Mayur FF:SHATERRED IN LUV--REASON 2 LIVE.Upd:pg-42 - Page 10

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Posted: 16 years ago
#91
hey Kiran...once again an awesome piece of writing!👏.....Keep it up yaar!👍🏼...Waiting for the next part now!😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
#92
gr8 update!mayank cried..tat ws so touching..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#93
wow nice part dear......
plzz continue soon dear.....
thanks 4 d pm .........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#94
so sweet.... samrat is such a good friend.... and gunjan knows already!!! yay she will help them be together!!! anyway pls pm when u update!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Maria_dmg

wow soo nyc.. gud job waiting 4 next part.. can u tell wat will happen in d next part.. just a precap!!!

hey sure maria😉....well nxt part ll b Mayank telling Nupur abt him knwg abt his past..then MN friendship tkn a step 4wrd...they ll b spending more tym 2gthr..mayb evn a walk in moonlight😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran--madi

hey sure maria😉....well nxt part ll b Mayank telling Nupur abt him knwg abt his past..then MN friendship tkn a step 4wrd...they ll b spending more tym 2gthr..mayb evn a walk in moonlight😳

thnx doll... plz update nxt part soon.. waiting eagerly 4 it..😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Superb
Thanxxxxxx for pm
Do pm me abt next part also
Really good
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Posted: 16 years ago
#98
Hi everyone....
@Mahak Sinha....muaaaaaahhh...u r such a sweetheart...ek saath saare parts parh liye... 🤗
@myownarea....dearie...i gt ur pm n sweetie i'd soon b replying...😉
Thank u everyone...
nw here's wt u call a BIG update...
Part-6:
Mayank hardly slept for an hour or two...he himself didnt knw y he was he waiting so eagerly for the nxt morning...Mext morning Mayank called Nupur in his office....Nupur went in and started speaking:"Mayank tum..."and then realizing that she was in office in front of her BOSS nt FRIEND she repeated with correction:"Sry..sir aap..."
Mayank interrupted her:"Its fine Nupur...guess Mayank theek hai..."
Nupur said with a smile:"Mayank tumne mujhe bulaya?"
Mayank handing a file to her:"Haan ye...ye tum dekh lo...its abt the new project.."
Nupur took the file from Mayank n started reading it...while she was absorbed in the file...Mayank carefully looked at the innocent one standing rite in front of him...n then he said:"Nupur.."
Nupur didnt look up bt jst said:"Hmmh?"
Mayank, hesitantly:"Wo kal Gunjan se baat karte karte..wo..tumhare past k baare mein pata..."his voice faded as Nupur looked up to him...
Nupur smiled n aftr a while of silence said:"Zindagi bhi kitni ajeeb hai na....jab sab theek hota hai tab kuch aisa ho jaata hai k..."she stopped in between n continued:"Kabhi kisi apne ko khona bohat dard deta hai...khaas tor se tab jab wo aap ko apni jaan se bhi zyada pyaara ho...aur..."she again stopped this tym realizing she was actually saying all this to a "new" friend...then she changed her tone n said:"Sry main wo.."
Mayank:"Its ok Nupur....main tumhein zyada toh nahi jaanta...aur hamari dosti bhi bas abhi abhi hoyi hai...bt Nupur ek cheez hamesha yaad rakhna...kabhi kabhi kisi ajnabee mein hi ek bohat acha dost mil jaata hai...agar kabhi tum kuch kehna chahti ho..YOU KNOW YOU HAVE A FRIEND...."
Nupur was astonished...this was the first tym since Vikram's death that she found such a friend in a stranger...she smiled n said:"Thanks Mayank!Thanks alot!"
Mayank:"Aaj keh dia...ab mat kehna...tumhein sry or thanx kehne ki permission nahi hai..."
Nupur smiled n then highering her tone a bit said:"Arey haan...wo aaj shaam ko Gunjan madam chahti hain k tum aur tumhara dost...umm...haan...Samrat...tum dono ko dinner pe aana hai..."
Mayank:"Lekin Nupur..main?"
