ff-thoda thoda pyaar(mayur) updated part 23- Pg140

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nishi

@Nishithini

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#261

awesome!!!!! I cant wait to know what is the twist. everything was fine, then suddenly what happened????

anyways, its a really nice update. plz plz plz continue soon.

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Ranbir Deewani ........

@ranbir_lekha

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#262

awesum part madhavi thanx fr PM

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Divya

@myownarea

Stunner

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Posted: 16 years ago

#263

hey mads..ye kaise ho gaya yaar..:) was expecting a happy update aur tumne sad update de diya/.
but it was really good n quite myterious..am really really curious!!! 😊

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Fathima Fernandez

@sweetgalFats

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#264

Hey Madhvi! very nice part yar! but y Nupur became lyk ths?? plz yar jaldi se update kar aur ye mystery solve kar de! plz! warna main teek se khana nahi kha paungi! thanx for the pm!

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399703

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Posted: 16 years ago

#265

hey madz, awesome yaar! loved it!

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Vaishnavi

@-ialwayswill-

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#266

Hey madhvi

🤢

I hate u !!
2years.........😭😭
Wats that now......😡
the story was going soooo cute !!😍

Ab main sahi main danda lekar tujhe marne anae wali hoon !!😆

Aisa bhi koi karta hai........😒
nupur ko chup, rondu.koi banata hai kya......😭
n Sajan ki shaadi.......hmmm😲

Aur kya bataon........flashblacks were nice😉...........but i relli hate😡 them kyunki FBs ke wajah se hi toh yeh sab ho raha hai na !!🤢🤢😆

Aur i was thinking ke u'd write a nice soft romantic part😍.........u killed me by this TWIST !!😆

well, ab jo hogaya so hogaya, ab ise jitni jaldi hosake theek kar !!😛

Hmmm....agarTWIST😆 wale point of view se dekha jaye toh kafi jhatkedaar twist tha😆😆........
well relli dont know why nupz mom told all that.......and wat d hell did happen b/w mayur !!😭😭

Acha dont worry ....bachne sirf ek hi tareeka hai ki sab kuch jald se jald teekh karde !!

..........dont cry😆😆

Great work Dear👏

Luv ya
vaishu😳
and ya as usual reply MUST !!😃

Edited by vaish04 - 16 years ago

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Vaishnavi

@-ialwayswill-

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#267

Originally posted by: mdkr

vaishu i was wondering tune jawab kyu nahi diya😛
Toh teri dimag ki galti thi😆
Thnx yaar
I hope i can write more romantic things😃

hmmmm sab kuch dimaag ki wajah se...........
mera dimag - forgot to comment🤢
tera dimag - yeh TWIST😡😆

Edited by vaish04 - 16 years ago

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Nikhila Chandran S.S.

@Nikki_Titli

Elite

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#268

gr8 update yaar.....bt plzzz nupsi ko vapas laao....i cant c her sad lik this.....

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Mithila

@Mithila_22

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#269

soooooooooo much mysterious update....i liked it a lott...lekin itn mystery yaar madhvi...u know my mind is with alot of questions now...hope to get the answet in next1...update soon..loved this part...n i think it was not that sad n its bcoz the FBs were very cute...plzz make clear what happened in mayur...n why is she working as Rj..i can't wait to read the next1...liked the part very much...