Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) - Page 33

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi
The update was very good.
Naina is very thankful to have such good friends. they are her biggest support.
Huda naina se bahut pyaar karta hai...par aab who samaj gaya hai ki naina usse kabhi pyaar nahi karegi kyun ki usne sirf Raj se pyaar kiya hai,
Sameera ne huda ko bahut ache se samjaya...She and Huda make a good pair
Naina khush hai ki huda has agreed to be her friend because she does not want to tose his friendship.
Everyone has decieded to pursue their secret mission. Waiting to know what happens next
please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mana jee,
Ye kya hain 😑 😑 😑 shayad aapne tikh se suna nahi oops padha nahi, hum sab ki wish ye hain ki we want our dear raj back n wo bhi bahut jald aur tune ye kya kiya, main is update main jaha bhi dekhun waha sirf huda hi nazar aaraha hain,are yaar kam se kam new year gift hi sochke raj ka ek jhalak dikhathi to tera kya jyata,shukar karo huda ka is part main usne kuch sensible baat ki jiski wajah se tu is baar bachgayi mere haton se
jokes apart, the update was fabulous πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ its really awesome part yaar πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Naina is so lucky to have such a wonderful friends n naina is so glad for that. Huda n surajmukhis convo is really nice ,whatever sameera said to huda regarding pyar is so true"pyar main koi sharte nahi hoti ,jisse hum chahe wo bhi hame chahe",n huda bhi samjhgaya ki naina kabhi bhi usse pyar nahi karegi
naina dont want to loose her friend n its so nice to see that huda promised naina that he will be always there for her as a true friend,n he is so sweet kyun ki usne naina se kaha ki usko uska pyar jaroor milega n raj bahut jaldh waapas aayega
lagtha hain sam loves huda ,i hope huda understand her feelings
sab secret mission ki planning kar rahe hain,i really hope they find raj soon
Thank u mana for the wonderful part as our new year gift πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—πŸ€—
waiting eagerly for the next part,plz update soon
Edited by Sanskruthi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
again short ud...he he he... πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
ud kaisa tha last me batayungi...filhaal ud k bare me kuch khaash tippani dete hain...πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
sach kahun toh LRL me huda mujhe kabhi bhi itna bura nahi laga tha...!!! matlab Raj aur naina k against kiye sare ull-jalul harkat...ko chod kar...aur voh bhi yeh sab tabhi karta tha jab use koi bahka deta tha toh...!!!...kabhi kabhi voh kafi hadh tak achha kaam karta tha. mujhe yaad hai vohi pahla insaan tha...jiss ne yah notice kiya tha ki Abhimanyu... cadets k dil me Rajveer ki jagah lena chahta hai...isiliye voh yeh sab kar raha hai...remember...???πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
rajveer ko bachane k liye voh hi toh naina k sath maidan me kuda tha...jabb raj ko terrorist ne maj nair ne kidnap kiya tha...ali aur pooja toh apne hi prob se uljhe hue the...πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
toh pura dekha jaye toh Huda k paas dimag toh tha...parr voh us ka khul kar ishtemaal nahi karta tha...!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
parr yaahan par tum ne voh kami bhi puri kar di...Huda ko sensible bana diya...!!! sameera aur huda ki lake k paas ki batain sunn kar laga ki sam kuch spl feelings rakhti hai Huda k liye...!!! actually Raj k jane k baad maine voh serial kuch din k liye dekha...phir band kar diya...vaise bhi main un dino Mumbai me thi.
khair point yeh hai ki Huda complitely sudhar gaya hai...!!! matlab kam se kam naina ki taraf se hi sahi...!!! sam ne sahi kaha ki 'pyar me shartain nahi hoti'...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
aur finally huda aur naina k bich me ek achhi khaashi dosti ki suruwat ho hi gayi...!!! mujhe do scenes sab se jyada achhe lage...ek huda n sam aur dushra huda n naina...!!! aur phir huda ko naina se kahna ki uska pyar jarur milega...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
pooja ne jab torch se ali ko signal diya na...mujhe apna LRL yaad aa gaya...!!! tujhe yaad hai na...pooja ne aise torch se ali ko signal diya tha...aur ali ne kaise react kiya tha...aur us par alekh ki vishesh tippani...!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
is ud me tum ne Huda ko ek baht hi achhe point of view se dikhaya hai...isiliye mujhe yeh Ud AWESOME laga...!!!kyoun ki vaise toh voh rajveer ko pasand karta tha...parr ab us ki zimmedari aur bhi badh jati hai apne dost naina k liye...πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
naina aur huda ki dosti...ek damm perfect thi...tum ne huda-sam n huda-naina k scene baht hi achhe se portrait kiya hai...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
huda samajh gaya ki naina sirf raj se pyar karti hai aur naina ne bhi aage badh kar huda ki dosti maangi...yeh scene baht achha isiliye hai...kyoun ki ek taraf kuch hamesha k liye kho raha tha...toh dushri taraf kuch mil bhi raha tha...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
dekh lo dr Mana ud itna chota tha ki main bass Huda huda karti rah gayi...hamare rajveer sir kahan hai...??? ab sabb jab secreat mission par ja hi rahe hain toh plzzz kuch gad-badd mat karna...varna main tujhe phir se kuch bhi gad-bad karne k layak nahi rakhungi...!!!😑 😑 😑
new year ka yeh cake kafi achha tha...bassssss kuch khaash missing tha...sayad tune choc flavour ki jagah vanila flavour dall diya hai isiliye...!!! maate ab toh raham kar do...taki hum bhi biiiiiig Smilllllle de saken...πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
ab jaldi se cont karti hai ki tere kanpatti pe gun lagayun...😑 😑 😑
Edited by Lion_Priya - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!! Thanks shaina!😊

