Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) - Page 43

Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesooooooooooooome..............
superb...........
excellent.......
fantabulous...........
wonderful..........
thanx for the pm............

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

awseom,superb,mindblowing update.loved it. too good.

loved the flashback,

naina changed lots, she is more matrued now....

emotional part.

continue soon,

Originally posted by: prerna1

hey that was really good
plz continue soon

Originally posted by: sania_58

nice update

too good

great going

lekin plz tum Raj ko jaldi wapas le aao

plz continue soon

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Hi guys !!!

main phir aagayi....ek nayiiii bakwaaaaassssss ke saath !! 😆

Actually am in greattttt confusion.....

aur kyunki is fic ko jhelne waale aap log hai, toh aap hi ko mujhe isse bahar nikalna hoga....

Actually the biggesssst problem with this fic for you people( and believe me, for ME as well....) is Raj's absence( still...)

I know aap logo ka temper boil hote hote apne phatne ki kagaar par hai...😛 par maine kuch soch ke iss fic ko likhna start kiya tha....

Raj ke absence ki ek reasoning yeh hai....

Ki Naina ne jab Raj ko itnaaaaaaa " Torture" kiya tha( after shooting him as well...) , toh usse itniiii jaldi khushi kaise mil sakti hai....??

Somewhere I also wanted Naina to prove her worth....

She was just shown as one hec of a stubborn,impulsive, fool sister, jisse sirf apne mission se lena dena hai...nahi Raj se, na apne friends se aur na kisi aur se....🤢

I wanted to modify her character a bit....

Second thing....aaj tak Raj ne, aalekh ne aur uske friends ne itnaaaaa kuch kiya uske liye...

Now I thought it was Naina's turn.....

I want her to do everything she could, to prove Raj innocent and bring him back...

And if you really look at the situation, i dont think it's an easy job, with Lala Gehlot involved in it....

I wanted Naina to appear as she is worth Raj....and even she can do anything for him....

But I also understand you guys....believe me, main bhi Raj ko laane ke liye itniiiiiiiii impatient ho rahi thi, ki maine uske Entry tak yeh fic likh di hai ! 😆

but kyunki maine yeh continuation mein likha hai, i cant exactly tell in ehich UD he'll be coming.......but it will be soon...i can assure that much...

AND NOW MY CONFUSION.....

Maine aap sab ke comments padhe and even I feel sick to keep Raj behind curtains when it's almost 12th part....

So i started re-writing....bringing Raj earlier....

BUT....mujhe khudko bhi read karne mein bilkul bhi interest nahi aaya...

Aisa lag raha tha ki story ka aatma hi chala gaya hai...(believe me am not exaggerating )

But reader's demand bhi toh kuch hota hai...

So now, it's upto you guyss...

1) Should i continue MY version and post what i've written....

This way Raj will be back in 4/5 UDs approx...and I will ENJOY writing too...😕

And onething I assure you, once Raj is back , there will be Raj....Raj and Raj only...😛😉😆

2) Or start writing newer version...😕

Kyunki hum democracy mein rehte hai, so aap sab ka hukum sar aankhopar hoga...

Jaldi apne sujhav deejiye....

Aap jitna jaldi reply karenge, fic utni jaldi Update hogi...

because in case you want to go with my version, toh next UD ready hai...just need to reply to comment s and i'll Update....😊

Originally posted by: esha143

well I must say that it was a nice comeback update.though it was full of flashbacks it was nice this way to show what happened in the past days with these cadets after their return.and all the FBs were good too..........Pooja-Ali's engagement,Aalekh-Neelu's reunion and Yudi's determination to express his love to Shalini and above all Naina's role in all these incidents, everything was very very good. Thanks for liking it esha ! 😃

and then Naina's wait for Raj to return.when I was reading this part of the update I felt that I was actually standing there along with Shalini and was watching her waiting session.it was so sad yaar. I'm glad i could convey her gloom...you dont know how happy I am reading, you actually could visulalise it happening in front of your eyes....😃

