Thodese Alag~AR AK MayUr up:9-12-09 upd - Page 3

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

WOW.....errr i dont know your name. LOL. OKay retake, WOW, Shahidkaarmaan! Haha.....

hi lol its aishwarya and thank you! ps now u have to tell me ur name!

First of all, Armaan is soooooooooo cuttteeeee!! What i really found funny was when Angad and Ridhima saw him naked....or he had a towel right?

I was laughing so hard while reading this part. My cheeks hurt from smiling so much and i cant stop laughing and smiling.
eek! i forgot to put in a towel! omg i have to edit this....dont wanna go this far so soon but u just wait....lol thank u for enjoying my sense of humor :P

Angad and Ridhima are sooo sweet with each other. I LOVE ANGAD! He talks so much. LOL

Nupur is Angad's sister! Kool. Just the way you wrote "major problem" has made it obvious that it will be funny. I hope it is.........
omg preassure!

Oh also when Angad was saying sorry and the song "It's too late to Apoligize" came on, i was like laughing soo much. Really it WAS too late too apoligize because they already saw Armaan naked. LOL

Awww Ridhima and Armaan: Love at first sight. So rare.

Please update soon and thanx for the PM.

Live, Laugh, Love,

~Jot~

thank uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu 4 the comment
and ill try to asap k?

Originally posted by: nehasfan

hey gr8 part....
cont soon...

gracias!

Originally posted by: .:.MONA.:.

hey relly amezing FF..but what armaan is dead..cant wait to find out how that happend..still i would be sad at the fact that he is dead....continue soon..add me to ur pm list..

❤️MONA

yes. armaans dead but thatll come into play wayyyyyyyyy later!
for now just enjoy our adorable dork haha

wow.....awesome...i love ur ff....i just read ur parts...they r just too good..............
and can u plzzz pm...wen ever u gonna update......thanks
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Originally posted by: sanjana shah

wow.....awesome...i love ur ff....i just read ur parts...they r just too good..............
and can u plzzz pm...wen ever u gonna update......thanks
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graciassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss thank u! dhanyavad! shukriya! i wish i knew more languages...
and ureoffically on the pm list yea! haha
thanks 4 the support!

ok guysssssss long time i know! im sooo sorry but i was on a trip during which i cudnt write cuz we ended up taking a bus along the wynad-mysore-ooty trial so... yea. heres ur update!hope u like it! leave ur comments please!
PS this is kinda like a get to kno the characters better thing not that nessecary so expect another update soon k?

Part 5: Past Time


Recap: Angad ran out after receiving a call from Nupur, leaving Armaan and Rhidz alone.

Armaan and Rhidz were again in an awkward position. Glancing at the clock, which read 4:15 Armaan thought, " I need to get going, or Hitler will kill me!" Seeing him glancing nervously at the clock Rhidz stuttered out, "I- I'm gonna go. I- we, just wanted to see how you were doing after that whole. Incident."
"OH!- No, it- I- you're. fine." Armaan stammered in reply, he didn't want to mess up any more with the new neighbor.
"No- I, have some more unpacking to do."
"Oh. Ok then. Umm' bye. See ya around. "
"you too! Bye!" and she backed up. So quickly in fact that she ran into his couch and started flailing her arms in the air attempting to balance herself. Armaan's instincts kicked in and before either of them realized Rhiddima was in Armaan's arms.
Gazing into each others eyes they lost sense of everything besides each other. As their hearts raced to one beat and their eyes spoke to each other neither was aware of their surrounds. A whole minute passed and neither have moved, still lost in each other, then suddenly:
"Aye Masakali Masakali!
Thoda Matakali Matakali!
Aye Masakali'"
Rhiddima's phone started ringing although she really wished it hadn't. She would be happy to stay here for a while'in his arms.
Standing up they both glanced nervously away from each other as she answered her phone, " he- hello? Di?"

Armaan glanced at her again, seeing her distracted he took the chance to study her. To answer his open question which had been haunting him ruthlessly for the last 10 minutes. What was wrong with him?!?! He is Armaan. Armaan Malik. Talking to girls was easy, charming them was second- no first, nature to him. He's never had a hard time, especially with pretty girls. But'.something was stopping him from doing so, something told him that she wasn't THAT type of girl, she was someone with he could'.
What?
With whom he could what?
'Fall in Love.' a small voice in the back of his head said. 'Yeah right!' he thought, ' me. And love. HA! Who am I kidding? No. nope, not in the least. Armaan was brought out of his thoughts when Rhidz hung up, after exchanging another awkward goodbye Armaan got to getting ready for work.

