tabhi samrat nupur ko dekhta hai)
S to N : Nupur mayank kahaan hai.. aur tum yahaan kya kar rhi ho....
(Nupur ek baar samrat ki taraf dekhti hai.. aur fir gunjan ki taraf.. gunjan ko dekhte hi wo rone lag jati hai.. to gunjan usse gale lga leti hai)
G to N : Kya hua... dekho agar tum uday k liye ro rhi ho to hum sab milkar usse dhund lenge.. pr ye to batao bhai kahaan hai...
(nupur ki aisi halat dekh kar benji unhe batata hai k mayank ko goli lagi hai aur uska operation chal rha hai)
G : Operation?????😭 Aisa kaise ho skta hai????? abhi to bhai ne life ko enjoy karna shuru kia tha.. uske sath aisa nhi ho skta....
(gunjan pass padi chair pr almost gir hi jati hai.. uski aisi halat dekh kar samrat pareshan ho jata hai)
S to G : chismish sambhalo apne aap ko... kuch nhi hoga mayank ko... aur naa hi kuch hoga uday ko...
S to N : Nupur waise tum log railway station karne kya gye the...tum to aaj sara din sath me bitane wale the naa....(questioning)
N : wo suhani ne bataya tha k aaj morena se Bauji??????😲 😲 😭
(Nupur start crying... uska reaction tha k wo bauji ko kaise bhul gyi.. wo gunjan ki sath baith jati hai)
S : morena se bauji kya nupur ab bolo bhi?????? tum pls batao to kya hua
N (crying) : wo suhani ne bataya k morena se bauji aane wale hai aur iss se achcha mauka nhi milega bauji ko mayank se milwane ka isliye hum railway station gye the... pr wahaan pr ye sab ho gya.. pta nhi bauji kaise hai kis haal me hai.. wo theek bhi hai ya nhi....😭 😭
S to N : pls don't cry?? hum unhe bhi dhund lenge...
D : pr sammy hum kis kis ko dhundenge????
S : hum sab ko dhund lenge.. sabse pehle tum log rona band karo.. rone se kuch nhi hone wala.... Hume apne emotions ko control me rakh kar sare kaam karne padenge....
B : bilkul... agar tum log aise hi roti rhi.. to hume sara whqt tum sambhalne me lgna padega... hume team aur plan me kaam karna padega...
S : right benji... hume plan banake chalna padega
(tabhi mayank ka operation khatam ho jata hai.. to doctor aake nupur ko batata hai)
N : doctor mayank kaisa hai....
Doc : darne ki koi khas baat nhi hai.. goli nikal li gyi hai... pr abhi mr. mayank behosh hai...
N : doctor kya ek baar main mayank ko dekh sakti hu...
Doc : g Bilkul... Waise aap sab sath me hai kya??? (baki sab frds ki taraf ishara karte huye)
B : g.. hum sab dost hai...
Doc : well... aap logo se ek request thi...
S : G bataye... hum aapke liye kya kar skte hai...
Doc : actual me aaj shehar me kafi blast huye hai... hospital k sare doctor, nurses, wardboys sab busy hai... well aap logo k band ka kafi naam bhi hai.. pr i hope aap bura nhi manenge.. agar main ye request karu k aap thoda hospital staff ka hath bathaye..... Hope u don't mind
( Sare doctor ki baat sun kar shocked ho jate hai)
S : pr doctor hum aapki iss me kya help kar skte hai.. aur kaise??????? Hum help to karna chahte hai pr hume me se kisi ko koi medical knowledge nhi hai....
Doc : Isme medical knowledge ki kya zarurat hai.. aap logo ko first aid to aati hai naa.. agar aap log sirf un logo ki marham patti kare jinhe sirf first aid ki zarurat hai.. iss se nurses, wardboys baki ka hospital staff un logo ko attend kar payega.. jinhe unki zyada zarurat hai...
S : Sure doctor.. pr abhi hume apne ek frd ko aur nupur k bauji ko bhi dhunda hai... wo bhi syad issi hospital me hai...
Doc : it's ok.. aap log ek kaam karo.. jab tak mayank sharma ko hosh nhi aata.. tab tak unke pass koi ek ruk skta hai... baki aap logo ko main kuch batches de deta hu... jis se aap pure hospital me aaram se ghum kar jinhe dhundna hai dhund skte hai....Pr iske liye meri ek shart hai
