Mayur FF:SHATERRED IN LUV--REASON 2 LIVE.Upd:pg-42 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
Great update!!
Mayank is totally in love with her...hehe...but I guess Nupur will resist a bit...Its going to be really interesting!
hehe....Gunjan bhi suspects something!!
Can't wait to read more...!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
Hello everyone...n again Kiran luved da appreciation she received...
@preethis....m so glad u r eager 2 read da ff...as of updates u cud gt da index rite on pg-1...
N here nxt....
Part-4:
Yet another day...
It was nw a Sunday...Nupur had a half say at office...so right at 12 pm Nupur left office...Mayank who cudnt get enough of her look that day stopped her as she was calling 4 an auto outside da office...
Nupur turned behind 2 say:"Ji sir!"
Mayank, confused..he didnt knw wt 2 tell her since he stopped her n he cudnt tell her y he ACTUALLY stopped her...he said:"Umm..."He started a light-hearted conversation:"Aap bhaag raheen thee?"
Nupur didnt understand anything:"Ji?"
Mayank:"I mean...kia aap ko ye darr tha k aaj phir main aap ko lift offer karoonga?"
Nupur...hesitating...mayb she didnt want Mayank 2 offer her lift da way he did earlier...she made up something:"Sir...main.."
Mayank interrupted:"Sir nahi...Mayank!"
Nupur:"Ji?"
Mayank:"Ji....dekhye is waqt hum office k baher hain...toh naa hi main aap ka boss hoon aur naa aap meri employ...v r more of friends...so no SIR!"
Nupur was cmpletely speechless....she didnt knw hw 2 react 2 Mayank's one-aftr-another-questions.........reluctantly she finally said:"Mayank..."
Hyy............2 Mayank his name sounded so different wen Nupur said that...
gosh...hw he luved staring in those deep big eyes...he luved da "hesitant" expression on her face....he just said:"Better!Waise aap ne..."
Nupur:"Aap nahi tum..."
Mayank:"Ji?"
Nupur:"Ji....friends mein AAP nahi hota"
Mayank:"Hmmhh...rite...acha toh tum ye batao k tumhein meri company itni boring lagti hai k tum aaj bhaag rahi thi?"
Nupur:"Nahi aisi baat nahi hai...main..."
Just then a car stopped near n Gunjan came out...Nupur was surprised 2 c her:"Gunjan tu yahan?"
Gunjan:"Haan...aaj ek hi class thi...Sunday jo tha...socha tumhein pick karloon..."then noticing the stranger guy n immediately realizing he was da one she saw da odr nite she said a sweet:"Hi!"
Mayank:"Hello...umm Nupur ye?"
Before Nupur cud reply she realized that she had forgotten her purse n telling Gunjan 2 wait she went upstairs again!"
Once she left, Gunjan said:"Bhabhi bhi naa!"
Mayank was completely blank...did he just hear "bhabhi?"
Mayank:"Kia...Bhabhi?ye tumhari?"
Gunjan:"Hmmhh...ye meri bhabhi hai..."
Mayank was shattered....he didnt knw wt 2 say...:"Toh tumhare bhaiya?"
Gunjan giving a sorry smile:"He's no more..."
Part ends...I knw this's a short one...bt want some excitement...w8 till i update vry vry soon!!
Comments please😳
EDITED--Nxt update on pg-11
Edited by kiran--madi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
glad gunjan told mayank!!
😊

waise kiran, keep writing, but loonger ones pls 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
omg!!
He found out

Plz update sooper soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
Awww Mayank found out, looking forward to the next! ;)
Posted: 16 years ago
#56
omg mayank found out!!
plz plz continue soon!!!!
i can't wait!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
hiii
gr8 update...
m-n convowas nice...i liked the way mayank started the convo..
so they r friends now...good...
now mayank know the truth....wooww...can't wait for the next part..
plz update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
omg omg omg mayank found out.... loving it.. pleae update a longer one dear...
and thanks for the PM and Index in the first page...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!! ab dono frnds hain.....aage kya hoga?...........lovely updt yaar..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
Chalo, Mayank ko shanti mili hogi . . . 🤣

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