Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) - Page 41

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Posted: 15 years ago
old version definitely. i did this mistake with ihyflm, and ab mujhe usey likhne me bilkul maza nahi ata. its not what i wanted it to be
we can wait for Raj.
jitni bhi likhi hai, usey plz jaldi jaldi post kar dena!
pleaseeee
Sur
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi guys !!!
main phir aagayi....ek nayiiii bakwaaaaassssss ke saath !! 😆
Actually am in greattttt confusion.....
aur kyunki is fic ko jhelne waale aap log hai, toh aap hi ko mujhe isse bahar nikalna hoga....
Actually the biggesssst problem with this fic for you people( and believe me, for ME as well....) is Raj's absence( still...)
I know aap logo ka temper boil hote hote apne phatne ki kagaar par hai...😛 par maine kuch soch ke iss fic ko likhna start kiya tha....
Raj ke absence ki ek reasoning yeh hai....
Ki Naina ne jab Raj ko itnaaaaaaa " Torture" kiya tha( after shooting him as well...) , toh usse itniiii jaldi khushi kaise mil sakti hai....??
Somewhere I also wanted Naina to prove her worth....
She was just shown as one hec of a stubborn,impulsive, fool sister, jisse sirf apne mission se lena dena hai...nahi Raj se, na apne friends se aur na kisi aur se....🤢
I wanted to modify her character a bit....
Second thing....aaj tak Raj ne, aalekh ne aur uske friends ne itnaaaaa kuch kiya uske liye...
Now I thought it was Naina's turn.....
I want her to do everything she could, to prove Raj innocent and bring him back...
And if you really look at the situation, i dont think it's an easy job, with Lala Gehlot involved in it....
I wanted Naina to appear as she is worth Raj....and even she can do anything for him....
But I also understand you guys....believe me, main bhi Raj ko laane ke liye itniiiiiiiii impatient ho rahi thi, ki maine uske Entry tak yeh fic likh di hai ! 😆
but kyunki maine yeh continuation mein likha hai, i cant exactly tell in ehich UD he'll be coming.......but it will be soon...i can assure that much...
AND NOW MY CONFUSION.....
Maine aap sab ke comments padhe and even I feel sick to keep Raj behind curtains when it's almost 12th part....
So i started re-writing....bringing Raj earlier....
BUT....mujhe khudko bhi read karne mein bilkul bhi interest nahi aaya...
Aisa lag raha tha ki story ka aatma hi chala gaya hai...(believe me am not exaggerating )
But reader's demand bhi toh kuch hota hai...
So now, it's upto you guyss...
1) Should i continue MY version and post what i've written....
This way Raj will be back in 4/5 UDs approx...and I will ENJOY writing too...😕
And onething I assure you, once Raj is back , there will be Raj....Raj and Raj only...😛😉😆
2) Or start writing newer version...😕
Kyunki hum democracy mein rehte hai, so aap sab ka hukum sar aankhopar hoga...
Jaldi apne sujhav deejiye....
Aap jitna jaldi reply karenge, fic utni jaldi Update hogi...
because in case you want to go with my version, toh next UD ready hai...just need to reply to comment s and i'll Update....😊
Hi Manali
As a writer its your responsibilty dat the soul of your story is retained.All of us want Raj back but not at the cost of your story..In the end he has to come na so why so much confusion..
Pls stick to your version of story coz den only u can do full justice to Raj.😛..
His entry shud b logical not rushed..I have given my opinion rest is upto u ..
Bye
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Manaa I want u to go along with ur version............readers choice ke saath saath writer's satisfaction naam ki bhi ek cheez hothi hai.....................aur yeh jyaada jaroori hai............jo tum likhne mein enjoy nahi kar sathi usse hum padhne mein kya enjoy kar paayenge?so.......u go along with ur DIL..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi dear
I know that we have all been impatient to have Raj back in the story.
But a writer is entitled to creative freedom...and therefore please continue the story as per your liking. After all this is a democracy and as a writer this is your right.
Will be waiting for your next update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
You should write the version you enjoy writing and we all will definately love that but if yourself was not interested in writing then this fic will not work
plz writw the version you have already wrote
and do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

i think u should continue with what u feel...coz if u won't enjoy writing it'll reflect on ur updates..sooo it's veryyyyyy important that a writer should enjoy wrting....we can wat for raj....afterall we have tolerated him being dead in lrl😭...here we know that he'll be back

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Posted: 15 years ago
You should continue with your version sweetie....!!!! Reasons baaki sab ne de diye hai so I wont waste my energy in typing the same things...>!!!!!! 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

mana dear jaisa ke mainne read kiya i will say that tumne jo soch kar fic ko start kiya tha tum plz usse ko leekar aage baaro dont get upset we all r with u mana

love u mana
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oh yeah....continue wid ur version Mana....4/5 updates is ok....and I hope to get them soon....as u said u hav the story written...😈 😆.....however I hav paid extra attention to the fact that there will Raj n Raj after he gets bak.....so will be w8ing for that....😉

Now democracy bahut hui....jaldi se apna next UD post karo....mujhe jald se jald ye 4/5 parts khatam hote dekhna hai....😆

Luv,
Sumi.
Edited by sumaiya wahid - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
cont.with ur version dear........
just don't forget to pm me.........

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