Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) - Page 70

Originally posted by: nihatri

fantastic

Originally posted by: sania_58

wow

fantastic update

so finally hamari Captain Sir ki entry tumhari fic main ho hi gaayi

loved the part

superb

update ke saath saath video bhi bohut accha laga.

mindblowing

beautifully written

great going

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

Kaisi ho doctor sahiba...???😃 Ab pooch rahi hai ??? 😡 Abhi toh main theek hoke firse beemar pad gayi hoon !

vaise yeh puichna toh nahi chahiye...kyoun ki tu toh doc hai...aapna khyal khud rakh sakti hai...!!! Kyun bhai ?? DOcs kya insaan nahi hote??? 😕

phir yeh sab kaise ho gaya...mujhe toh kitna pravachan de rahi thi...ab tere sath yeh kaise ho gaya...!!! apna khyal rakha kar yaar...hamare fav fics ka sawal hai...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Teri toh !! 😆 😆 jaaa !!! Kattiiiiii ! 😛

ab tere ud ki baat karti hun...kyoun ki Yogi k bare me main ek aur note post karungi...okay...😃 hmmm....theek hai !😛

superbbbbbbbbb n mindblowing...one of d best...👏 👏 👏👏 👏 👏

Hogaya???? 😆 😆

raj k thoughts tune itne achhe se likha hai na...ki ab main phir se doubt me hun...tujhe le kar...ki kahin mera shaq jo pahle tere liye tha...voh sahi toh nahi...😛 😉 😛 😉 😛 😉 ho bhi sakta hai !!! 😛

okay...suru se suru karte hain...Juhi...one of my fav actress...!!! meri bhiiiiiiiiiiiiiii !!! I loveeeeeeeeeee Juhi !😃 😃

actually tujhe pata hai voh mujhe kyoun achhi lagti hai...??? us ki comedy ki wajah se...ek dam master piece hai yaar...koi bhi heroine comedy me us k makable kuch bhi nahi...!!! par mujhe aamir-Juhi ki jodi achhi lagti hai...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 egjaaaacttttlllyyyy !!! Same here !!! i too like their pair veryyyyy much !😊

par main mere FAV Aamir ko itna INSIGNIFICANT role nahi desakti na !!! 😛 Issliye usse Shubhankar nahi banaya ! 😊

chalo ek baat tune achhi ki k juhi ko doc bana diya...mujhe toh laga tha ki kahin voh DMG wali hi na ho...!!! par doc Kirti bhi bhi vaisi hi nikli...raj ne bilkul sahi comment kiya...aur us ka bhi connection hai Army se...!!! par us k bhai k bare me jaan kar dukh hua...!!! par us ne jis tarah se puri baat Raj ko kahi...voh jyada imp tha...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Taaalliiyyaaannn???😲 😲 Achcha theek hai ....Thankkkssss ! 😛 😆 😆 😆

vaise raj ko...naina ko le kar aisi galat-fahmi hone ki koi khaash wajah hai kya...??? yeh banda hamesha aise ulta kyoun sochta rahta hai...positive nahi soch sakta hai kya...!!!😕 Arey woh RAJ hai....!!! Itna explaination kaafi hai???? 😆 😆 😆 😆

may b doc kirti sahi kah rahi hai ki' God unhe hi dard dete hai jinhe voh trust karte hai...!!! maine "may b"...kyoun kaha...us pr jyada dhyaan mat de...😆 nahi dena chahu toh bhi chala jaata hai...

