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Posted: 15 years ago
the update was very emotional.
Naina has tried to cope without raj...but she thinks that it is just not possible for her to live without raj. She losses her faith and strength...her depression is growing stronger and she can no longer control her grief. She wants to end her life. You have described her emotions very well
Raj can feels that naina is in trouble and he wants to go and help her...because for him...naina is his world.
waiting to know what happens next. please continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Oops sorry!! for wrong post

Edited by manatated - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

hello doc... 😃 Haai!!😆😆

yeh comment hain part 4 ka ohhk!!
finally main aa hi gayi aap k clinic me...!!! 😃 Dhanya bhaag hamare,jo aap yaha padhare!!😃
'ab dava de humain ya tu de de zahar
tere mahfil me yeh diljale aaye hain.
ek ehsaan kar...
apne mehmaan par
apne mehmaan par ek ehsaan kar
de duyaayain tujhe umar bhar k liye'😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Waah waah!! Waah Waah !! Subhan allah!!😆😆
EHSAAN yeh hoga ki ma'am ab toh hamare capt sir ko khulaam khulla laao...😛 Kyaa??😲 Par kahase laau? Tumhare Captn Sir toh kisi dukaan pe milte nahi jo khareed lu aur le aau😛!
khair doc toh hote hi aise hain thodi si sardi hui hogi toh voh ek itna bada ajeeb sa naam bolenge...ki patient ko lagega ki mera tym pura ho hi gaya...!!! confusions dilane me doctors mahir hote hain...aur tum toh 1 kadam aage nikli...!!! par mujhe pata hai ki voh koi aur nahin bal ki capt sir hi hain. kyoun ki jaise hi naina ne rajveer kaha voh insaan ne bhi naina ka naam liya...!!! toh mujhe .1857 ka voh scene yaad aaya jab un dono ne ek dushre ka naam liya tha. ab mera 6th sence toh yahi kahta hai.😉 😉 😉 😉 😉 😉Arey waah! Bahot achchese pehchanne lag gayi docs ko! Aur pehchanegi bhi kyun nahi? Apni harkaton se Hospital ko ' Second Home ' jo bana liya hai!! 😆😆 Aur haan! 6th Sense chod aur apne ' 5 Senses ' ko eksaath thikane pe rakh kar chala kar meri maa, warna phir koi stunt scene karlegi!!😆
aur jahan tak navin ka sawal hai...main bilkul bhi doubt nahin kar rahi hun ki voh naveen hai. kyoun ki bhai log jab bhi bimar me padte hain tab behn ko yaad bilkul nahin karte...unhe koi aur yaad aata hoga. ab mere bhi do do pahlwan bhai hain...toh thoda idea toh hai hi na...!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Aree tere pahlwan bhaiyon ke paas koi aur hoga yaad karne keliye! Ab bechare Naveen ke paas to koi nahi hain naa?😆 Aur i'm Sure Woh coma mein bhi Ritu ke naamse hi kaampta hoga!😆
toh dr kirti n subhankar bhi hain is me...DMG wale na...!!! maine mushkil se us show k 2 ya 4 epis dekhe honge. khair tum ne yeh bilkul thik kiya hai ...mera Raj bach gaya...!!! matlab kirti k liye subhankar hai toh mere raj par us ki nazar toh nahin padegi at least...!!! 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Arey ab khud ka naam toh nahi likh sakti na? Meri cousins yeh serial dekhti hai.....main toh tolerate nahi kar sakti baba!😆😆 Unhise suna the Kirti ke baare mein....Aur kyunki yeh fic DMG nahi hai, issliye zaroori nahi ki Kirti-shubhankar saath ho! Samjhi?😛
aur ek req yeh amnesia ka prob yahan mat rakhna plz...!!! voh toh KEKTA MAATE k serial dekhne par hota hai na. 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Oh Puhleeezzzz!! Kya mera standard itna gira hua samajh rakha hai?
ab mujhe 'baalon wale bhai sahab' k bare me kuch nahin kahan. suna hai ab voh bina kast kiye baap ban gaye hain aur bachhe paal rahe hain. jab us ki entry hui thi is serial me tumne dekha tha...us ki entry kitni funny thi...hala ki DJ's toh use action k sath lana chahte the...par voh scene funny ban gaya. isiliye mujhe use rote hue bhi dekh kar hassi aati hai.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Same here!! Aur uss show mein toh bachchon ne uski band bajayi hui hai, par woh waha bhi AKAD dikhane se nahi chukta! Aur mujhe usse deekhkar waise toh gussa chadhta hai, par haan....rote hue dekhkar sachimein hassi aati hai😆😆
Ali ko kuch toh pata chala...ab voh is bare naina ko bata dega toh naina ka bishwas jeet jayega. vaise terorists maar gaye...achha hi hua...koun sa bach kar duniya ka bhala karte. bojh kam ho gaya...dharti par...aur population bhi.😛Hmmmmm.....
muchhad hass raha tha...!!! hassne de...vaise har villan marne se pahle toh hassta hi hai.😛 Sahi kaha madam! woh kya kehtein hai....Har diya bujne se pehle phadphadata hai!😆😆
ab main next ud par jati hun.😃 Arey arey abhi tak yahi ho? chalo jaldi next update pe!

