Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01)

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

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Posted: 15 years ago

#381

Hi Dear

how r u??

Update was gud...

Naina is acting like Rajveer n solving all the problems of her friends..Like him she too has the solution of their problem..Be it Yudi,Pooja,Ali or Alekh Raj has always helped dem in their crisis..

So finally Pooja n Ali got engaged..Neelu solved her misunderstanding with Alekh n Yudi knows his destination n all thanks to Naina..

But she herdelf is so lonely..U described her state well n dat song was perfect to express all the unsaid emtions..

She is missing Raj like anything..

Where is he??When will he come back??

Continue soon

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KrishnaSourav

@AayaTohModiJi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#382

awseom,superb,mindblowing update.loved it. too good.

loved the flashback,

naina changed lots, she is more matrued now....

emotional part.

continue soon,

Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago

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Prerna

@prerna1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#383

hey that was really good
plz continue soon

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sania_58

@sania_58

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Posted: 15 years ago

#384

nice update

too good

great going

lekin plz tum Raj ko jaldi wapas le aao

plz continue soon

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Esha

@esha143

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Posted: 15 years ago

#385

well I must say that it was a nice comeback update.though it was full of flashbacks it was nice this way to show what happened in the past days with these cadets after their return.and all the FBs were good too..........Pooja-Ali's engagement,Aalekh-Neelu's reunion and Yudi's determination to express his love to Shalini and above all Naina's role in all these incidents, everything was very very good.

and then Naina's wait for Raj to return.when I was reading this part of the update I felt that I was actually standing there along with Shalini and was watching her waiting session.it was so sad yaar.and still u think that this fic is becoming stagnant???no dear this fic is NOT STAGNANT but yeah you certainly are IGNORANT abt ur own fic.this fic is simply superb.ur fic at present is at the stage where its showing how the life of Rajveer's fav cadets is without him being with them.and u r expressing urself greatly.so don't even think abt quitting😡and I'm with Sumi,don't dare to quit this fic without letting our RN a chance to have some romance.yaar un dono ko on-screen romance karne ka chance toh nahi mila.kamse kam tum log apne fics mein se ye chance toh mat cheeno bechaaron se.tum ko unpe taras nahi aata hai kya😭?bachchon ko pyaar karne ka ek mauka tak nahi dete??😭😭

ab ye sab chod aur thoda concentrate kar ideas apne aap aajaayenge.hame koi jaldi nahi hai.jab idea aaye tab likhnaa.lekin isse uncomplete chodne ke baare mein sapne mein bhi mat sochnaa.warna main tumhaare sapnon mein aajaaungi aur mein keh deti hu ki main bohuth daraavni dikhthi hu😈😈😈 bilkul aise hi.

now we will wait until u get ur required ideas for the fic,doc😉😆😆........waiting to see u back in action soon.................

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#386

Sabse pehle to tujhe maarne ka mann kar raha hai...😡😡😡😡😡😡 Kyun...??? wajah tera update nahi... tera note hai... Tujhe ye fic STAGNANT lag raha hai...???😲😲😲 Teri to khisak gayi hai... apne dimag ke nut bolt tight kara tu... warna bahut pitegi mujhse... aur Sumi aur Esha sahi keh rahe hain... agar RN ko romance karne ka mauka diye bagair tune iss fic ko khatam kiya toh...😡

Ab update par aate hain...

Fantastic update...👏👏👏 Matlab Naina ko chodkar baaki sab kuch fantastic tha...

Naina has matured a lot in this period... she is solving her friends' problems just like Rajveer used to do... a worthy protegee of a worthy mentor...👏👏👏👏👏👏

Loved the flashbacks... the way she helped her friends... thanks to her... pooja and Ali are now engaged... Aalekh and Neelu's problems have been solved... Yudi has now reached upto a decesion... Naina's pain is too much to bear... I especially liked the dialogue ki mai agar cheekh ke bhi kahun to bhi wo meri baat nahi sun sakte... 👏 👏👏 Mai humesha naina se ye maturity dekhna chahti thi...

Naina ka Raj ke room ke saamne ja kar baithna aur line draw karna was very heart touching... 😭😭😭Naina's pain doesn't go unnoticed... Dr. Shalini is a mute spectator to it... Her pain was brilliantly depicted... Very nice song selection...👏👏👏

Aur Major Nair ke baare me mai na kahun to hi behtar hai...😡😡😡

Ab jaldi se continue karo... Waiting to see what you have in store for us in your next update... And what surprise Naina gets on her birthday... along with us...

Love
Guglu

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#387

Update was very nice.

Naina is helping all her friends. She is there to solve their problems and to stand with them during difficult times.

