Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) - Page 31

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

lovely update.continue soon dear.

thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: suhana_dixit

Hi Manali Hi Suhana di!

How r u??? Kaisi lag rahi hoon?? 😃 😃 😃 ekdam fitfat !! hain na!

Update was really gud..😛 thanks!! 😊

aakhir Naina ne decide kar hi liya ki usko ab jeena hai apne friends ke liye aur apne mentor n bhai ko nirdosh saabit karne ke liye...😊😊 that is the spirit👍🏼 but she is really missing Raj n even I'm missing him..😕 That song was really nice...😊😊 Just perfect 👏👏 me too misshing Raj !!! but our Raj himself is 'missing' 😛 Patience....till i find him 😉 And thanks for liking the song!😊

Ali ne Naina ko aakhir sab bata hi diya...Lets see ab kya hota hai..??? hmmm....let's see! 😊

Continue soon yeah...sure.

Bye byeeeee !!!

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Nice part Mana.... Thanks dear!! 😊

par mujhe mera Raj chahiye.....jald se jald!!! Hehe.....sirf uski baaton se pet to bhar jaata hai bas dil nahi bharta.....😳....khair....main apni Raj dhun se bahar aa hi jati hu. Haan baba...jaldi bahar aa. 😛 Kyunki Raj ko aane mein abhi time hai!! Toh abhi uski baato se mann bhar le...pet apne aap bhar jaayega! 😆 😆 😆 😆

The part was written too well..... thanx!!!😃

especially BC surprised me....he was being soooo nice!!! Said such gud things abt Raj n Navin!!! Wow yaar.....u portrayed him in a completely different avatar....hehe haan yaar LRL mein toh BC mujhe meri academy mein yeh nahi chahiye, woh nahi chahiye aisa hi karta tha. kabhi kabhi toh mujhe lagta tha ki woh akela hi rehna chahta hai academy mein ....Naveen ke bhoot ke saath...! 😆 😆 😆

And Geeta gata banjara aa hi gaya apne geeton ka pitara lekar....waise to his idea worked....but phir bhi...wo UD me jitna kam rahe mere liye utni shanti hogi....hehe. I know yaar! main teri bhavnaon ko samajhti hoon! 😆 😆 😆

Waise iss baar bhi main late hu na comment karne me?? Kya kare....I'm very bz na....I knw u understand dear...😃....now c'mon continue soon. ofcourse I understand!! Aur tumne comment ki, yahi mere liye bahot hai!! Samjhi?? issliye no sorry, no worry !! 😃

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Hiii mana''. Hi yogitha !!!😊

Loved this line'. "Meri saansein chal rahi hain Sir''iska matlab aap ho'..yahiin mere aas-paas ho!! Mera dil kehta hai ki hum jald he saath honge!!" Thanks a ton dear !!! 😃

naina is so lucky to have such a caring friends'. Yeah...she indeed is....

jab pehle padha ki b.c naina ko bhulaya'.i was also tensed why he called her''but I was surprised when he spoke to naina with so much concernn affection''.he is so nice in this fic'u have wriiten the whole scene so beautifully Thanks....I felt like giving his persona a new dimension. Glad that you people liked it ! 😊

finally ali ko naina ko wo sab bataneka mauka milgaya jo usne van mein suna''n after that pooja ali took took her to masjid n gurudwara to pray for the well being of raj..n for the success of finding raj''I really hope they find raj soon. Me too hope so! 😉 khair....jokes apart....they need to do lot of things for finding him but.... or will he himself find them???? ummmm....??? think mana think...😕

the song is so nice'n loved the way how every one tried to make naina smile''n akhir mein naina smiled genuinely Thanks ... 😊

totally nice update ''but where is raj?????? Raj??? ummm....ummmm...main kyun batau? 😛 😛 Abhi uski security ki jimmedari mujhpar hai...main aise hi leak nahi kar sakti yeh info! samjhi??? 😛

waiting for the next part eagerly will Update today, most probably!