Raj ne TV me apne cadets ko itne din k baad dekh kar...khush bhi hua aur dukhi bhi...!!! vaise bhi us ki lyf...un sab k sath hi toh hai...😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Hanky scene baht hi touchy tha...!!! aur aise scenes likhne me toh tu perfect hai hi...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 bass kar yaar ! Aur kitna jhooth bolegi ! 😛 Kuch toh sharam kar !😛 😆 😆😆

par sab se jyada int yeh tha ki Shalini aur Kirti dono best frnd hai...wow...😛 😛 😛 😛 😛 😛

Raj ka naina k sath bite hue dino ko yaad karna...achha tha...par us se jyada achha tha...jis tarah se tum ne use describe kiya hai... was brilliant...aur voh song bhi...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thanks a ton ! 😃

ab dekh...mera bhi comment aa gaya hai...ab jyada late mat karna...ud jaldi se kar dena...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 ummmm????😕 sochti hoon ! 😛

take care😃

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

Ok...ab aate hain Yogi k is spl VM par...😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 hmmm !!! Ab iss comment mein jo part mere liye hai, usse main reply karti hoon aur jo Yogi keliye usse woh reply karegi ! 😛\

Yogi ki main tarif nahi karungi...pakka nahi karungi...!!! jabb bhi tarif karti hun...voh bhadak jati hai...danda le kar mere piche padd jati hai...isiliye main toh pkka...pakka....pakka tarif nahi karungi...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆

vaise tujhe pata hai Mana...yeh Yogi bhi na...ek unique piece hai😆...use chahe kitna bhi torture karo...uff...tak nahi karti...😆!!! mere liye us ne jab TN par siggy banayi thi...maine bhi use baht pakaya tha...par voh itna pakk ne k baad bhi...mera kaam bhi kiya...aur 'thanx' kahne par ek dande se mera sar bhi phodne k liye aa gayi thi...😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 hmmm...main bhi iss EXPEIENCE se gujar chuki hoon ! 😆 😆 😆

vaise hum dono hi lucky hain...hamare itne pakaane k baad bhi voh mushkurate hue...hamara kaam kar leti hai...!!! aur aise Awesome...blowsome sa kaam karti hai ki pucho hi mat...dil karta hai ki bass...samne hoti na...tohhhhhhhhh....!!! well...maine is VM ko dekhne k baad abhi tak kuch toh socha hi hai par voh nahi batayungi...varna mujhe maar dalegi voh...!!! ajeeb ladki hai...achha bolo toh bhadak jati hai...😆

Ab meri friend hai yahi baat uske inn saari " QUALITIES " ko explain karti hai 😛 😆 😆

is VM par main bilkul bhi tarif nahi karungi...lekin sach yeh hai ki LRL ki sari yadain taaza ho gayi...aur is me tum dono ki mehnat hai...Mana ka dimag(jo ki kabhi kabhi jaagta hai😆) aur Yogi ki mehnat...dono hi itna achhe bane hain ki...main kya kahun...??? yeh fic special hai...(kyoun...yeh nahi batayungi😉)...par Yogi k is VM ne ise aur bhi jyada spl bana diya...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 meri fic special hai ya nahi , yeh toh main jaanti...par yeh baat sahi kahi !Yogi ki VM ne sachmein isse SPECIAL bana diya ! 😃

love u Yogi n Mana😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 Love ya 2,3 4 !!!

too gud...n mindblowing work by both of u...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

dekho...maine Yogi ki bilkul bhi tarif nahi ki hai...😆 he he eh!!! 😆 😆 😆 Iska jawaab toh yogi degi ! 😆

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

SUPERB👏, BRILLIANT👏, EXCELLENT👏. One of the best updates that i have read. Tooo Good. and a SPECIAL THANKS for bringing Raj back. 👏OMG !!! sooooooooo many adjectivesssss !!! Thanks a ton Nisha !!! 😃 😃 😃

Raj can sense that something is wrong with naina...that she is in trouble and pain. And this makes him very restless and agitated. He cannot control himself and wants to get to her as soon a possible. well...their love is that strong, isnt it???

He is lucky to have Dr. Keerti and Shubhankar taking care of him. You choice of Juhi for Keerti's role is perfect. Thanks yaar!

