Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) - Page 44

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

sorry meri ankhen aur jyada kharab ho gayi hai...mujhe yeh ud kuch ajeeb sa lagg raha hai...isiliye soch rahi hun ki comments karun ya nahi...!!! prob yeh hai ki meri ankhon me yeh ud kuch lengthy lag raha hai aur is ka font size bhi chota dikhai de raha hai mujhe...mujhe eye specialist se milna padega...!!! meri ankhen itni kamzor kaise ho gayi... 😆 SHUTTTTTTTT UPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP !!!! Meri taang kheenchne mein bahot mazaa aata hai na tujhe !! 😆 😆 Maam !! Aapki na aankhein bilkulllll theeeek hai !! 😃 Yeh update lengthy hi tha aur iska font size chota...samjhi???😡

chalo koi baat nahi...yeh ud toh asusall lomba nahi tha... offfffoooo !!! kya karu main iss ladki kaa !!! 😆 😆 😆

par jaisa ki mere ankhon ko thodi prob ho gayi hai aur yeh ud thoda lamba lagg raha hai toh main yahi soch kar yeh comment kar deti hun ki yeh ud lamba hai...😆 Teri toh !!😆😆

beautiful ud......👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Ab yeh tu sachmein keh rahi hai na?? ya yeh bhi Nautanki hai??

lekin sab se pahle mera sawal...where is raj...ab is ka jawab yeh mat dena ki 'star gold' par har raat add me aata hai...!!! Yepp !! Mera jawaab wahi tha !😆 😆 😆

main is fic ki baat kar rahi hun...ki chaand kab niklega...??? Chaand toh eid ke din hi niklega ! Ab woh kab hai, yeh tu enquiry kar ke mujhe bata dena !!

mahine me toh ek hi baar amabash hoti hai...par yahan par toh kai dino se hain...aur main apne chaand k intezaar me...bina diet k slim hoti ja rahi hun...!!! itna slim ho jayun ki logon ko dikhai hi na dun...us se pahle plz...Rajveer ko le aayo...😆 Wahi toh main chahti hoon ! 😛 Ki uske aane ke baad TU DIKHAYI HI NA DE ! 😆 😆 😆 Competetion ka sawaal hi nahi phir ! 😆

interesting...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 kya??😆

sabhi naina k bare me soch rahe the ki us ne sab k liye kitna kuch kiya tha...yeh sahi bhi hai...!!! sabhi k dil me naina k liye pyar hai...aur yeh mehsus bhi karr rahe hain ki voh un ki lyf me kitni imp hai...aur yeh is ud ka main point tha...jo tum ne apni shatir dimag se kuch jyada hi achhi tarah se describe kar diya...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thanks a lot ! 😃

ab sabhi naina ka BD manana chahte hain...yeh achhi baat hai...par dekhna BD cake itna achha nahi bana hoga...kyoun ki jo yeh cake banaye ga na...voh bhi hamari tarah raj ko miss kar raha hoga...!!! isiliye plz hamare liye nahi toh jo voh cake banaewala hai us k liye hi sahi par raj ko jaldi se wapas laayo...😆 Priya you got to stop making me laugh uncontrollably !! 😆 😆 😆 warna main type kaise karungi yaar??? 😆

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raj k bina aisa lag raha tha...jaise 'jall bin machli'...par tum ne dur se water dikhaya...matlab voh yaadwala part likha...par buri baat yeh thi ki yeh part bhi tum ne kuch jyada achha hi likh diya...jis ki wajah se main tumhe gali nahi de payi...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Teri gaaliyan bhi mujhe meethi lagti hai !! So agar tu dena chahe, toh bhi it would be useless !! kyunki teri gaaliyan sunne ke baad bhi mera expression yahi rahega ! 😃

aur ek baat jab naina raj ko yaad kar rahi thi na...voh scene itna achhe se likha gaya tha ki main bass yadon me khoi rahi kuch pal tak...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Thanks a ton pri !!! 😃 I am sooooooooooooo glad that you actually could feel it !!😃

mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai...main un dino raat 9:30 par chahe kuch bhi ho jaye...kisi se bhi jhagda karna padd jaye T.V k samne present rahti thi...n voh gun wala part...!!! yadain taza ho gayi...lekin anshuyon k sath...!!! tujhe pata hai meri MOM aur mere bhai bhi yeh serial baht interest k sath dekhte the...!!! in fact meri mom ki bhi fav actor Rajeev hi hai...aur raj k kai sare aise scenes the us me jis me main bhi royi thi...aur meri mom bhi...😃 Wowwww yaar !! cool mom !! MEri mom ko toh TV se hi nafrat thi !! Ab jaakar kuch kuch dekhne lagi hai !😊