Because of her, Ali and Pooja are engaged, Neelu has been able to forget her past and the misunderstandings between her and alekh have been solved, Yudi has knows that he loves Shalini and knows that what he wants to do now,

But Naina is alone and lonely...She misses Rajveer very much...you have described her feelings very well.

But where is Raj? please being him back.

continue soon

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 15 years ago

#388

nice part dear plz jaldi se raj ko leekar aao ab intezar nahin hota

plz cont soon

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 15 years ago

#389

sorry meri ankhen aur jyada kharab ho gayi hai...mujhe yeh ud kuch ajeeb sa lagg raha hai...isiliye soch rahi hun ki comments karun ya nahi...!!! prob yeh hai ki meri ankhon me yeh ud kuch lengthy lag raha hai aur is ka font size bhi chota dikhai de raha hai mujhe...mujhe eye specialist se milna padega...!!! meri ankhen itni kamzor kaise ho gayi... 😆

chalo koi baat nahi...yeh ud toh asusall lomba nahi tha...par jaisa ki mere ankhon ko thodi prob ho gayi hai aur yeh ud thoda lamba lagg raha hai toh main yahi soch kar yeh comment kar deti hun ki yeh ud lamba hai...😆

beautiful ud......👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

lekin sab se pahle mera sawal...where is raj...ab is ka jawab yeh mat dena ki 'star gold' par har raat add me aata hai...!!! main is fic ki baat kar rahi hun...ki chaand kab niklega...??? mahine me toh ek hi baar amabash hoti hai...par yahan par toh kai dino se hain...aur main apne chaand k intezaar me...bina diet k slim hoti ja rahi hun...!!! itna slim ho jayun ki logon ko dikhai hi na dun...us se pahle plz...Rajveer ko le aayo...😆

interesting...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

sabhi naina k bare me soch rahe the ki us ne sab k liye kitna kuch kiya tha...yeh sahi bhi hai...!!! sabhi k dil me naina k liye pyar hai...aur yeh mehsus bhi karr rahe hain ki voh un ki lyf me kitni imp hai...aur yeh is ud ka main point tha...jo tum ne apni shatir dimag se kuch jyada hi achhi tarah se describe kar diya...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

ab sabhi naina ka BD manana chahte hain...yeh achhi baat hai...par dekhna BD cake itna achha nahi bana hoga...kyoun ki jo yeh cake banaye ga na...voh bhi hamari tarah raj ko miss kar raha hoga...!!! isiliye plz hamare liye nahi toh jo voh cake banaewala hai us k liye hi sahi par raj ko jaldi se wapas laayo...😆

raj k bina aisa lag raha tha...jaise 'jall bin machli'...par tum ne dur se water dikhaya...matlab voh yaadwala part likha...par buri baat yeh thi ki yeh part bhi tum ne kuch jyada achha hi likh diya...jis ki wajah se main tumhe gali nahi de payi...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

aur ek baat jab naina raj ko yaad kar rahi thi na...voh scene itna achhe se likha gaya tha ki main bass yadon me khoi rahi kuch pal tak...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

mujhe aaj bhi yaad hai...main un dino raat 9:30 par chahe kuch bhi ho jaye...kisi se bhi jhagda karna padd jaye T.V k samne present rahti thi...n voh gun wala part...!!! yadain taza ho gayi...lekin anshuyon k sath...!!! tujhe pata hai meri MOM aur mere bhai bhi yeh serial baht interest k sath dekhte the...!!! in fact meri mom ki bhi fav actor Rajeev hi hai...aur raj k kai sare aise scenes the us me jis me main bhi royi thi...aur meri mom bhi...😃

aur mujhe pata hai ki tu next part me kya karnewali hai...!!! humain toh bata diya ki next part me kuch khaash hoga...par voh yeh hoga ki phir se raj gayab hoga...aur hum'aayega...aayega' gate gate ud khatam karenge...!!!😆

tujhe tere lambe...kaale...ghane...balon ki kasam hai Mana...plzzzzzzz Raj ko jaldi se wapas le aa...!!! maine pahle socha ki apni kasamm deti hun...phir socha ki jarur mujh se bhi jyada pyara tujhe tere baal honge...isiliye risk le liya...😆

ab zara jaldi se cont karengi toh...bhagwan aap ka bhala karega...😃

P.S* aap ne is fic k bare me jo TIPPANI di hai...us par main pahle hi apna VICHAAR PRAKAT kar chuki hun...PM me...!!! toh mujhe lagta hai ki ab aap k dimag ko kisi bhi safai ki jarurat nahi hai...😃

Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago