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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: vaish04

Hey madhvi

🤢

I hate u !! plz dont😭
2years.........😭😭 3 yrs i guess😆
Wats that now......😡bt inspired leap
the story was going soooo cute !!😍yeah i kno par there was no twist

Ab main sahi main danda lekar tujhe marne anae wali hoon !!😆
mummy bachao!!!!! dekho vaishu marne aa rahi hai😆

Aisa bhi koi karta hai........😒
i kno par main sab thik bhi karungi😊
nupur ko chup, rondu.koi banata hai kya......😭
i kno mujhe bhi ajeeb lag raha tha😆
n Sajan ki shaadi.......hmmm😲

i kno shocking hai show mein they hv not confessed
Aur kya bataon........flashblacks were nice😉...........but i relli hate😡 them kyunki FBs ke wajah se hi toh yeh sab ho raha hai na !!🤢🤢😆
gud nice logic😆

Aur i was thinking ke u'd write a nice soft romantic part😍.........u killed me by this TWIST !!😆

well, ab jo hogaya so hogaya, ab ise jitni jaldi hosake theek kar !!😛
shock treatment ab ull like wateveri write
😆

Hmmm....agarTWIST😆 wale point of view se dekha jaye toh kafi jhatkedaar twist tha😆😆........
well relli dont know why nupz mom told all that.......and wat d hell did happen b/w mayur !!😭😭

yes pata hai even i dont kno till now😆😛
Acha dont worry ....bachne sirf ek hi tareeka hai ki sab kuch jald se jald teekh karde !!

..........dont cry😆😆
ya karungi i love mayur yaara
Great work Dear👏



Luv ya
vaishu😳
and ya as usual reply MUST !!
😃


Thnx vaishu loved it
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Posted: 16 years ago

thnx😃

Originally posted by: nikki028

gr8 update yaar.....bt plzzz nupsi ko vapas laao....i cant c her sad lik this.....


will try jaldi nai hoga par

Originally posted by: taniyamiths

soooooooooo much mysterious update....i liked it a lott...lekin itn mystery yaar madhvi...u know my mind is with alot of questions now...hope to get the answet in next1...update soon..loved this part...n i think it was not that sad n its bcoz the FBs were very cute...plzz make clear what happened in mayur...n why is she working as Rj..i can't wait to read the next1...liked the part very much...


I will try to give u all the answers cant promise though



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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: zummi03

Intresting...continue soon....


Thx i will😃

Originally posted by: mayank-nupurfan

nice part....... plzz continue soon.. thanks 4 d pm dear...


thnx i will😃

Originally posted by: Bushra Javeria

it's amazing madhvi..keep it up!!


thnx i will😃


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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: shama420

@mads....tune 8 part post kardiye...maine toh abhi sirf teen hi padhe hai,...par koi baat nahi mi'll try to catch d speed...aur haan all d 3 parts are awesome fantastic....muaaah...


Jaldi shama jaldi im waiting😃

Originally posted by: AMMY LUVS RIDZ

hailaaaaa yeh twist kya hain????😲.......awesome part i loved the flashbacks............please update soon.pm me😳


Thnx i surely will😃

Originally posted by: preethis

If you ever think of seperating mayank and nupur or break up thing am sure to break you also dear...

heheehe.. wonderful part...


Mummy bachao preethi dee marne aa rahi hai😆
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Nishithini

awesome!!!!! I cant wait to know what is the twist. everything was fine, then suddenly what happened????

anyways, its a really nice update. plz plz plz continue soon.


I will tell u once i kno wat happened😆
yes i will
😃

Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha

awesum part madhavi thanx fr PM


Gud ur excited😆

Originally posted by: myownarea

hey mads..ye kaise ho gaya yaar..:) was expecting a happy update aur tumne sad update de diya/.
but it was really good n quite myterious..am really really curious!!! 😊


Ya dee with me expect the unexpected😆
thnx dee

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetgalFats

Hey Madhvi! very nice part yar! but y Nupur became lyk ths?? plz yar jaldi se update kar aur ye mystery solve kar de! plz! warna main teek se khana nahi kha paungi! thanx for the pm!