aur mujhe pata hai ki tu next part me kya karnewali hai...!!! humain toh bata diya ki next part me kuch khaash hoga...par voh yeh hoga ki phir se raj gayab hoga...aur hum'aayega...aayega' gate gate ud khatam karenge...!!!😆 Kya baat hai !! Kitniiiiiiiiiiiiii achchi tarah se jaanti hai tu mujhe !!😆

tujhe tere lambe...kaale...ghane...balon ki kasam hai Mana...plzzzzzzz Raj ko jaldi se wapas le aa...!!! maine pahle socha ki apni kasamm deti hun...phir socha ki jarur mujh se bhi jyada pyara tujhe tere baal honge...isiliye risk le liya...😆 Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii !!! Mere baalo ko chod de plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz !!! anyways....maine mere baalo ko tantra mantra se suraksha kawach pehna diya hai....mere baalo ko KOIIII kasam nahi lagti !! Aur haan ....yeh baat toh bilkul sahi hai ki I love my hair ! 😆

ab zara jaldi se cont karengi toh...bhagwan aap ka bhala karega...😃

hmmmm......tu Ehsaas UD karde...phir.....😆

P.S* aap ne is fic k bare me jo TIPPANI di hai...us par main pahle hi apna VICHAAR PRAKAT kar chuki hun...PM me...!!! toh mujhe lagta hai ki ab aap k dimag ko kisi bhi safai ki jarurat nahi hai...😃 Ji !! bilkul theek socha aapne ! 😆

Originally posted by: Deepanwita

HI HOW R U? Hi deepa ! I am good ! how about you?

AWESOOOME Thanks a ton yaar ! 😊

TOOOOOO GOOOOOOD Thanks again !😊

BUT RAJ KAHA HAIN. ummmmm...woh toh main abhi nahi bata sakti.....but bahooooot jald aajayega waapis ! 😃

ANYWAYS
UD WAS REALLY SUPERB
MINDBLOWING .. Thanks a zillion for all the compliments dear....glad that you liked it ! 😊

WAITING FOR THE NEXT PART EAGERLY . i'll be updating soon...keep reading ! 😊

LOVE
DEEPA

Love ya too ! 😊

Originally posted by: fanatic 21

simply mindblowing updt......👏👏👏👏 Thanks a ton lipi !! 😃

luved d way naina's strength was shown here......also d way she changed evryones life......👏👏👏👏 Glad that you liked it dear ! 😊

hope she finds her solace(RAJ)soon......👏She will.....definitely !!😊

gr8 updt..... !

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👏 Thanks again !

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

Hi Mana Hey Sur ! 😊

Finally ye fic puri ho hi gai..u know its not that long, par jab bhi mai ye padhne baithti thi, koi na koi a jata tha, aur mujhe uthna padta tha...aur fir mai iska naam bhul jati thi, aur fir dobara vahi kahani. par aj mai soch ke baithi thi k jabtak ye poori nahi padh leti yaha se nahi uthungi.

And see! he he he !! 😆 Really really glad to know that you made it a point to read this fic !😊 thanks ! 😊

Anyways its simply great! very well written, good choice of words and songs, fantastic story.

Bas ab humare hero ko to vapis le ao. I think ab bahut ho gaya ok, its been 12parts and no Raj????

I know wo hospital me hai, but still, you have to bring him back...tum itne din bina Raj ke kaise reh sakti ho?

Thanks again ! And yeah i understand that no Raj for this long time...but he is there naa...in Naina's thoughts ! 😛 okaayyy...jokes apart, he'll be back soon ! 😊

Plz ud asap. I will dear !

Love

Sur

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Hey

Please update soon.

Sabke reservations bhi ab complete ho gaye hai

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Hiii Mana..... Hiiiii Yogi !! 😃

How r u dear ? Bilkul theek !! Tum kaisi ho???😊

I am chooooooooo sorry for commenting sooooo late ....hope mujhe maafi milegi 😊 😊 😊 Bilkul nahi milegi !! 😛 Arey bhaai, maafi toh tab milegi na jab main tumse naraaz hogi? 😛 par main toh bilkul bhi naraaz nahi hoon tumse ! 😃 i know tum India aayi thi right?? Issiliye busy thi ! 😊

Fabulous 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Awesome 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Part

Naina ka vishwas that raj will be back to her dekhke mujhe bahut accha laga.... Thank god ! Tumhe achcha laga !

is muchhad ki to main ..isse naina ko punishment dena ke alawa koi aur kaam nahin hain kya....i hate him 😡 😡

So do i dear ! Aur haan....ab jab ke Raj waha nahi hai toh muchchad ko aur koi kaam nahi hai na! 😛 Issiliye Naina ko pareshaan kar raha hai....😛 ek baar Raj ko aane do , phir iski band bajegi !

