Mere Saathi(RN)-Pt.25,pg.144(17/01) - Page 14

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!! Thank u!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

Their jeep stopped and they could not start it up!!!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Naina ne sahi kaha ke terrorists ke saath risk nahi lena chahiye and they should be immediately deported to KMA!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊aakhir Raj ki protege hai!

Gunny came up with a perfect plan ke woh Ali aur Huda ke saath aage jaaye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Naina is lost in her memories and remembering the mentorship camp!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😍 😍 😍 😍 yaar...sachmein! kya din the! That time serial was soooo good!

She remembered how they used to complement each other in every work perfectly!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳yeah!! they really used to!

Aalekh Naina ko dekh ke hi samajh gaya that she was remembering Raj!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina aisi haalat mein bhi Sameera ke liye soch rahi hai!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊apne mentor se hi sikha hai!

Aalekh is concerned about Naina and wanted to lessen her grief by preventing her from bottling up her emotions!!!!!

But she is tough nut to crack!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌAnd besides she knew her Aalekh!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is right aur wakai woh Rajveer ki Best Cadet hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘yes...she is. isn't it?

Even in this condition Naina's presence of mind and thinking are the sharpest!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Abhimanyu is feeling guity for not trusting Raj aur woh prayaschit karna chahta hai!!!! gadhe ko finally akal aa hi gayi!😑

The comparison between the sky and her life was very well expressed!!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘thanks a lot! glad that you noticed it...you know writer ke bhi kuch personal favourite scenes hote hai....I wrote it in flow, aur jab i was editing, i loved this part! glad that you too liked it!

No one can realise what she has lost!!!!! She has lost her love, her life, her everything Rajveer!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

The song is very nice and perfect for Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊thank you!

He was within her but she is lonely without him and simply can't live without him!!!!

It was so sad!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

When Sameera asked about Naina's condition Pooja evaded answering that question!!!!!πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” πŸ€” yaa...kuch bhi ho, par Raj was a teacher and Naina a student...so it's better if they keep the matter to minimum people.

Yeh Abhimanyu phir aa gaya!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑Bewakoof jab dekho philosophy jharta rehta hai!!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 ha ha haπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

Accha hai usse ehsaas ho gaya ke Raj usse better harmonica bajata hai!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳 woh toh usse har ek cheez better karta hai!

Actually Raj toh usse sab kuch better karta hai!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊arre...main toh yahi keh rahi thi!πŸ˜ƒ

Abhimanyu wants to convince Naina that he in on her side and will help her in any way he can to achieve her goal!!!!πŸ₯± πŸ₯± πŸ₯± πŸ₯± shaina....so cute reaction yaar!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†

But Naina is angry at him and has no faith in him!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑She could trust no one other than her friends now!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Naina is no longer as impulsive as she was before as Raj had channelised her energy!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ yes...and so, he successed a s a mentor!

Abhimanyu is trying to convince Naina that Raj is dead!!!!πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ πŸ˜’ 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

But Naina doesn't want to believe that Raj is no more and is sure that her heart will not mislead her!!!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊She is right Raj is alive!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Abhimanyu provoked her to call Rajveer if he is alive!!!!!!😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑

Aalekh warned him and told him not increase Naina's pain!!!! 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 😑 yes...coz he is always on her side!

Naina screamed Rajveer's name and somewhere miles away a person also screamed her name!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj is alive and I am so happy!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊ahhhh...me not sure whether it is raj.

Yeh obviously koi hai jo Naina se bahut pyaar karta hai aur Navin bhi ho sakta hai!!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› 😊 😊 😊 😊 ohk....tum kareeb aa rahi ho....

But since Naina screamed Raj's name so I think its Raj!!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 well...lets see!πŸ˜‰


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

Wow dear.It's wonderful update.Bahut aacha naina give right treat ment to abhi.He deserve this.Iye yudi aur huda nehi sudhrega.Par it's good.

naina remembered raj and smile to herself.Alekh knew her very well and true friend.
Iye kaya tum iss tarah chor dia iss part ko.I'm crying with naina saw her condition.U wrote it very well.aab jaldi se post karo.Pls pls .Wait for the next part dear.

thanks rakhi!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
hai naa? even you feel the same isn't it? Abhi deserve it!!
Yes, aalekh knows her in and out!
awww....you cried! thanks for liking it soooo much!
yes, will update soon yaar.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Oye....My ilzaam was right...!!!! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜› oh really madam!!

