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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: flaming_saphire

hey........ da part was awesum.

really enjoyed reading it.
especially da part where all four of them have a fight. I am glad you liked it.
waiting 2 read da next part.
continue soooooooon.
n plz add me 2 ur pm list. sure i will 😊, but please add me to your buddy list .
Thanks a lot dear...

Originally posted by: srihari_phoenix

amazing part.....
loved AR bickering and vaibhav & yash's arguement....lolz....
Aww, thanks for the appreciation dear.
i guess ridhima is changing a bit to modest ..
you will see more changes in her, very soon 😊
plzzzz continue soooooon.....
waiting 4 the nxt part......
plzz do pm me...
sure i will, when i start sending pms. have you added me to your buddy list?
thnxxx.....

Edited by Wild.Aimee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sasik

hey

lovely prt.
continue soon.

Thanks for replying

Originally posted by: agrima2009

Hey Aimee,

Awesoms part

Well i m new on the forum Welcome to my FF new friend... but i have read all the 53 parts of your ff till now , and you know what i m a great fan of your ff. Thanks for liking it dear...
Aur ha jaldi se AR ki full Lov story start kar do aur kuch twist- wist dalo. Sure, even i want to see them fall in love ASAP 😊...
And pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeese update soon

I m waiting for your next part

You new friend
Agrima

Originally posted by: yogithasingh

Loved it Aimee di.............
Abhi kaisi hai aapki tabiyat.............. i am much better now, thanks for asking sweetie...
Sabse Pehle...........
Dont stress U r self... dont worry, i wont 😊
...n...
Take care of U r self...
Dont forget to add me in u r PM list............. sure i will, but have you added me to your buddy list?
Love u
yogitha...

Edited by Wild.Aimee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzling_armaan

hi the argument was very nice. but yes i wish to see some romantic stuff too. i will try my best to introduce romance soon...

well All The Best . Hope u get some ideas and do update soooooooon i realllllllllllllllllllllly missed it .
PM Me. i will, when i start sending PMs within next 2 episodes.

Originally posted by: luvkaranmadly

heyyyyyyyyyy 😛


nice part
continue soon

do pm me



with luv!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛
😊

Thanks for reply friend
Edited by Wild.Aimee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Robin_M

hey aimee! Hi Robin... i have to say that i just loved this part! it was a bit different the the previous parts, and i can see some changes....awesome job! i really enjoyed this one! Thanks a lot for the support ear.

the scene riddhima witnessed between armaan and the boys was extremely touching...im soo gld riddhima finally show this side of armaan, the loving caring guy! Next few episodes will bring more changes... a little slow as compared to other stories (i am sorry for being such a creeper 😆), but yes they will will be positive.
and their bickering is just pure entertaining...i love it to the core! lol ridz and vib vs armaan and yash! it was such a cute scene! lol the little boys switched sides! loved the way they defended their idols lol those two are adorable! The part was actually inspired by my little cousin and nephew. They are just like Yash and Vaibhav...
and then something shifted between AR...the way he smiled and riddhima saw something in his eyes! both appologized!!! that scene was really tooooo good! i have already outlined next 4-5 episodes, but i assure you that there will be more sparks seen very soon.
OMG atul suspects too now! yeah, Atul in my story is a smart guy. but armaan made it so obvious that he misses riddhima! what can he do, its not in his control anymore 😆 lol im glad that atleast atul is seeing the signs! but armaan is really a bodhu! i completely agree. doesnt realize he misses her and how deeply he is affected by her!
that last scene was romantic! riddhima cant look into his eyes!? but at least armaan picked up that maybe shes hiding her eyes! lets see what our stupidly slow falling-in-love hero does now... and wow he was in such a daze after seeing her! lol and then held her hand!!! wow sooo sweet! loved that scene!
very well done with this part aimee, it was great! and im sure u will do fine with romantic scenes well, i dont know, bu am trying to think of romance. Unfortunately, whenever i close my eyes to imagine something romantic, most of the time i see myself hanging like a puppet with long white straps, over a huge tube of yuck 😡 smelling tonics, surrounded by huge stone sized colorful capsules ...😆, i know its silly 😆, but what can i do. lol looking forward to more... but i promise that i have already got an idea, which i will be using within a few episodes. please continue soon!
ohh yes sure please add me to your pm list :) sure, you are on it friend 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dipu

hey!!! Hi...