Ali aur punjaban ka roka cermony bhi hogaya...aur ye sab naina ki wajah se....usne ali aur pooja ki parents se khudh bat bhi ki n the way how she convinced ali n pooja to do the roka cermony....i loved it n u have written so beautifully .... neelu aur alekh ki problem bhi usne solve kardi...n yudi bhi shalini mam se apne dil ki baat batane ke liye ready hogaya....i really liked the way how naina helped her friends. Thanks a lot for liking it dear ! I was anxious whether u guys will like it or not....thank god you people liked it ! 😊

coming to the last part...naina every night coming infront of rajs room n check karna n her disappoint ment ,aur waha pe ek line draw karna on the lowest brick of the pillar, n how she rememberd raj n her pain ...every thing is fabulously written 👏 👏 👏 👏 the song selection is so nice..perfectly suited. Thanks a ton again ! 😊

Mana ...why u r not bringing raj yaar ...u know how much we all miss him...kam se kam hum sab ko ye to batado aur kitna intezaar karna padega raj ka darshan ke liye... Aur 4-5 UDs...bass !!!

kahi to UTV walon se inspire nahin hogayi...aur raj ko chupa rahi hain hum sab se ...wo UTV wale raj ka movie release nahin karthe aur tu hum ko raj ko jeebhar ke is fic main dekhne ka mauka nahin dethi ho.....toooooooo bad. ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND?????? Tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho kki main un UTV waalo se inspire ho sakti hoon???😲 Un idiots ne itni delay kardi hai movie, ki ab toh mera interest hi nikal gaya hai PGKS se...*** Sigh*** anyways...main aisi bilkullllll nahi hoon...Raj bahot jald aayega....have some more patience dear....

maine teri note bhi padhi...ab main kuch nahin kahungi is ke bare main...kyunki i know ab tak to teri akal tikhane pe agayi hogi.,hamari doston ki wajah se...agar nahin aaya to batadena....sharmana mat ...main yahi pe mera haaton se banaya hua gaaliyon ka mala tumhe pehnane ke liye khadhi hun..tu bas ishara karde. He he he !! 😆 No thanks !!! 😆 😆 😆

aur ab aati hun long update ke pass...do u really think ye long one hain....sach sach batana....mujhe to ye itna lambha nahin lag raha hain 😆 😆 😆...chalo tumhari khushi ke liye is baar mann lethi hun ki ye ud itna short nahin hain. Oye heloooo !! plzzzz haan ! Yeh looooooooong Update hai , alright ?? Tujhe pata hai kitniiiiiiiiii ungliya dukh rahi hai isse type karne ke baad???

chal ab jaldi se continue kar..... aur wo surprise kya hain jaldi bata. ummmmm.....okkkkkk!!! 😊

Originally posted by: guglu088

Darling...

Continue with your own version... We can wait for 4/5 updates but if the soul of the story gets lost and that too because of our demand then even we wont enjoy it... at least not me... So take your time... and post your own version... We will read it with pleasure...

Aur tum na democracy ki baat mat karo... aisi democracy ka kya fayada jisme bhale ke bajaye nuksaan ho... Ab isse aage to mai bolne se rahi warna mai political science ka bhashan jhadne lagungi aur ye post padhkar tumhe aisa lagega ki political Science ka honours paper padh rahi ho... so let it be...

You continue with your own version of MS... 12 parts tak wait kiya hai na hum logon ne... 4/5 parts aur kar lenge... And you are right... even I wanted Naina to prove herself before she gets Rajveer... That's why I started TMS... So I can understand your problem...

Now post the next part soon with "YOUR VERSION"...

Love
Guglu

Originally posted by: Sur_Singhania

old version definitely. i did this mistake with ihyflm, and ab mujhe usey likhne me bilkul maza nahi ata. its not what i wanted it to be

we can wait for Raj.

jitni bhi likhi hai, usey plz jaldi jaldi post kar dena!

pleaseeee

Sur

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Manali

As a writer its your responsibilty dat the soul of your story is retained.All of us want Raj back but not at the cost of your story..In the end he has to come na so why so much confusion..

Pls stick to your version of story coz den only u can do full justice to Raj.😛..

His entry shud b logical not rushed..I have given my opinion rest is upto u ..

Bye