But this time I wont complain about the length of the update coz climax was superb...!!!! πŸ‘πŸ‘thank u jee!
Haa..bich me rulaaya bhi...!!!! 😭😭ab thoda rulana padhta hai naa? uske bina hasogi kaise?

Pls put up the next update soooooon......!!!! πŸ˜›πŸ˜›πŸ˜›ok ok ok!!

And Priya agreeing with me on the size of fonts ka ghapla whereas even she does the same thing....!!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜† haina? woh bhi karti hai naa? Aur sab mujhe hi dosh dete hai!huh!!πŸ˜›

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: prerna1

that was great
plz continue soon and plz do pm me

hi prerna...
thanks for reading my fic and liking it!
can u add me to your buddy list? so that i can pm u without fail...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanskruthi

Hiiiii, Awesome fic dear πŸ‘ thanks yaar!

The concept is so nice ... thanks again.😊
the prologue is too good,u described nainas conditon ,her pain really well,
Coming to this part it is superb glad that you liked it!πŸ˜ƒ
naina aise haalat main bhi wo sameera ke liye kitna soch rahi hain.......she is really rajveer sirs best cadet
raj jinda hain......i am so happy well....i'm not sure whether its Raj or someone else...
waiting for the next part;

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_glory

Update was very nice Thank you!!!

Alekh is concerned about naina and so are her other friends.

He is feeling very protective of her as he knows that naina is in a very fragile emotional state and she could break down any moment. Aalekh knows Naina too well.

Even in such a week condition...naina's presence of mind and thinking are the sharpest. She is after all Rajveer's best student...and so she knows that a soldier must always be on alert and never lose her focus. Yes. she definitely is his best cadet and very much like her mentor.

Abhimanu is feeling guilty for not trusting raj. He wants to convince naina that he is on her side and will help her in any way to achieve her goal. But Naina will not be able to trust him this easily

Naina is complete confidence that raj is not dead yet. She is sure that her heart will never mislead her.

waiting to know more about raj....where is he and his condition, even i have to think,where exactly have i sent Raj????πŸ˜†

please continue soon and don't make us wait for so long.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Thanks dear for keeping our hopes alive that Raj is back in the fic, kya kare yahi soch kar kaam chalte hain ki RN aaj bhi saath hain aur humesha rahenge.did my update raise your hopes about Raj?πŸ˜•πŸ˜•...but yeah...RN aaj bhi saath hain aur humesha rahenge.πŸ˜‰
Abhi par Naina ka naraj hona sahi tha, he deserves this n i am with Naina but really jo us ka haalhai shayad us ko shock se bahar laana bahut jaroori hai na filhaal.yaa...usse lana jaroori hai...par Abhi woh haq kho chuka hai...
Alekh sach me itna accha hai humesha Naina ka saath deta hai. Aise doston pe kisi ko bhi proud hoga. haan.he is always besides her.
update soon.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_shona

awesome update.....!!! πŸ‘ Thanks shona!πŸ˜ƒ
so alekh bhi try kar raha hai ki naina apne sadme se bahar aa jaaye..!!!
n abhimanyu bhi...!!! but naina doesnt want to listen to him...how cud she?? how cud she forgive him...she cant.. πŸ˜’ .. yeah...its difficult for Naina to forgive him.
no one can realise what she hs lost..!! her love, her life, her everything..Rajveer..!!! πŸ˜’
she doesnt want to believe that Raj is no more..!!! n Abhimanyu is trying to convince her that Raj is no more..!!! πŸ˜•
he provoked her to call Rajveer if he is alive...alekh warned him but naina screamed Rajveer's name...n miles away someone also screamed her name..!!!!!!
So Raj is ALIVE...!!!!!!.. πŸ‘ πŸ₯³ ahhh...well i'm not sure whether he is Raj or not.
now pls bring back him soon...
gr88 update.... πŸ‘

