Mayur FF:SHATERRED IN LUV--REASON 2 LIVE.Upd:pg-42 - Page 8

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good thing Gunjan told Mayank....now it'll be interesting to see how Mayank reacts....please update soon....and do PM me.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey ppl.... all those who want me 2 add them 2 my pm list...guys, its all my pleasure....i'd luv 2 pm u n gt ur sweet comments...
Part 5:
Mayank was so shocked at this....he swallowed hard...for the very first tym in his lyf did Mayank feel he rly wanted 2 cry for a girl....he wud hv broken down into tears had he nt been in da public place n had it nt been Gunjan in front of him...yet evn aftr he tried his vry best, to his shock tears rolled down his cheeks..Gunjan gave him a confused look...Mayank immediately wiped his tears n managed to murmur:"Hoa kia tha?"
Gunjan...giving a sorry look:"Bhaiya ki death plane crash mein hoyi...tab se bhabhi ne rango ko apni zindagi se door kar dia...bhabhi kabhi aisi nahi thi...hasna, muskurana toh Nupur ka doosra naam tha...ye Nupur...is ki sirf ek hi pehchaan hai...Vikram Sinha ki vidvaah...safed rang mein lipti bhabhi ko dekh aksar rona aa jaata tha...par ab finally bhabhi ne rango ko apni zindagi mein aane ki ijazat di..."
Mayank cudnt react....all of a sudden came a bold:"Hi!"
That was Samrat....Samrat gave a look to the girl standing in front of him...in jeans n a casual shirt she luked lovely...
They introduced themselves to each other...n only aftr that did Samrat notice Mayank's disturbed face....Samrat thot it was btr to take him home first n so he said:"Ghar chalein?"
Mayank nodded n so involved was he in his own thoughts that he 4gt everything...b it saying "bye" to Gunjan, or to take Nupur along...he just turned n left...!!
Nupur who then came:"Sir...chale gaye?"
Gunjan...holding her softly by her shoulders:"Haan...ab hum chalein bhabhi?"
Nupur nodded...n they left...
At Mayank's home:
Mayank was still in his own world...Samrat cud make out his friend was so depressed...all he needed was a shoulder...n his tears then wud see no limit!!!
He went, sat beside Mayank n tightly hugged him....Mayank broke down....finally...he cried...he wept....hot tears rolled down his cheeks n died at his lips....one aftr another...n there was no limit to them....aftr a long tym Mayank felt he cud speak up again...Samrat asked:"Kia hoa?"
Mayank:"Nupur..."He continued:"She's a widow!!wo....uska pati mar gaya....wo shaadi shuda thi...wo..."he cud say no more...
Samrat had nvr seen Mayank cry that way...especially for a GIRL...he knew the matter was serious:"Tu toh usse bohat pyaar karne laga hai....Mayank...meri maan ghar waalo ko is k baare mein bata de!"
Mayank stood up n making his tone a bit higher said:"Kia bataon unko?Ye k jis ladki ko zindagi mein pehli baar mein ne chaha wo ek vidvah hai....ya ye k jis ladki se mein bas do din pehle mila wo mujh par aise chah gayi hai k do pal bhi wo mujhe akela nahi chorti...I luv her Samrat....main nahi ji paonga uske bina....sirf wahi hai jo meri biwi ban sakti hai...wo maasomiat....Kaise?Kaise nahi dekha maine k us masoom k chehre par kitna dard hai...."
Mayank turned n holding Samrat by his shoulder said:"Please kuch kar Samrat...Ye galat hai...please!"
Samrat blinked his eyes...a gesture to ensure him everythng wud b fine...he hugged Mayank again...n Mayank...v knew a heartbroken wud cry....he was crying!!!
At Nupur's house:
Gunjan silently contemplated Mayank's reaction to Nupur's past sitting on her bed....she knew that the angel she had been praying for..was here...he was here to change Nupur's lyf....
Part ends..
Comments Please..😳
EDITED--Nxt update on pg-14
Edited by kiran--madi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: Kanky

Chalo, Mayank ko shanti mili hogi . . . 🤣

Kanky...yaar shanti ka toh nahi pata...kranti zaroor mili hai😉😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow soo nyc.. gud job waiting 4 next part.. can u tell wat will happen in d next part.. just a precap!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow its really good plz update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very nicely written....please update soon...and don't forget to PM me :)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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aww..i cried with mayank..he loves her sooo much..pls jaldi milan karana..lovely part..cont soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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amazing
he is crying becoz he dont see pain in her eyes
true lovers
and sammy is also best friend
love the part
thx for updateand pm
Posted: 16 years ago
#79
awesome part nicely written continue soon n pm me!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwww........wht an emotional update..........lovd it vryyyy vryy much........n i felt xtra happiness to c d deep depthness in d friendship of Mayank n Samrat........i really love Sayank vryyyyyy much.....they r d perfect example of best frnz...d way sammy stood for him,cared for him n all...ws just amazin...thnxx a loot yaar for this lovley update....plzzz continuue soon n if possible plzz add me to d pm list...😃

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