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Posted: 16 years ago
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okkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk next parttttttttttttttt for the mayur part its a couple more parts, angad has to get home first!😕


PART 3: Past Time

Rhidz(ill occasionally refer to her like this) looked over her apartment thinking about Angad, he was so sweet and loyal, her best friend, but he was so da** unreliable when it came to time!
"excuse me?" a voice interrupted her thoughts, she turned around to see a twenty-something guy looking down at her; she looked up to meet his gaze, "yes?" she said.

The first this Armaan noticed when she turned around was her hair, it was long and all over her face and partly covering her eyes, it was'.pretty. He hadn't thought of that word when describing a girl ever before. The second thing he noticed were her eyes, a dark grayish color, and wide.
"can I help you?" she asked, making him notice her luscious pink lips, " hello?" they said, "excuse me!"
"HUH?!?!" Armaan noticed he had been staring, "ugh- yeah, hi, I'm Armaan." He stuck out his hand, earning a handshake along with a confused smile.
"it's nice to meet you," she said, " umm' I'm kinda busy right now so if you could tell me why you're here?"
" yea, yea, I realized that umm' well I actually came to ask if you guys could keep it down, I'm trying to sleep."
Armaan watched in horror as she got an annoyed look on her face, realizing how he sounded he rushed to explain. Babbling he said,' I'm a doctor! Shift- this morning- it ended- at 6... You know what I'm sorry, I'm being inconsiderate." Armaan was embarrassed and started to rush out, walking backwards he continued rambling on, " I'm really sorry, it was nice meeting you! Ugh, welcome to the balding! Sorry again, I -"
"LOOKOUT!" Rhidz shouted, unfortunately not in time.

Crap, Rhidz thought, is he dead? This is not good. Rushing towards the guy on the floor she slipped on the same oil he had slipped on. While walking backwards he had bumped into the mover bringing her box of devotional items, the mover had dropped the box, sending the oil onto the floor. At that moment this guy had slipped- and fell pretty badly. The mover on the other hand had simply picked up the box and continued on, dripping oil on his way! Rhidz was now on top of Armaan.
"Wow, now this is a sight you don't see everyday." Rhidz looked up to see the grinning oaf she called her best friend.
"do wanna help oh, o I don't know? Help me maybe?" she asked.
"And become an accomplice to rape?!?! I think not!" he said with a mock how could you do this face.
Trying to get up but slipping on the oil Rhidzy replies, " if you don't help me right now, Angad Khanna, I will kill you! No. wait. I will make you WISH you were dead!"
"Rhidzy, mera jaan, don't you think that's a little extreme? Waise bhi, tum muje kuch nahi karsakti."
"that's what you think." Rhidz muttered.
Angad helped her up and looked down at an unconscious Armaan. "anyway," he said, " yeh bhaisab ko kya hogaya?"
"he fell"
"really? Mujhe laga ki he's floating."
"ANGADDDDDDDD"
"Rhidzyyyyyyyyyyy"
"argh! Just help me wake him up" Rhidz growled.
" let's get him somewhere safe first." Angad looking warily around the apartment. "mmm, wait a second I think I know where he lives, I'll be right back." Angad ran out Rhidz's apartment towards the door he had seen open. It was the next one over but was still somewhat far in the in the spacious apartment building. There were a total of six on this floor.
"hello?" Angad called into the apartment, "anyone hear?"
Hearing no response he walked in and found what he was looking for, pictures of the unconscious guy on Rhidzy's floor; this was proof that he lived here- that or Rhidz had a creeper neighbor. Running back Angad played dodge the mover, just like he had when he came in, "girls." he thought.
Angad and Rhidz dragged the guy back to his own home, earning suspicious glances from the movers.
"Rhidzy, yeh- why isn't he awake yet?"
"I don't know," Rhidz replied, checking Armaan's pulse, it was steady ." he'I think he fell asleep!" as if to prove this true, Armaan let out a little soft snore.
"wow," Angad said, " guess you floor was a great place to bunker down huh?"
"Angad-" Rhidz started, " never mind. Let's go, we have a LOT of unpacking to do
."
Leaving Armaan and planning to come back later Angad and Rhiddima left.




HELLO!

i hope u liked it! leave comments please! ill try and reply to them as much as possible but in a rush today!