Thanks a lot for the comment shona.πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

sorry yaar main late hun...asusall...!!! Koi baat nahi..!!tum aai toh sahi!😊

kya karun...main basanti ban gayi thiπŸ˜†...aur gabbar singh bhi...πŸ˜†!!! KYAAA???😲( camera rolling for close up from all the sides and angles, with background music...Dhyaan dhaan dhyaanπŸ˜†πŸ˜†)
matlab pahle mere hi hathon se kaanch ka glass tuta...aur andhera tha toh mere pair un par pad gaye...!!! Hey Bhagwaan! kya ladki hai yaar! tu mahine mein kitni baar injured hoti hai?? Aur tera dhyaan kaha hota hai? aur kaha dekhti hai aur kaha chalti hai?
ab jab aap ek doc hain toh jaan hi chuki hongi ki aage ki kya story hui hogi...!!! ofcourse jaanti hoon!πŸ˜›
3 stiches, 2 injection n pills ki lambi chaudi list...!!! yaar tum doc baht beraham hote ho...koi itna sara pills khane ko deta hai kya...!!! SHUT UP!!!! ek toh pata nahi kiske sapne dekhte huye chalti rehti ho(waise mujhe pata hai! πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›πŸ˜‰ haiiii!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†), ab agar itni lagi hai, to medicines to deni hi hogi naa? tum naa ! bahot careless ho!
mujhe har baar ek hath me medicine aur dushre hath me choclate pakadna padta tha...varna medicine ki smell se hi mujhe vmting ho jati thi...😭!!! awww...my poor baby!
khair yeh toh rahi meri dukh bhari daastan...πŸ˜†!!! ab tere ud par aati hun...!!! πŸ˜ƒ okayπŸ˜†
AWESOME.................................πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ thank youuuuuuuuuuπŸ˜ƒ
pahle kya vertika aur meri taang khinchni jaruri thi...😑!!! haan...thi!πŸ˜†
khair khincha toh khinch us k baad Dhara aur mujhe dhamki bhi de di...😑!!! Arey yaar mauka mila tha,toh maine chauka maar diya!!πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
aur haan mujhe pata hai Dhara tum se daar kar kah rahi hai ki yeh ud long tha...par main toh short ki kahungi...chahe kuch bhi ho jaye...πŸ˜†!!! Tum toh ho hi ziddi!! πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Khair iss me bhi tumhara pyaar hai!
vaise tum is baat ko +velly bhi le sakti ho...!!! Main +vely hi leti hoon!😊
dekha jaye toh jab koi show ya fic humain jarurat se jyada achhi lagti hai toh aur req tym par khatam hone k baad bhi aisa lagta hai ki voh show baht jald khatam ho gaya, ya phir voh ud baht chota hai...!!! yeh hamare pasand par depend karta hai...!!! kuch samjhi....???πŸ˜› kya kaha? repeat karna plz....πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
song TUM BIN ka tha...aur is movie k sare songs mujhe pasand hai...!!! khaash kar k Jagjeet Singh ki gajal aur is ka tittle song...!!!πŸ˜ƒhaan!! mujhe bhi title song bahoooooooooooooooooooooot pasand hai! aur mere frenz kehte hai ki main yeh song bahot achcha gaati hoon😳...so,it's kinda 'Manali Ispecilal ! 'πŸ˜ƒ
is ud k bich me tumne baht emotional atyachar kiya...par maine koi complaine nahin karni...!!! thank you maam!
kyoun ki voh sub se jyada achha part tha...!!! aur naina ka confident bhi ki Raj zinda hai...aur us ka naam le kar bulana...just too gud...!!! Thanks!
Huda gaya hai mechanic ko dhundhne...πŸ˜†!!! phir toh in sab ko bhagwan bachaye...!!! kyoun ki garage me agar kisi khubsurat janani se mulaqat ho gayi toh huda apni ullu sidha karne vahin laga rahega, baki sab ko bhul jayega...!!!πŸ˜†haan...sahi kaha!πŸ˜†πŸ˜† Waise soch rahi hoon yeh track daaloonπŸ˜›πŸ˜‰
alekh humesha se jaisa tha vaisa hi hai...!!! aaj bhi naina ko utna hi samajhta hai jitna pahle samajhta tha. vaise hi aage aata hai jab koi naina ko pareshan karta hai toh...!!!πŸ˜ƒAalekh aur Naina ka rishta kabhi badal hi nahi sakta naa? Woh rishta toh aur bhi gehra hoga, par change nahi hoga.
