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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
ooooo i hate this jai
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
omg i hate jai
i feel for bani
and my heart is hurting, cuz we all now its just a b****y bet!
poor bani...
cont soon
SA
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
hey dear
me hating jai more and more now
how can jai destroy a girls life
only for a bet
poor bani will be shtttered like anything after learning about this bet
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 4

Soon bani wake with sunrays hitting her face.she turns to her side and sees jai sleeping .she blushed remembering last night.then she kisses jai on lips .and left the bed to get ready.when jai comes to kitchen he was fully ready.they had breakfast together and soon jai left kissing bani on lips .In his mind he says "goodbye ,from now onwards I don't who u r"

As soon as jai reaches his apt,he sees his frds waiting for him.he gives them thumps up and says mission accomplished.NOW miss verginal is no more vergin.I deflower her .and all laughj.Jai collects his ammount of bet .and says thank god I don't have to bear that boring middle class .then he says to his frds firstly I have to take a shower as I can't bear her touch on my body.his frds says .u had beared her 4 long ,months few more min will not harm.tell us in details what all happened.

Jai laughs loudly and says ok.if u all are so eager to know then I don't have prob.and start imitating bani how she was shying and blushing . and his frds ask all dirty q abt her body and he ans all of them without shame and they all talk abt her .

Suddenly they hear some sound at door everybody turns and they all are shoked.

There was bani standing at door and at her feet some glass pieces.she had heard everything she was white like ghost and too shocked to react.she came to give jai's gift which he has left in her apt.yes she had bought a glasse heart saying "I am all yours"

After seeing bani everybody became quite.bani approches jai and ask was this all true?? U were playing with me because of a bet.

Jai very shamelessly :yes it is all true and thanks to u ,u made my work easy .

Bani slaps jai .when she lift her hand to slap him agaian .jai holds her and said get out now.i don't need u anymore but I'll say that u make me very happy yesterday night so u can keep the money I won in bet .its a big amount for a middle class poor girl.and throws note on her and laugh if u want u can start this as a business and I myself will recommand u to some frds ,bani start crying .

Jai :-oh cut the crap .I didn't rape u.it was u who jumpd on bed .i am not at all responsible.

Bani can't take it anymore runs outside.

After reaching home she locked herself in bathroom and opens cold water tap..next few days she does not goes to coll , one day she was crying on herself door bell of her appt ring .first she didn't notice but after constant ringing she went to open the door.er seeing the person she was shocked .she was not expecting this person but she needed that person most at time like this .on the otherhand person was equally shocked seeing bani in this state.

When bani just flung herself on that person and fainted. ---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- As iIhave nothing else to do today in office so decided to post next part.I know u r going to hate Jai more.but belive me all this is happening to make mani strong.Bani will teach jai a lesseon ,he will never forget. Please read and comment .All bad comments are also welcome
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
hey dear
that was a good part
hope bani really teaches jai a lesson
and who this person is who came in the end
and hope bani is not pregnant
plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
omg i hate jai more with every part till now
poor bani. wonder who that person is?
cont soon
SA
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17

Oh now who is the person at the door. I hope its not Pushkar as he deserves the same treatment as his friend Jai. I hope Bani gives it back as good as she got it from him. Jai surely doesn't know to treat a person with respect and that is what counts the most in an individual. I think he is going to learn a valuable lesson for the middle class girl

so waiting for the next part to see atransformed Bani. Just one thing did some where along the lines Bani evoke some kind of feelings in Jai as he was dumbstruck when she came in the white gown.
Bye
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
PART 5

That person was none other rano bani's best frd since birth.they even share same birth day .rano was few min older to bani and thinks herself elder and even behaves like one .even family and frds consider them twins as they have same choice in every thing and they even dress similarly (same dress) when ever they are together.

There was a story of them being frds since birth.what happened was when bani's parents was expecting bani.they went to attend some family function in another city .as date given by doc was 4 week apart.so they thought they will manage this trip of 2 days .but bani wanted something else so when they were coming back bani decide to announce her arrival and bani's mom went into labour.bani's parent were middle of no where .bani's dad was trying to drive as fast as he could and bani's mom was trying to postpon bani's arrival.but bani was very keen to see this world and thus was in gr8 hurry to make her presence.somehow they manage to reach a small town and found a hospital.her contraction were coming near so they need a doc urgently..onece they found a doc there was another problem as there was no room available where mom and baby can rest after birth.bani's dad was very tensed.Seeing him so tensed A man came to him and said if u don't mind ur wife can share my wife's room which is quite large infact it was the best room of this small hospital .I have booked it for my wife.we don't have a problem sharing it with u if u feel like so.I know u must be worried abt ur wife and child.

bani's dad gladly accept this offer and thanked the person for his kindness.

