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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi dear!!!

It was really the longgggggeeeeeesssssstttttttttt update ever of Mere Saathi.

To mera Raj zinda hai !!!!!!!



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Aalekh wanted to lessen her grief but Naina is a tough nut to crack. Besides she knows her Aalekh. And everyone is missing Rajveer. Naina wakai me Rajveer ki best cadet hai. Sameera ki kitni chinta hai usse. Thik Rajveer ki tarah, apni nahi bakiyon ki fikar hai.👏

Abhimanyu is repenting aur wo prayaschit karna chahta hai. Par Naina usse naraz hai. Aur usse lagta hai ki Rajveer zinda hai. Bilkul sahi lagta hai, Raj zinda hai.

Awesome update. Keep it up.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Continue asap.

Love
Guglu
Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Their jeep stopped and they could not start it up!!!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Naina ne sahi kaha ke terrorists ke saath risk nahi lena chahiye and they should be immediately deported to KMA!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Gunny came up with a perfect plan ke woh Ali aur Huda ke saath aage jaaye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Naina is lost in her memories and remembering the mentorship camp!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍

She remembered how they used to complement each other in every work perfectly!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Aalekh Naina ko dekh ke hi samajh gaya that she was remembering Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina aisi haalat mein bhi Sameera ke liye soch rahi hai!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aalekh is concerned about Naina and wanted to lessen her grief by preventing her from bottling up her emotions!!!!!

But she is tough nut to crack!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼And besides she knew her Aalekh!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is right aur wakai woh Rajveer ki Best Cadet hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

Even in this condition Naina's presence of mind and thinking are the sharpest!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Abhimanyu is feeling guity for not trusting Raj aur woh prayaschit karna chahta hai!!!!

The comparison between the sky and her life was very well expressed!!!!!👏 👏 👏 👏

No one can realise what she has lost!!!!! She has lost her love, her life, her everything Rajveer!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

The song is very nice and perfect for Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

He was within her but she is lonely without him and simply can't live without him!!!!

It was so sad!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

When Sameera asked about Naina's condition Pooja evaded answering that question!!!!!🤔 🤔 🤔 🤔

Yeh Abhimanyu phir aa gaya!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Bewakoof jab dekho philosophy jharta rehta hai!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Accha hai usse ehsaas ho gaya ke Raj usse better harmonica bajata hai!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

Actually Raj toh usse sab kuch better karta hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Abhimanyu wants to convince Naina that he in on her side and will help her in any way he can to achieve her goal!!!!🥱 🥱 🥱 🥱

But Naina is angry at him and has no faith in him!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡She could trust no one other than her friends now!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is no longer as impulsive as she was before as Raj had channelised her energy!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼

Abhimanyu is trying to convince Naina that Raj is dead!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

But Naina doesn't want to believe that Raj is no more and is sure that her heart will not mislead her!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊She is right Raj is alive!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 👏 👏 👏 👏

Abhimanyu provoked her to call Rajveer if he is alive!!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Aalekh warned him and told him not increase Naina's pain!!!! 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Naina screamed Rajveer's name and somewhere miles away a person also screamed her name!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is alive and I am so happy!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeh obviously koi hai jo Naina se bahut pyaar karta hai aur Navin bhi ho sakta hai!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

But since Naina screamed Raj's name so I think its Raj!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊


Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow dear.It's wonderful update.Bahut aacha naina give right treat ment to abhi.He deserve this.Iye yudi aur huda nehi sudhrega.Par it's good.
naina remembered raj and smile to herself.Alekh knew her very well and true friend.
Iye kaya tum iss tarah chor dia iss part ko.I'm crying with naina saw her condition.U wrote it very well.aab jaldi se post karo.Pls pls .Wait for the next part dear.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oye....My ilzaam was right...!!!! 😉😛 But this time I wont complain about the length of the update coz climax was superb...!!!! 👏👏
Haa..bich me rulaaya bhi...!!!! 😭😭

