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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Good part again.πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
BC n Naina ka convo kaffi interesting laga mujhe. I think i should say ki first time BC ko is tarah se dekh k accha laga. He was really behaving like a father with Naina n he shown that he is not that tough from heart. He is also a normal man. Raj n Naveen k liye bhi un ka pyaar saaf pata chala ki kitna pasand karte the BC apne in dono cadets ko.

Naina ko bhi ab ek sahara mil gaya hai ki us ko pata hai ki kabhi BC kaam aa sakte hain us k. Un ko bhi vishwaas hai ki na hi Raj aur na hi Naveen kabhi bhi traitor ho sakte hain. Ek aur acchi baat hue ki ALi ko bhi mauka mil gaya ye batane ka Naina ko ki Raj is still alive. Mujhe vo idea bahut accha laga Masjid n Gurudwaare jaane waala.
Sab k sab Naina ko le k pareshaan hai ki Naina apni zindagi ek baar phir se jeena shuru kar de. Is jagah shayad Abhi ne ek accha idea diya aur is k baad sab ne apni taraf se poori koshish ki. Un sab ki dil se ki gayi koshish bhi safal hue aur Naina thoda sa normal ho gayi hai pehle se. Baaki vo Raj k milne k baad bilkul theek ho jaayegi.
update soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: princessyogitha

Mana jee,

Ye kya hain 😑 😑 😑 shayad aapne tikh se suna nahi oops padha nahi, hum sab ki wish ye hain ki we want our dear raj back n wo bhi bahut jald aur tune ye kya kiya, main is update main jaha bhi dekhun waha sirf huda hi nazar aaraha hain,are yaar kam se kam new year gift hi sochke raj ka ek jhalak dikhathi to tera kya jyata,shukar karo huda ka is part main usne kuch sensible baat ki jiski wajah se tu is baar bachgayi mere haton se
jokes apart, the update was fabulous πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ its really awesome part yaar πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Naina is so lucky to have such a wonderful friends n naina is so glad for that. Huda n surajmukhis convo is really nice ,whatever sameera said to huda regarding pyar is so true"pyar main koi sharte nahi hoti ,jisse hum chahe wo bhi hame chahe",n huda bhi samjhgaya ki naina kabhi bhi usse pyar nahi karegi
naina dont want to loose her friend n its so nice to see that huda promised naina that he will be always there for her as a true friend,n he is so sweet kyun ki usne naina se kaha ki usko uska pyar jaroor milega n raj bahut jaldh waapas aayega
lagtha hain sam loves huda ,i hope huda understand her feelings
sab secret mission ki planning kar rahe hain,i really hope they find raj soon
Thank u mana for the wonderful part as our new year gift πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—πŸ€—
waiting eagerly for the next part,plz update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

again short ud...he he he... πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