Naina ne decide kar hi liya ke usse jeena hai apne bhai aur apne mentor ko innocent prove karne ke liye aur apne friends ke liye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌyes....
Its great that Naina's fighting spirit is back!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ofcourse! It has to....afterall usse Raj se kiya waada jo poora karna hai...
Naina is so lucky to have such caring friends!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊yes,she is...indeed....
Naina understood that Pooja is angry with her and Pooja broke into sobs hugging her!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭
Naina promised Pooja ke woh dubara aisa kabhi nahi karegi!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
This Pinky swear is too childish and silly and no wonder Aalekh rolled his eyes at this!!!!πŸ€ͺ πŸ€ͺ πŸ€ͺ πŸ€ͺyeah it is childish and silly πŸ˜† but these little things retain our innocence and a small baby lying in everyone's heart...
All of Naina's friends were happy and hugged her and Ali patted her head!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Aalekh did not budge and Neelu had to drag him towards Naina!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 woh bahot gussa jo tha Naina se!
Pooja told Naina ke Neelu ki wajah se hi Naina bach gayi and Neelu hugged her and patted her!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—
Even Aalekh agreed that he could not stay angry with Naina for long and they both hugged!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 Ab Aalekh naina se kitnui der gussa reh paata?
The song is very nice and perfect for them!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 thanks...
Naina and Shalini got tense when BC called Naina to his office!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
It was surprising to see BC's soft side and see him speak to Naina with so much concern and affection!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊haan...thodasa change laaneka socha maine tau ki personality mein...
It felt great to see BC talking about Raj and Navin as his favourites and telling Naina that in his heart he could never believe that his students could be traitors!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
BC said Raj had challenged him that Naina will be the Best Cadet and Naina had to fulfil this challenge!!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊 it's his duty afterall to re-ignite the zeal in his Cadet...
Naina promised that she will her face radiating confidence and radiation!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
The song is very nice and apt for Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 Thanks again.😊
Naina was unable to express her feelings with any words and so she just goes and touched his feet!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
Finally Ali got the chance to tell Naina what he had heard in the van and now Naina is even more sure that Raj is alive!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
Ali and Pooja took Naina to the mosque and Gurudwara to pray for the well being of their Rajveer Sir!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊
After all of this Naina being Naina was back to her normal routine at the academy and her own physical recovery!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
While her friends, Abhi and Shalini are happy to see her recover physically they are concerned about her mental recovery!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€”haan...kahi phirse koi gadbad karli toh???😲
Naina is more serious and aloof than before an all the cheer from her life was lost!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”Apne Raj ke bina kaisi rahegi!
They wanted to bring the smile back on Naina's face and the gang knows that they will have only one chance!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
Geet gata chal banjara aa gaya apne geeton ka pitara lekar!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑Hmmm.....πŸ˜†
Abhimanyu said when they were singing that night Naina made a way for her emotions to flow out and Huda snapped ke uske baad Naina ne apna haath kaat liya!!!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†Sahi kaha na Huda ne! πŸ˜† Emotions kuch jyaada hi 'FLOW" hogaye!!! πŸ˜† Waise bhi Huda ko woh ek aankh nahi bhaata( infact mujhe bhi and I'm sure tumhe bhi! πŸ˜‰ )
Seeing the tree, Naina remembered how Raj had saved her and carried her to her room in his arms!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
The song is very nice and perfect for the situation!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Thanks...
The lines suited each of them very well!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ Thanks a ton dear !!!
Abhi's idea worked and Naina finally laughed at the end!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊Not really...she smiled. Hassi toh uski Raj ke aane ke baad hi lautegi.