Pls put up the next update soooooon......!!!! 😛😛😛

And Priya agreeing with me on the size of fonts ka ghapla whereas even she does the same thing....!!!😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: guglu088

Hi dear!!! hiiieeeee!!!😃😃

It was really the longgggggeeeeeesssssstttttttttt update ever of Mere Saathi. Sirf Mere Saathi😭😭😭 ??? mujhe toh laga main IF ka longest update de rahi hoon!😛 haath kaamse gaye mere type kar kar ke..(fir bhi abhi aur type kar rahi hoon!😆😆)

To mera Raj zinda hai !!!!!!!



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Woah! Woah! I'm not sure yeh Raj hi hai yaa nahi...Naina ka koi aur apna bhi ho sakta hai.... Ab exactly kaun hai yeh aanewaala waqt hi batayega....!
Aalekh wanted to lessen her grief but Naina is a tough nut to crack. That she is....isn't it??
Besides she knows her Aalekh. And everyone is missing Rajveer. Naina wakai me Rajveer ki best cadet hai. Sameera ki kitni chinta hai usse. Thik Rajveer ki tarah, apni nahi bakiyon ki fikar hai.👏
Yes! She definitely is his Best cadet and that's why she has risen above her grief and thinking about Sam.
Abhimanyu is repenting aur wo prayaschit karna chahta hai. Par Naina usse naraz hai. Aur usse lagta hai ki Rajveer zinda hai. Bilkul sahi lagta hai, Raj zinda hai. Naina ke liye usse maaf karna bahot mushkil hai....Afterall, the loss which she is suffering from is partly due to Abhi. And she can feel that Raj is alive....

Awesome update. Keep it up.👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏Thanks...😃

Continue asap. Yeah... I will.

Love
Guglu
Love ,
manatated😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey very nice fic..i haven't read it fully but it's really nice plzz continue...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
damn cool
awesome
raj is alive
par kahan hai
when will he be back
waiting for next part
update soon

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Posted: 15 years ago



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Edited by guglu088 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aakhir kar wo UD aa hi gaya....jaha humein Raj ki ek cheek to sunne ko mili. Me so glad!!!!!

Waise to pata hi tha Raj ko ana hai.....warna tum iss fic me likhti kya....hehe. The scene was done beautifully.....Naina ki cheekh se Raj ko bhi hosh aya shayad.....so sweet!!!

Waise ab to mujhe bas Raj ka intezaar hai....kab wo ayega.....iss Abhimanyu ki baatein mujhe nahi sunni.....bewkufo ki tarah philosophy jhaar raha tha....but haan gud to knw usse ehsaas ho gaya....Raj usse behtar harmonica bajata tha.....actually Raj to sab kuch usse better karta tha....I hope ab tak usse samajh me aa gaya hoga.....hehe

Iss fic ki khaas baat waise ye hai.....isme tumne mere dil ki bharas nikali....hehe....maine kaha tha na main bhi Abhimanyu ko bardasht nahi kar sakti coz for me he's responsible for Raj's departure.

Anyways, it was a fantastic part....n u must knw I'm w8ing for the next part like never b4.....jaldi se continue karna dear....plssss.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Update was very nice

Alekh is concerned about naina and so are her other friends.

He is feeling very protective of her as he knows that naina is in a very fragile emotional state and she could break down any moment

Even in such a week condition...naina's presence of mind and thinking are the sharpest. She is after all Rajveer's best student...and so she knows that a soldier must always be on alert and never lose her focus.

Abhimanu is feeling guilty for not trusting raj. He wants to convince naina that he is on her side and will help her in any way to achieve her goal. But Naina will not be able to trust him this easily

Naina is complete confidence that raj is not dead yet. She is sure that her heart will never mislead her.

waiting to know more about raj....where is he and his condition,

please continue soon and don't make us wait for so long.

Edited by dazzling_glory - 15 years ago

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