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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

OMG MAYUR are in loveeeeeeeee😳😆wow yaar awesome part..........please update soon.pm me😳


Yes i will
Thnx😃

Originally posted by: vaish04

Hey madhvi😊
actually i read ur part as soon as u posted......😳
but my idiot mind
🤢thot i had commented😆
but now i realised that i dint😆
so herez my coment😃
wel....i loved the whole mayur convo😳
and the way mayur felt in d end.....🤗
cute work😍
and must tell u..u r turning way romantic my dear !!😳
luvya😉
vaishu
⭐️


vaishu i was wondering tune jawab kyu nahi diya😛
Toh teri dimag ki galti thi😆
Thnx yaar
I hope i can write more romantic things😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey guys
Mujhe lag raha hai ki main bahut jald marne waali hu, mera update padhke tumsab mujhe marne waale ho😆. Im sorry guys ki main apne ff ko itna sad kar rahi hu par jald hi main usse wapas apni tarah happy karungi aur MN romance dungi😃. Agar confession ho jata toh mera ff khatam ho jata issiliye i got a new but sadenning twist. But i will make sure ki ur happy later😃. Also guys its a bt inspired 3yr link. And a lot of fbs hope u guys like it

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Part 8- Move on

3 yrs later

"Dee sab packing ho gayi bas ''''."

"Hmmm toh tum aur samrat nikalo main aa jaungi"

"Dee dekho tum bhi chalo, hum sab saath jayenge"

"Gunjan dekh teri wajah se''''"

"Haan dee meri wajah se sab kiya aapne ab apni wajah se kuch karo'"

Nupur had a questioning look on her face.

"Dee meri wajah se do saal se job kar rahe ho, ab apni padhai puri kar lo'."

"Haan teri baat maani aur us college mein admission liya na??"

"Haan dee isiliye toh tum best ho"

"Par Gunjan teri samrat ki shaadi''"

"haan gunjan, meri aur tumhari shaadi ki taiyaari??"

"Samrat" said the girls together

Gunjan angrily and Nupur pleasingly

Samrat saw gunjan's reaction

"Hi girls, Nupur no shaadi yaar, (lazily) "

"Kya?? Yells nupur

"Arre mera matlab hai ki'''.abhi toh mujhe chashmish ka ch nahi samjh aaya hai'to usse shaadi kaise karlu??"

"Samrat aur kitne saal chahiye??" Nupur was irritated by such answers of Samrat

Even b4 samrat cud think of an answer

"Dee jab tak sam apne dad ke company ka ek project pura nahi kar leta main usse shaadi nahi karungi'''..aur project handle karne ke liye isse MBA karna hoga jo woh aapke saath karega"

Nupur doesnot say anything but a bbye

Sajan leave Nupur alone with some stuff to pack up and reach the city.

Sajan are going by their car while Nupur will leave in a bus tomorrow''''..

Nupur was left in the house all alone, she lived the apartment for two yrs now, this apartment had shared everything with Nupur actually she had shared everything with the apartment''..why everything she had shared sorrows, mostly sorrows with the apartment. She was seeing it for the last time she had to be emotional''''

She reminded her of everything, her fathers last words, her mayanks words, samrat's parents words, chachijee's words ''''''just those things that she hated. The house healed her, provided support to her. She was all nostalgic and traveled back and forth in time.

Nupur's father(NF) was in the hospital breathing his last. Nupur gunjan and chachaji were there.

NF: Nupur and Gunjan take care of each other, brother u take care of my daughters marriage. Nupur take this, ur mother asked me to give this to u when im bout to die.

He hands over Nupur a key and dies

Nupur is back from it and starts to pack, while packing she remembers

Opening the trunck she takes out some jewellary and gifts her mother left for them. Gunjan is not there at that time. She reads a letter by her mother'''She is taken aback '''''her mother had asked her not to live with her chachaji after her father's death''''.she had written THIS??

Nupur reads

"beta tumhare baba aur maine jyada nahi kiya par phir bhi jitna hai usme gujara kar lena. Apne chachaji ke saath jyada din mat rehna, main jaanti hu baba yehi chahenge ki tum unhike saath raho, par mat rehna"

"Gunjan ki jimedari teri Nupur aur Nupur ki teri gunjan"

"Mujhe nahi pata maa ki aapne aisa kyu likha par maine aapka kaha manna, thodi der se manna toh sahi"'''.she thinks. While lying on the bed she remembers herself and gunjan leaving the house after the college got over''''she came to the apartment and gunjan went to hostel.

