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Harjot.

@Angel-Jot

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Hey Aish! (Can i call you that?) My name is Harjot, nickame; Jot or Harji. As you can see, i use Jot now, i used to use Harji but some people still call me Harji yet.

PART 5: OMG! I loved that part! Haha. Armaan was so confused. How cute. I was laughing so much at the part when "Ridhima was flailing her arms in the air". I have no idea why but it sounded funny too. Sorry, im a really random person. Wow Angad can get angry. HAHA. Poor guy. Whenever he wants to go out, the whole city decides to do the same! LOL. What a hyperbole! The Nupur-Angad convo was so funny. "Ga" lol. Nupur is funny. Man Angad is a great guy. I love him.

PART 6:

WOW AISH! That was crazy! LOved that part!

Mayank and Nupur were fighting over Gabar being gay????!!!! Thats funny!

Poor Angad. Nobody listens to him.

WOW. Angad and Kripa used to date each other?? Thats so awesome.

Haha. AK are so confused just like AR. Why did Angad pick her up? That was so random but sooo cuttee.

Haha. Loved Mayank and Nupur's reaction to AK.

Aww poor guy. Angad was no longe hungary. Probably because of Kripa? Haha.

PS. Would please write your FF's name when you PM us that you've updated.

Aish you write the funniest and the best parts ever! You're the best writer on IF!

This is like my fav FF!

Update earlier this time!

Live, Laugh, Love,

~Jot~

Edited by Angad-Kripa#1 - 15 years ago

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: akrock
hey nice updates!!!!
cont soon....

thanks will tryyyyyyyyyyy

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1
Hey Aish! (Can i call you that?) My name is Harjot, nickame; Jot or Harji. As you can see, i use Jot now, i used to use Harji but some people still call me Harji yet.
a)yes u can b)hi jot!
PART 5: OMG! I loved that part! Haha. Armaan was so confused. How cute. I was laughing so much at the part when "Ridhima was flailing her arms in the air". I have no idea why but it sounded funny too. Sorry, im a really random person. Wow Angad can get angry. HAHA. Poor guy. Whenever he wants to go out, the whole city decides to do the same! LOL. What a hyperbole! The Nupur-Angad convo was so funny. "Ga" lol. Nupur is funny. Man Angad is a great guy. I love him.
a)thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
b)randomness=good!
its great i love being random. lol like with my friends half the time ur like wat!?!?! cuz its just randomness lol

PART 6:

WOW AISH! That was crazy! LOved that part!

Mayank and Nupur were fighting over Gabar being gay????!!!! Thats funny! i kno random lol i was like omg i dont fight like that so u know....dostana....who doesnt love that movie?!?!?

Poor Angad. Nobody listens to him.

WOW. Angad and Kripa used to date each other?? Thats so awesome.

Haha. AK are so confused just like AR. Why did Angad pick her up? That was so random but sooo cuttee. i truthfully have no idea why lol its just there. cuz its angad

Haha. Loved Mayank and Nupur's reaction to AK.

Aww poor guy. Angad was no longe hungary. Probably because of Kripa? Haha.

PS. Would please write your FF's name when you PM us that you've updated. yea sure no prob

Aish you write the funniest and the best parts ever! You're the best writer on IF! omg omg omg OMFG!...PRESSURE!!!!!!! PRESSURE!!!!!!!
i dont think i can handle this. dont praise me so much! its all randomness....that just kinda makes sense! lol

This is like my fav FF!

Update earlier this time! ill try read the note im posting in a while

Live, Laugh, Love,

~Jot~

Originally posted by: nehasfan
hey gr8 part!!!!
wonderin bout AK's past....
cont soon

thank uuuuuuuuu ull kno bout them soo enough lol

Edited by shahidkaarmaan - 15 years ago

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

IMPORTANTNOTICE!!!!
PLEASEREAD !!!!!!!

first of all thank you guys SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO much for ALL the support you guys have given me. the comments, suggestions, and even asking me to pm you have given me A LOT of ....i forgot the word😕 cuz im in a brainfreeze now but it goes along the line of courage i think....the...the... the. i 4get anywho! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!! keep reading guys and keep giving me ur opinions.