Nupur:"Arey...is mein itna ghabraana kyun?Actually Gunjan ka birthday hai..wo sirf humare saath celebrate karti hai...is saal tum dono bhi invited ho...so aaj shaam bhoolna nahi.."
N then aftr a brief gudbye, Nupur left Mayank's office...
In the evening at Sinha house:
Mayank n Samrat had reached the house...actually Nupur cud see blossoming luv btwn Gunjan n Sammy....n Samrat was having all the fun...infact everyone in the family was...!!!
On the dinner table:
Mr.Sinha:"Arey Samrat...humne suna hai tum shayeri bhi karte ho.."
Samrat keeping a hand on his heart:"Arey uncle...kia yaad dila dia...ek sunye...arz hai...MAIN TUMHARE DAR SE YUN HI WAPIS NA JAON GA!!"
Mayank interrupted...n in an amazing bt funny style completed:"AGAR DARWAAZA NA MILA TOH KHIRKI SE KOOD JAONGA!!"
Everyone in the house broke out into laughter....they luved this...first tym in years everyone including Nupur forgot everything n they wr rly rly ENJOYING!!!
Fun, masti n awesome company made the evening a memorable one...then Mayank:"Chale Sam?"
Mrs.Sinha:"Arey ruko na beta.."
Before Mayank cud speak Sam took over:"Actually aunty...Mayank ko dinner k baad walk pe jaane ki aadat hai...toh.."
Gunjan interrupted:"O...toh bhabhi k saath chale jao na Mayank..."
Nupur:"Main...Gunj..."
Gunjan:"Please bhabhi.."
Gunjan gave Nupur a signal to make her understand she wanted to spend sm more tym with Sam..bt actually she also wanted Mayank n Nupur to spend more tym with each other...
Nupur reluctantly agreed...n then wt?Chandini raat...haathon main haath...ok ok...ofcourse they didnt hold hands bt then they were having gud tym...while walking Nupur:"Mayank...aaj kehna parega THANK U SO MUCH!"
Mayank had nvr seen Nupur so excited in front of him......he said:"Kyun?"
Nupur:"Tum..tum bohat ache ho!!Aaj sab kitne khush the...all bcoz of u.."
Mayank:"Haan aur aaj main ne kuch aur bhi dekha..."
Nupur:"Kia?"
Mayank:"Ek masoom si ladki ko pehli baar khul kar haste dekha.."
Nupur cudnt help bt she was blushed bcoz she knew he was referring to her..Mayank went a bit closer to Nupur lowering his head a bit said:"Hasti raho...achi lagti ho.."
Nupur luked down n then smiled n the two silently stood lukn at the moon...actually Mayank was more interested to luk at sm1 he found far more prettier than the moon...then they returned home...
Late at nite:
Gunjan was sitting on her bed n making notes while Nupur came n sat close to her n said in her bubbly voice:"Aaj sunrise dekha tha kia?"
Gunjan:"Kyun?"
Nupur:"Meri bholi bhaali nand jo din mein bhi notes nahi banati aaj raat ko?"
Gunjan luked up n said:"Bhabhi!!"
Nupur:"Nahi...waise nahi...i mean...tu...notes?tujhe latest jeans nahi kharidni?"
Gunjan:"Bhabhi tum naa!"
Nupur smiling:"Acha chal main help karti hoon!!"
Gunjan stopped writing n resting her head on Nupur's shoulder said:"Kab tak meri help karogi bhabhi...mujhe bara toh hone do!"
Nupur:"Jab tak main hoon...u dnt hv to wry!"
Gunjan:"N that's y i luv u so so much!!Acha bhabhi..."
Nupur:"Hmhh?"
Gunjan trying to pick up the topic:"Mayank acha hai naa?"
Nupur, teasing:"Mujhe toh laga tha tu Samrat..."
Gunjan:"Bhabhi..?!"
Nupur smiling...:"Hmhh...acha hai..bohat acha hai...bilkul bindaas, friendly..aur.."
Gunjan:"Aur?"
Nupur:"Aur kuch nahi chal so jaa!!"
Gunjan smiled to herself n she was so happy at this steady n slow progress...
Gud nite gurls...
GUYS PLEASE NOTE THIS...ALL THOSE WHO WANT ME TO PM THEM THE UPDATED LINK ITS A HUMBLE REQUEST...PLEASE ADD ME TO UR BUDDY LIST...ITS GONNA SAVE ME LOTS OF TYM TO SEND PMz TOGETHER RATHER THAN ALL SEPERATE...SO PLEASE DO THIS HELP!!😊
N nw...
Comments please😳
EDITED--Nxt update on pg-17
Edited by kiran--madi - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its really good plz update soon

Posted: 16 years ago
great part
loved the shayari by sayank😆😆
continue soon

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