Bani's dad:-I have booked a room in hospital in the hospital at my city and had made arrangements to welcome my first child in this world but it seems my child doesnot want that grand welcome but want to open eyes in this unknown hospital and smiles.

Person:-I am mohan mittal and I live in this town.and own a small business.

Bani's dad :-nice meeting u mr.mittal (tells his name ,I just doesnot want to disclose)

As mohan mittal informs his wife prachi about bani's mom and dad she happily aggreed suddenly prachi feels sharp pain in her stomach.

Both Mr.&Mrs Mittal laughs and say to bani's dad that it seems ur child has inspired mine too to finally make his/her appearance.

While both the ladies has been taken to labour room to give birth to their child.their husband talks

Bani's dad:-we are 4 weeks early.our due date was scheduled after 4 weeks.It seems that my baby is so stubborn to see this world.

Mohan:-. Here we were daily pleading to our baby to make his/her appearance as it was 4 weeks over the due date(I don't know if it is possible)..Now I understand that my baby was waiting for ur baby. And both laugh.

A nurse comes and tells Mr.mittal u have a daughter.bai's dad congrates him.they were still digesting the fact that mohan has become father.few min later a nurse comes and announce the arrival of bani. Both the fathers were so happy that they just hug each other.

After some time both the mothers shifted to same room. And few min later nurses bring both the babies. Mittals named their daughter RANO and other girl was named as BANI.after some time their fathers took them from their mom And put them into 2 different crib as an extra bed and extra crib was palced for bani and her mom.As soon as their dads put them to their crib both started crying on top of their lungs.everybody tries to stop them but in vain suddenly bani's dad put her to rano's crib and both the girls stopped cring and hold each others hand.everybody was laughing and said that they became frds before birth .As one doesnot came to world without other.ever since bani and rano were frds .After death of rano's parents after few months of rano's birth, rano was brought up with bani and bani's parents did not ever differentiate.they got everything similar.even bani's mom used to dress them in similar dress .just being diff of some min nobody can tell that they were not twins.

Rano was so worried seeing her twin like this almost lifeless.her glowing face was pale .long silky hair messed up as they were not being combed since maeny days.her twinklin eyes has dark spot beacause lace of sleep.After seeing bani fainted she almost died .somehow after lying bani down on the couch near by she dialed doctor with trembling hands.doc came .After examining bani he told rano that bacause lack of sleep and food ,without nutrition and without care she is in this condition.we need to admit her in the hospital immediately.they shifted bani to hospital.After seeing bani attached to various monitors and wires rano was so sad and disturbed .bani was so week that she can't even take liquid so doc had to send it through pipe. Seeing bani in this state rano was furious over the person who ever was cause of this state of her twin.rano knew bani better then she knew herself.so rano sense that there has to be a pretty strong reason which has affected her like this .Rano even tried to call at home but bani stooped her .after 3 weeks at hospital.bani got discharge.rano brought her home.First thing bani did was to change her appt as this appt of hers contained very bad memories.Rano said she will not leave her till she is here otherwise bani has to come with her to home.finally bani agrres apon rano statying with her.Bani has become reclusive abt averything as if she has lodt interest in life.she was not even talking to rano inspite of living together since last month,the same rano whom she can talk 9 to dozen..Some times rano saw bani lost in thoughts ,ans sometimes she saw a determind look on bani's face.Rano tried to bring bani back into life.after mnay so tries bani was ok ( only regarding her previous condition not in usual).one day seeing bani is back normal with her studies rano started the enquiry abt cause because of which bani landed in hospital.bani avoided saying it was study pressure.bani lied to rano first time but she could not lie herself whenever she saw herself in mirror she remembr jai and felt herself dirty and started so scratch his touch from his body. One day she was doing so and murmuring rano heard and saw all.after soemtime when bani was quite rano brought the subject and this time bani told her everything.After listening to evrything rano was so furious that she could kill jai with bare hands..even she was ready to spent her life in jail without regret after killing jai walia

Bani( stoped her) :-I do not want to waste my time on him now as I have to complete my study for which I have come so far from my family.and more over this is not the right time.

Bani:-time will defeinetly give us chance.now all we have to do is concentrate on my studies and wait for the right time.

Rano saw a ditermind look on bani's face and understand that she has thought something .so it will be better to wait.

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Please let me know how is it.Bad or OK,or good
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hmm gr88 part
plzzzzz cont soon
so now ranio and bani will destroy jais life
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
funny stoy about bani-rano birth
aww go girls! teach jai a lesson!
cont soon
SA

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