Edited by manatated - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

yeh raha 5th ka comment... Jee madam...farmaiye...😃
ab humain ullu bana na band kar... le...mujhe kya zaroorat hai?😉
mujhe pata chal gaya hai ki dr kirti k paas koi aur nahin balki hamare pyar capt rajveer hi hain. aur dr kirti ne toh lag bhag unhi ka naam unhe hi de diya...yeh toh sach me kamal hi ho gaya.😛 😛 😛 Tum khud ko Aalekh ki tarah ' Antaryami' samajh rahi ho??😆 Maine start me hi kaha...when i thought about the story...it came very different. Par main samajh sakti hoon....Ek toh tum( Hum!!) Raj ke deewane...😛 Uparse Aalekh ka itna achcha character!! Kabhi kabhi moh ho jaata hai....😛 😆
pata hai jab bhi is fic me hospital scenes padh rahi thi na....toh mujhe yakeen hota ja raha tha ki tum sach me ek doc ho...!!! kirti jis tarh se raj ko treat kar rahi thi...us se pata bhi chal raha tha ki is fic ki writer ek doc hi hai.😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Toh tume abtak doubt tha???😲 Ya mujhe jhootha samajh rahi thi!😡 Arey...bas yahi sun na baaki tha!! 😭 Maine toh tumhe apni ASLI pehchaan bhi batayi😉 Aur phir bhi tum....
cadets phir se apne purane action me aa gaye...!!! is baar meri taraf se un sab ko ek msg de dena ki un ki training khatam hone tak kam se kam ek baar muchhad ki band toh bajaye hi...!!! taki muchhad zindagi bhar yaad rakhe...!!!😛 😛 😛 Yes...Cadets are back to their self again...Waise maine unhe exactly yahi kaha hai....par tumhara msg bhi dedungi....kya hai naa, thoda zor padega!😆
pata hai mujhe sab se jyada koun sa scene achha laga...!!! Kaunsa??
guess karo...guess karo...!!! Ummmm.....ummm....
kya hua nahin kar pa rahi ho...!!! Nahin.....
thik hai main bata deti hun...jab kirti ne raj se yeh pucha ki kya naina us ki wife hai toh raj k chehere par aayi voh millon dollar smile mera fav scene tha... jis ko padh kar mere dil vohi kaha jo roz tum se kahta hai..."haiiiiii"😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 Haiiii! Woh smile toh sachmein pyaari thi...Agar woh Raj ki hoti toh......haiii!😳
ali ko batane do na yaar...!!! kab se naina k piche bhaag raha hai...bichara...!!! Aise kaise batane doo? Itniiiiiiii Asaani se? Waise usool bhaai ko bhi thodi bhaag daud karne do! Aaj tak pooja keliye Rohit ke peeche bhaage, ab thoda apney Captn Sir keliye Naina ke peeche bhagega toh kaunsa pahaad toot padega? Yaa...padega....😕
n raj k sare dails jo naina ko sunai de rahe the...jab main padh rahi thi na...toh mere dimag me already voh scenes chal rahe the...!!!😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
Chalo achcha hua...😃 main toh soch rahi thi ki kaash yeh video hota....par ab tumhe aisehi dikh raha hai..toh aur bhi achcha hai!😃
AWESOME ONE...👏 👏 👏 Dhanyawaad !!!😃

