Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) - Page 42

Originally posted by: Revolutionbreez

Hi guys !!!

main phir aagayi....ek nayiiii bakwaaaaassssss ke saath !! 😆

Actually am in greattttt confusion.....

aur kyunki is fic ko jhelne waale aap log hai, toh aap hi ko mujhe isse bahar nikalna hoga....

Actually the biggesssst problem with this fic for you people( and believe me, for ME as well....) is Raj's absence( still...)

I know aap logo ka temper boil hote hote apne phatne ki kagaar par hai...😛 par maine kuch soch ke iss fic ko likhna start kiya tha....

Raj ke absence ki ek reasoning yeh hai....

Ki Naina ne jab Raj ko itnaaaaaaa " Torture" kiya tha( after shooting him as well...) , toh usse itniiii jaldi khushi kaise mil sakti hai....??

Somewhere I also wanted Naina to prove her worth....

She was just shown as one hec of a stubborn,impulsive, fool sister, jisse sirf apne mission se lena dena hai...nahi Raj se, na apne friends se aur na kisi aur se....🤢

I wanted to modify her character a bit....

Second thing....aaj tak Raj ne, aalekh ne aur uske friends ne itnaaaaa kuch kiya uske liye...

Now I thought it was Naina's turn.....

I want her to do everything she could, to prove Raj innocent and bring him back...

And if you really look at the situation, i dont think it's an easy job, with Lala Gehlot involved in it....

I wanted Naina to appear as she is worth Raj....and even she can do anything for him....

But I also understand you guys....believe me, main bhi Raj ko laane ke liye itniiiiiiiii impatient ho rahi thi, ki maine uske Entry tak yeh fic likh di hai ! 😆

but kyunki maine yeh continuation mein likha hai, i cant exactly tell in ehich UD he'll be coming.......but it will be soon...i can assure that much...

AND NOW MY CONFUSION.....

Maine aap sab ke comments padhe and even I feel sick to keep Raj behind curtains when it's almost 12th part....

So i started re-writing....bringing Raj earlier....

BUT....mujhe khudko bhi read karne mein bilkul bhi interest nahi aaya...

Aisa lag raha tha ki story ka aatma hi chala gaya hai...(believe me am not exaggerating )

But reader's demand bhi toh kuch hota hai...

So now, it's upto you guyss...

1) Should i continue MY version and post what i've written....

This way Raj will be back in 4/5 UDs approx...and I will ENJOY writing too...😕

And onething I assure you, once Raj is back , there will be Raj....Raj and Raj only...😛😉😆

2) Or start writing newer version...😕

Kyunki hum democracy mein rehte hai, so aap sab ka hukum sar aankhopar hoga...

Jaldi apne sujhav deejiye....

Aap jitna jaldi reply karenge, fic utni jaldi Update hogi...

because in case you want to go with my version, toh next UD ready hai...just need to reply to comment s and i'll Update....😊

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Hmm....pehle main zara hass leti hu....Sure !!! Suit yourself ,please ! 😆😆

maine sabse pehle place reserve kar diya....😆😆.....and then....ye part utna chhota bhi nahi tha....😛.....which is a gr8 thing for us....😆......lekin inn sab ke bawjud I was abt to attack u.....u knw why?? I'm sure u knw....hai na??😡😆 yeah I know....Sumi ke gussa hone ki sirf ek hi wajah hosakti hai ! 😆😆 And am Sorry dear !!! well...why am I saying sorry, when it's " ME" who will need to face your anger for few more episodes???

Where is Rajveer??? (Didnt u knw this ques??😆)....Ofcourse I knew it....😆 Right since I was writing the part !

pura part kaafi interesting tha....with every1 remembering wat all Naina had done for them....and its a different thing u knw.....and then they were deciding to celebrate her birthday....it was all well n gud....BUT.....😆😆......Raj nahi tha na.....and mujhe laga IS MANA THINKING TO END THIS PART WITHOUT RAJ????????😲 Isse apni jaan ki parwa nahi hai kya???? 😈
Tum aisa soch bhi kaise sakti ho sumi !! Mujhe apni jaan ki parwaah hai , alright? But I know you cant kill me....tumhe thodehi na pata hai ki main kaha rehti hoon? 😆 😆