Raj is thinking of naina all the time. But how could he think that naina would have moved on in her life.He has lost all hope in life. But really liked the way in which Keerti tries to build his hope again by telling him that God only gives challenges to those who can handle them successfully. I believe in this thought deeply ! 😊

Raj is hesitant to reveal his true identity to Keerti but when he sees his cadets and Naina on TV he is not able to control his emotions. It pains him to see naina in such a fragile condition...too see the void and helplessness in her eyes.

But he is happy to see that his cadets have not forgotten him. Infact they remeber his teachings are have implemented them in their lives. Naina remembers eveything that he had ever told her.Yes he was overwhelmed to see that ! For a person who has lost everything, that was no less than a god's grace...isnt it?

Finally Kirti come to know his true identity and even tells her about her brother Veer.She misses her brother very much but has faced the situation with a lot of courage. And may be she will be able to bring Raj's courage back. She assures her that she trusts him completely and does not believe that he is a murderer.

This world is really a small place...Shalini and Keerti have been friends...no wonder they are both so alike. yep !! And this will definitely help Raj in a special way !

keerti does not want Raj to get addicted to his pain medication and so refuses to give him even though he is in sevier pain. She knows that naina's love is the only medicine that Raj needs. Raj gets lost in Naina's thoughts and forgets everything about his pain. She is his life . Well...I agree that was an exaggeration ! 😛 But...I wanted to show the strength of their love and bonding...

Waiting most eagerly for your next part...please ...please ...continue soon....I'll sweetheart! 😊

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Here comes the reply for update on pg. 70, Hi vertika !!

Good one. Thanks ! 😊

Naina ne accha jhatka diya hai gunny k saath mil kar Lala ko, Major Nair itna khush ho raha tha ki itne acchi khabar sunayega vo but Lala ka dimaag kisi aur baat k pata chalne se jyada kharab ho gaya.

Ab Lala ne socha hai ki Salve k saath mil k fir se Naina ko tabah karega to mujhe lagta hai is baar vo bhool hi jaaye kyounki ab Naina k saath Gunny hai jo aisa kuch nahi hone dega.Bilkul !! 😃 Aur main bhi toh hoonnnn !!! 😛 Mujhe bhool gayi kya???? 😛

Last time to Abhi kuch nahi kar paaya but i am sure this time kuch na kuch vo aur Naina aisa jaroor karenge ki Raj ki begunahi sabit ho jaaye. Abhi???😕 I doubt !! 😕 😆 😆 😆 😆

Naina ek baar fir se Point 1857 gayi hai aur vahan bhi Raj k saath us ko apna naam sunayi de raha tha. Yahi to pyaar hai na us ka jo Raj ko us se kabhi door nahi rehne dega. kitne sahi shabdo mein kaha hai tumne !

Salve ne ek baar fir se Abhi ko mohra banane ki koshish ki hai but i know last time ki tarah Abhi ab kuch gadbad nahi karega. Kuch gadbad ki toh main hoon na, chamaat maarne keliye !

Gunny is really smart us ne Naina k saath us k saare doston ko bhi kar diya aur us ko ye bhi pata tha ki Naina kahin bahar gayi thi. Tabi to us ko ustaad kehte hain na. hmmm !!! 😃

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Ye ek cheej mujhe samajh nahi aayi ki tum ne pg. 82 pe Character Sketch kyoun diya? 😕 😕 😕

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Reply for update on pg. 84.
Raj kabhi bhi Naina se door nahi reh sakta na chahe koi kitne bhi koshish kare, abhi bhi vo ud k naina k hi pass jaana chahta hai par Dr. kirti us ko itne asaani se jaane thode na dengi. Right ! Par jabtak woh theek nahi hojata, woh usse kaise jaane de sakti hai???

Sahi bhi hai, jab tak vo khud theek nahi ho jaayega naina ko kya support kar paayega. Vaise bhi abhi us ka trail fir se shuru hone jaa raha hai, abhi agar vo saamne na hi aaye to accha hai. Right !