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

Superb yaar... 👏 👏 👏 Thank chu....!!!! 😃

'meri saansh chal rahi hai...'just WOW...sach me yeh ek aisa line hai jo naina k spirit ko zinda kar rahi hai sab k samne...👏 👏 👏 thanks for liking it dear !! 😃

naina ne finally faishla kar hi liya ki use jeena hai...apne bhai apne mentor aur apne frnds k liye...😃 😃 😃Yesssss !!! finally....huh! what a relief!! Nahi toh ladki ne pareshaan karke rakha tha! 😛

yaar yeh 'pinky swear' kya hai...😕??? matlab 'pinky smile' janti hun...par 'pinky swaer'😕??? yeh pinky koun hai...😕??? Arey..Tujhe bataya na?😆 😆

yaar pahli baar mujhe B>C achhe lage...!!! pahli baar laga ki un k ujde hue chaman k ander bhi kuch achha hai... Kuch nahi tha uske ujde chaman mein!..maine ' cultivate ' kiya hai..😛 Chaman ko khilane keliye 😆 😆 😆 Toh iss ' Green revolution ' ka poora credit mujhe jaata hai! 😆 😆 😆 😆

varna...toh mujhe yeh achha nahi lagta...voh achha nahi lagta...hadh hai yaar...!!! par is fic k B.C achhe hain...Duryodhan toh biulkul bhi nahi lage...kitne pyaar se naina ko samjhaya...!!!😃 😃 😃 haan !! bilkul sahi yaar ! 😆 😆 Mujhe bhi LRL mein kabhi kabhi uska muh bandh karne ka( kabhie kabhie hi toh bolta tha!) mann karta tha! 😆 😆 😆 Issliye socha, thoda change laate hai bande ke personality mein! good that you liked it!

finally Ali ne naina ko sab kuch bata diya...!!! thanxxxx a lottt...ali ko nahi tere liye bol rahi hun...kyoun ki sara kiya dhara toh tera hi hai...!!!😛 😛 😛 haan...😆 😆 😆 😆

Rockford n Dor ka yeh song mera fav hai...😃 😃 😃!!! main kabhi kabhi jab Roti banane k liye kitchen me ghushti hun aur Roti Africa k shaqal ki banti hai toh main bhi apne aap ko himmat dete hue gaati hun 'raah pe kaante bikhre agar'...😆 😆 😆!!! Matlab tu yeh gaana roz gaati hai??? jokes apart...I just love both of these songs!

okkkkk seriously yeh dono songs mere favs hain...😃 😃 😃 Mere bhi!! 😃

toh ab sabhi mil kar raj ko dhundhenge...hope ki hamare hero ki entry jald se jald ho jaye...!!!😃 😃 😃 me too hope so!😉

yaar tu Abhimanyu se gana gava...ya phir dance karwa ya phir 7th floor se niche phenk de...voh mujhe na toh pasand tha aur na hi kabhi hoga...!!! par baki sab k wajah se naina phir se mushkurayi...yeh badi baat hai...😃 😃 😃 main sirf ek hi cheez kar sakti hoon...😆 😆 😆 😆

cont soon...😊 Thankssss!!!

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

awesome part 8,👏 👏 👏 thanks Vertika!! 😃

sorry for being as usual late lateef. koi baat nahi yaar! Aap aayi toh sahi!! Hum toh ussi mein khush hai yaar !😊

jaanti ho na ki mai humesha hi aise karti hoon aur kya karoon meri to adat hi ho gayi hai ab.😆 😆 😆 hmmm....ab yeh toh buri baat hai na? aisi buri aadatein mat daal yaar!...just kiddin..😆

naina ko kuch sochna samajhna to chahiye tha na ki ye sab karna kitne logon ko hurt kar sakta hai kisi ko.😭 😭 😭 Alekh ki to halat hi kharab ho gayi thi na,.😔

😔 😔Vo to soch raha hoga ki ek baar fir vo Naina ko khone jaa raha hai apni ek family ko.😭 😭 😭 Naina is in so much pain yaar....woh kuch bhi sochne samajhne ke haalat mein nahi hai.

Shalu jo kabhi normally naraj nahi hoti hai aaj us ko bhi Naina ki is harkat pe gussa aa raha tha.😲 😲 😲 Aana bhi tha. Par Naina ko sapne me Naveen aur Raj ne ye ehsaas dila diya ki us ne galat kiya tha aur ab us ko fir se ek baar uth k ye ladai ladni hai apne bhai aur apne pyaar k liye.🤗

🤗🤗 Sach hai aur sahi hai Naina ka vishwaas ki kahin nahi gaya hai Raj us ko chod k. haan...woh Naina ko chodke kaha ja sakta hai?😊

Vo yahin hai us k pass aur humesha rahega bhi.😃 😃 😃 Ab Naina Rajveer se kiya hua har vaada nibhayegi i know.