She goes to sleep very soon.

Nupur had topped in her last semester and had got well placed, she moved out of her chachiji's place, coz her mom had asked to. Gunjan had got a scholarship for an MSc degree in a college near by, according to some rule she had to shift to the hostel to avail the scholarship. Nupur got this apartment from her company and lived alone for two long years. Nupur hadnot told gunjan bout their mother's letter. She dint even tell her bout the conversation she overheard'''.between samrat and his parents. She had also never told her that she loved''.

Nupur's alarm clock rang, she had learnt to wake up early and cook food it the past two yrs. Most importantly she had learnt how to pretend and how to fake a smile.

Nupur got up to get ready, she was getting late for the bus'''''while running out of the apartment she saw a photo album kept on the desk, it was gunjan fav album '.

She picked it up and rushed towards the door'''''.something fell''she bent to pick them up. They were the pics from excel days, she saw a pic of her and mayank, tears developed in her eyes'''she brushed them and ran towards the door again.

She gave the keys to the president of the society and went to the bus stand. She boarded the bus and cursed the moment when she saw those photos, all she could remember was mayu.

Gunjan and Samrat were in the car'..

"Samrat kya hua meri dee ko?? Jo din mein do minute chup nahi rehti thi who din mein sirf do minute bolti hai?? Samrat dee ke wardrobe mein red nahi hai?? Woh padhna nahi kaam karna chahti hai , aur who bhi 9-5? Meri dee ki har dress mein red tha''.woh model banna chati thi aur din bhar bolti thi"

"Tum kabse itna bolne lagi chashmish. Tum dono mein division of labour acha hai. Usne baandh kiya toh tumne shuru?"

"Samrat mujhe hostel mein nahi rehna chahiye tha, dee ko papa ki mauth ka bura sadma laga hai, aur woh abhi tak ubhar nahi paai hai"

After a long pause

"Nahi Samrat dee ko koi aur baat hai jo pareshaan kar rahi hai?? Kuch aur hua hai jo main nahi jaanti hu'.Kya hua hai??"

Samrat knew some half truths

"Chashmish tum jyada soch rahi ho, ho sakta hai uska mood kharab ho'."

"Samrat yeh toh ho hi nahi sakta. Dee ka mood kharab hota hai toh woh aur bhi zyada bolti thi''Tumhe pata hai kal kya hua''"

"Gunjan tere kehne pe main MBA kar rahi hu, mujhe scholarship bhi mili hai haina??"

"Haan dee'..toh??"

"Toh main yeh job join karlu Rj ka hai Shaam mein 7-9 Convienient hoga nahi??"

"Nahi dee tum padhogi kab?? Dekho dee main jo earn karungi usse ghar chal jayega'"

"Gunjan paise bhi toh bachane hai'."

"Kiske liye dee"

"Arre teri shaadi ke liye aur tere bacho ke liye"

"Dee who sab main dekhungi, shaadi meri bache mere"

"Dekh Gunjan agar main ye job nahi karungi toh MBA bhi nahi" (angry)

"Thik hai dee'''.jo tumhara maan"

"Haan toh??"

"Samrat dee ka padhai se mana karna samajh aata hai, par kamane ke liye itna utharu hona ye nai samjh aata"

"Oho tum aapne dimag ko relax karo aur so jaao, tumhari dee ko kuch nai hua hai."

He gave an assuring smile and Gunjan went to sleep.

Samrat thinks

" Sab toh nahi par kafi kuch mujhe pata hai, mere parents ki wajah se ye Rj ka chakkar hai aur''' MAYANK tum dono ke beech mein kya hua??? Aisa kya hua ki Nupur meri bubbly saali nahi rahi meri chashmish ki badi behen ho gayi. Ye sab tabhi kyu hona tha?? Gunjan tumhare paas main tha, Nupur thi, Papa ke baad,par''.. Nupur ke paas koi nahi'.."