Thanks a lot for commenting Shaina...😊
Edited by manatated - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mana darling,

New year aa gaya par abhi tak Raj wapas nahi aaya. Ye toh galat baat hai!!! Mai tumse bahut naraz hun. Par tumhetoh koi fark hi nahi padta hai na. Khair chodo, mai bhi kisse keh rahi hun.

The update was fabulous. Naina has got a great group of friends, though I can never forget what Ali, Pooja and Huda did to her and Raj during that night out.😑 Still I guess they understand her...........

Huda and Sameera had a nice convo. I'm glad she could drive the point home into his brain. And Naina also cleared up the matter with him. Sameera is in love with Huda, I'm sure of it.

Now they are on a secret mission. I hope they find their Rajveer sir soon. Continue asap.

Love
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Posted: 15 years ago

hi mana πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
yaar i just read ur this ff
i am just speechless.....it is wonderfully written πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
i was literally crying while reading ur ff 😭😭😭
but m happy that raj is alive and i know he will come back soon.
plz continue soon and add some scenes of raj too. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
luv preet πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—
Edited by preet09 - 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Lovely part...!!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

Somehow Huda is always a pleasure to read when he talks sense...aur yahan pe toh kuch zyaada hi sensible ho gaya...!!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Secret Mission...this sounds interesting...!!! Update soon...!!!πŸ˜ƒ

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Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Thank u for the new year gift dear.....HAPPY NEW YEAR to u n ur family!!!

But u knw....I missed Raj....lekin tum to kehti ho uske ane me bahut tym hai....*sigh*....koi baat nahi....aaj to uska bahuuuuuuut dose mila mujhe....😳....however I'll be w8ing for his entry!!

Iss UD me mainly Huda hi tha....Sameera ne usse achhe se samjhaya....n then Huda n Naina had a nice talk....gud one....and I guess...Sameera likes him only....it wud be really nice...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

And Aalekh says....'first SECRET mission'....hmm....unhe jaldi se bhejo mission pe....after all issise to Raj wapas aa sakta hai....πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Mana.....tum to samajh hi gayi hogi....meri sui ek hi jagah pe atki hui hai....😳😳....but despite that I loved the UD.....I'm glad Huda-Naina ki baat ho gayi....and she got her frnd bak....and image wali baat bhi gr8 thi!!!

Thanks for the beautiful part....pls continue soon.πŸ˜›


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

Happy new year Manali... πŸ€—
Thanks for the wonderful new year gift...
update is awesome...
so finally Huda understood that Naina can never be his... gud for him...
So sameera loves him... hope huda understands her feelings...
Gud that Naina vlear Huda's all doubt if it ws left any...
Gud that huda finally is ready to become a Naina's frnd... she really needs a true frnd...
so they r planning to search Raj..gr888....hope they find him soon...
nice update...waitin for the next part...
😊

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Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Manali

How r u??
Update was really gud..πŸ˜›
Naina is really lucky to have such gud friends...
Huda itna bhi bura nahin hai jitna hume lagta hai..I think he loves Naina but now he has realized dat she cant b his..
Sameera ne sach kaha ki pyaar mein koi shart nahin hoti bas pyaar hota hai..πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
Naina Huda se sirf doxti chahti hai n ab Huda bhi iss baat ko samjh gaya hai..I think Sameera n Huda ka pair accha rahega??
But I am really missing Raj..Pls bring him back soon..😊I hope dat secret mission is a successπŸ˜›

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