ud kaisa tha last me batayungi...filhaal ud k bare me kuch khaash tippani dete hain...πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
sach kahun toh LRL me huda mujhe kabhi bhi itna bura nahi laga tha...!!! matlab Raj aur naina k against kiye sare ull-jalul harkat...ko chod kar...aur voh bhi yeh sab tabhi karta tha jab use koi bahka deta tha toh...!!!...kabhi kabhi voh kafi hadh tak achha kaam karta tha. mujhe yaad hai vohi pahla insaan tha...jiss ne yah notice kiya tha ki Abhimanyu... cadets k dil me Rajveer ki jagah lena chahta hai...isiliye voh yeh sab kar raha hai...remember...???πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
rajveer ko bachane k liye voh hi toh naina k sath maidan me kuda tha...jabb raj ko terrorist ne maj nair ne kidnap kiya tha...ali aur pooja toh apne hi prob se uljhe hue the...πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
toh pura dekha jaye toh Huda k paas dimag toh tha...parr voh us ka khul kar ishtemaal nahi karta tha...!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
parr yaahan par tum ne voh kami bhi puri kar di...Huda ko sensible bana diya...!!! sameera aur huda ki lake k paas ki batain sunn kar laga ki sam kuch spl feelings rakhti hai Huda k liye...!!! actually Raj k jane k baad maine voh serial kuch din k liye dekha...phir band kar diya...vaise bhi main un dino Mumbai me thi.
khair point yeh hai ki Huda complitely sudhar gaya hai...!!! matlab kam se kam naina ki taraf se hi sahi...!!! sam ne sahi kaha ki 'pyar me shartain nahi hoti'...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
aur finally huda aur naina k bich me ek achhi khaashi dosti ki suruwat ho hi gayi...!!! mujhe do scenes sab se jyada achhe lage...ek huda n sam aur dushra huda n naina...!!! aur phir huda ko naina se kahna ki uska pyar jarur milega...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
pooja ne jab torch se ali ko signal diya na...mujhe apna LRL yaad aa gaya...!!! tujhe yaad hai na...pooja ne aise torch se ali ko signal diya tha...aur ali ne kaise react kiya tha...aur us par alekh ki vishesh tippani...!!!πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
is ud me tum ne Huda ko ek baht hi achhe point of view se dikhaya hai...isiliye mujhe yeh Ud AWESOME laga...!!!kyoun ki vaise toh voh rajveer ko pasand karta tha...parr ab us ki zimmedari aur bhi badh jati hai apne dost naina k liye...πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ πŸ˜ƒ
naina aur huda ki dosti...ek damm perfect thi...tum ne huda-sam n huda-naina k scene baht hi achhe se portrait kiya hai...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
huda samajh gaya ki naina sirf raj se pyar karti hai aur naina ne bhi aage badh kar huda ki dosti maangi...yeh scene baht achha isiliye hai...kyoun ki ek taraf kuch hamesha k liye kho raha tha...toh dushri taraf kuch mil bhi raha tha...πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
dekh lo dr Mana ud itna chota tha ki main bass Huda huda karti rah gayi...hamare rajveer sir kahan hai...??? ab sabb jab secreat mission par ja hi rahe hain toh plzzz kuch gad-badd mat karna...varna main tujhe phir se kuch bhi gad-bad karne k layak nahi rakhungi...!!!😑 😑 😑
new year ka yeh cake kafi achha tha...bassssss kuch khaash missing tha...sayad tune choc flavour ki jagah vanila flavour dall diya hai isiliye...!!! maate ab toh raham kar do...taki hum bhi biiiiiig Smilllllle de saken...πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
ab jaldi se cont karti hai ki tere kanpatti pe gun lagayun...😑 😑 😑

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: guglu088

Mana darling,

New year aa gaya par abhi tak Raj wapas nahi aaya. Ye toh galat baat hai!!! Mai tumse bahut naraz hun. Par tumhetoh koi fark hi nahi padta hai na. Khair chodo, mai bhi kisse keh rahi hun.

The update was fabulous. Naina has got a great group of friends, though I can never forget what Ali, Pooja and Huda did to her and Raj during that night out.😑 Still I guess they understand her...........

Huda and Sameera had a nice convo. I'm glad she could drive the point home into his brain. And Naina also cleared up the matter with him. Sameera is in love with Huda, I'm sure of it.

Now they are on a secret mission. I hope they find their Rajveer sir soon. Continue asap.

Love
Guglu

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: preet09


hi mana πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›
yaar i just read ur this ff
i am just speechless.....it is wonderfully written πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
i was literally crying while reading ur ff 😭😭😭
but m happy that raj is alive and i know he will come back soon.
plz continue soon and add some scenes of raj too. πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰
luv preet πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

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Posted: 15 years ago
PART ELEVEN :

" I think you are right Naina. We need to prove our Sir innocent." , Yudi added.