Out in the hallway Rhiddima walked back to her apartment, beating herself up. WHAT THE HECK IS WRONG WITH ME?!?!? What was that? She's NEVER had boy trouble before, with her best friend being a guy she pretty much knew what to expect. But Armaan'.good GOD! Her heart was beating SOOOOOOO fast! Each time he smiled'.STOP! She ordered herself, not now! You have more important things to do then melt like a heroine from one of those cheesy Hindi movies you can't stand.


"COME ON! MOVE MAN! Angad was to put it simple FRIKIN MAD! Angry Angad.
"Move it!" he shouted, pounding on his horn for good measure. In the last ten minutes Angad had moved maybe, just barely, six inches. Why was the traffic so damn slow? Rhidzy said that he was unreliable when it came to time, what she didn't understand was that it wasn't him. IT WAS THE DAMN TRAFFIC! He was yet to get why every time he needed to go somewhere the whole damn population of Sanjeevgrah decided they also wanted to go somewhere. IT WAS SO FRUSTRAING! "Bhehka Bhehka Main Bhehka Bhehka" great more to add to his mounting anger. His cell phone started ringing again, it was the fifth time since he'd left Armaan and Rhidz; he wondered if he should ignore it, or reject it, but she would keep on calling. "YES NUPUR?"
"BHAIYA! Where are you? Kahan hoon tum? "
"Like the last 5,000 times I've told you. MAIN ARAHIHOON MERI MAA!"
"haan, BUT. you've been saying that since I told you to come, which was twenty minutes ago. Rhiddima's new place is about 10 minutes from here-"
"that's without traffic, which isn't the case here. There is so much damn traffic I haven't moved a foot since your second call. THIS DAMN TRAFFIC IS GOING TO DRIVE ME INSANE!"
"Like you aren't already- wellll'. No, he's not almost here. Well what do you mean by almost here? Well he says there's a lot of traffic! What am I supposed to do? Anyway, aur kitne time lagegi?"
"ga"
"what?"
"lagega, I'm a guy."
"says you!"
"Grow up."
"You first"
"really? Who-"
"no! me first, who-WHAT??? Mayank cant you stay chup for one minute?"" then remembering her brother, " Baiya! Main bechari,abla nari! Ghar mein akele akele, ek ladke ki sath! Or tum ho to-"
"agar tum ek ladke ke sath ho," Angad heard Mayank interrupt, " tum akele kaisa honge?"
"Mayank just shut up ok? You talk too much anyway"
"What?!?! I hardly have room to talk with you around!"
"excuse me. What exactly do you mean by that?"
"forget it! Tell him to drive faster!"
"O yeah! He can just get in his magic car and fly here! didn't you hear him say there was traffic?"
Mayank mumbled something Angad didn't hear to which Nupur replied, " O please the way you drive you single-handedly cause half the city's jams"
Angad waited for Nupur to finish yelling at Mayank, he could still hear them over the phone. Arguing. That's all they did, well they had fun too. sometimes he felt sorry for the guy, but he had made the choice'Hanging with Nupur was code for being bossed around. Fortunately for Mayank he could hold his own in the wrath of Nupur.
"guys?" Angad tried to get their attention, sure they'd already forgotten about him. "Guys? GUYS?" still not getting a response he hung up. And in time too, the traffic was beginning to clear up and a spot in front of the car next to him opened up, but IT WASN'T MOVING! Angry and tired, he seized the chance, he cut off the small navy blue hybrid and as the road cleared he zoomed his red sports car on ahead.

haha love nupur and mayank!! waiting for kripaaa....cant wait..good part though...continue soon =)

grt part..why was angad carrying her...LOL

nice part..lol angad...aww so they know eachother...cant wait to know what happened

btw..just a request...can u put it in the title whenever u update..that way i know u updated....if u need help to know how to do that..just lemme know =)

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

awesome part

thank u

Originally posted by: BABY-GIRL7

grt part..why was angad carrying her...LOL

i have NO IDEA lol i just thought it wud be something random angad cud do

Originally posted by: Smileyface

nice part..lol angad...aww so they know eachother...cant wait to know what happened

btw..just a request...can u put it in the title whenever u update..that way i know u updated....if u need help to know how to do that..just lemme know =)

yes they do and to know how yes, u guys are getting a flashback in a flashback lol but itll be quick kinda like a narration going back and forth between angad and kripa

ill try to do that but i cant promise ill always remmeber k?

hey gr8 part!!!!
wonderin bout AK's past....
cont soon