"Kya sachme kuch hua unke beech ki mujhe hi lag raha hai???" Samrat dint kno anything "Wapas aate hue car mein they were friends, par papa ki death ke bad jab Nupur college aai toh uske aur Mayank ke beech mein koi baat hi nahi hui'''I thot sab thik hoga par college khatam ho gaya aur Mayank tab se ab take k baar nahi dikha'''.Nupur ki aankhon mein bhi nahi'.."

In the bus Nupur remembers one of her trips to Mayank's place for her history project

That was the time when she was new''

"Hi Aunty ab aap kaisi hai? Ye Mayank ka bacha aapka khayal toh rakh raha haina?"

"Haan Mayank toh khayal rakh raha, par woh tumhari waali baat kaha? Waise Mayank ke bache hue toh nahi par agar bhagwan ki kripa hui toh mera Mayu mujhe do char chunu munnu jarur dega"

Mayank was there all this while and was annoyed at the conversation.

"Nupur chalo"

He held her hand and took her to his room. She was amazed

"By god Mayank itna saaf kamra, ufff mera kamra kabhi itna saaf nahi rehta"

"Jaanta hu, ab internet se pics nikalo kissi file mein save karo phir hum printout nikal lenge"

After a while Mayank notices Nupur working really hard

"main coffee lata hu"

He went to make coffee and gets it for her. Nupur is seeing on the computer screen and trying to hold the coffee, she spils it on herself. She jumps coz she got burnt. The coffee was hot. Mayank keeps the glass aside and takes her to the bathroom and spills some water on her dress and asks Nupur to wash up and he goes to get ice and first aid box.

Mayank gets some ice and immediately keeps it on Nupurs body and later he pics her dress a little up and rubs the ice directly on her belly. Seeing so much commotion MM comes in. Mayank immediately leaves Nupur and asks MM to help her.

Nupur changes to some old clothes of aunty which fitted her really well. In the mead while Mayank had cleaned the room. They sat down to work'.

"Nupur tum kitni clumsy ho coffee dekh ke nahi pakad sakti??"

"Mayank coffee itni garam koi banata hai kya?? Mujhe toh lag raha hai jaise tumhara plan tha mujhpe coffee girane ka'"

"Nupur tum'.."

"Excuse me" Aunty interrupted

"Khana khalo'.."

The three sit on the table..

MM- Beta waise Mayank humesha hi chize garam khata hai or coffee toh usse lawa ki tarah garam pasand hai

N- Aunty iske lawa ke chakar mein mera Gatawa ban jata tha na'' Waise aunty uncle kya Mayank ki hi tarah the'' sadu??

Mayank stares at Nupur angrily

MM- Nahi beta uncle toh ache the atleast mere saath, Par bakiyon ke saath strict aur sadu, unki toh majburi thi Army mein jo the

N- Wao aunty uncle army mein the, Phir toh bade handsome rahe honge, army waale bade handsome hote hai, by god

Mayank is amused at what Nupur said

M- Matlab??

MM- Beta tu rehne de, Tujhe kya pata army waale kitne handsome hote the'..

I mean abhi honge par ab main line nahi martin a

MM and Nupur give each other a high five and giggle '''..Mayank is astonished by what his mother said.

MM- Unhe line marne ka maza hi kuch aur hai, by god

Nupur aunty and mayank all three giggle at this

Nupur: True gentlemen'.hmmm

MM- Apna Mayank bhi waisa hi hai

N- Aunty aap chahe toh isse bhi army mein bhej sakti hai, isski ek angry look aur dushman bhaag khade honge

MM- Hmmm desh ko isse bahut fayada hai, that way.

M- Mom no army, Dad ke baad ab''

MM- Mayu tub hi na hum toh mazak kar rahe hai

N- Aur waise bhi humne kausa tumhara training main dakhila kara diya

Waise Aunty mujhe dekhna hai aap kis kis pe line marti thi, Uncle se shaadi ke pehle

MM- Mayu tu plz plates utha tab tak main aur Nupur thoda

Aunty takes out an album and both the girls discuss the guys. Mayank is watching this from far. Then some photos of Mayank's father come up and MM becomes a little sentimental bout it. And Mayank is now annoyed at nupur for making his mom senti

N- Aunty kitna garv hota hoga na aapko uncle pe

MM- Bilkul bahut garv hota hai unpe

N- Waise aunty aapki choice achi hai''uncle itne handsome hai by god

Tabhi Mayank thoda thik thak lagta hai

Both laugh at this and find similarities between mayank and his father.

