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mansibharti thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

comment edited on pg-13 😃
Edited by mansibharti - 15 years ago
dipu thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey!!!

that was great one....

first armaan and kids wow they were really adorable...loved the way she discover this side of armaan...

that little fight was amazing yash and vb were too good....and that instant effect after fight was also too good....

awww armaan is missing her.....but as u said his logical mind wont let him agreed on that....

hope atul will find out something...

and wow the way he was stairing at her...aimee plz update next one soon really cant wait .....

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Posted: 15 years ago
the kids are too sweet......
and armaan missing riddhima....that's too interesting...
and atul shocked by his behaviour....armaan depending on riddhima....gr8 going
loved the part...and loved to know armaan riddhima track is taking another step...
update soon pleaseeeee

love
debadrita

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Posted: 15 years ago
hi the argument was very nice. but yes i wish to see some romantic stuff too.
well All The Best . Hope u get some ideas and do update soooooooon i realllllllllllllllllllllly missed it .
PM Me.
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyyyyyyyy aimee .....
yayyyyyyy u updated !!!...it was sooo soo well penned...loved it loads..
riddhima watching the scene -- her mr.irritating with her adorable kids...her admiration at seeing this other side to armaan's personality was nice..and armaan being patient with the kids and doing everything they ask him to was cute...u penned the description really well :)
and the bickering..gosh..that was good...and the way yash and vaibhav quipped up in support of their favourites was cute and their fight was even more cuter :) and the way riddhima couldnt meet his gaze and felt uncomfortable was good...feelings starting to bloom in the hearts :D
and the description of armaan and riddhima's work and their workload increasing and armaan missing his PA...aawwww...thats nice...atul's convo with armaan was nice..atul getting interested in armaan's reactions to riddhima and wondering abt his feelings for her...
and then armaan and riddhima's moment...armaan thinking abt her and her appearence there and armaan gazing at her and the ending was awesome..what i really hope is that this scene is not a dream...
well penned hun !!..loved reading it :D
and if u can do send me pms informing ur update, please :)
awaiting the next one :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey dear. Cooooooooooooollllllll update. I loved every bit of it.
Finally Riddhima saw one more facet of Armaan. Gosh, the kids are truly his biiiiiiggggggggggg fans. Both were stuck to him like his extensions. And Riddhima has to finally feel something. Kab tak Armaan se sirf fight karegi huh?
Oh ... waise AR fight along with VY was too cute. And whats with Armaan staring at Riddhima??? He got her all nervous ... hahaha!!!
Loved all these soulful confessions of Armaan
"I haven't even seen her for the whole one week..."
"Naah, its ok bhai. I don't think she can replace Riddhima... I believe nobody can."
"She wont appreciate that... You don't know her..."
"Its just, when she is physically present
"Yeah she is... but she is more than just help..."
Armaan Mallik taking initiative to call Riddhima and just hear her voice is totally beyond imagination. His disappointment is totally seen in his actions.
And Atul's 'log on Armaan's changing behaviour' and 'Mystical Stances of Armaan Malik' has no bet. So apt ... he is a true friend and brother. Does not miss on his smallest of things. Cool man.
Well, am curious - whose going to play cupid? Rahul or Atul??? I know I know ... some time before this, but still thinking.
The end of this part is like new beginning. But is Riddhima really there???
Please please please update soon. Hope you all fine now.
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyyyyyyyyy 😛


nice part
continue soon do pm me



with luv!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛
😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
Loved it Aimee di.............
Abhi kaisi hai aapki tabiyat..............
Sabse Pehle...........
Dont stress U r self..
...n...
Take care of U r self...
Dont forget to add me in u r PM list.............
Love u
yogitha...
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey aimee
firsty i m soo sorry for this late reply , was soo busy with works this week , no more excuses ,
firstly i m soo happy to see that you updated with the part , i was like waiting for soo long to read the part , i m happy that you r back and will try and give us regular updates now
ok as per epi 53
i loved the part soo much , i was very very very very happy after reading the part ,
the start was nice riddhima secrectly watching armaan with the two boys very nice , hope her opiniopn regarding her khadoos boss change soon , and yaa really loved that armaan and riddhima fight lol's i thought vaibhav and yash were behaving and looking like being more elder then ar at that time ,
loved that part , and then the vaibhav supporting his angel and yash his superman , all that was great , very nice and sweet
loved that small almost lmost eye lock between ar , but yaar ye armaan and riddhima ki eye watching session kabhi complete kyon nahi ho paata , i wish to see armaan watching her eyes , and realising that she was the same in that hotel that night ,
waise loved armaan and atul chat it was the best
wow yaar armaan missing her soo much , and his saying riddhima being special and that riddhima ki place koi nahi le sakta , and wow yaar she is just more than a help to him
loved atul reaction to all this ,
well at the end when armaan sees riddhima there , i m still having a dought over that is it his dream or reality , well i suppose for that i have to wait till next part
loved the story progress , waiting for the next part
please yaar wanna read ahead regarding there stories ,
please try and update with the next part soon , will be waiting for your update , and please creat your pm list soon ,and add me to that
till then take care ,
lots of love
simi
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mansibharti


hey aimee😃 finally you updated , you make us wait way too long yaar... i thought you have dropped the idea of continuing this one... Arey nahi yaar. I love being here, but my life has gone haywire in the past few months, and the rate of my recovery is also not helping...

neway coming to the part everything was nice... and as you said.. not much action...after such a long wait i was expecting more... sorry to disappoint you, i cant think od romance under these bandages wrapped around me. this minne's wedding is taking too much time can you wrap it up by next part... Yes i know, but i will try my best to bring something of your interest in next few episodes with Minnie's wedding...

and THANK GOD at least he realised what is missing... *sigh* yeah both our hero as well as heroine are dumbos... though i feel he might be dreaming... and as soon as he realise that he will get to meet ridhhima if he goes to see that land he wont wait any sec...😆lets see...

but plz aimee yaar seriously 2 things first at least decide the length of time that you would take to update coz if you really want to continue then you should atleast update after regular intervals and second speed up, you must be bursting with ideas when you were resting.... LOL, i know i am testing your patience dear. but really, if i had it was in my hands, i would have finished it in next 10days. but the problem is when you are 24X7 under your parents's observation, with miles long bandages wrapped around your body, and you eat atleast 11 tablets and 4 syrups 2 times in a day, i am sure you cant do anything with the ideas floating in your mind. Besides, do you really think any person who is in such situation can think of a hard-core romance? Apart from this, i am not sitting idle anymore. I have already started working from home dear.
for the past two parts it feels as if the story is just dragging i know it is... but i am still not in a situation to think anything too lovey-dovey at the moment. Hoever i also dont want my readers to keep waiting for updates, so i am posting whatever i am able think of. and another thing i made you a request about Armaans horoscope problem ,if you remember it, if not i will PM you... pls pm me your confusion...
plz dont feel that i always criticize.... no, dont worry, i am not at all offended by you reply. in fact your opinion does encourages me to think something new. i really like your story and way of writing and all i try is to be honest with you.... thanks

love u loads 😃❤️

Edited by Wild.Aimee - 15 years ago

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