" Aur hame unhe dhoondhna bhi hoga. Ussdin maine van mein jo kuch suna, uske baad toh hamari umeed aur bhi badh gayi hai. Agar Allah ki meherbani rahi toh hum Sir tak jaroor pohochenge.", Ali said.
" Par hame yeh nahi bhulna hai ki hame warn kiya gaya hai ki hum sirf training par dhyaan denge. Agar BC aur Muchchad ko iss baat ki bhanak bhi lag gayi, toh woh hamara connection academy se kaat denge."
There was silence for sometime...
Huda finally said...
" Oye ismein itna sochna kya hai? Meri mummyjee kehti hai....agar Ghee seedhi ungli se naa nikle toh usse tedha karna padhta hai....Agar hum khule aam yeh sab nahi kar sakte, toh chup chup ke hi sahi....Sirjee ko toh hum dhoondhege hi! aur unhe begunaah bhi saabit karenge!"
" Huda sahi bol raha hai. Aaj se hamara pehla woh kya bolte hai ? haan...SECRET mission hai...."
" Haan. Ab kisi pe bharosa nahi kiya jaa sakta. Aaj se hum sab secretively iss mission ko anjaam denge. Aur hame proffesionals ki tarah kaam karna hoga." ,
Naina said ,
" Guyz...hame guide karne ke liye shayad koi na ho....par hamare sir ki teachings hamesha hamare saath hai. Rajveer Sir ka jo humpar Vishwaas tha, wohi hame raah batayega aur hame hamare mission mein kaamyab karega."
" Oye Chak de phatte! " , Pooja whispered enthusiastically and put her hand forward and everybody put their hands together.
Their eyes shining with determination! Faces showing confidence!
" Shuruvaat kahase karni hai?" , Huda asked.
" Muchchad ke cabin se", Aalekh replied.
" Kya??"
" Haan. Apun ko toh saale pe pehle se hi shak tha. Aur phir toh yakeen hogaya. Woh saale ka kuch toh locha hai...."
" Tu sahi keh raha hai aalekh." , Naina nodded affirmatively, " Ab dekhna... Maj.Bharghav ke saath kaun rehta tha? Nair. Dr. Ritu ne kise support kiya tha mere against trial chal raha tha tab? Nair. Rajveer sir se kise dushmani hai? Nair ko. Academy se suspend kiye jaane ke bawajood kaun Principal bana ? Nair! Hamare lautne par kaun khush nahi hai? NAIR!!"
" Aur to aur, jab hum yeh samajh rahe hai ke sameera ke kidnapping mein Lala ka haath ho sakta hai, toh aisa ek hi insaan ho sakta hai academy mein jo uski andar se madad kar raha ho....NAIR!!" , Ali added.
" Saala muchchad! " , Pooja hissed.
" Okay guyz....I got the point!" , Yudi said , " But give me 2 days time!"
" Yeh kya bol raha hai Yudiye?"
" Guys...agar hume Lala aur Nair ko culprit saabit karna hai, toh hume unpe nazar rakhni hogi. Unki activities pe, unki baaton pein...everything! Aur uske liye hume kuch bugs plant karne hoge Nair ke room mein, because uss Lala tak toh hum itni aasani se nahi pohoch sakte."
" Yeh chotu sahi bol raha hai! " , Aalekh said patting his shoulder.
" Chalo phir. Hume ab chalna chahiye. agar pakde gaye toh...."
" Okay."
" Jindabaad !" , Yudi said all of a sudden, to which all of them gave a disgusting look.
" What? Guyz har organisation ka ek motto hota hai toh main..."
Naina smiled and put her hand on his shoulder and said, " Zindabaad....For the TRUTH!!"
Yudi smiled cheekily and all them left....
Naina smiled to herself....her mission had begun!
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One day Shalini received a call on her mobile…

" Hello…"
" Hi... kaisi ho aap?"
" Kaun bol raha hai?"
" Woh important nahi hai... meri baat dhyan se suno."
" Listen first tell me who are you?"
" How are the cadets?"
" Cadets? Who are you? Aur tumhe cadets se kya lena dena?"
"Maine kaha na? main kaun hoon who important nahi hai. Stay alert. Dushman bahot hi chalakh aur powerful hai... Kuch bhi ho sakta hai. Naina aur baaki cadets ka khayal rakhna?"
" Naina? Tum naina ko kaise jaante ho?Dekho tum…."
" Aur apna bhi khayal rakhna. Bye."
And the call was disconnected.
Shalini became tensed.
But........ as if this wasn't enough...... She got a letter two days later…
Which had almost same content.
"
Dear Dr. Shalini,