Edited by shahidkaarmaan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
hey i just read ur ff an its really good so far... plzzzz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy jus read ur fanfic...and i love it...great jobb...lol love angad and ridz's relationship very cuteee....cud u plz pm me next time u continue?? andn continueee soon =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey ! hi ! i just read ur ff it is awesome
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey! I just read your FF and i was like WOW. Ur FF is awesome! Ridhima's entry was funny and poor Armaan couldnt sleep because of her. Ridhima is a funny girl yet she's so awesome. Armaan is such a sweetheart. LOL. He fell on the floor and fell asleep. Angad is funny as well. Ridhz-Angad share a cute friendship.
It seems like Angad-Armaan are going to be good friends.
The prolouge got me really curious. Armaan DIES? Because of Angad and Shashank?! Strange.
Eagerly awaiting Kripa, Mayank, and Nuper's entry.
Please continue soon and if you dont mind, can you PM me when you update?
Thanx!
Live, Laugh, Love,
~Jot~
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Posted: 16 years ago
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this ff is great. do update soon 😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Smileyface

heyy jus read ur fanfic...and i love it...great jobb...lol love angad and ridz's relationship very cuteee....cud u plz pm me next time u continue?? andn continueee soon =)


thank you and yes i will

Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey i just read ur ff an its really good so far... plzzzz continue soon


thanks

Originally posted by: Live.Laugh.Love

this ff is great. do update soon 😊

thanks will do!

Originally posted by: nehasfan

awesum part...
cont soon...

thanks

Originally posted by: akrock

awesum...
cont soon...

thanks will do
thanks!

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

hey ! hi ! i just read ur ff it is awesome

thank uuuuu

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

Hey! I just read your FF and i was like WOW. Ur FF is awesome! Ridhima's entry was funny and poor Armaan couldnt sleep because of her. Ridhima is a funny girl yet she's so awesome. Armaan is such a sweetheart. LOL. He fell on the floor and fell asleep. Angad is funny as well. Ridhz-Angad share a cute friendship.

It seems like Angad-Armaan are going to be good friends.
The prolouge got me really curious. Armaan DIES? Because of Angad and Shashank?! Strange.
Eagerly awaiting Kripa, Mayank, and Nuper's entry.
Please continue soon and if you dont mind, can you PM me when you update?
Thanx
Live, Laugh, Love,
~Jot~


thank you for ur long comment and thank you so much it really helps my ego haha
about armaan, he has to be adrable i mean the man lcud luk adorable while hes dies!
armaan-angad ull have to wait... lol but yea sooner or later
armaan shanks n angad theres more to it but ull have to read on :P

Edited by shahidkaarmaan - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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okk hey guys so was kinda busy anywho here is ur next update!

PART 4: Past Time

"Oww'" Armaan blinked his eyes open, 'why did his head hurt so much?' he thought, 'how much did I drink? Wait. When did I drink? He sat up and after a lot of effort, managed to get the room to stop spinning. The clock read 3:00 PM. Armaan remembered what had happened and groaned. Glancing at the clock he groaned again, I'll pop in really quick, on my way to work he decided.

Rhiddima and Angad had pretty much finished moving her in. "so," said Angad, " is that all of it? PLEASE tell me that's all of it!"
"Yes. that's all of it, " Rhidz replied, giving him an annoyed look, " I have more shopping to do!" she added, giving Angad a wide grin.
"NO." Angad said, " no. no. no!" he backed up towards the door, ready to run off if needed.
"Angaddd," Rhidz pouted, " Please? For me?" she gave him a puppy dog face, she could see him caving at that.
Shaking his head Angad replied, " NO. never again!" the last time he had been carrying 20 bags by the end of it, and they had already made two stops to the car!
"Please?" Rhidz said, " I promise never to teach your girlfriends 'galis' again!"
Angad paused, mulling it over, the last one had been especially harsh with those. "okay," he decided, " but only because of that." he relaxed and headed towards the newly placed couch, grinning Rhidz ran to him, jumping onto his back.
"oof! God woman! A little heads up would be nice."
"I'll remember that next time," Rhidz replied, " hey, we should go see if my neighbors up yet!"
"o yeah, ha-ha," Angad laughed, " this'll be fun." he walked out, Rhiddima still on his back, to check on Armaan.

Armaan jumped into the shower after putting on a mix of his favorite songs. As the hot water ran over his body he sang along: (I Write Sins, Not Tragedies by PANIC! At the Disco)


I chimed in,
Haven't you people ever heard of,
Closing the Go***mn door no?
It's much better to face these kinds of things,
With a sense of .
OH! Well infact'.


The track changed then, it had only a minute or so of each song. The next song was Leave Out All the Rest by Linkin Park'.


I dreamed I was missing,
You were so scared.
But no one would listen


Singing along Armaan finished up his shower. As the next song- Love Mera Hit Hit from Billu came on Armaan realized he'd forgotten to replenish his closet, he'd have to go to the laundry room. Grabbing a towel he break danced out of his bedroom singing:

Take me high,
You gotta please me,
There ain't ever gonna be another GUY
Ha-ha
Like me- WHOO!
Yeah! Love mera hit hit soniye,
tho phir kaise kit bit,
Tu '..


He trailed off, noticing an open-mouthed Rhiddima and the guy she was on perched on. All three stood there until the track changed, this time into Rise Above This by Seether:


Call your name every day, when i feel so helpless
I'm fallin' down, but I'll rise above this, rise above this
Call your name every day, when i seem so helpless
I'm fallin' down, but I'll rise above this, rise above this doubt

I'll mend myself before it gets me
...