and still u think that this fic is becoming stagnant???no dear this fic is NOT STAGNANT but yeah you certainly are IGNORANT abt ur own fic.this fic is simply superb.ur fic at present is at the stage where its showing how the life of Rajveer's fav cadets is without him being with them.and u r expressing urself greatly.so don't even think abt quitting😡and I'm with Sumi,don't dare to quit this fic without letting our RN a chance to have some romance.yaar un dono ko on-screen romance karne ka chance toh nahi mila.kamse kam tum log apne fics mein se ye chance toh mat cheeno bechaaron se.tum ko unpe taras nahi aata hai kya😭?bachchon ko pyaar karne ka ek mauka tak nahi dete??😭😭
Sorry yaar...it's not like like that... And I never said about quitting....it's just that i really felt that way....and well about RN romance....I'M TERRIBLE AT WRITING ROMANTIC !!! But will try...😊

ab ye sab chod aur thoda concentrate kar ideas apne aap aajaayenge.hame koi jaldi nahi hai.jab idea aaye tab likhnaa.lekin isse uncomplete chodne ke baare mein sapne mein bhi mat sochnaa.warna main tumhaare sapnon mein aajaaungi aur mein keh deti hu ki main bohuth daraavni dikhthi hu😈😈😈 bilkul aise hi.
Arey I said i would complete it fast....never leave it incomplete dear...aur tum toh aise bhi bahot pyaari lag rahi ho !😆 😆

now we will wait until u get ur required ideas for the fic,doc😉😆😆........waiting to see u back in action soon.................That will be happening soon ! 😉

Originally posted by: guglu088

Sabse pehle to tujhe maarne ka mann kar raha hai...😡😡😡😡😡😡 Kyun...??? wajah tera update nahi... tera note hai... Tujhe ye fic STAGNANT lag raha hai...???😲😲😲 Teri to khisak gayi hai... apne dimag ke nut bolt tight kara tu... warna bahut pitegi mujhse... aur Sumi aur Esha sahi keh rahe hain... agar RN ko romance karne ka mauka diye bagair tune iss fic ko khatam kiya toh...😡 SORRRRRYYYYYYYYYY !!!!!! *** puppy face ***

Ab update par aate hain...Ohkkk !! ** sigh of relief ***😆 😆

Fantastic update...👏👏👏 Matlab Naina ko chodkar baaki sab kuch fantastic tha... Thanks !😊

Naina has matured a lot in this period... she is solving her friends' problems just like Rajveer used to do... a worthy protegee of a worthy mentor...👏👏👏👏👏👏 Righto !! That's what i wanted to show...Naina is getting to be worthy of raj ! 😊

Loved the flashbacks... the way she helped her friends... thanks to her... pooja and Ali are now engaged... Aalekh and Neelu's problems have been solved... Yudi has now reached upto a decesion... Naina's pain is too much to bear... I especially liked the dialogue ki mai agar cheekh ke bhi kahun to bhi wo meri baat nahi sun sakte... 👏 👏👏 Mai humesha naina se ye maturity dekhna chahti thi... Thanks for liking it dear !! 😃 I am glad I could fulfill your wish !

Naina ka Raj ke room ke saamne ja kar baithna aur line draw karna was very heart touching... 😭😭😭Naina's pain doesn't go unnoticed... Dr. Shalini is a mute spectator to it... Her pain was brilliantly depicted... Very nice song selection...👏👏👏 Thanks a ton again guglu !! 😃 lagta hai poore comment mein bass thanks hi bolti rahungi !! plzzzz tu mujhe chane ke jhaad par chadhana bandh kar ! Agar main gir gayi toh mera ilaaz kaun karega ?

Aur Major Nair ke baare me mai na kahun to hi behtar hai...😡😡😡
yepp !!! 😆

Ab jaldi se continue karo... Waiting to see what you have in store for us in your next update... And what surprise Naina gets on her birthday... along with us... Will be updating soon...hope you'll like it too !

Love
Guglu

😡

Yaar ye kya?? Love bolke angry waala emoticon ??!!! 😆 😆

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Update was very nice. Thanks a lot Nisha...😊

Naina is helping all her friends. She is there to solve their problems and to stand with them during difficult times.

Because of her, Ali and Pooja are engaged, Neelu has been able to forget her past and the misunderstandings between her and alekh have been solved, Yudi has knows that he loves Shalini and knows that what he wants to do now, Yes...Naina is now helping her friends to get their happiness and love....for she now knows , what it is to be away from your love...😊

But Naina is alone and lonely...She misses Rajveer very much...you have described her feelings very well. Thanks a lot...😊

But where is Raj? please being him back. He will be coming soon...😊

continue soon.

Originally posted by: ronojoy_ria

nice part dear plz jaldi se raj ko leekar aao ab intezar nahin hota

plz cont soon