Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) - Page 25

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Update was superb dear asusual 👏 Thank you so much dear😃

👏 ..........n I am sooooooooooo sorry for the late comment It's okay sweetie. I'm glad you commented!!😊

Gunny gave a good reply to major nair s stupid questions'' yeah....woh muchchad bahot udd raha tha Raj nahi hai toh!! toh phir maine gunny ke haatho mein scissor thama di...uske parr kaatne!! Ab Abhi toh kisi kaam ka nahi hai na!!😆😆😆

.ali bechara kitna try kar raha hain uski pass jo precious info hain use sahi logon ko bataneka''.pehle naina ko batana chahtha tha'.tab har kisi ko ussesehi aur ussie waqt urgent kaam yaad aaraha hain '..ab ali ne alekh ke picha pada info batane ke liye ''is mein bhi kamyab nahi ho pa raha hain''.ab tum kitna bhagavogi usko'..jab se wo academy mein wapas aaya bhagtha hi ja raha hain'''pity him yaar aur mouka do usko alekh ko bateneka. Kabhi toh bhaagne de usko!😛 Aaj tak hamesha pooja keliye Rohit ke peeche bhaaga hai...kabhi toh RN ka bhi kaam kar lene de!😛

Shalini discussed the health condition of naina with abhi''aur wo ye baat alekh ke saath discuss karne wala hain. Hmmm. Ab Abhi se toh kuch hone se raha!😆 Sunn ke hi ghabra gaya!!😆 Toh phir Aalekh ke sivay koi option nahi hai na?

Neelu also came n all nainas friends r planning to cheer up her'''too good. Yeah....she needs to be brought out of her shell...

Main 100% sure hu wo last part dream hain''. Haan yaar!😆 Ab yeh toh OPEN secret hain!😆

is dream mein two things hain one is good n one is bad''.pehle good baat kehthi hun''wo hain donon ki confession''.superb''.ab the bad one is kya yaar raj ko mardiya tum ne'.naina to already depressed hain.ab dream bhi aise drepessed wali hona jaroori tha kya''''just kidding''don't take serious ha 😉 Aree jarurat hai! Kyun hai woh tumhe next part mein samajh aajayega! Aur tum jo bhi bolna ho bindaas bol sakti ho! Sorry kehne ki zaroorat nahi! And aur ek baat, main itne sad, serious updates likhti hoon iska matlab main 'Serious ' hoon aur baatein 'seriously' leti hoon....aisa nahi hai!😛 Yakeen nahi hota toh Priya ya Sumi se poochlo!😆
the whole update is beautiful '.. Thanks a ton😊
i love the friend ship between all the cadets''..un sab l ki dard jo apne dost ko aise halat mein dekh ne ki''and they all know that its not easy to make naina forget her pain 'still they didn't give up trying to make her feel better . Yes....their friendship is special!😊

I wish u all the best for your test and I am sure u will pass your spot test n u will get selected for advanced training Thank you.

Ho sake to jaane se pehle update bhi karna. kiya hai na dear😉

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Oh that was a sad touchy part....in writing which u r awesum. yeah...it was.😊 And the second thing you said, I TAKE it as compliment, because mujhe kisi ne kaha hai ki main itna Sad likh rahi hoon ki unko boring lag raha hai😔....but since it's you....I'm sure, it must be compliment.
Raj cud feel Naina in danger....well thats the power of true luv. One question maam!! kya woh Raj hai????
Well, the way u hav portrayed Naina's agony...its simply superb....but dear how many tyms I am gonna tell u this same thing???....hehe.....wat to do....u r just amazing in that. Thanks again, Sumi.😊

W8ing for the next part. Pls continue soon. Yeah...I will.😊


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Oh sad sad things again...!!! yeah...😆 😆 😆 I just hope, you are not getting bored!😊
I surely wasnt expecting this...!!!! Well....thought of doing something unexpected!😉
Anyways I just want you to come back soon and update this so that this sad phase passes...!!!! Tum ne bulaya aur hum chale aaye....😆 😆

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: vvdn

gr8m part...although it's Sad but ur writing makes it nice....Like Naina v all r dying to c Rajveer..hope 2 c him soon

Thanks a lot dear....
And i'm glad that you liked the way i've written...huff !! My efforts paid off! 😃
Even i'm dying to bring him back dear.....just the time is not right.😉
Yeah....ab shayad dua hi kaam aaye Raj ko waapis laane mein....!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!!Awesome!!!!! Thanx !😊

Everything was on fire and Rajveer rose from that but before she could reach him a black cloud engulfed him!!!!!

