Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) - Page 27

Hiiiiii mana…….

U r really a sweet heart….aise hi apni fics ko fast fast update karte rehna.... n why do u think we readers have a problem with your fast updates……we enjoy it

Coming to the update it is fabulous part …..emotional part tha …..phir bhi I liked the update so much…n u r right…..this one is needed

Alekhs reaction when he came to know about naina is just perfect…all nainas friends r worried about her….. the way alekh spoke to naina ……u described it beautifully

N the dream ….naina imagining raj …..its wonderful n the last lines told by naina they r awesome… the song is perfect

Totally good work mana

Plz continue soon

Wonderful,superb update.Too good.It's very emotional part dear.

that was amazing
plz continue soon

Hi MAnali..how r u??hope u enjoyed ur trip..😊
ohh god... scary update yaar... ye kya kiya Naina ne..!!! apni wrist kaat di...ye ladki bhi na...
neverBut gud that she understood...she will never do anything like this stupid again..!! what if something happened to her?? what wud poor Raj do? thank god she is alive ..
chalo dream mein hi sahi but Raj ne use sahi raasta to dikhaaya...!!!!
nice update... dream seq. ws really gud... 👏
Waiting for the next part... 😊

brilliant part.........just loved.......


specially d dream part....

also liked d aalekh part wer he says "ro raha hoga woh"toooo goood....also liked d way he cared for her.....truely emotional yet amazing....

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Great part Mana. 👏👏 ..Rona aaya fir bhir bhi keh rahi hun great part...!!! ⭐️
⭐️ Thanks dhara...😊 I know main tum sab ko kuch jyaada hi rula rahi hoon, hopefully, jaldihi tum logo ko hassa saku...😛 bass darti hoon, ki kahin aisa na ho ki tum log meri fic dislike karna start kardo aur main rone lag jaaon😉

RN Itne emotional dialouges ke beech me mujhe hasi aayi 😆😆 ...shayad dono bhul gaye the ke saath me Navin bhi khada hai ya fir they took him for granted ke bhoot hai, ab kya kar lega...!!!! 😃 Arey yaar! Main Navin ko toh bhool hi gayi😆 😆 Believe me! .......... ..... 😆 😆 LITERALLY bhool gayi thi ! 😆 Agar tum point out nahi karti toh mujhe yeh mistake samajh hi nahi aati!😆 Oh god! tum nahi jaanti yeh padhne ke baad main khud 15 min hass rahi thi apney aap par!😆 But ....like you rightfully said....bhoot hai, ab kya karlega...!!!🤣

And me toh bolkul bhi nahi soch rahi ke tum itni jaldi ud kyun kar rahi...instead I m hoping that other dimaagless people also learn something from you😛😛...Waise I hope you arent updating so soon to come out of that category...!!! 😃 Okiess!! Toh i surely have you to be on my side when I update early and wen i'm mad at my kind for not updating early then!😆 And ofcourse not dear! Kismat ne category tay kardi hai!! Ab waha se bahar nikalna toh mushkil hi nahi ,namumkin hai !! Aur agar main nikalna chahu, toh woh dono mujhe nikalne nahi degi !!😛 Par sach batau? mera bhi mann nahi karta waha se nikalne ka!!😃

Originally posted by: sumaiya wahid

Firstly I want to knw....wat do u mean by tumne abhi tak nahi socha Raj kaha hai??😡 U mean hamara Raj abhi bhi bhatak raha hai and tumne abhi uska thikana decide nahi kiya???😲😲😲....So Bad Mana!!!😲😲

He he he...Sumi....i exactly mean that 😆 😆....uh..uuh...not exactly !!😆 😆 Aur tum gussa mat ho yaar ! Afterall....i'm not that 'bad' hmmm?😉

Khair.....jaldi UD karne k liye zyada sorry feel karne k zarurat nahi coz hum readers ko aisi gustakhiyan pasand hai....😆😆Ohhkkkk!😃

Coming to the part....it was awesum. And u r ryt....this part was needed....to show the feelings n emotions...everything had to be showed n u did it perfectly....no doubt abt that.👏Glad that you feel the same...and thanks for liking it....😃 Just one/two 'filler' parts and then hopefully we will see some 'Action' !!....wat say?😃

Naina imagining Raj.....that scene was beautiful....the descriptions were wonderful.😛😛Thank chu!😊

Song selection is just perfect.....n u added those dialogues.....just reminded me of RAJVEER....*sigh*.....it was just amazing dear. Lagta hai ab tumhare fics par comment karne se pehle mujhe apni vocabulary enrich karni padegi....kab tak awesum n wonderful se kaam chalaungi....😆😆awww!!! Thank u thank u thank u!!! Vocabulary to mujhe enrich karni padegi! Kab tak tumhare in sweet comments par 'Thank you ' se kaam chalaungi??😊 And i really hoped...kaash LRL mein aur jyaada RN scenes hote...toh main zara apne characters ke sapno mein aur imaginations mein variety laati yaar...😆 Abhi unhi sabse kaam chalana padega! Hopefully tum bore na hojao!!😛

Ab maine jaldi se comment kar diya....and baki comments bhi jaldi aa jayenge....phir tum jaldi se UD karna....me w8ing eagerly. And yes not mention, jaldi se Raj k whereabouts pata karo.....jaldi!!!😉Tumhara comment jaldi na aaye toh main restless hojati hoon! Outbox check karti hoon...ki tumne pm padha ya nahi?😆 aur haan...main jaldihi UD karungi, kyunki ab mujhe pata chal gaya hai ki you people 'really' don't mind me updating early..😆 And yess boss!! Raj ka thikana pata karti hoon....2 reasons....sabse pehla and mosht important....mujhe zinda rehna hai ! 😆 and second....usse waapis lana hai...😛