Main kaun hoon, kyun tumhe yeh letter bhej raha hoon woh jaruri nahi hai… What is important is tum apna aur cadets ka dhyaan rakho.Unki jaan ko khatra hai. Specially Cadet Singh.(Ink blot)

Tumhara Shubhchintak"

Again that anonymous caller called her few days later...
" Doc... Major Nair ke iraade thik nahi hai. Woh Naina ko...Only you can save cadets..."
And the person hung up.
" Uff ! yeh hai kaun? Uska number bhi nahi aata mobile pe... 'Unknown number'…… huh! Aur isse Naina aur cadets ki itni fikr kyun hai? Kahi yeh...... Nahi…… agar Raj hota toh……..parr…… ho bhi sakta hai. Hey bhagwan ! main kya karu?"

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Naina with her friends was working hard to get some clues.
They had planted bugs in Nair's cabin and his quarters.
Pooja and Yudi were trying there best to track the boss(whom they had suspicion that it was Gehlot.) with the help of the mobile number from which he used to call Nair.
They secretly went out to the place of ambush to find some clues under the name of going to Yudi's place.
Neelu had helped them to procure permission this time.
But what they didn't know was Dr.Shalini was getting alert messages, letters, and sometimes calls from some anonymous caller to look after the cadets and Naina in particular.
Even she was trying to find out who this must be.
She had a strong feeling that it was Rajveer....but then he would have given some code from which she would have come to some conclusion.
These days atmosphere of Academy was very polluted......and these messages might be from the Boss,she thought.....

In order to mislead her......That is...once when she will start believing the sender, he/she will mislead them and put the life of cadets and Naina in particular ,in danger.

She couldn't even share this with any of the cadets....because just now they had returned to normal life and she didnt want to overburden them with the worry.
She couldn't bring herself to confide in Abhimanyu.....and Gunny was not so close to her.
So she decided to stay mum about that anonymous caller.
Along with their personal mission, cadets were doing well in their training.
Maj.Nair didn't stop troubling them and made Naina's life almost hell, But she faced it with great courage and patience, coz to complete her mission she needs to stay in the academy, and she can't afford to give Nair a chance to kick her out of the academy.
And then there was Abhi, who used to save her most of the times, from Nair's antics.....and Gunny who used to give her and other cadets all the plans and ideas to backfire Nair's ideas.....also there were her friends to support her...to take care of her and ofcourse Dr. Shalini....who was more like a elder sister to her now.
But it was the determination to prove Rajveer and Naveen innocent that kept her going......
she used to work day and night.....forming strategies, revising Rajveer's teachings, going through his books on strategies which he had given her for referrence......
She was working tirelessly,without caring for her health to fulfill her mission and not to forget Rajveer's wish....that she become the Best Cadet.....
She had to fulfill both the promises made to her Mentor, to her Rajveer Sir, to her love, to Rajveer......

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Naina was walking down the corridor ,when she came to a decision....