B : doctor aapki har shart manjur hai..
Doc : meri yahi shart hai k aap log jald se jald logo ko 1st aid dena shuru kar de...ye hamare liye bahut zaruri hai.. waise ek college k kuch students hamari help bhi kar rhe hai.. pr wo log kafi nhi padh rhe.. isliye main aap logo se keh rha hu...
S : Sure... hum jald se jald shuru karenge
(Doctor unhe wo batches de deta hai)
Doc : ab main chalta hu.. bahut logo ko meri zarurat hai..
S to all : chismish tum mayank k pass ruko....
G : Samrat agar nupur rahegi to zyada sahi rahega...
(benji aur dia haan me sar hilate hai)
S : chismish.. hume nupur k bauji ko bhi dhundna hai.. aur jinhe sirf nupur ki pehchanti hai.. hum me se koi nhi...
D : Oh yes....
S : benji aur dia.. tum log uss taraf se dhundna shuru karo uday ko... main aur nupur iss taraf se nupur k bauji aur uday dono ko dhundte hai...
B : ok sammy....
D : hope k dodo ko kuch naa hua ho...
(charo ko dhundte huye kafi derr ho jati hai.. pr naa hi uday ka pta chalta hai aur na hi nupur k bauji ka..idhar mayank ko hosh nhi aaya hota to gunjan bhi uske room k bahar uske hosh me aane ka intzaar kar rhi hai.. tabhi gunjan dekhti hai k koi 1 saal ka bachcha hospital ki lobby me buri tarah ro rha hai.. wo apni knees pr thodi derr chalta hai fir rone lagta hai.. Gunjan apni jagah se uth kar bache k pass aati hai to dekhti hai.. k bache ki dress pr kafi khun bhi lga hua hai...aur hospital me to har taraf khun hi khun hai... bachcha buri tarah roye jaa rha hai.. gunjan usse utha kar pehle chup karti hai.. fir usse pani pilani ki koshish karti hai.. bachcha kafi pyasa hota hai wo pani pee leta hai... gunjan ko realise hota hai k bachcha gernal ward ki taraf se uski taraf aa rha tha...)
G to herself : lgta hai iss shor sharabe me iske parents ko pta hi nhi chala hoga k unka bachcha kahi chala gya hai.. aur unhe jab pta chalega to unhe kitna bura lagega.. k shehar me waise hi itni buri baatein ho rhi hai.. aur pta nhi iska koi hai bhi ya nhi.. ek baar gernal ward me jaake puchti hu... ek to ye chup bhi nhi ho rha hai
(gunjan gernal ward me jaati hai.. gernal ward ki halat kafi kharab hai.. har taraf khun hi khun.... log ro rhe hai chila rhe hai...bahut se logo ko 1st aid ki zarurat hai.. kuch log 1st kar bhi rhe hai.... karwa bhi rhe hai...tabhi gunjan ko ek lady ki awaz sunayi deti hai...wo lady gunjan ko nhi dekh pati )
L :(crying) : hamari bitiya kahaan gyi??? kahaan chali gyi???? uske bapu ka bhi kuch pta nhi hai...
(gunjan ko jab ye sunai padta hai to wo uss lady ki taraf bachcha lekar jati hai)
G : ye aap hi bachcha hai naa
L : haan haan ye hi hamari bitiya hai.... tumhara khub bhala ho bitiya.. khub jiyo....
(gunjan wahaan se jaane lagti hai to dekhti hai k hospital staff kafi busy hai)
G to Herself : abhi to bhai ko hosh bhi nhi aaya hai.. mai yahaan hospital staff ki 1st aid me help to kar hi skti hu...inn logo ko sach me hamari help ki zarurat hai...
(gunjan gernal ward me hospital staff ki 1st aid me help karne lagti hai.. udhar benji aur dia lift se hospital k dusre floors pr uday ko dhundne jaate hai... aur nupur aur samrat stair se same floor pr pahuchte hai..dono groups ko ek jaani pehchani awaz sunai deti hai jo uday ki hai....
U : 😡 😡 dekho tammy... bahut ho gya... mujhe bhi tum logo ki help karni hai.. main yahaan aur derr nhi baith skta...
T : uday.. tumne just abhi abhi blood donate kia hai.. ye lo tum bananas khao.. aur ek dum se mat shuru ho jao.. mujhe bhi pta hai.. tumhe hamari help karni hai.. but adhe ghante k rest k baad... aur ye final hai...