😊 😊 😊 Ofcourse! uska suicide attempt ek bura phase tha, which have now passed...Ab woh Rajveer se kiya har waada nibhayegi!

Next morning Huda was sitting by the lake alone.

" Hi Huda !"

" Arey Surajmukhi tum?"

" Hey! maine tumse kitni baar kaha hai mujhe iss naam se mat pukaro!"

" Aur maine bhi tumse kitni baar kaha hai ki yeh jatt tumhe issi naam se pukarega!"

Sameera Sighed....and finally smiled.

" Aao naa ....baitho. Par yeh bata...tum itni jaldi kaise uth gayee?"

" Tum bhi toh jaldi uthe."

" Oh madam hume training mein jaldi hi uthna hota hai. Soldier banne aaye hai yaha pe!"

" Aur main iss waqt desh ki sabse behtareen military academy mein reh rahi hoon. Toh mujhe bhi in sab cheezo ki aadat honi chahiye naa?" , She said proudly.

Huda smiled.

" Huda kya tum sach much mummyjee se lagayi bet ke liye iss academy mein aaye the?"

" Aur nahi toh kya?"

" Pata nahi. parr mujhe lagta hai ki kuch aur baat bhi hai."

Huda looked at her carefully. Nobody had ever asked him this....beneath his shell of Hudagiri, nobody had peeped, except his phoolan, Rajveer sir and...Aalekh.

" Agar tum nahi batana chahte toh...."

" Nahi. Aisi baat nahi hai. Waise toh mere ghar mein koi kami nahi hai. Daddyjee ke khet aur bhainse sambhalte sambhalte poori zindagi aaram se kat jaati. Parr....meri mummyjee humesha chahti thi...ki main unka JAWAN banoo. Aur Huda apni mummyjee ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai. Bahot pyaar karta hoon main unse. Ek wohi toh hai jo mujhe samajhti hai....jo samajhti hai ki main utna bura nahi hoon jitna.....", He choked. He couldn't complete his sentence.

Not being able to win Naina's love, somewhere..... still pricked him.

" Tum Naina se bahot pyaar karte ho na?"

He just looked at her.

" Huda, ek friend hone ke naate kuch kehna chahti hoon. Bura mat manna. Pyaar hamesha paana hi nahi hota. pyaar mein koi shart nahi hoti ki jise hum chahe woh bhi hame chahe....."

" Sameera...", Sam looked up as he seldom called her by her name, " Kehna aasaan hai....parr....khair chodo. Mujhe training keliye late ho raha hai. Main chalta hoon."

After he left, Sameera said to herself," Main sirf keh nahi rahi hoon Huda....main bhi uss daur se guzar rahi hoon."

And she wiped her tears......

Unknown to both, Naina had visualised the entire thing while she came there for a jog.

She made up her mind for something.....

These days Huda had become little lonlier.... He was at his best while doing his usual Hudagiri and flirting....but still....

One evening he was again sitting by the lake alone, lost in deep thought.

Flashes came in front of his eyes...

This came in front of his eyes again and again....

" Sam theek keh rahi hai......Naina Rajveer Sir se bohot pyaar karti hai....bina kisi umeed ke ki woh bhi usse...", Huda was thinking when a voice broke his chain of thoughts.

" Kya main yaha baith sakti hoon?"

" Arey Phoolan tu? Aana baith..."

Naina sat and again there was a silence....

" Kuch kehna hai phoolan? ", Huda finally asked.

" Nahi....Kuch maangna hai." , Naina replied.

" Mujhse?"

" Haan."

" Maang ke dekh Phoolan. Ye huda toh Phoolan ke liye apni jaan bhi de sakta hai."

" Jaanti hoon. Par mujhe mera Dost chahiye Huda.", She said taking his hand in hers.

He looked at her.

" Huda..main....main tumse Pyaar nahi karti Huda." , she finally said it.

Tears welled up in his eyes.

" Main jaanti hoon ki meri iss baat se tumhe bahot dukh pohocha hai parr...", She looked down biting her lips....trying to gather words to say...