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

yaar tujh pe baht gussa aa raha hai...aur Ali pe pyar...!!! Tu toh hamesha mujhpe gussa karti rehti hai....Aur Ali pe pyaar mat aane de warna Punjaban tujhe Hockey stick ka jalwa dikhayegi😆😆
tu writer ho kar RN ko alag kiye hue hain, par hamara usool bhai kitna un dono ko milwane k liye kitna pareshaan ho raha hai.😃 😃 😃 Haan...par main HAMESHA unhe saath laane ke baare mein sochti hoon aur ek baar Ali ki wajehse unki jindagi tabah hote hote bachi....iss liye main usse prayaschit karwa rahi hoon.....!!! Hey bhagwaan !! main koi BABA na ban jaau!! Pehle Abhi se, aur Ab Ali se Prayaschit karwa rahi hoon...😆
vaise bilkul sahi kaha hai ghunny ne maj nair ko...!!! Hmmm...Usse laga Raj nahi hai toh, bahot udd raha tha...par maine bhi par kaatne waale ready rakhe hai!😃
aur jab dr shalini abhi se naina k condition k bare me bata rahi thi...mujhe hassi aa rahi thi. kyoun ki mujhe phir se ehsaas ho raha tha ki yeh fic ek doc ki hai. aur naina k immunity, weight loss k bare me jab shalini ne kaha ...toh mujhe phir se tumhari yaad aayi...tum ne bhi toh us raat ko mujhe yahi immunity k bare me kuch bata rahi thi...yaad hai...???😆 😆 😆 Haan Yaad hai!!😆😆 Chalo achcha hai...tumhe meri sachchai ke proofs milte jaa rahe hai!😆😆
abhi kitna tention le raha hai naina k liye. use bolna meri taraf se ki next year naina use pakka rakhi bandhegi...aur raj k ghar naina ki doli bhi vohi utha kar jayega...!!! itna toh karegi hi naina...!!!😆 😆 😆 Bravo!!! Already Naina ke bohot bhaai hogaye....nahi toh main jaroor bandhwaati RAKHI...It would have served him right. My god!! Tumne dekha tha LRL mein.....kameena kaise flirt karta tha Naina ke saath! 😡 Aur woh bhi smile karti thi😡 Waise Rakhi baandhe ya na bandhe, matlab toh bhaavnaao se hai!😆😆
vaise BC k bare me padh kar maza aa gaya...!!! kabhi kabhi BC ki sunsaan khopdi bhi kaam ki baat karti hai...!!!😆 😆 😆 Maine karwaayi yaar...!!😆 Becharene LRL mein first episode se lekar last tak, ' Mujhe meri academy mein tum nahi chahiye...yeh nahi chahiye...woh nahi chahiye ' iske alawa aur kuch nahi kiya😛 Kabhi kabhi toh mujhe lagta tha, woh sab ko nikal ke akele hi Naveen ke bhoot ke saath rehna chahta hai!😆😆
aur last scene...obviously dream scene tha...!!! kyoun ki raj ko kuch ho gaya toh tumhe baht kuch ho jayega...!!! lekin kam se kam dream me hi sahi dono ne ek dushre se izhaar toh kiya. par haqiqat me is scene par raj ko kuch nahin hona chahiye...!!!😃 😃 😃 Haan yaar...ab yeh toh OPEN secret tha ki woh ek dream scene tha....kyunki mujhe meri Jaan pyaari hai!! Well....par woh haqeeqat mein kab izhaar karenge????
amazing part👏 👏 👏 Thank chu !!!😃
cont soon.
n best of luck for ur test...👍🏼!!! raj ki tarah har test me A1 ban kar aana...aur mera naam roshan karna...!!! arre haan main toh bhul hi gayi batana ki ma'am yeh part sach me kuch lambaa tha...!!!😛 Thank you once again dear....yeah yeah...tumhara naam ROSHAN karungi!😛 Arey waah....mere toh bhaag hi khul gaye...jo tumne yeh baat maani ki yeh LOOOOONG part tha!😆

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: hinal60

really sadd UD

hope neelu naina ki cheer karde aur naina jaldi hi thik hojaye
waise raj kab wapis aayega

Yaah....it indeed was sad.....
well....as far as Neelu cheering up Naina....lets hope for the best!!
Dekhtein hai....pehle toh mujhe Captain saab ko dhundhna padega!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks yaar............
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Originally posted by: rituka7

damn cool
awesome
superb
update soon

Thank you sooooooooooo much Rituka....😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Very emotional part but it's brilliant update.Continue soon dear.

Thanks Rakhi..........
Will continue soon dear..........😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was good but sad too
i hope Neelu's plan work
plz continue soon

Hi prerna!!
Thanks for commenting dear...and for liking it too...
Yeah...that was quite sad....
Lets hope !!! Neelu's plan work!!!

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