MayurFF-Aya Mausam Dosti ka-Pt-44 updt completed - Page 59

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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing update

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Posted: 15 years ago
It was a beautiful update...kitne din on se intezaar tha is din ka ..lol
Very nice :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Anu

Loved the update

All couples were great

And just loved all Mayur rain scenes

Update asap

Love,
Shreyu
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow
fantastic update
it was so romantic
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Posted: 15 years ago
It was really a sweet update
Loved all couples sweet romance
There blast in mumbai n Mayur dosent knws that
Hop they or bauji dnt get in trouble
Liked the way Nups was all shy to say ILU
Well Nups will agree now that Mayu is romantic😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey wow
mindblowing update
i loved reading it
loved mayur..
bechara mayank...use vo 3 words sunna hai aur nupur bol hi nahi rahi hai...lol..
rocking update
continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyyy anu
really amazing updates
really loved mayank n gunjans khichayi by their mom
loved their date
do continue soon
n thanx for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 38


(samrat k ghar pe)

G : samrat hume maa k pass chalna chahiye?????

S (shocking): kya?????😲 😲

G : Haan' wo log ghar me akele hai???? unhone hamari khushi k liye hume mana nhi kia.. ab hume bhi unki khushi ka khayal rakhna chahiye'

S : matlab?????

G : dekho naa'.nupur to tumhe pta hi hai kitni filmy hai.. isliye bhai jaldi to ghar pahuch nhi skte.. aur waise bhi hum dono k maa ek sath hai.. to agar hum achanak unke saamne honge'. To unhe bhi lagega k hume apni zindagi ki har khushi me gam me unki zarurat hai' hum apni khushi me unhe shamil karna nhi bhule hai'

S : oh ho.. waise tum itni samjhdari ki baatein kar kaise leti ho.. mujhe bhi tution de dena'

G (smiles) : hmm' thik hai pr abhi to chalo 😊

S : ok chalo.. ek kaam karte hai.. hum log maa k liye kuch achcha sa gift lekar chalenge..

G : ye achcha rahega..

(dono shopping mall jaate hai'jahaan samrat aur gunjan alag alag jagah se ek dusre ki mom k liye gift dhundte hai.. gunjan jab ek gift samrat ki mom k select kar leti hai.. to wo counter pr jaane lagti hai.. to wo ek adami ko dekhti hai.. )

G ' stranger : suniye.. ye bag syad aapka hai..

Stranger ' : no reply

G ' Stranger : arre aap kahaan jaa rhe hai' ye bag aapka hi hai naa??????

Stranger ' G (rudly) : madam agar ye bag mera hota to.. ye mera bag nhi hai.. mera hota to main le jata'(aur wo stranger wahaan se chala jaata hai)

G to herself : ajeeb insan hai..maine isse khud bag rakhte huye dekha hai.. aur ab ye keh rha hai k ye bag uska nhi hai.. (tabhi wahaan samrat aa jata hai)

S : chismish kya hau'. Aaj tum kitni derr lga rahi ho' chalna nhi hai kya?? Kuch select kia?????

G : haan.. chalo' ghar chalte hai

(ghar jaate whqt raaste me)

S : chismish kya hua??? Tum pareshan dikh rhi ho??

G : nhi' wo actual me abhi yahaan ek adami tha' maine usse khud se mall me bag rakhte huye dekha.. aur jab wo jaane lga aur maine usse kaha k wo apna bag to le le.. usne kaha k wo bag uska nhi hai'.

S : bas itni si baat???? Arre ho skta hai wo bag kisi aur ka ho.. aur usne bas side me rakh dia ho'

G : haan ye bhi ho skta hai.. syad mujhe hi koi galat fehmi huyi ho..

S : dekha kar di naa tumhari problem solve' aur lo ghar bhi aa gya

(dono building me enter karte hai)

(udhar mayank aur nupur railway station pahuchte hai.. wo jaise hi pta karte hai k morena se aane wali train kaun se platform pr aa rhi hai.. wo jaise hi platform me enter karte hai, unhe platform pr goliya chalne ki awaz sunai deti hai.. aur wo logo ko goliya lagne se logo ko girte huye dekhte hai.. aur dekhte hai k do log kale nakab me logo pr goliye chala rhe hai' mayank nupur ko lekar ek bench k piche chup jata hai.. un do logo me se ek admi nupur aur mayank se kuch kadam ki duri pr hi khda hai..tabhi 1 bachcha jo apne parents se alag ho gya hai.. bachcha kareeban 3-4 saal ka hoga' rone lagta hai')

Terrorist (shounting) : ye kiska bachcha hai' isse chup karao warna main isse bhi goli maar dunga'😡 😡

(koi reply nhi deta)

Terriorist again shounting : hum bachcho ko nhi maarte' pr ye agar aisa rota rha to main isse abhi k abhi goli maar dunga..😡

(udhar nupur mayank se kehti hai)

N : Mayank mujhe tum se kuch kehna hai

M : tum daro mat nupur' main tumhe kuch nhi hone dunga.. tumhe kuch krne se pehle unhe mujhse takraana hoga

N : jaanti hu.. pr main darr nhi rhi hu.. mujhe bas itna kehna hai k agar aaj mujhe kuch ho gya to main ye kahe bina meri atama ko shanti bhi nhi milegi.. main bas yahi kehna chahti hu.. k main tumse bahut pyar karti hu'

(mayank surprise hota hai aur iss se pehle mayank kuch kehta nupur khadi ho jati hai)

N ' terrorist : Ye bachcha mere sath hai

Terrorist ' N : to fir iss bachche ko chup kara' kyunki hum bachcho ko nhi maarte.. pr mujhe tujhe goli maarne me zyada whqt nhi lagega'

(as nupur bachche ko nhi jaanti.. pr bachcha chota hai.. to nupur k sambhalne pr bhi wo chup nhi ho rha' mayank ko samjh nhi aa rha k nupur ne aisa kyun kia.. nupur aur mayank to uss bachche ko jaante bhi nhi hai.. aur udhar wo bachcha chup hi nhi ho rha hai)

Terrorist 1'N : ae ladki iss bachche ko chup kara.. warna main tujhe goli maar dunga..

