Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) - Page 35

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Posted: 15 years ago
Awe....that was cute!! Par tumhe to pata hi hoga meri sanse badi curiosity kya hai iss part ko leke....hehe. Ya ryt....kya wo unknown shubhchintak Raj hai? 😍 *sigh*....agar hai bhi to tum thodi abhi mujhe bataogi....isiliye main dusre vishay par dhyan deti hu.

Rajveer's cadets r right on track....I hope wo jaldi hi kuch kar paye....and I loved the Aalekh-Naina part....it was reallllllllly cute!!

Aur haan....main na bahut khush hu....Shalini ne Abhi ko confide nahi kiya....haha....and yes....gud to knw Gunny cadets ko backfire k plans sikhata hai....lolz.... Thats cool!!

Now....Pls continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Mana....sweety its so nice of you to update between exams....!!!!
Pls dont worry about our patience...its there only till your exams are on...after that we wont show any mercy...!!!!

The update was fab....!!!! Naina seems to be working hard towards her goal....!!!

And the shubhchintak seems to be Rajveer but we can never be sure...tum writers ke dimaag me aise aise ideas aate hai ke hum tuchch insaan nahi soch sakte....!!!!

Naina ne sahi dose diya Aalekh ko....Hopefully he will succeed in leaving alcohol....!!!



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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Manali
How r u???
Update was really gud..
Naina n her friends decided to find Raj n proove him innocent..😊
Who is this anonymous person who is calling Shalini n writing her letters???
That person is so much concerned abt Naina n other cadets.
I think he is Raj😛
Last part was brilliant..Naina scolded Alekh n he was so guilty abt his drinking habbits...
Finally he decide to quit drinking..😛
i'm really missing Raj...
Continue soon
Bye
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey
Great update👏
Mission secret has officialy commenced. All of them suspect Nair's hand in trapping Raj😡. Yudi is correct the best way to trap the goons is to keep a constant watch on them. 😛
Its good that along with abhi, even gunny is trying to protect the cadets...even teaching them tricks to get back to nair.😉
Who is this shubhchintak helping Shalini? It seems that he is Raj...because he is the only one who can be so concerned about Naina and his cadets.
Finally naina has convinced Alek to give up his drinking. She knows that he would do anything for her.😊
please continue soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: manatated

Dhara and Yogitha were after me, though they are very kind and promised to show mercy on me till my exams are going on, par maine unka patience jyaada kheenchna sahi nahi samjha...kahi toot na jaaye !!!
Yogitha dear, I know you wanted Sirf tum's UD , but this was ready...so...abhi keliye issise kaam chala lo...27th ke baad i'll try to UD sirf tum.😊

Mana dear......thank u so much for giving us such a Nice part 🤗 🤗

Ya i asked u to update sirf tum …but koi baat nahi.... its not at all a problem for me.....its a pleasure for me to read this part .... tumne apni exams ke bich main time nikaal kar u updated for us..yahi mere liye badhi baat hain… love you for this 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey Mana..

superb part yaar 👏 👏 👏 👏
Secret Mission started ..alekh ne sahi kaha mission ki shuruwat mucchad ki cabin se hi shuru karni chahiye ...n chotu ka idea to plant bugs in mucchads room bhi mast tha...
Ab ye shubh chintak to hamara lovely raj ke alawa aur kaun ho saktha hain...ab tum kahogi nahin nahin wo raj nahin koi aur hain.... but main us baat ko mannewali nahin ..cadets ke liye itna concern n the way he said doc to shalini ...i am sure its raj
Shalini bechari to bahut cofused hain ki kaun hain ye anonymous caller upar se wo ye baat kisi ke saath share bhi nahin kar sakthi ....jaldi uski confusion ko dur kardo yaar
ye mucchad to naina ke piche hi padhgaya... kitna torture kar raha tha usse.....ek baar raj ko wapas aane do ...tab dekhna mucchad tera kya haal hoga
Tumme to manna padega mana dear ...tumne doctor hone ka farz bahut acchi tarah se nibhaya are yaar wahi naina ke through tune jabardast class li alekh ki ...aur wo darr kar sharab chodhneke liye mann bhi gaya...jokes apart it was really a nice scene....u have written really well....i love the friendship between naina n alekh
really the whole update is awesome mana..n thank u so much for such a long n lovely part...🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗
i think your exams r gone finish soon so plz update soon
Edited by princessyogitha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was a wonderful part
love the bond Naina and Alekh shared
plz continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Mana...

Beautiful update.👏

It was really nice of you to take time out of your exams and update the next part. And what a beautiful part it was. So the cadets have started their missin- the mission to find out and prove Raj innocent.😊 The cadets are on the right track- its Nair who is behind all this. Finally Nair par sabka shak to gaya. Ab aayega mazaa. Naina ka dimag wakai me tez ho gaya hai, I really loved the way she put the points in favour of Nair's guilt. Aakhir Raj ki protegee hai yaar.😆 😆 😆

Mujhe pura yakin ho raha hai ki wo Raj hai jo Shalini ko pal pal warn kar raha hai. Warna Naina aur baaki cadets ki itni fikar aur kise ho sakti hai?😊

And the scene between Aalekh and Naina was so beautiful and heart touching. Absolutely lovely. Great job Mana.👏 👏 👏.

Waiting for the next part and don't worry we have our atore of patience till your exams are over.

Love
Guglu
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Posted: 15 years ago
luved dis part...or so to say njoyed dis part..

aalekh n naina part was cut and awesome.....

updt soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey
I was watching LRL yestrerday and right now i wanted to read RN ffs and thank u for writing one acully....i was thinking how upset i was when i watched LRL cause Rajveer help Huda get Naina...Thier love story went no where so yeahh......And i guessing by your note this ff will have a happy ending and yes i want a pm thank u....and if i am not ablt to comment i will defenatlyy press the like button.
Star⭐️

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