" Huda, Hum kabhi achche dost nahi ban paaye naa? Parr main tumhe khona nahi chahti huda. Mere jindagi mein tumhari ek alag jagah hai Huda....Ek Dost ki.....Ek aisa dost jo apne doston ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai....Jo mujhe gussa bhi dila sakta hai aur hassa bhi sakta hai. Maine jindagi mein hamesha khoya hai Huda......Ab main apna sabse achcha Dost nahi khona chahti." , She pleaded.

Huda wiped her tears and smiled at her.

He held her hands and said," Nahi khoyegi Phoolan....Yeh Amardeep Huda humesha tere saath rahega....ek sachcha dost bankar.....Aur mera kya hai....mujh jaise handsome ko toh koi bhi janaani mil jaayegi ! Par tu humesha Special rahegi! Huda ki pehli aur aakhri Girl .....Friend! mera matlab hai ki Dost jo ke ek ladki hai...", He winked.

Naina broke down in his arms....

" Thanks Huda..."

" Oye Phoolan....dosti ka pehla usool bhul gayi? Dosti mein No sorry....No thank you."

Naina smiled.

" Aur ek baat humesha yaad rakhna...tujhe tera pyaar jaroor milega Phoolan. Rajveer Sir jaroor waapas aayenge !"

Naina nodded.

" Aur ek baat kehna chahti hoon Huda. Tu...tu kabhi mat badalna....."

" Achcha chal....bahot der hogayi hai."

They were walking towards her hostel. When Huda stopped her.

" Woh Phoolan...."

" Kya hua Huda? Kya baat hai?"

" Woh ....yeh dosti waali baat kisiko mat batana please...woh kya hai na Huda ke image ka sawaal hai...!"

" HUDA!!! Tu kabhi nahi sudhrega!"

" Aye le....tune hi toh kaha tha ki Huda tu kabhi mat badalna! Bhul gayi?"

She lightly hit on his arm and headed towards Girl's dorm smiling to herself...and feeling light hearted, as one of the burden was lifted from her heart.

Next morning Huda was searching Sameera all over academy.

Finally he found her near desserter's bell...

" Oye Surajmukhi! ", He called out.

Sameera turned to him.

" Tujhe main kabse dhoondh raha hoon....aur tu yaha hai?"

" Kyun? Kya hua?"

" Tu sahi hai. Pyaar hamesha paana hi nahi hota. Aajse main phoolan se sachchi dosti nibhaunga. Woh toh kabhi meri thi hi nahi. Yeh meri zidd thi,pyaar nahi."

Sameera smiled at him.

" Jo tumne kiya hai na Huda, usse bahot himmat ki jaroorat hoti hai."

" Maine aisa kuch nahi kiya hai. Bass apne dost ki khushi chahi hai. Jo mere saath nahi."

" Tum theek ho?" , she asked concerned.

" Main Huda hoon. Mujhe kya ho sakta hai? Ab meri personality hi kuch aisi hai....mere peeche toh koi bhi janaani pagal ho jayegi. Parr....kya mujhe sachcha saath kabhi milega?"

" Tum haath badhao huda. Thaamne waala apne aap mil jayega."

He looked into her eyes and she into his.....

Finally he broke the eyelock and both of them left the place silently.....

Naina was thinking something, sitting in her room.

Pooja was observing her continuously.

Finally, she asked...

" Kya baat hai Naina? Kya soch rahi hai."

Naina knew that she has to share this with her friends. If there was anyone who was worthy of sharing her thoughts now, then it was her friends.

" Pooji, baat toh hai. Actually main hamare mission ke baare mein soch rahi hoon."

She said in a low voice, after ensuring the door is shut properly.

" Mission?"

" Haan."

" Parr...."

" Kya tu sabko yaha bula sakti hai? Abhi."

Pooja nodded and went to window with her torch.

She signalled Ali with the torch.

Within 15 mins. the four of them entered their room through window.

" Kya baat hai Naina? itni raat ko kyu bulaya apunko?"

Aalekh was worried for her.

She understood and looked at him reassuringly.

" Main theek hoon Aalekh. Maine tum sabko yaha ek khaas baat karne bulaya hai."

" Rajveer Sir ke baarein mein?" , He asked.

She smiled.

Somehow....Aalekh always knows....He just know everything without her required to be said.

" Haan. Hum aise haath par haath dhare nahi baith sakte."

" I think you are right Naina. We need to proove our Sir innocent." , Yudi added.