ff-thoda thoda pyaar(mayur) updated part 23- Pg140

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GamesOfLife

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Posted: 16 years ago

#231

Madhvi this was so romantic sweet ...u say it all when u say nothing at all ..the power of silence ... gr8 concept 👏👏👏
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preksha07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#232

its just tooo good..............plzz update soon....and pm meas soon as u do so.....why do u think that u can't write romantic scenes......it was a very nice update......

luv yaa....

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Preethi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#233

Cool dear... wonderful..i loved it...

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Rabbia

@Bewafa_Behan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#234

oh..!! such a sweet part...
have to say u r back wid a band first the one shot now gr8 part..!!
y i have a feeling u banglore admission k liye gaye thi buh u ended thinkin aba mayur only.. haan...!!
anywayz... part was awsome... sub kuch bool dis aur kuch bola bhi nahi i alwayz adore dis concept..!!
abb.... aur shayad unhi kuch baato ko samjhna and feel karna, kehne se zyada zaruri hota hai
takin ur own wordz or i say mayank wordz i m not goona say much abt it.. buh ya i alwayz lub readin ur updates...!!
kepp on doin the good work..!!

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sruthi

@mayur.forever

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Posted: 16 years ago

#235

am a new reader of ur fan fic !!!!!!
omg!!!!! u made me speechless!!!!!!😛
just loved d way mayank indirectly confessed his feeling for nupsi!!!!!!!!
it was very natural yaar!!!!!😛
just loved it to d core!!!!!!!
and plsss add me to ur pm list!!!!!!😃

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Alisha

@shininggal2008

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Posted: 16 years ago

#236

great part madhvi..even loved ur color coding...continue soon

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-Rinky-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#237

arrey yaar really good... yeh log finally apne family ke baarey me baat kar rahe hain....aisey scenes ke liye mere ankhen taras rahi hai,,,,,

madhvi mein kabhee serial produce karungi toh tujhey script writer ke hisaab se zaroor luungi....pakka...

luv u, good job...

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madhvi

@-madhvi-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#238

Originally posted by: AFSHA18
Hi
Update was cool

Tune thoda romantic kiya

Thank god tujhe romantic laga😆

Originally posted by: mayank-nupurfan
hey nice part yaar....... plzz continue wid ur latest style.......i luved it..... thanks4 d pm dear.........

Thnx i surely will

Originally posted by: ~*mishu*~
like the new style madz
awesome part
n the name fits perfectly
kahi unkahi
anyways continue soon

Thnx Mishu kahi unkahi even i liked it😆
My amazing one liners and titles hv the same origin i guess😆

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madhvi

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Posted: 16 years ago

#239

Originally posted by: ch0c0lates
So happy that they atleast confessed in silence.....love it!

Yeah silence is golden😃

Originally posted by: ranbir_lekha
Kahi unkahi bohot saari baatein hai par woh zubaan par naa aa paaye zindagi mai tujhe hi chaha hai aur kuch nahi ajooba hai humaara yeh pyaar jis mei hum dono fanaa ho gaye

awesum part madhavi thanx fr PM

Any time lekha im glad u liked it
Loved ur line😳