But then tumhe apni jaan ki kaafi parwa hai yaar.....😆....so tumne wo yaad wala portion dall diya....actually usse mera kaam chalne wala nahi tha.....but it was done BEAUTIFULLY!!!!!! Specially wo pistol wala scene....mujhe yaad aa gaya....jab main TV k samne baith kar cheekh rahi thi...."Wats this Raj???😆".....and "Dont u dare shoot my Raj😳😆".....*sigh*.....yaadein taza ho gayi.....and isiliye tumhe baksh rahi hu....coz wo yaadein bahut spl hai na...😉😉😉 Thanks a ton....both for sparing me...and most importantly for liking the part ! I was in two minds about putting it ....😊

And yeah....this song perfectly fits this situation....as well!!😉 Thanks again Sumi ! 😊

Achha now....no more of my bak bak....subah k chhe baje uth kar main ye likh rahi hu....kisine dekh liya to shamat aa jayegi....😆😆.....tum jaldi se next part ki tayyari karna.....dekhu to sahi....kya much awaited cheez aa rahi hai hamare liye...😉😉....at the end....the usual phrase...."Pls continue soon"....😛.. ohk !! 😆 Well i dont know whether you would like that Special cheez or not...but lets hope so ! 😊

Luv,
Sumi.😛😆
luv ya too !😊

P.S. Mujhe pata tha main tumhare note k pehle comment kar rahi hu....😆😆...isiliye mujhe aur bhi maza aya....😆😆 (I'm getting naughtier day by day😳😆)....lekin note padh ke maza nahi aya........why u feel its stagnant yaar?? Its not....apni khali dimag pe zyada zor mat do....samjhi??😃 Waise....u can end it the way u want to....u c...hamein actually nahi pata how is this fic supposed to end......😆....lekin agar ye bhi...."luv happens...." ki tarah bina kisi RN romance ke khatam ho gaya....to hamein kitni dukh hogi....😕...actually tum na pehle hamein thoda khush karo....phir end karna....ok?😉 Oh good ! tumhe mazaa aaraha tha yeh dekhke ki tumne meri note ke pehle post kiya? 😆 aur I was like...tch..! yeh kya kardiya iss ladki ne ! 😆 lekin phir mujhe bhi hassi aayi !😆 and about the second thing...well khaali dimaag hai na? Issliye hamesh bajta hi rehta hai...😆 Well...i wont end this without RN romance...parrrrrrr....Sumi yaar I am terrriiiiblllleeeee at writing romantic update !!

Originally posted by: nihatri

mindblowing

Originally posted by: saanch_69

Heylo dear... Hey Saanchu !! 😃

The part was really nice...though I was a bit confused for there were so many flashbacks included. ooopsss !! 😆 I got you confused !!😆 Well you can ask me if you need me to clear out something.Actually I wanted to show what happened in past one month in their lives....that's why so many flashbacks !...and thanks for liking the part.😊

Anyways.....my most important question is

WHERE IS RAJVEER???????? OR WHEN IS HE COMING BACK???? Well....he is DEFINITELY there...somewhere and He will be COMING SOON ! 😆

Please do that soon....coz uske bina dil nahi lagta yaar 😭 😭 😭 I know dear !! I'll try and bring him as early as I can ! PROMISEE !!! 😊

Update soon. I will...😊

Luvya
Saanch

Luv ya too dear !😊

Originally posted by: vvdn

Happy Gudi Padwa n New Year to u too. Thanks dear !

nice part..Naina is really a true friend...what she did for her friends r gr8 work.... yeah...I wanted to show NAINA doing something for them...glad that you liked it ! 😊

poor girl she miss Raj soooo much (even v miss him) par tum ho ke Raj ko gayab kar rakha hai..ye part mein bhi vo nahi tha..now waiting for next exiting part. Yaar..I know Raj gayab hai...par yakeen maano jab woh darshan dega na, tab se sirf Raj hi Raj hoga ! 😛

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Dear

how r u??

Am good di !! how about you?

Update was gud... Thanks !😊

Naina is acting like Rajveer n solving all the problems of her friends..Like him she too has the solution of their problem..Be it Yudi,Pooja,Ali or Alekh Raj has always helped dem in their crisis.. yaayyyyyyy !!! Finally SOMEONE noticed THIS !!! That's what I wanted to show....that NAINA IS ACTING LIKE RAJVEER !!! By that I just wanted to show that now she is too full of him and only him ! 😃 Thanks for noticing it diii !!! love you for this !! 😃

So finally Pooja n Ali got engaged..Neelu solved her misunderstanding with Alekh n Yudi knows his destination n all thanks to Naina.. Yup !!

But she herdelf is so lonely..U described her state well n dat song was perfect to express all the unsaid emtions..

She is missing Raj like anything..

Where is he??When will he come back?? He will be coming soon !! 😊

Continue soon

Bye