ok so guys i have like 3 days before i leave india. then its gonna be school like immediately. like im already missing two days so the day after i get back im going to school. so im sure youve guessed where this is heading.....
schools starting so i have no idea when my updates will be. ill try my best to give you regular updates but itll be hard. ill have homework and other things to do, still ill try my best k guys? but bear with me here, i dont really want me to go to scool either! haha (who does really i mean its so boring.....) anywho....please dont yell at me :( im trying...ill try to give u guys an update before i go but.....theres like poojas and stuff going on so itll be hard.....

i love u guys so much for everything!!!!!!!!!
again thank you!

Edited by shahidkaarmaan - 15 years ago

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

Part 6.5: Past Time
Recap:
Angad set Kripa down and looked the three faces staring questioningly at him. Nodding curtly he trned and walked towards the kitchen again. His hunger was gone but he was suddenly very thirsty.

Staring awkwardly at her little brother his friend Kripa smiled nervously. "hi"
"hi" they replied together, were they going to do that all the time? It was getting old fast.
"I'm Kripa," she said, holding out her hand to Nupur.
"I know!" the girl replied with a grin, " I'm Nupur, and I hug people like you!" she gave her a hug.
"'people like me?" Kripa asked confused.
"People I like, or I know I'll like, you're Mayu's sis!"
"ha-ha yea, I- Mayu?"
"Cute isn't it?"
"ha-ha yea, Come on MAYU, lets go, I'm late."
"I know," Mayank said, giving her a look for calling him Mayu and for rushing him, " you're always late."
Kripa and Mayank walk out, Kripa was still lost in her thoughts and didn't notice Mayank and Nupur signaling each other to find out what just happened between their siblings. She liked Nupur, she had for two years, and even though she'd never met her she had felt a sort of sisterly love towards her. It surprised her now that even though it had been more than a year since she'd thought of her she still felt that fondness towards Nupur.

Angad grabbed a Vitamin Water and walked up towards his "room". it was more like an apartment without the kitchen. The whole second floor of the house was his. On one side was his massive bed and near it a media center surrounded by bean-bag chairs. In the other corner stood his own little sound-proof recording studio. That's where he was calmly heading. Quietly shutting the door, he paused'then:
" O
MY
GOD!
WHAT THE HELL WERE YOU DOING DOWN THERE?!?!? WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED TO COOL DUDE ANGAD?!?!ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" calming down he wished he had his punching bag up here, but it was downstairs, in the home gym. He slid down onto the ground, 'coming here had been a good idea' he thought, ' noone heard me.' Staring at the guitar sitting in the sitting in the corner, his thoughts wandered back to first time he met Kripa. Five years ago at the Special Arts University'she had been so beautiful, so sure of herself, so'so..so amazing! Her voice was captivating, he had always asked her to sing for him, but she was there for fashion design. It struck him then that he would never really ever get over her. Feeling sorry for himself he crawled over to the gutiar in the corner, leanig against the wall he strummed the first few chords of a song he hadn't even listened to in over two years'

Edited by shahidkaarmaan - 15 years ago

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Harjot.

@Angel-Jot

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Hello Aish hun! Of course, we understand. Even i wont be able to update my FF's for a quite a while because of school. LOL. Random...Yeah its good.. Yeah i know. My friends would also be like "WHAT?!" One time, my friend's were talking about Twilight and all of a sudden im just like, "i want subway." It was so random. Sometimes i randomly start laughing. LOL So you were in India? For vacations? Im stuck in Canada! LOL As for the part...LIKE WOW! Plus i mean it! You are a great writer and LOL....im pressurizing you? If this is going to make you continue this FF then so be it! LOL. YOUR AWESOME. Pressurizing you again? I better be! LOL OMG. Angad is a such a cute guy!!!! The way he started shouting all of sudden was the randomest yet funniest thing ever! Plus the Nuper-Mayank-Kripa convo was effin funny!! Mayu?! I loved Kripa's reaction.

Okay well, i know i talk a lot but what can i do? Im a chatterbox and randomer! LOL Is that even a word? Oh well....