that was great one....

first armaan and kids wow they were really adorable...loved the way she discover this side of armaan... she has more to learn

that little fight was amazing yash and vb were too good.... and that instant effect after fight was also too good.... yeah, sometimes after-effects of quarrels are good 😃

awww armaan is missing her.....but as u said his logical mind wont let him agreed on that....

hope atul will find out something... lets see what happens next

and wow the way he was stairing at her...aimee plz update next one soon really cant wait .....

Originally posted by: Debadrita Saha

the kids are too sweet...... i love them too 😊...
and armaan missing riddhima....that's too interesting... he will be showing more signs now 😉
and atul shocked by his behaviour....armaan depending on riddhima....gr8 going
loved the part...and loved to know armaan riddhima track is taking another step...
thanks for liking it dear.
update soon pleaseeeee

love
debadrita

Edited by Wild.Aimee - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: suv.patki

Hey dear. Cooooooooooooollllllll update. I loved every bit of it.

Aww, thanks for the appreciation friend...
Finally Riddhima saw one more facet of Armaan. she has much more to see and learn 😊... Gosh, the kids are truly his biiiiiiggggggggggg fan. Both were stuck to him like his extensions. Hmm, they are 😆... And Riddhima has to finally feel something. Kab tak Armaan se sirf fight karegi huh? Wo to hai... Haseena bach ke kahan jayegi, kabhi na kabhi to kabu mein aayegi 😆
Oh ... waise AR fight along with VY was too cute. And whats with Armaan staring at Riddhima??? He got her all nervous ... hahaha!!! Our hero has that effect on her 😉
Loved all these soulful confessions of Armaan
"I haven't even seen her for the whole one week..."
"Naah, its ok bhai. I don't think she can replace Riddhima... I believe nobody can."
"She wont appreciate that... You don't know her..."
"Its just, when she is physically present
"Yeah she is... but she is more than just help..."
You have pointed out some, very crucial things. To tell you the truth, i have used all these phrases to show that he has already started falling in love with Riddhima. And you are absolutely right. But his past and his in-denial state of mind isnt just blocking the ways to his heart...
Armaan Mallik taking initiative to call Riddhima and just hear her voice is totally beyond imagination. His disappointment is totally seen in his actions. Yes, maybe then he will realize his feelings
And Atul's 'log on Armaan's changing behaviour' and 'Mystical Stances of Armaan Malik' has no bet. So apt ... he is a true friend and brother. Does not miss on his smallest of things. Cool man. Though naturewise he is the same guy as in DMG, but Atul is comparatively a smarter guy in my FF.
Well, am curious - whose going to play cupid? Rahul or Atul??? I know I know ... some time before this, but still thinking. Hmm, lets see 😉
The end of this part is like new beginning. But is Riddhima really there??? wait and watch , i mean read...😃
Please please please update soon. Hope you all fine now. i am much better now...

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SunainaTM007

heyyyyyyyyy aimee .....