Mayank is amused at Nupur " Ye ladki hai ya kya?? Ma ko iss album ko pakad ke haste kabhi nahi dekha"

Nupur leaves home that night.

The bus stops, she has reached pune. She gets down the bus and tries looking for an auto, but in vain. It was auto strike that day. Nupur tries taking a lift. A big enova stops in front of her. The driver opens the window. Nupur sees a driver and a guy at the back seat his face was covered with the newspaper he was reading

"Namaste bhaiya jee, Mujhe jhanda chauk tak chod denge, plz"

The driver looks confused while the guys sitting behind motions her to sit. The driver gets down and makes Nupur sit beside him.

Jhande chauk came and Nupur got down said a thank you and went away. While Nupur was walking away the guy kept staring at her, he wanted her to turn but she dint and went away. The car started moving again.

" Miss Nupur Bhushan full time chatar patar, aaj usne pure 10 min kuch nahi kaha, aur palat ke bbye bhi nahi, ye toh uski usual aadat hai, woh har kissi ko palat ke bbye karti hai." He wondered.

At Nupur's place

"Dee tum aa gayi, main aur samrat tumhari hi baatein kar rahe the"

"Haan Gunjan mujhe rest lena hai, 2 ghaante mein pahuchna hai radio office main chalti hu"

"Dekha samrat ye meri dee ho hi nahi sakti"

"Gunjan relax, sab thik hoga, she might be tired, ab ye mat kehna ki woh tired hoti toh aur zyada baatein karti"

Samrat and Gunjan both smile.

Nupur is lying on the bed but is unable to sleep. She is thinking bout Mayank and "that" night

Next day morning Nupur goes out and wakes Mayank who is still sleeping. She wakes him up and gives him tea.

"Good morning Mayank lo chai"

"Good morning Nupur"

He takes the tea and drinks it

"Ye chai tumne banai hai??" Asks an astonished Mayank

"Nahi Kyu??"
"Oh thank god main toh dar hi gaya tha ki earthquake aane waala hai"

Nupur is still confused

"Arre tumhi toh kehti ho ki jis din tum kuch bhi acha banaogi us din earthquake aayega"

Nupur and Mayank smile at this

"Mayank woh sab chodo aaj gaon mein ek mela hai shaam ko bacho ke saath chale??'Mayank plz haan bolo na ''plz plz plz"

"Thik hai Nupur chalenge" Nupur gets very excited and is bout to hug him, but she stops.

Nupur comes out of her past and She decides to get ready to leave, to avoid her wandering thots. She gets ready and leaves

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I hope u liked it😊

love

madhvi😊


Edited by mdkr - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Terrific!! 😊 Continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Kanky

Terrific!! 😊 Continue soon.


thnx comment on the next part soon😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
uff..!!
abb mein next part tak u se pochti raho gi...
TWIST KIA HAI??? y so mystery...!!

anywayz...
part was not dat sad yaara... i really liked it...!!
nupur turning into sad soul... waitin for the reason to reveal..!!
really liked mom-nupur scene...!!
mayank father in army... cool..!! handsome guy...!!really luved mom replies..!!😳 n mayank concern for her mother was so sweet...!!!
keep on doin the good work...!!

LUB
Rabbia..!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesum update madz really
ur fab writer
plz do
Continue soon
keep it up my all prayers with u
wow kya precap hai wa
waiting 4 next part


luv
ruti randy

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Posted: 16 years ago

Uff !! what an update !! terrific work !!

lets see whats the twist !! plz update soon!
luv lipsa

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Posted: 16 years ago
@mads....tune 8 part post kardiye...maine toh abhi sirf teen hi padhe hai,...par koi baat nahi mi'll try to catch d speed...aur haan all d 3 parts are awesome fantastic....muaaah...
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hailaaaaa yeh twist kya hain????😲.......awesome part i loved the flashbacks............please update soon.pm me😳
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If you ever think of seperating mayank and nupur or break up thing am sure to break you also dear...
heheehe.. wonderful part...

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