It reminded me of Sunaina's fic Right Left Right!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina finally woke up calling his name and sweating badly!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔Poor her!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Neelu really wishes for Naina's hapiness as Naina was not only her friend but her sister-in-law!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊yeah...she shares double relation with her....

Naina saw Raj standing there and they hugged each other fiercely crying!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 she is seeing Raj...Raj...and Raj...everywhere...

Naina was worried but Raj said he cares for no one now and wants nothing except her!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Raj confessed his love for her and Naina closed her eyes to let them sink in her!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

But when Naina wanted to confess her love for him he was gone!!!!!

The song is very nice and perfect for Naina!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Thanks again...

Its just not possible for Naina to live without Raj and she wants to go to him!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔 😔

She loses her faith and strength and her depression is growing stronger and she can no longer control her grief!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj has left her in this cruel world on her own!!!!!

Naina said that she is coming and saw the only way out was to end her life!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 She is in severe depression....she can go to any limits...

She kissed her watch given by Raj and cut her wrist and smiled in anticipation of seeing him!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

The way Naina's agony was portrayed is simply superb!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Thanks a ton again!😊

Raj is far away from her but still he can feel her pain in him!!!!! Thats the power of true love!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏uhhh...is it Raj?😕

That why he got up with a jerk while sleeping!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

He wants to go to Naina and help her because for him Naina is his world!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Keerti slapped him to bring him to his senses and injected a transquiliser!!!!!!

Keerti is also feeling sad seeing his condition!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Neelu was shocked seeing Naina in a pool of blood!!!!!😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲Obviously !! she had not at all expected this...

Her voice was curbed and after attempting only she could scream!!!! She was in immense shock to speak anything...

Thank God Neelu came on time and her friends were there warna pata nahi kya hota??😔 😔 😔 😔 Arey main chali jaati na...😆

Now Shalini is attending to her while Neelu rushed to inform Aalekh!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊She is truly Aalekh's partner! Using her senses!!

Naina tried to commit suicide just to go to her Raj, her love is truly the greatest and purest of all!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 Yes...it is...😊


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Very nice, emotional but superb part.Continue soon dear.

Thanks dear....😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was really nice
plz continue soon

Thanks a ton Prerna...
Yeah...i'll continue soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Part 6 was really sentimental aur kuch had tak accha bhi tha.

thanks for liking it.😊

Naina ki health fall hoti jaa rahi hai aur us ladki ko is baare me chinta nahi hai jab ki us k saare dost us ki is condition se pareshaan hain. Uss ladki ko sirf Raj...Raj..aur Raj ka hi khayal hai...
Only Alekh can do something in this i know, kyounki Naina kisi aur ki baat to sunegi nahi na. Exactly...parr baaki friends bhi toh chup chap nahi baithenge na?

Ab Neelu aayi hai na to i hope shayad vo kuch kamaal kar paaye jis se Naina ki helath bhi theek ho jaaye aur vo mentally fit bhi ho jaaye jo filhaal jyada jaroori hai us k liye. Neelu ek happy going personality hain na...toh hope so she'll bring some cheer to her life...
Naina kitna horror dream dekh rahi thi Raj k liye,but ye sab us ki imagination hai bus we know Raj theek hai ab. ofcourse!!😆😆

Naina ko kuch dino k liye ek break chahiye in sab cheejon se i think. Parr waha se bhaag kar bhi toh kaha jaayegi? woh kahi bhi jaaye.....Raj ki yaadein thodehi na uska peecha chodegi!


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Good recent one. 👏 👏 👏 Thanks yaar😊


Naina is bearing so much pain to which she is not able to express with anyone, sometime may be Alekh but not always.

She is thinking that her Rajveer has left her forever but she is still feeling him around her. Same thing is happening with Rajveer in Sanjeevni.well....is that Raj? and that's not Sanjeevni dear...it's City Hospital...

He is far away from her but still he can feel her pain in him. That's y he got up with a jerk while sleeping. Kirti is also feeling sad seeing his poor condition.

Y did Naina do this? It's not good to suicide like this. It's because She was in severe depression....she could go to any level...she doesn't know what's right and what's wrong...
Thank god Neelu came there on time n so her good friends otherwise God knows what's goona happen.

continue soon. yeah..

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Hi Mana..... Hi yogitha!😃
Awesome part although its a sad one u described the pain of naina really well. Thanks again dear....
poor naina........how much moreshe has to suffer......Well there are some people who have to suffer a whole lot equal to their lifetime at a very early age...I call them God's Special ones...😃 Naina is one such God's Special one !!!😃
hope every thing will be ok. It will be....trust me!
plz continue soon dear. Yeah...Sure.😊

Edited by manatated - 15 years ago

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