Angad, who much to Armaan's disdain had burst out laughing, finally managed to control himself and turn around and walk into the hall in the middle of the spacious apartment. An embarrassed Armaan threw on some clothes and ran out to his living room where Rhiddima and Angad were in splits, hushing when they saw Armaan.

" We are reallyyyyyyyy sorry about everything!" Angad began. In the background the cd changed to another track- Apologize by One Republic

"Tell me that you need me,
Then you go and cut me down!
But wait------
Ya Tell me that you're sorry,
didn't think I'd turn around!
I say aaaa
Now its too late to 'poligizee
Its too laaaattttte
I said its too late to apologize
Its too laaaattttte'.."


Rhidz, Angad, and Armaan turned to look at the stereo player. Cursing the day he made that mix Armaan walked over and fumbled to turn it off. Taking a deep breath he turned to face the couple whom he guessed were his new neighbors. 'way to make an impression' he thought.
"Hi," he said out loud. "hi," they replied. They all stared at each other, not sure what to say. Angad took the initiative, "hi! I'm Angad," he walked over to shake hands with Armaan. " Armaan- um Armaan Malik. Hi" Armaan replied. " welcome to the building, its nice to meet you?" Angad noticed him sending glances towards Rhidz, " nice to meet you too!" Angad replied enthusiastically, " and this is Rhiddima, I call her Rhidzy, but only I can do that. SHE is your new neighbor, so" welcome her!" Angad pulled Rhidz towards them with a bemused smile, " wow" he said; " she usually never stops talk-" he trailed off noticing how Armaan was peering down at Rhidz, and turning to Rhidz he noticed she was also looking at Armaan Malik with a small, shy smile and a dreamy look in her eyes.

Looking back and forth between them he grinned, his little Rhidzy was experiencing love at first sight it seemed. Looking fondly at them he reached for his cell, he needed a picture'
Armaan couldn't think, his only thoughts were centered around her. Her and her deep, dark eyes'.
Rhidz couldn't think anything other than 'he's soooo cute! And his eyes speak of such'such'such what? Whatever, they were very soulful eyes. Love. that's it, that's what they spoke of, they spoke of love. For her perhaps? She was intrigued by this soulful eyed, break-dancing, singing in the shower'doctor.

"Bhehka Bhehka Main Bhehka Bhehka" Out of what seemed nowhere the song from Aamir's Ghajini played. As Armaan and Rhiddima broke their meaningful stare contest to search out the source, Angad fumbled with his cell phone grumbling about intrusive sisters. "Bhehka main bhehka, wo bhehki hawasi ayiee, dekhen'" finally managing to answer he turned around throwing Armaan and Rhidz an apologetic look, " Yes. Nupur?" he asked his sister.

Armaan and Rhiddima looked awkwardly at each other, neither knowing what to do without Angad talking. "I- I'm a doctor. Ugh, DR. Armaan Malik, " Armaan said, awkwardly trying to start a conversation.
"I know," Rhidz replied," you told me earlier, before you umm.. Fell."
Recalling their earlier meting and what it had just led to both blushed and looked away.
" so Dr. Malik-" Angad had finished his call and joined them again.
"Armaan, call me Armaan, or dr. Armaan, otherwise I feel old." Armaan interjected, with a small grin.
"right, so Dr. Armaan," Angad continued, " Rhidz here is an Intern, or well, will be an intern at Sanjeevani. Do you know it?"
"Yeah, " Armaan replied, " I ugh, work there."
" o well then I'll leave you two to chat then, I've got to run, Nupur's having another 'Major Problem'" he said.
"But-" Rhidz started, she was not given a chance to finish by Angad he gave her a quick peck on her forehead and waved to Armaan and ran out the door.



Edited by shahidkaarmaan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey relly amezing FF..but what armaan is dead..cant wait to find out how that happend..still i would be sad at the fact that he is dead....continue soon..add me to ur pm list..
❤️MONA
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WOW.....errr i dont know your name. LOL. OKay retake, WOW, Shahidkaarmaan! Haha.....
First of all, Armaan is soooooooooo cuttteeeee!! What i really found funny was when Angad and Ridhima saw him naked....or he had a towel right?
I was laughing so hard while reading this part. My cheeks hurt from smiling so much and i cant stop laughing and smiling.
Angad and Ridhima are sooo sweet with each other. I LOVE ANGAD! He talks so much. LOL
Nupur is Angad's sister! Kool. Just the way you wrote "major problem" has made it obvious that it will be funny. I hope it is.........
Oh also when Angad was saying sorry and the song "It's too late to Apoligize" came on, i was like laughing soo much. Really it WAS too late too apoligize because they already saw Armaan naked. LOL
Awww Ridhima and Armaan: Love at first sight. So rare.
Please update soon and thanx for the PM.
Live, Laugh, Love,
~Jot~

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