" haan...mujhe Aalekh se abhi baat karni chahiye....", She thought and left for Aalekh's room.
When she was about to knock the door she heard....
" Aalekh bhai kabhi toh hamari baat maaniye. Mat peejiye itna. Bass bhi karo. Yeh sharab ekdin aapki jaan legi!"
" Rehne de naa Usool! Dimaag ka dahi mat kar.....Saala ek na ek din sabko marna hai.....Achcha hai naa jo apun ki pyaari sharab apun ko le doobegi...koi saala dushman nahi...", Aalekh joked....
But it flared Naina's anger and she barged into the room.
" Naina aap?", Ali was shocked to see her there like this.
" Kya hua Naina? Koi locha toh nahi hai naa?", Aalekh asked concerned as he could see her red with anger....
" Ali, Tujhe kya padi hai logo ko seekh dene ki?", She asked Ali angrily ignoring Aalekh completely.
Ali was stunned. He could see Naina was furious and as matter dealt with Aalekh, he chose to keep quiet.
" Eh Naina, Kya bol reli hai tu?"
" CHUP KAR! Mat le mera naam! Marna hai na tujhe?"
" Naina...apun to bas..."
" Baat mat kar mujhse Aalekh ! Achcha hua Sir aaj yaha nahi hai. Nahi toh woh seh nahi paate ke unka Favourite Aalekh Desh ke liye nahi, Daru ke liye marna chahta hai!"
" Naina, Aalekh bhai ka woh matlab nahi tha...", Ali tried to intervene.
" Ali....tu issme kuch nahi bolega! Aur tu.......Daaru peeni hai na tujhe? Aur koi tere liye kuch maayine nahi rakhta...hain naa? Naa Neelu, naa aanewaala bachcha....aur na...." , Naina had tears in her eyes ," Aur naa main......Naa Naveen bhaiya ne socha mere baarein mein toh mai tujhse kyun umeed rakhu? Aur tum bhi meri chinta mat karna Ali......Sab chodke chale jaana..."
She sat on the bed,losing all the strength....crying slowly.
Aalekh placed hand on her head but she shoved it angrily.
Then her sight landed on the bottle.
Before anyone could understand what's happening,she got up with speed of lightening and threw the bottle on the floor....it broke....splattering the contents and pieces of glass on the floor....
" Yehi hai na woh daaru....jo tujhe bhatkati hai.....Tu sabko sahi raasta dikha sakta hai Aalekh, par khud....khudke saath kyu bura karna chahta hai? Jawab de mujhe. Aur tere medical reports normal hai yeh kehke kamse kam mujhe toh paagal mat bana....please... unfortunately main utni stupid nahi hoon. Maine Shalini maam ki aur teri baat sun li thi. Unhone kaha hai naa ki alcohol tere liye achcha nahi hai. Toh tu usse chod kyu nahi deta?", She was literally screaming.
She held his collar, and shook him," Kyun marna chahta hai tu? Pehle baat aur thi...par ab?Ab to tere paas jeene ki wajah hai Aalekh. Neelu aur aanewaale bachche ke baaremein toh soch."
She left him abruptly.
" Aalekh....main tujhse kuch kehna chahti hoon....shayad yeh aakhri baar ho....kyunki ab teri choice pe hi sab depend karta hai."
Till then Huda, Yudi and Pooja had come there....
Everyone was silent as Naina was the one, speaking....and Aalekh , the one listening.
Naina spoke with tears in her eyes....

" Yaa toh tu meri baat maan kar dheere dheere hi sahi par sharab chodne ki koshish karega, yaa phir....."

She looked in his eyes, " Aaj se Naina tere liye Mar gayi."

Everyone was shocked to hear this, their breaths caught in their throat.