(terrorist gun point nupur ki taraf kar deta hai'. udhar tab tak platform k charo taraf police ka jaal bhi bich chukka hota hai.. Mayank nupur ko gun point pr nhi dekh pata terrorist iss se pehle nupur pr goli chala pta, mayank bich me aa jata hai.. mayank k bich me aane se terrorist ghabrahat me fire kar deta hai aur wo goli mayank k baju me lagti hai.. pr mayank terrorist k already itne kareeb pahuch jaata hai.. k wo terrorist ka gun point uski hi taraf kar deta.. aur terrorist se jaldi me point dba deta hai.. jis se wo apni hi gun ka shikar ho jata hai.. achanak gun chalne se dusra terrorist gabra jata hai aur wo police ki goliyo ka shikar ho jata hai)

(udhar restaurant me tv pr bomb blast ki khabar dekh kar dia pareshan ho jati hai )

D (shounting ) : benji.. benji'.(start crying)😭 😭 😭

B : dia kya hua' tum ro kyun rhi ho

D : Benji'.mumbai me blast huye hai.. tumhe pta hai ye blast nupur k hostel k pass wale restaurant me hua hai

B : dia dia.. yahaan to kuch nhi hua naa' chalo main tumhe ghar chod du'

D : benji tum samjh kyun nhi rhe' dodo tammy se milne gya tha.. aur wo dono ussi restaurant me jaate hai as k tammy ko zyada derr tak hostel se bahar allowed nhi hai

B (shocked) : kya??????😲 😲

D : Haan benji'..(crying)😭 😭

B : dia tum rona band karo.. dekho.. hum hospital chalte hai.. ho skta hai unhe kuch naa hua ho.. rone se kuch nhi hoga'.

(dono sidhe hospital jaate hai jahaan blast k patient admit hai.. dusri taraf sajan ghar pahuchte hai' Unhe dekh kar unki mom pareshan ho jati hai aur sajan ko blast k bare me pta hi nhi hai)

SM : tum log yahaan kya kar rhe ho????

S : maa kya hua tum aise kyun bol rhi ho'

G : haan aunty aap pareshan bhi lag rhe ho..

MM : beta Mumbai me blast huye hai.. mayank ka phone bhi nhi lag rha syad network jam hai

Sajan : (shocked) : kya?????? Blast hue hai.. 😲 😲

S : aapko kisne bataya??????

SM : Tv pr news aa rhi hai beta'

(sab tv pr news dobra dekhne lagte hai.. as hospital se live telecast ho rha hota hai.. to un logo ko tv pr benji aur dia dikhte hai..)

G (shocked): samrat.. dia hospital me kya kar rhi hai ?????😲

S : (shocked) : mujhe bhi samjh nhi aa rha'.😲

(tabhi tv pr news aati hai.. k ek shopping mall me live bomb mila hai.. ye wahi shopping mall hai jahaan se gunjan aur samrat ne gifts liye the)

G : samrat hum log to abhi yahi se aa rhe hai

SM : tum log mall me kya karne gye the??????

S : maa hum log aap logo k liye gift lene gye the

MM : beta.. ye sab chodo'dia aur benji hospital me kya kar rhe hai??? unhe ek baar phone to karo

S : haan aunty wahi try kar rha hu.. pr syad network jam hai

G : hume bhi hospital chalna chahiye'

S : tum thik keh rhi ho'.

G 'MM : maa..bhai ka kuch pta chale to batana'

MM : haan beta thik hai' mujhe to uski aur nupur ki chinta ho rhi hai.. wo log abhi taka aye kyun nhi😔 😔

G : maa aap aise karogi to main hospital nhi jaungi???😔

MM : nhi beta tum log jao.. main thik hu.. tumhare frds ko tumhari zarurat hai

(gunjan aur samrat hospital k liye nikalate hai.. mayank ki mom pareshan hai k mayank aur nupur ab tak ghar kyun nhi aaye)

(Raste me Sajan)

G : samrat mujhe bahut chinta ho rhi hai😔

S : chismish chinta to mujhe bhi ho rhi hai' dia hospital me kya kar rhi thi??????😔

G : aur bhai aur nupur ka bhi koi pta nhi hai

S : haan.. aur iss situation me hum adhiraj ki help bhi nhi le skte kyunki uske upper uske seniors ka pressure hoga.

G : pta nhi abhi tak to sab thik tha.. abhi sab kuch bigad gya' Dia aur benji hospital me hai.. aur hume ye bhi nhi pta kyun??????

S : mayank aur nupur ka kuch pta hi nhi hai.. wo log thik bhi hai ya nhi????????

G : aur jis mall me hum gye the wahaan se live bomb mila.. sab kuch achanak se kitna ajeeb ho gya 😔

(dusri taraf mayank ko goli lagi dekh nupur pareshan ho jati hai wo ye bhul jati hai k wo railway station apne bauji ko lene aayi thi.. railway station pr dono terrorist mare jaa chuke hai.. mayank aur dusre logo ko jo railway station pr gayal ho jate hai unhe hospital le jaaya jaata hai.. unhe bhi ussi hospital me admit kia jaata hai jahaan dia aur benji gye hai.. )

TO BE CONT........


part 39- pg 89

Edited by Annudsweetgirl - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
fantastic update plzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon

thx alot for the pm

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