yayyyyyyy u updated !!!...it was sooo soo well penned...loved it loads.. Thanks sweetie 😊
riddhima watching the scene -- her mr.irritating with her adorable kids...her admiration at seeing this other side to armaan's personality was nice..and armaan being patient with the kids and doing everything they ask him to was cute...u penned the description really well :) i am more than just happy to find that you loved it... 😊
and the bickering..gosh..that was good...and the way yash and vaibhav quipped up in support of their favourites was cute and their fight was even more cuter :) Well, as i said, it was inspired a naughty real-life pair from my family 😆 and the way riddhima couldnt meet his gaze and felt uncomfortable was good...feelings starting to bloom in the hearts :D abhi to ye bas shuruaat hai, abhi bhot kuch baaki hai 😉
and the description of armaan and riddhima's work and their workload increasing and armaan missing his PA...aawwww...thats nice... kya karun, kam unka peecha hi nahi chodta 😕. atul's convo with armaan was nice..atul getting interested in armaan's reactions to riddhima and wondering abt his feelings for her... Atul has always been interested in his ations and reactions.
and then armaan and riddhima's moment...armaan thinking abt her and her appearence there and armaan gazing at her and the ending was awesome.. Earlier Armaan was smart enough to hide his feelings, but now his feelings are getting out of his own control 😃 what i really hope is that this scene is not a dream... lets see 😆
well penned hun !!..loved reading it :D
and if u can do send me pms informing ur update, please :) i will start sending PMs within next 2 episodes or so, when one of bandage will be removed. My arm will be more free to move then. I guess you have me added to yur buddy list. i will definitely PM you.
awaiting the next one :)

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: simi2

hey aimee Hi Simi

firsty i m soo sorry for this late reply , was soo busy with works this week , no more excuses , Hey, no problem dear. main bhi to kitni baar late ho jaati hu. i can understand. Atleast you ARE responding 😊.
firstly i m soo happy to see that you updated with the part , i was like waiting for soo long to read the part , i m happy that you r back and will try and give us regular updates now. i will try my best not to take too long now onwards
ok as per epi 53
i loved the part soo much , i was very very very very happy after reading the part ,
the start was nice riddhima secrectly watching armaan with the two boys very nice , hope her opiniopn regarding her khadoos boss change soon 😆 sure her opinion is bound to change. Apne hero ke charm se akhir kab tak bachegi?😃 , and yaa really loved that armaan and riddhima fight lol's i thought vaibhav and yash were behaving and looking like being more elder then ar at that time , kids always try to behave like elders, whenever they get an opportunity. But their efforts to be like elders often end up in a cute mess 😛.
loved that part , and then the vaibhav supporting his angel and yash his superman , all that was great , very nice and sweet thanks 😊
loved that small almost lmost eye lock between ar , but yaar ye armaan and riddhima ki eye watching session kabhi complete kyon nahi ho paata , i wish to see armaan watching her eyes , and realising that she was the same in that hotel that night , i cant say anything about this particular realization, but yes, his wish will be granted soon 😳
waise loved armaan and atul chat it was the best me too
wow yaar armaan missing her soo much , and his saying riddhima being special and that riddhima ki place koi nahi le sakta , and wow yaar she is just more than a help to him yes she is. lets see when he will actually realize it
loved atul reaction to all this ,
well at the end when armaan sees riddhima there , i m still having a dought over that is it his dream or reality , well i suppose for that i have to wait till next part
loved the story progress ,hmm 😃 waiting for the next part hope you like the next episode as well
please yaar wanna read ahead regarding there stories ,
please try and update with the next part soon , will be waiting for your update , and please creat your pm list soon ,and add me to that. sure i will. if you havent then please add me to your buddy list.
till then take care ,
lots of love
simi

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Aimee,
I have updated my comment on page 13.

Luv u<333
Kashish
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Posted: 15 years ago
hiya di....!!
gr8 part...js tat um geting impatient ...!!lol...um a sucker 4 romance di...!!luvd the wy u hv ritn armaan dreaming part..its kinda hilarious n romantic at tyms...!!
n the tiny-winy fite...lol...it ws so funny...!!id de kids siding upp...!!
evytym i read ur update...u make us yearn 4 more...!!
i dint wan u 2 stop rt thr di....tat too at that pt yaar..
di pls cont soon...um craving 4 de nxt part
hope ur prfectly fyn nw...!
do update once ur free
keep smiling di
luvya
ur crazy ashu
PS:sry 4 de delay di...!!i thot i hd ritn de comment...!!um kinda dazed these..!!lol....
Edited by ashluvdmg - 15 years ago

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