Sooo umm i was thinking......i dont know why i wrote that becuase im not thinking anything, even i should be thinking, or maybe not, but like thinking can be good and sometimes not, you know. Okay maybe that didnt make sense, i dont think it was supose or maybe it was but whatev,

Okay im going post this b4 i write something else.

Live.Laugh.Love,

~Jot~

PS. I just love your siggy for the FF!!

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

wowowow i love your all parts

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Jannat

@NYPunjabii

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

i JUST read your FF. It was great. Its funny. what happened between AK five years ago?
COntinue Sooooon

Jannat

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: nehasfan
lovely part!!!!

thank youuuuuuu

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1
Hello Aish hun! Of course, we understand.
thank you and finally! im back! Even i wont be able to update my FF's for a quite a while because of school. hey give me a link to ur ffs chica! u didnt tell me u wrote! LOL. Random...Yeah its good.. Yeah i know. My friends would also be like "WHAT?!" One time, my friend's were talking about Twilight and all of a sudden im just like, "i want subway."OMFG twlight and subway are like two of my favorite things!everytime there a half day my friends and i walk over after school It was so random. Sometimes i randomly start laughing. LOL So you were in India? yup, three months!For vacations? Im stuck in Canada!hey, i live near canada! LOL As for the part...LIKE WOW! Plus i mean it! You are a great writer and LOL....im pressurizing you? If this is going to make you continue this FF then so be it! LOL. YOUR AWESOME. Pressurizing you again? I better be! LOL OMG. Angad is a such a cute guy!!!! The way he started shouting all of sudden was the randomest yet funniest thing ever! Plus the Nuper-Mayank-Kripa convo was effin funny!! Mayu?! I loved Kripa's reaction.

OMFG yes, u are, i serosuly will have trouble living up to ur expectaions chica! 😕but stil thank you thank you thank you thank you! cuz it does keep me writing haha

Okay well, i know i talk a lot but what can i do? Im a chatterbox and randomer! LOL Is that even a word? Oh well.... chatting is no prob cuz im like that too, just talk and talk and talk and... u get the pic lol

Sooo umm i was thinking......i dont know why i wrote that becuase im not thinking anything, even i should be thinking, or maybe not, but like thinking can be good and sometimes not, you know. Okay maybe that didnt make sense, i dont think it was supose or maybe it was but whatev,

Okay im going post this b4 i write something else.

Live.Laugh.Love,

~Jot~

PS. I just love your siggy for the FF!!
thanks!

Originally posted by: Shafoo
wowowow i love your all parts

THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Originally posted by: NYPunjabii
i JUST read your FF. It was great. Its funny. what happened between AK five years ago?
COntinue Sooooon

Jannat

thank youuuuuuuuuuuuuuu well ull have to wait and see huh?

Rock On guys...

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Aishwarya

@malluangel

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

after a longgggggggggggggggggg time i kno.
im SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

SORRY!
so here it is:

Part 7: Past Time

"sooo'" Mayank said.
"So?" Kripa replied.
"What was going on back there?"
"Nothing"
"That didn't LOOK like nothing" Mayank replied.
"NOTHING!" Kripa fired back.
"I'm just saying people aren't usually carried into houses they've never bee to before without any reason."
"I SAID.
IT WAS NOTHING!!!!"
"Ok, ok..cool down man..girl..sis." Mayank could tell he'd pressed too many buttons, Kripa looked furious. What was so weird about him asking?
He'd just walked in on his sister'almost'.kinda'in a way. They weren't actually doing anything. Anyhow the point was that he was her brother so he deserved to know! Wait what? He thought, that was totally something Nupur would say! Ugh'Nupur, he seriously needed to stop hanging around that girl, stop hanging around her, with her, or even near her! But somehow he always found himself with her or waiting for her'
Deciding he didn't want to die tonight he turned on the radio hoping to lighten the mood. It was playing a song he hadn't heard in a while, Hero by Angad Khanna
*{originally by Enrique Inglesias but I love it and though Angad shud have it!}*

I can be you hero baby
I can kiss away the pain
I will stand by you forever
You can take my breath a---

Kripa changed the station furious that her car could betray her like that, that was the last song she needed to hear now, in fact it was the last song she ever wanted to hear! The next station played Let it Rock, something she had no problem with. Mayank decided that he would rather not comment on it, but couldn't help giving her a weird look, to which she returned a scowl. Mayank knew now that there was something going on with his sister and Angad Khanna. He usually wasn't one to pry into others personal business but he wanted to know what the connection between his sister and Nupur's brother was. The rest of the car ride was continued in silence.