is idiot Abhi ki toh main...!!! jab dekho apni body show karta rahta tha...tumhe yaad hai na...??? LRL me aise kapde pahnta tha, jaise designer ne koi design reject karne k baad use pahn ne ko de diya ho...πŸ˜†!!! Ritu k baad voh hi sab se jyada body show karta tha...kabhi kabhi toh voh mujhe Ritu k baad k vamp bhi lagta tha...πŸ˜†!!! aur tumhe pata hai maine is ka naam kya rakha tha...??? "baaalon wale bhai sahab"... tumhe nahin lagta ...balon ki achhi khaasi dukan thi us ka chehra n sar...!!!πŸ˜† Oh god Priya!🀣🀣🀣 hassa hassa ke maarne ka plan hai kya?? apne doc ka gussa mujhpe kyun utaar rahi ho yaar! 🀣even i hate abhi to the core,but jis tarah tumne yaha likha hai naa, i feel like meri bhawnaao ko zubaan tumne di hai!🀣
piche se pahle jaan bujh kar ek zor se laat maro...phir aage aa kar kaho sorry...!!! is ka charachter bhi kuch aisa hi tha...!!! itna sab kuch kar diya...ab Raj k chale jane k baad us ko gyaan uday ho rahe hain...!!! 😑 priya...bas naa yaar kitna hasaogi?🀣 waise tumhara har ek word sahi hai! ab uss idiot ka gyan uday horaha hai!πŸ˜†
aaya bada naina ko pravachan dene...!!! us se bol ek baar agar main apna pravachan dene lag gayi na...toh use AGRA k mental hospital me bhi jagah nahin milegi...!!! 😑sahi hai boss!! lage rahe!!🀣 aur us se pravachan dene ke alawa kuch hota bhi toh nahi naa?
achhi khabar li us ki naina ne...!!! apne aap ko bada teesh maar khan samajhta tha...!!! alekh ne bhi sahi kaha us se...!!! alekh toh bichara use senior samajh kar use izaat de raha tha...!!! agar main naina ki jagah hoti na...toh kab ka us 'baloon wale bhai sahab' k sar par chewing gum laga deti...aur us k baad voh maj bhargav ka bhatija lagta...!!!πŸ˜† PRIYAAAAAA!!🀣 mera peth dukh raha hai yaar!🀣 waise yeh last waala dialogue main apne fic mein USE karnewaali HOON HOON HOON!!!🀣
naina ne rajveer ka naam le kar pukaara...toh dur kahin se bhi kisi ne naina ka naam le kar pukara...!!! yeh koi aur nahin rajveer hi hai...!!! ab tum yeh mat kahna ki voh naina ka voh so called BF SHANTANU tha...!!! πŸ˜†Ab ye kaun hai ye to waqt hi batayega!! Waise jaruri toh nahi, ki lover hi respond kare!πŸ˜‰
aur haan, alekh chahe kitni bhi koshish kar le ya phir koi aur bhi par naina ko us taklif se sirf vohi bahar nikal sakta hai jis ne voh taklif use di hai...πŸ˜ƒ!!! toh ab maadam ji...jaldi se ud kar dijiye...varna hum aap ko taklif dene aa jayenge...!!! aur haan...naina aur rajveer ko us taklif se bahar nikalo...hum sab ko baht taklif ho rahi hai...!!! mujhe toh itni taklif ho rahi hai ki maine is taklif k word ko bhi 7 baar likh chuke hain...!!!πŸ˜† ha aha ha haπŸ˜† jaldi update karungi.tere hi comment ka wait kar rahi thi!πŸ˜†
chal...ud fast...

Hey Priya !!πŸ˜ƒ
thank you soooooooooooooo much for the wonderful comment!πŸ˜ƒ
I thoroughly enjoyed reading it and read almost 10 times!!!πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Lion_Priya

N Dhara ma'am...aap ko bhi meri taang khinchna jaruri tha kya...??? mere fonts ka size 4 hota hai aur Manali ka 6...voh mujh se double hai...!!! πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

maine toh tumhe Sholey ka Jay samjha tha yaar...par tum toh Thakur Saheb nikli...πŸ˜† πŸ˜†!!! baat Manali ki aayi toh party badal liya...aur mujhe police k hawale kar diya...!!! tumhare liye toh abhi mere dil me bass yahi gana aa raha hai...'Dost dost na raha...pyar pyar na raha...😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

good Dhara! tumne bilkul SAHI kiya! πŸ˜†
agar hum dono ke font ke size compare kiye naa tune priya, toh main updates ki frequency bhi compare karungi!πŸ˜†
Dhara aur main Jay aur Veeru hai, aur tu...hmmmm(thinking hard)....arey haa! MAUSIJI!!πŸ˜›
Dhara tum Priya ke emotional atyachaar se distract mat ho! πŸ˜†

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