Nahi tujhe zyada suffer nahi karne dungi
ill update soon😃

Originally posted by: Ansh_Arti

hey madz, awesome yaar! loved it!


Thnx yaar😃

Originally posted by: Lipsa_mjht

Uff !! what an update !! terrific work !!

lets see whats the twist !! plz update soon!
luv lipsa


Thnx lipsa 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: robinblue91

uff..!!
abb mein next part tak u se pochti raho gi...
TWIST KIA HAI??? y so mystery...!!

anywayz...
part was not dat sad yaara... i really liked it...!!
nupur turning into sad soul... waitin for the reason to reveal..!!
really liked mom-nupur scene...!!
mayank father in army... cool..!! handsome guy...!!really luved mom replies..!!😳 n mayank concern for her mother was so sweet...!!!
keep on doin the good work...!!

LUB
Rabbia..!!


Thnx rabbia maine tujhe chance nahi diya mujhse puchne ka maine hi tujhse puch liya😆

Originally posted by: ritu_randy

awesum update madz really
ur fab writer
plz do
Continue soon
keep it up my all prayers with u
wow kya precap hai wa
waiting 4 next part


luv
ruti randy


Ritu maine precap toh diya hi nahi😕
anyways thnx for the comment😃


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Posted: 16 years ago

Nice update...I loved d way u put all d parts...gr8 job...🤗

Nupur was living in that apartment for two yrs all alone...😭

She topped in d last sem...Yaayyyy...😃

I didn't understand why Samrat is delaying their marriage...😕

I loved that line...mujhe chasmish k ch samjh aaya hai.....nice one..👍🏼

Why nupur's mother told her not to live with their chachaji...I didn't get that...

she had learnt to wake up early and cook food it the past two yrs. Most importantly she had learnt how to pretend and how to fake a smile.😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

I want bubbly nupur back...Plz make it soon...plzzzzzzz

loved d convo between samrat-gunjan....Nice to see that gunjan is concerned about Nupur..

aur ye RJ ka kya chakkar hai...😕

I loved that division of labour wali line..

loved d flash back part....What did she say?Mayank thik thak dekhta hai?😲😆

this flash back part is d best in today's update...😃 👏

Who is that in d car? Mayank?😕

kitne sare questions...Hope d mystery will be solved soon...

continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome blossom, i m likeing this new twist....................
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Piya_2009

Nice update...I loved d way u put all d parts...gr8 job...🤗 You disliked it i kno😔

Nupur was living in that apartment for two yrs all alone...😭 yes dee bechari😭😭

She topped in d last sem...Yaayyyy...😃 Yes par dont u wanna kno mayu kyu nahi kiya??

I didn't understand why Samrat is delaying their marriage...😕 Thats a mystery jiska answer i kno

I loved that line...mujhe chasmish k ch samjh aaya hai.....nice one..👍🏼 i kno main physics ke liye yehi kehti hu😆

Why nupur's mother told her not to live with their chachaji...I didn't get that... yes even i dint😆

she had learnt to wake up early and cook food it the past two yrs. Most importantly she had learnt how to pretend and how to fake a smile.😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

I want bubbly nupur back...Plz make it soon...plzzzzzzz yes dee u will get it😆

loved d convo between samrat-gunjan....Nice to see that gunjan is concerned about Nupur..

aur ye RJ ka kya chakkar hai...😕 yes thats related to nupz being happy later😃

I loved that division of labour wali line.. i kno even i loved it😆

loved d flash back part....What did she say?Mayank thik thak dekhta hai?😲😆 arre uske samne uski tariif not allowed😆

this flash back part is d best in today's update...😃 👏 thank you

Who is that in d car? Mayank?😕 not yet decided

kitne sare questions...Hope d mystery will be solved soon...

continue soon..


Yes dee i will😃

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