Nupur walked defiantly towards her brothers "crib", she wanted to find out what the whole scene downstairs was about. She imagined a love story gone wrong, lovers parted at fates cruel hands. Knocking at his door at the top of the stairs she got no reply; he was probably in his studio. That was REALLY dangerous. What if she got like a stalker or something? They could walk into the house and easily kidnap her while her "bhaiya-ji" wouldn't even be aware of it! After knocking a few more times she walked downstairs and to the basement, which had been transferred into a modern living space. Her round bed sat in the middle and off to the side was her state of the art entertainment system. Perfect for watching movies and listening to music. To the other side was her closet or as Mayank called it the dungeon of doom. Next to that was her bathroom, which had a bathtub the size of a queen bed and a shower stall only slightly bigger. The whole quarters had speakers connected to the sound-system in the entertainment center so she could always be surrounds by her tunes. Walking into her closet she rummaged through a drawer in the back and finally surfaced with what she wanted. A copy of Angad's room key! Running back up the stairs she let herself in and found Angad in his studio, staring at the wall and strumming his guitar. "kya tha wo?" she asked authoritatively, "what was that?"
Angad looked up at her, she was his baby sister, he'd taken care of her since she was in diapers. In fact he could remember the day his mother had brought her home'she looked so sweet and innocent that day. Now she still looked innocent but her eyes held a fire which demanded the truth from him. He knew that she thought it was something minor but only he knew the truth'
"Hello? What was that?!?" she glared at her brother.
"nothing," Angad said monotonously, looking forlornly at the wall. Nupur looked at it too but saw nothing. Sighing she slumped next to him, now she was more concerned for her brother than about what was happening downstairs. "ok'something's wrong, what's up bahi?"
Angad turned to look at her again, his sweet little sister; she could be so annoying sometimes, yelling, dramatizing, breaking into his room, screaming, but she care- wait a minute! What was she doing here now? He'd locked the door!
"Nupur." he said irately
"haan bhaiya?" she asked her face radiating innocence.
Angad looked at her accusingly, "HOW DID YOU GET IN HERE?" he practically screamed. Nupur looked taken aback, but quickly recovered, "oh, that," she replied smiling mischievously holding up a key, "I used my spare!"
Angad stared at her open-mouthed then lunged, but she was expecting it and soon enough they were involved in a cat and mouse game. Angad couldn't believe she had a spare to his room, whatever happened to personal privacy! Nupur didn't what was wrong with it, after all she WAS his sister!
"Nupur!" Angad said, "give that key!"
"not until you tell me what was going on earlier!" she was quick to respond, she had to of course get back to Mayu on what it was about!
Angad and Nupur finally settled down to eat dinner, when Nupur finally offered her bhaiya a choice, either he tell her what the story behind him and Kripa was or she keep his key forever.
"actually Nupur," Angad said, "I could have my lock changed'"
"go ahead!" Nupur replied, "I'll manage to get a copy of that one too!"
Angad sighed, looking at her, he had no doubt that she could manage that, infact she could probably get her copy before he got his, she was smart like that. She was smart, she just used it for "hatke" things.
sighin

Again Angad gave in, he knew a say like this would come''wow' he thought 'that makes me feel old'.' anyway he was mentally preparing himself to face the consequences. He would tell Nupur about him and Kripa, she was his sister, she deserved to know. At that same moment he made another decision. He loved Kripa. He had then, and he did now. He realized he always would, no matter what, so now he had to do something about it, he would have to GET HER BACK! And he knew that his sister could help him. After all, all those Bollywood movies had to have some sort of effect right? She had to have some ideas.

"Nupur." he said finally. " I have a story to tell you.

Edited by shahidkaarmaan - 15 years ago