Aalekh and Naina's friendship was always special...and Now....
But there was only one person who was calm....as usual....
he was looking at Naina quietly....though tears were rolling down his eyes.
When Naina turned to leave, finally after waiting a long for his answer,
" Naina Ruk."
she stopped.
" Tujhe kya lagta hai? Apunka kya faisla hoga."
Naina turned and looked at him.
Everyone was curious about what will happen next.....
" Bol Naina...kya lagta hai tereko?"
" Apunko lagta hai....", Naina started , " Ki tu sharab chod sakta hai.....par apunko nahi." , She completed with a smile.
Aalekh smiled at her and rushed forward to hug her....
" Saala kya Solid waatt lagayi tune apunki ! itna toh kabhi apunke maa ne bhi apunko nahi daanta !"
Naina laughed.
" Whoa chief !", Yudi sighed in relief , " Lad tum dono rahe the aur tension mujhe ho rahi thi !"
" Mujhe nahi Yudiye HAMEIN!!!" , Huda said , " Par maan gaye phoolan ! Ab apna qaidi daaru ki jagah Nimbu paani peeta hua nazar aayega! "
Everyone laughed.
" Chup kar Nautanki!"
" Aur haan...mujhe lagta hai, Chief ko Shalini maam ke paas jaana chahiye....de-addiction theraphy lene!"
" Yudi!!!" , It was Naina ," yeh itna aasaan nahi hai. Woh ekdamse nahi chod sakta....Hamein uski madad karni hai....naa ki uska mazak udaana hai."
" Naina....issmein hum aapki poori madad karenge!" , Ali said.
When everyone started leaving, Aalekh called out...
" Naina."
Naina turned.
" Woh boleto....Thank you."
" Thank you? Woh kisliye?"
Aalekh's eyes welled up...
" Woh boleto....aaj tak kisine apunko aise....", He choked.
Naina went forward and held his hand.
" Tu akela nahi hai Aalekh. Hamare friends hain...Neelu hai....shalini maam, Sureeji.....Aur main.....mere liye tu kya hai Aalekh,yeh shayad main bhi nahi bata sakti. Kya kahu tujhe Aalekh? Best friend kahu ya phir Bhaai? Tu toh usse bhi badhkar hai....Phir kabhi marne ki baat mat karna Aalekh!"
Aalekh hugged her tightly...
" Nahi karega....kabhi nahi karega. Koi tere saath rahein ya na rahein...par apun tera saath kabhi nahi chodega Naina."
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Hi friends !!
I know I havent yet replied to the previous comments....but I have reserved them and will reply to them very soon...
Kinda busy due to exams and all, so thought of posting an update and keep replying for the later...
I thought you people wont mint...now would you? πŸ˜‰
Actually, i was getting bored of studies and all and Priya's yestrdayz TN Update kinda excited me πŸ˜†πŸ˜† πŸ˜† So I thought, I should post an Update too. !!!
Plus Dhara and Yogitha were after me, though they are very kind and promised to show mercy on me till my exams are going on, par maine unka patience jyaada kheenchna sahi nahi samjha...kahi toot na jaaye !!!
Yogitha dear, I know you wanted Sirf tum's UD , but this was ready...so...abhi keliye issise kaam chala lo...27th ke baad i'll try to UD sirf tum.😊
So guys, here is the Update...Now waiting eagerly for your comments and criticism...
Silent readers, please press " Like " button if you find the Update worth reading...
ciao!
mana.πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago
hiiiii mana πŸ˜›

the update was just beautiful ⭐️

cadets are right. raj aur in sab ke saath jo kuch bhi hua us ke liye sirf aur sirf wo nair hi hai. m happy that ki cadets ko us pe shak ho gaya hai and m looking forward to see that what will be there next step.

mujhe lagta hai ki jo insaan shalini ko contact kar raha hai wo raj hi hai. kyunki cadets aur naina ki jitni chinta usko hai utni chinta kisi aur ko ho hi nahin sakti. he loves all of them alot.

that nair will never stop to create problems for naina. but thanks to abhi and gunny. atleast wo to uski help karte hain. i know naina is strong from outside but from her heart, she is really weak and she will do anything to complete raj's mission and to fulfill his dream because she loves him alot. πŸ˜‰

now coming to naina-aalekh scene. that scene was just great πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ It was very beautifully written.i was crying while reading it 😭 😭 😭 but m happy that u end the scene on a happy note πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› That was just superb.

the whole part was just fantastic.⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
plz continue soon
luv preet πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

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Posted: 15 years ago

Sorry for late comment.

wonderful update.naina ne aapna mission suru kar dia and all the cadets naina ke sath hain.
shalin received a phone call, letter also, I guess raj iye sab kar raha hain....
iss nair ko toh, kuch work nehi hain, haar baar naina ka piche para reheta hain, wow, abhi and gunny help naina and save her from nair.
loved scene between ,naina,alekh, and ali,
naina ne bilkul sahi kia and loved to see alekh and naina's bonding.that's very emotional.
continue soon dear.
Edited by PrithviSanyo1 - 15 years ago
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damn cool awesome
superb
update was great
update soon

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