(itne me nupur aur samrat ek gate se aur benji aur dia dusre gate se wahaan enter karte hai.. uday ko sahi salamat dekh kar.. sabki jaan me jaan aati hai.. dia uday ko dekhte hi gale lga leti hai)
D : dodo tumne to hume dara hi dia tha.. mujhe lga maine tumhe kho dia hai...😭 😭
U : don't cry dids... main thik hu... aur mujhe dekho kuch nhi hua hai...
B :(with fake anger) : agar tumhe kuch nhi hua hai tum hospital me kya kar rhe ho aur bed pr bhi
S to T : tamanna ye sab kya hai....
T : guys actual baat aisi hai.. uday ne jab mujhe milne ko kaha to maine socha k bahar jaane se achcha tha ki uday hum college frds k sath masti karta.. hum log college garden me hi sare picnic type mana rhe the... tabhi hume blast ki awaz sunai di... jiske baad warden ne uday ko ghar jaane se rok lia aur hume news me pta chala ki city me bahut si jagah blast huye hai... hum soch hi rhe the k hum logo ki help kaise kare to uday ne ye idea dia k hum hospital jaake logo ki thodi bahut help to kar hi skte hai..
B : kya baat hai.. uday ka bhi dimag chalne lga hai
U : correction... wo kya hai naa k ye sirf musibat k time hi kaam aata hai....
(sab smile karne lagte hai tabhi uday ko yaad aata hai)
U : tum sab yahaan kya kar rhe ho
(samrat sari baat batata hai)
U : koi baat nhi nupur k bauji ko hum sab milke dhund hi lenge... (tabhi samrat ka hath galti se uday ki baju pr lagta hai jis pr uday ne injection lagwaya tha)
U : ouch....
D : kya hua dodo....(worried)
T : dia.. isne abhi abhi blood donate kia hai.. tabhi isse keh rhi hu kuch kha le.. aur thoda sa rest kar le.. fir kaam kar lena....
B : what???? blood donate... gud yaar....
T : haan gud to hai.. hospital me blood ki bhi kafi kami hai.. aur uss insan ko kafi chote aayi thi.. aur uska blood group bhi nhi mil rha hai.. agar uday usse sahi time pr blood donate nhi karta... to kuch bi ho skta tha
N : we are proud of you uday...... hum sirf sochte hai.. aur tumne to socha bi aur kia bhi..😊 😊 .pta nhi bauji kahaan hai.....😔
T : don't worry nupur wo bhi mil jayenge........


TO BE CONT.......

PT 40 - PG 92
Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update Anu
thanx GOD maynk thik hai

hmm so gang gonna to help injured ppl
thats vry good


loved ur update
keep updating
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Posted: 14 years ago
hay nice one dear waiting for next one
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update plzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome job
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update
luved their concern towards every1.....
cont soon n tnx fr pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
NIce update yaar

Hope ki bas ab sab kuch jald hi thik ho jae

Thanx for pm

do continue soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
Reply for part 35:-
Nice one.
Mayank kabhi aise confess karega apni feelings i didn't know that.
The way he represented each n every member of his band was really nice.
He cares of each n everyone n that's y i like him so much and all of them showed too that this is not only Mayank's but also their big dream to win that competition.
Adhiraj brought Noopur with him so funny.

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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 36-
gud update
mom's ne accha surprise diya apne bacchon ko. Dono ne (sajan) ne socha tha ki ek saath time spend karenge but nahi kar paye.
Mayu ne apni mom ko bata diya par jab Gunjan ki baari aayi to vo sharma k andar chali gayi.
Poor Sammy us ki mom ne door open kiya Gunjan ne nahi.

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