Super six , to hain hi best. Humesha ki tarah se ek baar fir vo sab Naina ki help karne aa gaye hain. Ab Naina ko koi dar nahi hai jab us k dost us k saath hain.
Naina sach me brilliant hai, Rajveer ki training ka itna accha asar hua hai ki ab har situation me vo apne aap ko adjust kar le rahi hai. Bus us ko apne emotions pe aur control rakhna hai specially court room me jahan saamne Captain Salve hongi.hmmm.......

Vo kis level tak jaa sakti hai ye baat to sab ko pata hai hi. Yudi ka serail dekhna kisi kaam to aaya na Nandini ka clue mil gaya vahan se. Mujhe doubt tha ki ye agar serial dekh raha hai to vahan se bhi kuch na kuch mil hi jaayega is ko. he he he !! Ab aisehi toh main usse serial dekhne nahi dungi na?? 😆 😆

Sach me Naina k character me itne saare shades hain, achanak se jis tarah se vo gayi hai Abhi k pass aur jis tarah se us ne sab jaana hai Abhi se Nandini k baare me that was fantastic. Thanks...

I think bina Nandini k aaye case me kuch turn nahi aayega so us ka aana must hai. Abhi vaise sahi soch raha tha apne baare me ki he is just useless creature.

He he he !!! Abhi ke baaremein hum sabke khayal kitneeeeeeeeeee milte hai na??? 😆 😆 😆 😆😆

Us ne Raj ko bachane ki koi koshish hi nahi ki thi. Sahi points pakde the na in logon ne ki Salve ne kaise jeeta tha case. sach me Alekh brilliant hai itna tej dimaag hai us ka.hmmm !!! After all apna ALEKH hai yaar !😃

Naina ne sab ko different task de diye hain, i hope ab koi gadbad nahi hogi aur jaldi hi Raj Naina k pass hoga.Inshallah aamen !!! Aise hi kuch bolte hai na???

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

So finally i read the recent update of this fic.
wonderful. 👏 👏 👏 Thanks dear !

Sab se jyada to mai is baat se khush hoon ki as expected vo Raj hi tha. Aur us k baad jis tarah se tum ne ye poora ud Raj k liye bana diya i am happy n satisfied as well. husssshhhh !!! Thank god !! 😛

Keerti is really amazing, ek baat aur Juhi ka selection for the role is just perfect. Itne naugtiness us par hi suit karti hai, bahut sensible n serious nahi acchi lagti vo. thanks yaar !

Raj ka Keerti pe shak karna obvious hai, kyounki jitne secreatly us ne Raj ko yahan pe rakha hua hai bina us k baare me kuch jaane to kisi ko bhi doubt hota na.
Naina k baare me jaana chahti thi vo. Us ka saaman bhi diya us ne aur un sab cheejon me Raj ko bus ek hi cheej chahiye thi, vo bhi Naina ka diya hua hankey.
That was really emotinal when he was in dilemma about Naina. Par agar Keerti ne T.V. on nahi ki hoti to shayad itne dino baad bhi Raj us ko dekh nahi paata.
Us ki Naina aur us k saare cadets ko us ki kahi hue saari baatein word by word yaad hain aur koi bhi abhi tak Raj ko bhool nahi paaya hai. Jo confidence Raj me dikhaya hai unhone that's really superb.
Ab Raj ko is baat ka ehsaas ho gaya ki Naina ne kitna miss kiya hai us ko aur us k bina kya halat ho gayi hai Naina ki. Kabhi bhi vo Raj k against kuch nahi sun sakti. Raj ko iss baat ka ehsaas dilana jaroori tha na !

Keerti bhi apni life me kaafi kuch sufferkar chuki hai, tabhi vo Rajveer ko Veer keh k apne bhai ko yaad kar rahi hai. Shalini hi us ki best friend hai. ek saath itne saare coincidences acche hain na. Chalo...ab agar tumhe achche lage , toh achcha hi hai !

update soon dear. I will !!!😊

Originally posted by: golu_1677

pls cont soon